The connotation of the case is not revealed enough, so do not score.
Analyze why examples can demonstrate arguments; ? Reasoning is shallow and not deep enough, so why can't you analyze ideas or phenomena thoroughly?
Jiangsu college entrance examination marking rules say:
"In-depth analysis, ask a few more why?"
Example, to deeply analyze why.
Example 1
Suffering makes life more exciting. Li Ning, a generation of Prince of gymnastics, shed tears in Seoul and suddenly quit sports, but started his career in another world. Li Ning brand sporting goods are popular in China, and his life shines again.
That's because Li Ning was not intimidated by failure, but was defeated.
Compromise honed an indestructible will and hardships ripened the fruits of his life; For Li Ning, suffering is just a storm on the road of life. He bravely walked past, and there was another blue sky ahead.
Hot practice: write a reason analysis at the end.
Difficulties and hardships have painted a dim color on our lives.
But what determines the brightness of our life is not the color of life, but the color of the soul. Li Ning, a generation of Prince of gymnastics, started his career after crying in Seoul and suddenly quitting sports. Li Ning brand sporting goods are popular all over the country, and his life shines again. ...
Li Ning people believe that human potential is infinite. Sports make people more confident, dare to show, constantly explore their potential and surpass themselves-they have such a brand concept and have been putting it into practice. ? So give yourself the brand slogan of Li Ning:? Make a change? Anything is possible.
In an interview with the media, Li Ning talked about the difficulty of 20 12: in terms of career and occupation, life is bound to have highs and lows. No company can leave the market. The reality is very painful, and my pressure is great, which stems from my pursuit of ideal dreams. In this process, it may be that my ability, knowledge and tolerance are beyond my own conditions. I need to keep learning, seize the opportunity and summon up courage to move forward. This is a high tide and a low tide.
Heather: Even after 30 years, many people still insist that Li Ning has a fresh face. Unlike Tang Guoqiang's aversion to milk at the same time, unlike Jet Li's naivety at the same age, there is no confidence leaked by Yao Ming, another world-class symbol of China sports many years later. Li Ning's face, superficial affinity and introspective tenacity, as well as the curve formed by the corners of her mouth rising five degrees from time to time, deserve three gold medals, a silver medal and a bronze medal at the Los Angeles Olympic Games, which really turns all beings upside down.
Difficulties and hardships have painted a dim color on our lives, but it is not the color of life that determines the brightness of our lives, but the color of our hearts. ? 106 The dazzling brilliance of the gold medal and Prince of gymnastics's unprecedented rhetoric are all concealed by the uncertainty of the future and the surrounding doubts. If he got lost in the dark, there would be no business tycoon today. It is precisely because Li Ning has a golden creed in his heart: "Man has unlimited potential" and "transcending himself", and his strong heart has given life a ray of hope and reopened life from the cold place on the cliff. ? Every time I see the slogan "Anything is possible" of Li Ning brand, I can feel the brilliance born for the sun. If there is a diamond-like core, painful polishing will only make us more colorful.
His job is to pick up dry reeds by the big lake embankment during the day, or pick up dry bamboo roots when bulldozers pass by the road, so that they can live together and make a fire. He was also arranged to go to the back hillside to see the vegetable garden for half a month. "Full-time is to get rid of the big pig who used to steal food in the village. When your hands and feet are frozen, go to the haystack in the nearby tool shed to rest for a while, get some air and avoid the wind and cold. " Shen Congwen got up at 6: 30 in the morning to listen to the bugle call, ate a pot of rice, had a certain amount of radish and cabbage, and had little oil and water. After dinner, he and the three old workers who lived together read the newspaper for an hour under the dim kerosene lamp, and turned off the lights at 9: 30 to sleep. It takes more than half a mile to eat and fetch water. What I fear most is that the road is slippery on rainy days. Young and middle-aged people are even more afraid of difficulties, not to mention that he is nearly 70 years old! Shen Congwen was very old when he left the cadre school. Zhang Zhaohe lives five or six miles away from Shen Congwen. She digs sand at the construction site every day, but she can't live with the husband of another brigade. He wrote sadly in his letter at home: "The current difficulties can always be overcome. As for getting sick, it's much better to have a relative in one place. But if it is close to helplessness, it is time to accept the reality. In the case of sudden completion, this is extremely natural and not surprising. Then let the big brother or the younger brother clean up the mess together. "
"Rain attacks people, the room is wet, and actions are like mud. Crickets and frogs break in from time to time, which is irrelevant. At the age of 70, it is a rare pleasure to get this wonderful learning opportunity. " ? Shen Longzhu, who had visited relatives in Shuangxi, recalled his father's residence and said: The house leaked rain and was in a mess. The outside of the house is higher than the inside of the house, and the flood and sediment are directly poured in from the outside. There is mud in the room.
Han Niu, a member of "Hu Feng", wrote a poem: "I saw half a tree/on a desolate mountain/like a man, standing beside him to avoid the oncoming storm/it was cut off by lightning in February/from the top of the tree to the root/spring came/half a tree was still standing upright/covered with green leaves/half a tree/. Reading such poems, I can't tell who is a tree and who is an unyielding soul.
A traveler who is slightly interested in poetry and painting will not be bored by squatting in a boat in this river for 30 days. Just because there are miracles everywhere, the boldness and exquisiteness of nature are fascinating. Life is a fragile thing, more vulnerable than a flower. Looking back on life with the eyes focused on nature, I can't help but feel enthusiasm and cherish the vines that happen to people. In the same personnel, the second coincidence will not happen. Why did Shen Congwen write: "Because I live in this world with love, beauty, cleanliness, wisdom and the illusion of happiness for all mankind, it will always be a virtue, so I will always worship it and fall in love with it." Uncompromising, kind; The stars hold the moon, and the son is a man. -quoted from Shen Congwen
A person with an old illness in a swamp wasteland is nothing more than a vast expanse of muddy water. "All at once" is also "extremely natural", and several letters from home are bleak and seem hopeless. However, Shen Lao touched poetry in his pen and ink. The bright colors of lotus swept away the darkness that disturbed the world, and the pain of torture was between green and red, but it was beautiful in his bones. It turns out that his heart will always maintain the indestructible border town style like Taoyuan. Convert to the nature of nature, care for the pure and beautiful mind, and give yourself a clear and splendid world with beautiful eyes.
Be reasonable, and analyze why in depth.
The first level: what it is and what it should be; What is not, what should not (argument or phenomenon) Level 2: Why?
Why is this? Why are you doing this? (actively exploring) Why not? What is the essence and what is the harm? If this should be the case, why don't some people do it in reality? (comparative exploration)
The canvas of life has the surface color of life and the bottom color of the soul. The surface of a melancholy person's life is already a layer of haze and oil, and the smoke of these lives is a bright smile, burying his soul below. ? Why don't the miserable people pick up the file and scrape hard? ? After all, the pain of scraping bones is terrible. After all, there are not many bitter people who can endure severe pain and dare to look at their souls and smile. Life has made them so bitter and numb that they regard numbness as a kind of self-protection and dare not wake up rashly. In addition to self-protection, they will also comfort themselves-what if there is no bright smile of the soul in the end?
But unfortunately, many people in reality can't really penetrate the dark color of life, and the sky of the soul can't clear up to the end. Van Gogh finally committed suicide with a gun, which is embarrassing; Haizi gave himself a tragic ending after "giving every mountain and river a warm name". Is this because the reality is too cruel, or like anna karenine, their hearts failed to defeat the real devil at some point? Why is it so difficult to permanently illuminate the darkness of life with a clear heart? This seems to be a life proposition that human beings need to explore unremittingly.
(Zhang Yifa's "If the heart is well, it is sunny")
Hot training
Learn the fifth paragraph of Listening to the Rain, which is at the back.
Add a reason analysis to deepen the argument.
Reference:
That's because they lost their aesthetic mentality, enterprising enthusiasm and self-confident heart in the cracks of life, and broke the crayons depicting their dreams of life. They fell into chaos in the heavy rain of life, and their mourning platform was eclipsed. Where can they hear the rain? It can be seen that listening to the rain depends on that heart.