Argumentative writing, first of all, must have a fixed pattern, that is, the legendary three-paragraph formula ~ but this three-paragraph formula does not require you to write three paragraphs, but discusses it in the order of what to do, why to do it and how to do it. First of all, what is it? You must put forward your bright point of view in the first paragraph (or better yet, put forward your point of view on the topic). Remember to put forward your own opinions as soon as possible to avoid the situation that your opinions are too late or vague, so as to attract the attention of the marking teacher.
In addition, why how to describe it, why the biggest highlight lies in the citation of arguments, and the most common thing is to use sharp contrast. For example, your thesis thinks that the world is beautiful, why are you here? This part can be divided into two parts. The first paragraph first explains the darkness of the world, and then the second paragraph takes a turning point (but xxxxxxxx). This will make your article have a sharp color contrast in color sense.
What should I do in the end? Don't ignore this step, because many high school students are prone to make a mistake (in argumentative essays), that is, the argument is clear and the argument is sufficient, but the final outcome is hasty. You should remember that an argumentative essay is an exposition of a problem. Since a problem has been raised, there must be a corresponding solution. I once suffered a big loss in my score because of the imperfection of this step. Finally, I must write down your views on this issue. In this case, the ending will be quite good.
The general direction that the whole article needs to pay attention to is basically these, and there is another very noteworthy place, that is, your literary talent. The so-called literary talent does not require you to have the spirit and knowledge of a great writer. For college entrance examination composition, he only needs you to skillfully use all kinds of ancient poems. The current argumentative essay not only needs you to explain clearly, but if you can modify your essay a little and express your feelings, then your score will naturally come up. In short,
Recently, our class held a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC. This is its result.
On the one hand, we think KFC has its advantages. It's delicious, and eating it in KFC is a fashion. This is also a good way to experience western food.
On the other hand, KFC also has its shortcomings. Most of the food in KFC is junk food, which is harmful to our health. In addition, food may be unsafe because it is not fresh. More importantly, the food in KFC is usually very expensive.
Although KFC is delicious, I prefer the more delicious China traditional food. In order to keep healthy, we should eat less junk food. It's a good idea to eat more healthy foods like vegetables and fruits. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away."
3. How to write A Dream of Red Mansions after reading it? I didn't understand the beauty of A Dream of Red Mansions until I saw it recently.
A Dream of Red Mansions is based on Jia, Shi, Wang and Xue, with the fierce struggle between feudalism and rebels around Jia Baoyu's life path as the main line and the tragedies of Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu as the main content. By vividly describing the decline of the feudal family represented by Jia Fu, it profoundly exposed and criticized the darkness and decay of the feudal society, and further pointed out that the feudal society had reached the point of "luck". A Dream of Red Mansions vividly described the whole life of China feudal society in the first half of the18th century, centering on the upper aristocratic society.
The book is large in scale, rigorous in structure, vivid in characters and beautiful in language. In addition, there are some obvious artistic features that are worthy of future generations' taste and appreciation. The author makes full use of all the excellent traditional techniques of China's calligraphy, painting, poetry, songs and music, and shows a social tragedy.
For example, Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu read the Romance of the West Chamber, Daiyu buried flowers, Baochai shook butterflies, Qingwen mended fur, Baoqin made snow, and Daiyu burned manuscripts. Such as Lin Daiyu's floating posture, poetic eyebrows, clever expression, deep smile, moving sobs, elegant taste and natural literary talent ... all these are attributed to the author. Cao Xueqin truly reproduces the complexity of the characters in A Dream of Red Mansions, which makes us feel as real as the characters in the works. Jia Baoyu in A Dream of Red Mansions "can't say that he is virtuous, stupid, kind, evil, aboveboard, bastard, wicked, intelligent and talented, vulgar and ordinary", which makes people comment.
Not only Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu, the two protagonists who endow the author with the beauty of personality, spirit and ideal, but even the notorious Rainbow Xifeng did not write her as "all bad", but intertwined some "loveliness" and "abomination", thus presenting various contradictory and complicated actual situations and forming a "charming reality" of personality. The author is good at revealing its unusual aesthetic significance through the artistic description of seemingly ordinary daily life, and even some unwritten and unrecorded social habits and details are vividly portrayed in A Dream of Red Mansions.
The outstanding achievement of A Dream of Red Mansions in ideological content and artistic skills has not only become an insurmountable peak of China's novel literature in China. Moreover, it has also been paid attention to and studied by scholars in many countries internationally. Some French critics praised Cao Xueqin: "Cao Xueqin has Proust's keen vision, Tolstoy's sympathy, Miao Sai's clever humor, Balzac's insight and the ability to reproduce the top-down class of the whole society."
I have seen a dream of red mansions, one is Xianpa in Yuen Long, and the other is immaculate jade. If there is no strange fate, I will meet him again in my life. If there is a strange fate, how can my heart be empty? One is crying in vain, and the other is worrying about nothing. One is the moon in the water, and the other is the flower in the mirror. I wonder how many tears there are in my eyes, how can autumn flow to the end of winter and how can spring flow to summer! -"Curling Eyebrows" and "Dream of Red Mansions", a tragedy of laughing and laughing. A Dream of Red Mansions not only describes the life of three generations of a feudal aristocratic family from glory to decline, but also boldly accuses the feudal aristocratic class of hypocrisy, fraud, greed, decay and sin.
It not only points out the inevitable collapse and death of this family, but also implies the inevitable collapse and death of the class and society to which this family belongs. The heroes created and loved by Cao Xueqin's brushwork are two ministers and traitors who dare to judge the dying feudal aristocracy; Those who sympathize and mourn are the victims under the feudal system; What is criticized and denied is the hypocritical morality and unreasonable social system in feudal society.
On the one hand, it was the former wood and stone alliance, on the other hand, it was a golden wedding. On the one hand, it is the aura of fame and fortune that feudal society must pursue, on the other hand, it is a fascinating free body.
A Dream of Red Mansions written by Cao Xueqin shows us this silent contest. The tragic love story of Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu condensed all the smoke in this contest. "One is Xianpa in Yuen Long, and the other is flawless jade." The pursuit of quality is clean and neat. "In the face of all kinds of persecution and indifference under feudal ethics, even at the cost of life, the pursuit of quality and purity has never given up.
While lamenting the love tragedy between Jia and Lin, we can see an important factor that caused the tragedy: Lin Daiyu's lofty personality was incompatible with the secular world at that time and could not be "integrated" with society. Her inferiority complex is the embodiment of her self-esteem and the beginning of her tragedy. In A Dream of Red Mansions, she buries flowers, which is the focus of her personality.
Her inferiority, self-esteem and self-pity are fully revealed in her "mourning poems": "Flowers wither, flowers fly all over the sky, and the fragrance dies. Who has pity for the fragrance?" "Three hundred and sixty days a year, the wind knife frost sword pressure, bright and bright, a wandering is hard to find. It's easier to see flowers than to find them. I'm worried about burying the flower man in front of the steps. I only steal flowers and shed tears, but I can see the blood stains on the branches. "
"May Nong have wings this day and fly to the end of the day with flowers. The day is over! Where is Xiangshan? Without a trick, I hid my love with a pure land.
It's better to be clean than trapped in a ditch. I am going to die and be buried, but I don't know when Nong will die. The man who buried the flowers is laughing today, but who did he know when he buried them? Let's see the residual flowers of spring gradually falling, which is the time when beauty dies of old age.
There is no sad song for me, I don't know what happened. "A secular person can't understand her thoughts." I will die and be buried. When will I die? The man who buried the flowers is laughing today. Who did he know when he buried them? "In the face of falling flowers, she thought of the scene after her death, and she couldn't let go and shed tears.
In front of feudal ethics, her inferiority aroused her self-esteem. When Baoyu was beaten, it was difficult for a clever woman to send Dan medicine to Xue Baochai, who had no rice to cook, and she also advised Baoyu to change his ways with admonition. As a supporter of Baoyu, a rebel of feudal ethics, Lin Daiyu, who is kind and aloof, just cried blindly.
4. My view of Mencius' composition My view of Mencius 2008-06-08 12:04 has passed through the long river of time, and he is still admired by the world. It hasn't changed in more than two thousand years. In the long river of history, the light of his thoughts shines.
Mencius in my mind is kind. Facing the reality of successive wars in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, Mencius inherited and developed Confucius' thought of "benevolence" and made it a political ideology, which had an extraordinary influence on the history of China's feudal society for two thousand years. Mencius' theory of "benevolent governance" is based on maintaining the feudal system, but it has many progressive significance for stabilizing the economy, developing production and reducing people's burden.
Mencius in my mind is also naive. Mencius lobbied among the state and careerists. In the face of their ambition of hegemony, yearning for rule and longing for conquest, Mencius tried his best to influence them with "benevolence". However, the enjoyment of the ruling class is based on the suffering of the lower class. Who wants to give up this right easily? Therefore, there is no doubt that Mencius is also naive.
Mencius in my mind is greater. Although Mencius' political thought was not put into practice, he put forward a systematic thought of self-cultivation, and this contribution is indelible. How many people still have the cultivation of "wealth can't be lewd, poverty can't be moved, and power can't be bent"? What he taught thousands of years ago still applies today.
He is a giant standing above history, and he is worthy of the name of "Yasheng". May his shining thoughts continue to shine.
How to treat the implementation of Mencius' thought of "benevolent governance" in current state governance?
The problem of college entrance examination composition is that the materials used in 6 compositions are the same as those used in 4 compositions.
Chen Qian of Central South University was deeply impressed by a writing experience in middle school: "There was a Chinese exam in our class. After the exam, the teacher copied the excellent composition with a score of more than 49 and sent it to us. As a result, everyone used similar examples. Among the six compositions, Li Bai was praised four times, Qu Yuan was praised three times, Yue Fei was praised three times and Qin Gui was criticized twice. " Chen Qian said that no matter what the composition is, it adopts the same pattern, follows the standard of leading pig belly and phoenix tail, explains the general argument at the beginning, then lists three sub-arguments with three examples, and finally sublimates the theme with famous sayings.
In fact, in the examination room, this phenomenon of composition plagiarism is very serious. A Chinese teacher said that if you carefully look at the excellent compositions from all over the country over the years, many of them are surprising "deja vu". Nowadays, students who take part in the college entrance examination take reciting a large number of materials as a composition method, and "applying" has become a common phenomenon in the structural composition of the college entrance examination. Many candidates have similarities in composition structure, writing ideas and language expression, and even have many imitations. This is the case in all provinces of the country.
Writing about a fictional mother's death is contagious.
Interplay is not only popular, but also false expressions such as distorted personality and lost values appear in the exam composition. It is reported that candidates often fabricate stories of suffering in narratives, trying to make their articles sadder and more infectious. They will make up stories about the death of their mother or family members, or describe their disabilities. Not long ago, educational experts analyzed the Chinese test papers of senior high school entrance examinations in cities and states in our province and found that the composition was generally "false, big and empty".
In the composition, many people can't accept the examinee's fictional mother's death. "I think there are some deviations in the human nature of such people. Although it is understandable to say that the composition is fictional, it is not good for you to say that your mother died of illness. " Yan Li of Hunan Institute of Mass Communication said.
"It's really disappointing. Although it is not entirely the fault of the child, it is really chilling for parents to work hard to raise their children. " Ms He, who lives in Gao Qiao, has two daughters. Her sister is in Grade Two this year, and her sister will be promoted to junior high school next year. She admits that she doesn't want her children to write such articles for high marks.
Why do students make up such a seemingly unreasonable article that their mother died of illness? Yu Jun, a senior three Chinese teacher at Changjun Middle School, said that because students usually accumulate some materials or read similar touching articles from composition selections, it is easy to apply and imitate them. "Because of the short exam time, many students are very nervous. Generally speaking, it is difficult to show your true feelings. It takes mood and time to write a good article. Obviously, the examination room conditions are not available. " Teacher Yu said.
Expert analysis
Whose fault is it that writing is patterned?
What causes middle school students' writing to fall into a pattern? Su Shengkui, a native of Yongzhou, Hunan Province, is currently a researcher at Hainan Education Research and Training Institute. He believes that the direct root of the prevalence of intercropping is the green light for marking the college entrance examination. "Although there are propositional reasons, I think the direct and most important reason is the marking of the college entrance examination, which is another baton of the college entrance examination. Many sets of articles are full and even impeccable in content, rigorous in structure and quite well expressed. Most of our marking teachers can't bear to be too harsh on such articles. They read these articles with thousands of people every year, giving them more than 50 points and a minimum of 42 points every year. This connivance and accommodation has benefited too many candidates. This silent demonstration adds a strong impetus to the normal composition teaching. Everyone has contributed and is very lively. " Su Shengkui thought-provoking, saying that if we say "no" to this kind of article in the marking field, the copywriter will lose the market in the face of high-stakes college entrance examination scores. How can it become an ethos and a disaster in teaching?
"In fact, we shouldn't put' fake, big and empty' hats on them." Yan Zhen, a professor at the School of Literature of Central South University, said that children's lives are very monotonous now. It is good to be able to describe the events clearly and have a complete structure and have a little understanding of life. It is impossible for everyone to be creative in writing, and patterning is an inevitable phenomenon. There are only a few examples that really write articles with personality. We should encourage individualization and tolerate patterning. Moreover, the patterning of propositions also leads to the patterning of articles.