Hello, teacher XXX!

With your help and guidance, my graduation thesis on xxxx has been preliminarily completed. Now I send my graduation thesis to you, hoping to get some guidance from you and improve some shortcomings. Thank you for your hard work, teacher.

If the first message can be:

Hello, teacher XXX! I am XXX, a student of your graduation thesis. ……

First of all, it's a matter of politeness. Pay attention to your words and express your gratitude. Ask questions, ask the teacher for help, and hope to get some guidance ... don't be too rigid.

The second is to express gratitude. When writing a paper, the teacher has guidance to express his gratitude. Ask the teacher to help me revise it, and thank you.

Then pay attention to directness and cut the crap. Simply say why you want to call and send a message, discuss your paper directly, and don't waste the teacher's time.

Other tips: 1. On time. Try to submit it according to the time agreed by teachers and students. If not, communicate with the teacher in advance to avoid the situation that the teacher urges you.

2. Don't have typos. Mistakes are a sign of bad attitude. You can avoid these mistakes by careful examination, and don't let your paper trip over "minor problems".

3. Pay attention to the way the paper is submitted. According to the tutor's reading habits, choose the appropriate submission method. Email, qq, WeChat ...

4. Teachers' suggestions for revision should be seriously considered.

If you don't understand, don't pretend to understand. You must "get to the bottom of it", or you can fully dig and modify it on the basis of full understanding.