If the memory can be transplanted, I will erase all the unpleasantness between myself and my friends and replant the days when we are holding hands and singing and laughing side by side.

If the memory can be transplanted, I will gently erase my willfulness from my parents' minds, and then move my filial piety, obedience and endless love back to my parents' minds, so that they will always have a comfortable smile on their faces.

If the memory can be transplanted, I will implant a happy childhood into the minds of children in poor mountainous areas, so that they will no longer be unhappy because of the pain caused by childhood poverty, but will be replaced by a sweet and happy childhood, full of hope for the future.

If memory can be transplanted, I will move a warm and loving family into the hearts of lonely old people, so that they will no longer be unhappy because of their children's unfilial and indifference; Let them no longer feel dejected by the departure of their wives; Let them no longer be silent because of loneliness. I want good memories to accompany them all their lives.

If memory can be transplanted, I will move the colorful world to the minds of the blind; I want to move beautiful music into the memory of people who are deaf in both ears. I want to erase all contempt and disdain from the memory of disabled people all over the world forever, put a sympathy and care into their minds gently, and let their lips blossom with smiles.

If memory can be transplanted, I will remove fear and bombs from Yugoslavia's memory forever! Let them no longer grieve because of the loss of their loved ones and broken families, no longer lose their expectations for the future because of the disintegration of the country, and no longer leave wounds that will never heal because of bloody remnants and ruins charred by fire! I want to erase NATO bombs from their minds and remind the Yugoslav people of the beautiful and peaceful country in the past.

If memory can be transplanted, I will move peace into the memory of all those who have suffered, and erase the idea of trampling on peace from the memory of those "war maniacs" forever and ever. Let's leave beautiful memories of the past peaceful life and endless yearning for the future peaceful life!

Let us-people of different colors all over the world unite and make unremitting efforts to create peace!

If memory can be transplanted ...

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If memory can be transplanted, I want to remember all the beautiful words created by the ancients; If memory can be transplanted, I want to remember all the interesting stories; If memory can be transplanted, I want to remember what all philosophers have said; If memory can be transplanted, I also want to remember all the digital symbols, chemical elements and physical equations. ...

If memory can be transplanted, I want to remember too many things. Because the world is so big, there is nothing unusual. Beautiful literature is everywhere, and profound science is everywhere. I hope to store all this in my seemingly small brain. In this way, I can write many beautiful words and sentences in my writing; Visiting famous mountains and rivers, you can experience the artistic conception of the ancients and recite wonderful sentences; In this way, when I swim in nature, I can find its interesting laws, mysterious combinations and magical changes. At that time, the world will be wonderful for us.

If Beethoven can remember all the previous music scores, then his musical talent will be more thoroughly developed; If Lu Xun can remember all the famous literary works in history, I believe that his attack on the enemy will be more powerful; If Mao Zedong can remember the art of war in past dynasties, he will make fewer mistakes when he leads troops to fight. If ... seems to be the case, people will become smarter, the world will become smaller, and people's strength will increase. People will remember the world more and try harder to change it, making it more conducive to people's survival and better.

If memory can be transplanted, people will have the opportunity to remember previous research and carry out their own research on this basis. The shortening of time will undoubtedly accelerate the development of science. And we senior three students will not be helpless in the face of piles of books. We are eager for knowledge, and we hope to learn everything in the world. However, time and ability limit us, so we have to admit that our ability is limited.

But if memory is really transplanted, will it make hardworking people lazy and those of us who are good at remembering become dull? As the saying goes, the more the machine grinds, the more durable and flexible it is. I don't know if the transplanted person's memory will deteriorate, but I believe that the original memory ability will definitely decline.

Therefore, if memory can really be transplanted, we should also make good use of it and don't neglect ability training.

If memory can be transplanted, I will study harder, remember more things, enrich myself, improve myself and become a knowledgeable person.

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Imaging in the world can't escape the dialectics of nature, that is, which is right and wrong, which is better and which is worse, which is happy and which is worried, can it be summed up in a word! -inscription

Memory transplantation is a new topic, which can not only make us daydream about the colorful future of science, but also make us worry about the social problems caused by the scientific and technological revolution of "knowledge explosion".

Science and technology are the primary productive forces. The development of memory transplantation technology will undoubtedly trigger a scientific and technological revolution. The promotion of memory transplantation to science and technology should not be underestimated. As we all know, the development of science and technology needs a long process of accumulation and brewing. Often a major scientific and technological achievement is about to come out, and scientific researchers suddenly die, and all the achievements cannot be inherited, resulting in great losses and waste. The next study will have to start from scratch. If memory can be transplanted, our scientific research will take fewer detours and avoid many worthless groping processes. The cycle of scientific inheritance will be greatly shortened, so it can be said that memory transfer technology is a catalyst for scientific development.

With memory transplantation technology, the accumulation and dissemination of technical and cultural ideas will become difficult. We will not have the embarrassing situation of "fault" between academic masters and ideological giants. Our "Qian Zhongshu" will never die, and our "Wang Guowei", our "Lu Xun" and our "Liu Haisu" will stand forever. In a sense, memory transplantation technology is full of wonderful rejuvenation, and Zhong Ling's talent is outstanding. Memory transplantation technology is the baton of academic and cultural thoughts.

If human society is a big ship. Then, technology is water. Carry a boat, overturn it, and moisten things silently. There are countless examples of science benefiting mankind, so the disasters that science brings to mankind cannot be won. Will there be friction between memory transplantation and traditional moral standards? Is it similar to the "horror" of "cloning technology"? Will human aesthetic style and human personality concept be impacted? Do humans exist only in the rational world of deduction and logic? Will the independent and distinct psychological personality and emotional world be barren? None of this is known. Can't say that these concerns are unfounded!

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If memory can be transplanted, advantages and disadvantages coexist, and worries and joys are mixed, how to eliminate the disadvantages remains to be considered!

Comments:

This paper discusses the advantages and disadvantages of memory transplantation, which is profound, suitable for the topic, reasonable in imagination and rich in content. It was rated as first-class in content and got 24 points. The expression of the article is well used, the structure is rigorous and the language is concise, but there are a few language errors. The expression was rated as Grade I, with 28 points, beautiful writing and neat font, with 5 points, totaling 57 points.

If memory can be transplanted (4)

Human organ transplantation has long been commonplace for modern people. Recently, however, scientists have a whim, speculated and tried to prove: can memory be transplanted in the same way? At present, transplanting memory to small animals has been successful, but people are more concerned about whether human memory can be transplanted. This "trace" can't be solved now, maybe it will never be solved, but let's look at the prophet's "addiction": if people's memories can be transplanted, what kind of scene will human society be? Will human ethics still exist? Is it promoting or hindering the development of society?

If memory can be transplanted, then I think there will be countless "Superman" in all walks of life in our society. We can transplant all the memories in each scientist's brain into the brain of a more talented person before he dies. Then this person has gathered hundreds of talents and has knowledge that one person cannot learn for generations. Won't he become a "superman" beyond Newton and Einstein? For example, politics and business, are they all the same? Once such a superman is created, it is obvious that many insurmountable scientific problems in human history will be solved, which will promote the development of human society to a certain extent. I think that if one day memory can be transplanted, the material world of human beings will develop at an unprecedented speed, people's lives will become richer and richer, and the word poverty may disappear from the earth forever.

But from the perspective of ethics and spiritual civilization, the transplantation of memory is a disaster for human society. The warehouse of memory treasures people's privacy in the world, regardless of good or evil; There are beautiful ones and ugly ones. These are things that no one wants to make public. If memory can be transplanted, those evil and ugly memories will bring disaster to the transplanted people and even to society. This is also extremely unfair to the transplanted person. The "treasure" in his heart has been dug away by others, and his secret has been made public. If there is such a thing as heaven, it will live forever.

Since memory transplantation can benefit mankind to some extent, it is necessary to study it, but I think that once this technology is successfully developed, its role must be limited, so that it can truly become the gospel of mankind rather than a disaster.

Comments:

This paper is in line with the meaning of the topic, with prominent center, rich content and reasonable discussion, and can think about the problem from both positive and negative aspects. The content is rated as Class I, with 22 points; The expression of the article is well used, the structure is rigorous and the language is fluent. The expression was rated as second class, with 24 points; Write down 4 points; These three items add up to 50 points.

If memory can be transplanted (5)

If memory can be transplanted, you will be able to see interesting and surprising scenes. Don't believe me, I'll show you around.

In a research room, seven or eight children are skillfully operating experimental instruments, calculating and designing skillfully. This is really an amazing scene. You may not believe it, but I tell you, they are a group of newly organized high-tech talents. They changed the memory of old researchers by moving poles. Not long ago, I visited the United States and developed their first successful fruit-the decomposition of oncogenes, which is a great achievement that people all over the country cheer and celebrate.

It's very lively in Beijing Hospital Building today, because a criminal needs a transplant. Why? This is a criminal sentenced to death. He has superb electronic technology and unique computer skills. The difference is that such an excellent talent has actually embarked on the road of crime with his own talent. It is very different to lose such a talented person. But with memory transplantation, it is easy to do, which can not only preserve his superb skills, but also eliminate those "evil seeds." No, you see everyone in the hospital is laughing: "The transplant is successful!"

Look, how lively this lake is, just like a festival. Well, there are many young people singing and dancing to celebrate something. Go and have a look. Oh, what happened? Is this in a fairy tale world? Not only people are dancing, cats and dogs, or funny monkeys are playing the flute with their legs. It's strange that I didn't know the mystery of people and animals until I asked. We can use some methods of animals to do our human things, and it will be much better to listen. Humans and animals can also communicate with each other. It is no longer just a fairy tale, but a fact. You can't just see it in fairy tales anymore.

What an interesting scene, what an exciting discovery and what an amazing achievement. If memory can be transplanted, all this will become a reality.

If memory can be transplanted, we will be able to see more unexpected things and our world will become more exciting and rich.

Comments:

This paper envisages three pictures to reflect memory transplantation. Except that the third picture is slightly omitted, it can be regarded as consistent with the meaning of the question, with a clear center, and the content is rated as Class II, with a score of18; The article has complete structure, fluent language and proper expression. Expression was rated as the second category with a score of 21; Write 3 points; 42 points for three projects.

If memory can be transplanted (6)

The transplantation of memory was successful in small animals, so the goal of scientists turned to humans. What would the world look like if people's memories could be transplanted?

If memory can be transplanted one day, those scientists who died because of unfinished scientific research projects will no longer regret it. He can transfer all his knowledge and theory to another person and let another person continue his career. This can greatly improve the speed of information transmission, and people don't have to accumulate over time. As long as they have an operation, they will get the knowledge accumulated by others all their lives and pass it on to future generations, so that human knowledge will be enriched soon. Students don't have to spend more than ten years studying, and workers don't have to accumulate work experience, which will greatly save time.

However, memory transplantation also has many disadvantages. Suppose Edison died in the middle of the filament experiment, and his memory was transferred to another scientist, and it was concluded that tungsten could not be used as a filament. The scientist remembers that tungsten can't be used as a filament, so he looks for suitable materials from metals other than tungsten, so it's hard to say whether the electric lamp can be invented. Because memory is dead, people are alive, and human beings transplant memory instead of thinking, so there will be problems. For example, can knowledge be used flexibly when it is transferred to another person? Can another person agree with his idea? Can the two be coordinated? Some memories are uninformed and should belong to personal privacy. How to screen these knowledge-only parts is also a subject that researchers need to study.

If memory can be transplanted, it is also a big challenge to human nature. The evolution of organisms tells us that a bad environment can accelerate the evolution of organisms, while a good environment can lead to the degradation or even extinction of species. If human beings really acquire knowledge so easily, will they still have enterprise and willpower?

And these two are indispensable to success. The development of things has two sides and is contradictory, and its development speed will be restricted by many factors. People tend to pay attention to this aspect of things and ignore other aspects. The same is true of memory transplantation.

If it really succeeds one day, we should also consider how to make its advantages outweigh its disadvantages and better benefit mankind.

Comments: (selected from Shandong Province)

From the perspective of argumentative writing, this composition is naive. However, if the content of this year's college entrance examination composition is to be written as an argumentative essay, it is really a bit reluctant for a middle school student-I don't know much about psychological concepts such as memory, let alone think deeply about the consequences of memory transplantation. However, many candidates still write argumentative papers with the idea of insurance according to their usual training, so it is normal to be difficult to shine.

This also makes it difficult for us to choose an excellent argumentative essay. The theoretical depth is not enough, and the expression and literary talent can often make up for it to some extent, but the literary talent of this article is also insufficient. The reason for choosing this article is mainly because when discussing the consequences of memory transplantation, it is not blindly praising or criticizing, but dialectically analyzing its advantages and disadvantages, promoting its advantages and restraining its disadvantages. For middle school students now, it is very valuable to have such a comprehensive and dialectical view.

(Shandong University Zhang Shuzheng)

If memory can be transplanted (7)

If memory can be transplanted, you will be able to see interesting and surprising scenes. Don't believe me, I'll show you around.

In a research room, seven or eight children are skillfully operating experimental instruments, calculating and designing skillfully. This is really an amazing scene. You may not believe it, but I tell you, they are a group of newly organized high-tech talents. They changed the memory of old researchers by moving poles. Not long ago, I visited the United States and developed their first successful fruit-the decomposition of oncogenes, which is a great achievement that people all over the country cheer and celebrate.

It's very lively in Beijing Hospital Building today, because a criminal needs a transplant. Why? This is a criminal sentenced to death. He has superb electronic technology and unique computer skills. The difference is that such an excellent talent has actually embarked on the road of crime with his own talent. It is very different to lose such a talented person. But with memory transplantation, it is easy to do, which can not only preserve his superb skills, but also eliminate those "evil seeds." No, you see everyone in the hospital is laughing: "The transplant is successful!"

Look, how lively this lake is, just like a festival. Well, there are many young people singing and dancing to celebrate something. Go and have a look. Oh, what happened? Is this in a fairy tale world? Not only people are dancing, cats and dogs, or funny monkeys are playing the flute with their legs. It's strange that I didn't know the mystery of people and animals until I asked. We can use some methods of animals to do our human things, and it will be much better to listen. Humans and animals can also communicate with each other. It is no longer just a fairy tale, but a fact. You can't just see it in fairy tales anymore.

What an interesting scene, what an exciting discovery and what an amazing achievement. If memory can be transplanted, all this will become a reality.

If memory can be transplanted, we will be able to see more unexpected things and our world will become more exciting and rich.

Comments:

This paper envisages three pictures to reflect memory transplantation. Except that the third picture is slightly omitted, it can be regarded as consistent with the meaning of the question, with a clear center, and the content is rated as Class II, with a score of18; The article has complete structure, fluent language and proper expression. Expression was rated as the second category with a score of 21; Write 3 points; 42 points for three projects.

If memory can be transplanted (9)

The haggard tunes sang along the banks of the Luohe River and staggered towards us. Li Bai, whose clothes are fluttering, is singing to the sky with wine and running towards us. In the ancient historical and cultural process, our nation once had too many glories and memories. If the memory can be transplanted, I would like my folks to remember the suffering and glory of the Chinese nation forever. Remember how our solemn ancestors trudged from the lush ancient Yellow River valley to today's difficult journey, and the ancient civilization and Chinese sons and daughters who are still worthy of our pride today? ...

When I meditate, the first thing that emerges from the lake of memory is the glorious back at the end of history. The desolation and heaviness through time and space. Reach the depths of our unforgettable memories. The black silk scarves of feather fans in the Three Kingdoms period, the Moon Pass in the Pre-Qin and Han Dynasties, the Zi Xia in Chang 'an City, and the hunger and cold on both sides of the river are all vividly in the pages of history. If memory can be transplanted, I would like to feel the ups and downs of the nation and the bumps in the road ahead in this dignified memory. When people in the Tang and Song Dynasties sang and danced, when Kublai Khan's fighters galloped on the land of Central Asia, we could cry with excitement and joy in that glorious memory. When the power of the Qing empire declined and the great powers slaughtered our Chinese sons and daughters, we could arouse the national awakening in that painful memory, work hard and avenge the national humiliation. It is this series of memories of blood and tears that give us tenacious fighting spirit and firm belief, and let us never forget it.

If memory can be transplanted, we should also remember the earth-shaking changes in the past 100 years and today's prosperity. Even if history becomes history after all, we should leave a peaceful and quiet scene in the only remaining memory. Although our nation has suffered the pain of blood and tears, the separation of flesh and blood, and great shame, after all, the swords and shadows in memory, rolling smoke, let us learn from our mistakes and cast a number of national spirits. We will use the tears of suffering to polish the eyes of wisdom and kindness in memory, let ourselves, let ourselves. The martyr's blood stained the land he loved and the memory of hundreds of millions of people. The ruins of the embassy have not awakened the innocent children buried here, but have awakened the patriotic passion of the people of China. If memory can be transplanted, let's paint this memory the thickest and heaviest.

Our history can leave us nothing but memories, and our nation can wait for nothing but self-improvement. Preserving memories can give us more reasons for self-confidence and self-improvement. We should not only remember the ancient civilization and glory, but also remember how much our nation has suffered. She longs for her children to feel proud and respected!

(selected from Hubei Province)

If memory can be transplanted (10)

I often hear students fantasize when chatting, "If only I could change my mind with my English teacher during the college entrance examination. I want to have his level and be admitted to a famous university! " What followed was mostly a burst of laughter.

What will happen if, one day, memory can really be transplanted? Cloning? Transplant? And have a big sale?

If one day, memories can be obtained as easily as buying cold films in the hospital, I think this society will really be in a mess-everyone will have memories of great people.

Schools are no longer necessary. Companies don't need to look at academic qualifications when recruiting. Just ask, is your memory Einstein or Newton's? All the houses and interior decoration will be exactly the same as Newton's former residence ... everyone has become a person standing on the shoulders of giants, so where is the naive "I"?

It is true that having the memory of great men can bring many benefits. The great man's way of life and profound thoughts can be used by me, but everything has its two sides. Once the thought of "I" is more and more suppressed by great thoughts, it is inevitable to lose myself.

Things are always developing, and people's understanding of the objective world will always extend to depth and breadth. The thoughts of great men may be the peak of their times, and they can even "see the distant future through the fog of the century", but what we need more is strong self-confidence and brave innovative spirit.

Facing the rapidly changing world, we need to have a "discard" attitude towards everything yesterday, discard its dross and take its essence. So should "memory". We should not only see the scientific methods and realistic attitudes that people used to succeed in the past under the conditions at that time, but also learn from the experience summarized by predecessors and explore the laws. More importantly, we should go up a storey still higher and try to see higher and farther. If you just lie in your memory, even if you understand the formula again, you can only say that it belongs to your predecessors. As far as "I" is concerned, there is nothing new. At most, I'm just an excellent antique dealer.

Standing on the threshold of 2 1 century, each of us should be aware of the urgency of being innovative. If one day, memory can really be transplanted, when someone sells Newton's memory to me, I will definitely refuse. Because I want to be a Newtonian figure, and I never want to be a person who lives in my own memory.

(selected from Hubei Province)