Judging from the composition materials provided by the proposer, the narrative methods are usually divided into two types: one is purely objective, without the feelings of the proposer, such as the composition questions of the college entrance examination in Hubei Province:
Tourists come to the foot of the mountain, where the water is gurgling and the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant. The tourist asked the person who came down the mountain: Is there anything good on it? Some people answered no, and some people answered yes. So some people stayed at the foot of the mountain to enjoy the scenery, while others continued to climb the mountain. Halfway up the mountain, there are towering old trees and quiet Lin Jingshan. Ask the person coming down the mountain: Is it nice up there? Some people answer that there is nothing to see, while others answer that there is something to see. So some people wandered on the mountainside, others continued to climb and came to the top of the mountain, only to see the vast sea of clouds and the faint mountains.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words with your own style and title according to your own understanding and feelings about the materials.
The other is with the subjective feelings of the proposer, with obvious tendency and direction, such as the composition of the college entrance examination in Hubei Province:
Spring water accumulates underground. Once there is an opportunity, it will proudly gush out of the ground, become a fountain that attracts people's attention, and then merge into a stream and rush to the distance. However, people seldom pay attention to underground springs. In fact, it is precisely because of the continuous collection of underground springs that the springs on the ground are constantly spewing.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words with your own style and title according to your own understanding and feelings about the materials. Requirements: clear thinking, no plagiarism, no plagiarism.
Compared with the above two narrative methods of composition materials, the former is more open in the examination of topics, requires higher students' thinking, association, imagination, perception and other abilities, and is more difficult to write. The latter is slightly less difficult to write because the emotional and tendentious composition materials are very clear and have a clear direction in the concept of examination. However, no matter what kind of writing materials are described, what you must do before writing is to read the following materials carefully and write as required. Because careful reading and accurate understanding of the composition materials provided by the proposer are the basis for examining the questions and forming a correct understanding.
For material composition, it is particularly important to examine the topic and reason, because the given material has objective constraints on the establishment of the theme. Wang Fuzhi, an ancient scholar, once had such a metaphor: "Italy is handsome, but there are no handsome soldiers, so it is called Vuch." The "meaning" of new material composition: first, the main idea of the material, second, the intention of the proposer, and third, the direction of our writing. Only by carefully reading the materials provided and finding out the center and essence of the materials will we not replace the whole with parts.
Then, how to read and understand the composition materials of Hubei paper of college entrance examination Chinese? As I pointed out earlier, the composition materials of Hubei college entrance examination have obvious emotional color. For example, at the beginning of the composition material, it is bluntly described: "Spring water accumulates underground. Once there is an opportunity, it will proudly gush out of the ground and become a fountain of attention. " The word "pride" here vividly depicts the image of "fountain" as "cocky" and "puffed up", from which it is not difficult to observe that the author has some sarcasm and derogatory feelings about "fountain". Subsequently, the proponent used a turning point-"Dan", which directly led his concern to "underground spring". The original text makes it very clear: "But people seldom pay attention to underground springs. In fact, it is precisely because of the continuous collection of underground springs that the springs on the ground continue to spew. " Obviously, the focus of this composition material is to let people not forget or ignore those "unknown" behind-the-scenes heroes, unsung heroes and selfless dedication people. This is the essence and core of this composition material.
If you can accurately grasp the essence and core of this composition material, will countless vivid images and vivid pictures suddenly emerge in your mind?
The hero's "Shenzhou" spacecraft soared, and the hero's astronauts triumphed. Behind the dazzling flames and flowers are decades of hard work and even obscurity of national space science and technology personnel. Manned space flight involves a wide range of scientific fields, and it is difficult to count the researchers, engineers and managers who are committed to this cause. During the development of Shenzhou-1 to Shenzhou-10, tens of thousands of engineers and technicians from hundreds of scientific research institutes devoted themselves to this large-scale project. It was Qian Qian's behind-the-scenes heroes who devoted themselves to the cause of space science and technology that forged China's "God Arrow" and held up China's "Shenzhou". Deng Jiaxian, the "Founding Father of the Two Bombs", was buried in the Gobi for 28 years, silently contributing to the cause of national defense science and technology, and people didn't know his real name until he died in the line of duty.
There are also unsung heroes who fight in the hidden front, such as Cai Wei, the director of Gongsijun Radio Station. There is such a lyric in the Long March Song Group: "Sidu Chishui surprise attack, Chairman Mao's use of troops is really like a god." But you know what? It was Cai Wei's code decoding that provided important information for winning the battle. He followed the enemy radio station and deciphered the enemy situation around the Central Red Army. He wore headphones all night waiting for the enemy's call, listening to the transcription and deciphering the code. In order to overcome fatigue, he often uses a cold water punch to keep his head clear. After the Long March, Mao Zedong said to the Second Bureau of Gongsi Army in Cai Wei, "Well done, Second Bureau. After two innings, the Red Army's Long March is like playing lanterns at night. Without two races, the victory of the Long March is unimaginable. When we were in trouble, you provided information before and after Sidu Chishui, which enabled us to overcome difficulties more smoothly. " Cai Wei is the director of the Second Bureau. Unfortunately, Cai Wei didn't hear this, because he had already died on the way to the Long March. China's revolution can grow from small to large, from weak to strong, and finally win. The five-star red flag rose in Tiananmen Square, which is inseparable from the outstanding dedication of many unknown heroes who were "silent" from the beginning. -"It is precisely because of the continuous gathering of underground silent springs that the springs on the ground keep spewing".
Of course, the conception of new material composition does not need to be completely limited to a certain point of the material. The concept of old material composition strictly requires extracting the most accurate and core meaning from the composition; The composition of new materials can be conceived from different sides and angles, and candidates can choose a certain angle that they think is suitable for composition. This is the essential difference between the composition of old and new materials. When writing with old materials, you can't abandon them, but you must quote them in your writing. Composition with old materials requires focusing on materials, using materials and emphasizing the retention of materials. Writing with new materials is different. The relationship between articles and materials can be closer or farther, as long as they are "not divorced from the content and significance of materials". Because of this, I believe that the conception of Hubei college entrance examination composition materials can also be cut in from the following angles:
For example, a person's success ("becoming a fountain of concern") is inseparable from his long-term struggle ("long-term accumulation of underground springs"); Don't just see someone's bright surface ("becoming a fountain of attention"), but also see the hardships and difficulties behind him ("because the quiet springs are constantly gathering underground, there are also springs spewing on the ground"); The profound connotation ("because the underground silent springs keep gathering") has made the dazzling brilliance ("only the above-ground springs keep pouring out"); Ten minutes on the stage ("becoming a fountain that attracts everyone's attention") and ten years off the stage ("because the quiet springs in the underground are constantly gathering, there are also springs spewing on the ground"); Only paying ("because of the continuous gathering of underground silent springs") can be rewarded ("only the continuous gushing of clear springs on the ground" and "becoming a fountain of attention"); Suffer a little ("because there are silent underground springs"), and you can become a master ("only the springs on the ground keep spewing" and "become an eye-catching fountain") ...
Of course, you can also talk about your thoughts and feelings, such as modesty and prudence, just from the point that "spring water accumulates underground, and once you have the opportunity, it will proudly gush out of the ground and become a fountain that attracts the attention of the people"; Don't be complacent, get carried away or show off everywhere when you get results; Full recruitment damages moderate income and so on. However, if a candidate only understands and feels the meaning of this composition material from the perspectives of accumulation, tenacity, perseverance and persistence, it is far from the topic and close to mediocrity.