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What is the structure of college entrance examination composition?
We can start from three aspects: plate structure, title effect and content integration.

1. Change linear structure into plate structure

Linear structure is to explain the beginning of the event in a straightforward way, describe the development process of the event in a steady way, and advance the plot in a straight line.

So how do we overcome this common problem? The best way is to change the linear structure into a plate structure.

"Plate" refers to the narrative "scene" in the article or the arrangement of materials in the discussion. Scenes usually refer to the scenes, details and atmosphere of people's activities. The scene lies in description. Description is to describe a specific environment, occasion and the activities of its characters, so as to show a concrete picture of life.

Materials refer to arguments in argumentative essays. In the article, narrative scenes and discussion materials are the basic elements of plot structure. Every scene and every material is like a plate, which is independent and related. The transformation, combination and promotion of various materials and scenes constitute the plot structure of the full text. This is the essential meaning of the plate structure of writing articles.

To change line type into plate type, we should learn to describe and arrange, and change a style of writing. This is the ability requirement of the article, and it is also the focus and difficulty of personality writing.

How to turn linear structure into plate structure?

1. Carefully arrange clues

Clues are the ties that unify and connect various scenes and materials. It reflects the internal relationship between various scenes and materials, and also reflects the author's thinking. There are four types of clues: figure line, character line, emotion line and theme line. When you plan to choose the material for an article, you should also consider how to arrange a clue that runs through the material, connect various scenes with it, and combine the scenes and the material into an organic artistic conception of an article.

Set the scene skillfully

An article can focus on several scenes, but how to edit and combine these scenes and how to arrange them in order should be carefully conceived and designed. If the scene can be set in a key place or emotional place, it can promote the development of the story and express the characters' ideological character. Therefore, the scene setting is directly related to the success or failure of the article.

3. Image description materials

Write about landscapes, discuss opinions and ask about their poverty; Depicting characters, expressing thoughts and seeking their expression; Describe the story, explain the sentiment and make it fascinating. This scene, characters, stories, facts and famous sayings constitute vivid and wonderful background materials. Background materials can be written from many angles: vision, smell, touch, hearing, taste, time, space or logic.

Second, the effect of turning conventional topics into topics.

When writing, we often maintain a high degree of unity between "text" and "topic". However, the personalized article layout is actually just the opposite, giving people a sense of novelty and suspense, resulting in a personalized effect of the topic.

1. "Big problems" should be small problems.

Now there are some "big topics" such as "habits", "wishes" and "life" in the composition, and many students can't write them after reading them.

What should be the correct countermeasure?

The innovative layout of "big topics and small works" is one of the countermeasures. Its method is to concretize the topic, increase the restrictive words of the topic, and narrow the scope of material selection and articles. If there is a topic called "changed", then the solution to this "big topic" and "small work" is to add the qualifier "whose what has changed" when examining the topic, so that the incision is smaller and easier to write.

2. The topic should be broken through

Generally speaking, when reviewing the topic, we should first see the "framework" of the literal definition of the topic, so that the writing will not stray from the topic, but this is not enough. We also need to find out the information implied in the topic literally, so as to break through the meaning of the topic, open our minds and write articles with distinctive personality.

There are two main ways to break through the topic:

Give new meaning to the topic.

For example, maternal love, the original meaning of the topic is maternal love. If you think about it carefully, teachers, fathers, grandfathers and other elders take great care of themselves, which is also a kind of "maternal love", then "maternal love" has a new meaning, with a wider scope than ordinary students and a refreshing content.

(2) Reverse thinking test questions

For example, "people leave tea cool" is a sigh of indifference to human feelings. If you use reverse thinking, you can evolve a new view that "people are not cool when they walk in tea" or "people are not cool when they walk in tea". This can achieve the "unexpected" effect of the topic.

3. New requirements of "stability"

In writing, you often encounter topics that you are very familiar with or even have written, and when writing such topics, it is always easy to follow old stories and well-known viewpoints in order to be "stable". If you are too "steady", it is easy to have old faces, which is the taboo of personal composition. Therefore, if the article wants to enter the level of "personality development", it must strive to be "stable" and innovative.

Seeking innovation in "stability" must achieve three essentials;

(1) Keep your mind sharp.

It is difficult for old ideas to jump out of the old box and to write innovative articles. Only people with keen minds can grasp the pulse of the times, and new "springs" often gush out at the end of the pen. Whether you can capture new material is a ruler to measure your ideological sensitivity.

2 thinking should be multi-faceted.

In the face of a composition topic, we should consider ideas from multiple angles, and then make comparative screening to avoid all kinds of opinions, "like the new and hate the old" and come up with new ideas. Sometimes even use the method of reverse thinking to absorb new ideas or themes.

③ Dig deeper.

On the basis of the overall conception, we should dig deep from multiple angles. In this way, even the old questions will be innovated.

For example, from four angles (Qi Xuanwang, Wang Qiyi, South China's Chu Shi, and Blowing Partners) and two aspects (positive and negative views), eight viewpoints can be put forward: ① Qi Xuanwang's "ensemble" policy has a commendable collectivism spirit; (2) Qi Xuanwang's "ensemble" is a "big pot" approach, which is the breeding ground for the tragedy of Chu Shi in the south China; (3) The "going it alone" of the King of Qi is the embodiment of the "spirit of reform", and the practice of never "putting the law before the king" is worth promoting; (4) The King of Qi should not drive away Chu Shi from the south, but should keep Chu Shi from the south for training, which is the real road to "reform"; (5) Chu Shi in the south can "have self-knowledge" and make way for people without talents, which is much better than a few cadres who are not laid off now; ⑥ Chu Shi, a southern country, learned nothing and came to a sad end, which deserved it; ⑦ Blowing partners have strong sympathy, which makes Chu Shi in the south "ensemble" for many years; (8) Without the spirit of criticism, supervision and help, boastful partners let Chu Shi in the south muddle along.

4. Contrast should be clear.

Sharp contrast is to compare and compare two different people or things or two different aspects of the same person or thing, so as to clearly show the differences, highlight their characteristics, reveal their essence and better express the author's thoughts and feelings.

Generally, two comparison methods can be used:

(1) Compare with different people and things.

For example, the attitude comparison between Zhizuo and Gong Yu in One Mountain in Gong Yu; Comparison of Lotus, Chrysanthemum and Peony in Ailian's Theory.

② Compare the same people and things.

For example, the comparison of the appearance and language of young people in Hometown; A Comparison of the Different Attitudes of Crab Selling Women towards "Filter Tip" and "Dry Cigarette Bag" in "Crab Selling".

To achieve "sharp contrast", we should pay attention to finding similarities and sharp contradictions. Do these two points, the composition will have a "sense of innovation." This technique can be used in various styles, such as narrative, prose, argumentative and so on.

Third, change thinking disorder into content integration.

The conceptual layout of an article refers to the overall design of the content and expression of the article before writing, which is a creative and complex thinking activity in the writing process. Then the concrete application of materials, modification and polishing, the structure is a piece.

Some students always glance at the topic in a hurry and write it down casually in a confused state. The result is often like squeezing toothpaste. Squeeze a little, write a little, go anywhere. Therefore, before you start writing, you must carefully lay out your personality.

How to make a personalized layout?

First of all, we should make clear the requirements of the topic, then open the door of memory according to the requirements and search out all kinds of information (including life experience, knowledge, emotion, etc. ) accumulated in daily life; Mobilize various forms of thinking and expand association and imagination; Closely around the center, start multi-angle and multi-level thinking and choose the best angle to express the center; The layout of the full text should be orderly, purposeful and distinctive, and we should think clearly about what to write first, what to write later, what to write in detail and what to write briefly; Personalized conceptual layout should strive for novelty and exquisiteness.

Generally speaking, you can start with the layout from the following aspects:

1. fragment combination method

This conception method is to select several vivid and typical life segments, event plots or scenery descriptions within the scope specified by the topic, and combine them organically to express a theme. Writing character notes in this way can express characters, describe events and describe scenery in a short space in a three-dimensional and multi-angle way. The idea of fragment combination can leave a wide world for the author, let the author create freely, and let his ideas be broadened and galloped. It is worth noting that the combination of fragments is by no means a big platter. The selected fragments should meet the needs of the center of the article, and the written fragments should always be around the center. At the same time, these fragments should reflect different aspects of things, and each fragment should have its own modality and focus, so as to achieve the artistic effect of "the stars hold the moon"; The narrative of the fragment should be concrete, vivid and vivid, and it should be infectious in itself; It should be noted that the narrative has a master and a second time, and the time has a first time.

2. Information extraction method

When writing, the train of thought is blocked for a while, so we should make extensive association and search the information in memory. In the examination room, our hearts are connected with the society, and there are many things in our memory warehouse, such as news media, film and television works, our own experiences, the lives of relatives and friends ... all those shining things in the world have more or less carved traces on our brain walls. You should let your mind and spirit return to the broad society, grasp the ups and downs in life, and then introduce the composition according to the truth.

3. this and that.

From this to that, it is a way of thinking that the perception or memory of one thing causes the association of other things that have a certain relationship with this thing. Nothing in the world exists in isolation, and there are always various connections between them. We start from one thing (this) and link it with other related things (that) according to the requirements of examination, so as to serve the theme of expression. This is the idea of "from here to there". From this to that, the article can be opened and closed freely, from one thing to another, from one thing to people, from a certain scene to a certain idea, sentiment and so on. This concept of "one thing, one scene, one person" is not limited to one thing. In an article, you can use it many times: by A and b, by B and c, by C and d, as long as there is some connection between them, you can adopt this concept. Of course, there must be some connection between "this" and "that" here, and we can't correspond them subjectively and rigidly.

4. Angle selection method

Angle, genre angle, theme angle, material selection angle, structure angle, character angle and so on. In the limited composition time and space, whether you can choose the angle quickly is related to the success or failure of the article. The general principle of choosing an angle should be: the angle you choose is conducive to writing novel and relevant articles with familiar materials and skillful skills.

5. Vertical and horizontal contrast method

Vertical and horizontal contrast is a kind of conception method that puts opposing characters, events and scenery in the same article. This method makes the characters, events and scenery to be expressed in the article leave a deep impression on readers, form a very sharp contrast, better express the center of the article, and make the article more appealing and convincing. When writing characters, you can write one person's past lives (vertical ratio) or two people's advantages and disadvantages (horizontal ratio). When writing about scenery, you can write about the changes between urban and rural areas in the past and present (vertical ratio), and you can also write about the differences between the northern and southern scenery (horizontal ratio). You can also use contrast to express the spiritual world of the characters, or produce some philosophy of life from the comparison, such as setting off the happy mood with cold and desolate scenery; In contrast to the noisy atmosphere outside, it is inner loneliness.

6. "Frame Mosaic" Method

The idea of "frame mosaic" is to enlarge a person or a thing to a specific environment, which can be natural scenery or social background, so that the person or thing to be expressed can be vividly displayed in such a specific environment. In addition to the natural environment and social environment as a framework, discussion can also be used as a narrative framework. Through the discussion framework at the beginning and end of the article, the theme of the narrative part is highlighted. There is also a narrative framework, that is, the framework of people and things centered on someone or something.

7. Emotional blasting method

Emotional lasing is a three-dimensional network method with emotion as the radiation endpoint and ray. That is to say, the author has a strong feeling for something, an object and a scene, which makes his feelings surge vertically and horizontally, forming a surging emotional wave, or pushing it in depth like a wave, or the wave overflows and echoes in different directions.

This conception can infect readers' strong feelings and is suitable for lyric narration.

In the article conceived in this way, emotion is the main line of the article, which maintains the whole article. This kind of mood varies with one's mood, situation, cultivation and hobbies, and the formed mood is very different. This idea can form many articles with different styles, the same material and the same theme, all of which can form different styles and express different feelings.

It is worth reminding that writing such articles should be "emotional" and avoid affectation and moaning. Only when you have true feelings can you "brass". "emotional blaster" is just an idea, and the concrete embodiment of emotion has to be completed through concrete images. If you don't create a specific image, but write for the sake of writing, the article will be "empty" and will not achieve touching results; When you conceive with emotions, you often choose some fragments or a series of "close-ups" to make a fuss. Therefore, when conceiving, we should pay attention to the consistency of emotions and make the tone of the article harmonious and unified.