The relationship between man and road is very close. Without people, the road will cease to exist. Without roads, people will be unable to move, and people and roads will be harmonious and unified. A person's life is a road.

On this road, people need to think. Burke once said, "Only those who are creative and think independently can create great achievements". Creation is the essential quality of human beings, and thinking is the basic condition of creation. Only in constant thinking can people keep moving forward; Only in constant thinking can people make the road of life more exciting!

On this road, people need to pay. At that time, King Hussein and Lanny were respected by people because they were attached to the people and benefited them. Love is the most beautiful language in the world, and dedication is its support. The structure of the word "person" supports each other, and each of us can only get the true feelings with our hearts. Only by giving can you get it; Only dedication can gain. The road of life needs to be paid and paid to be colorful!

On this road, people will fail and then succeed. Edison invented the electric light, and took thousands of failures as gains, because after all, he knew that thousands of materials could not be used as filaments, which laid the foundation for the success of electric light. A fall gains wisdom. The road of life is to learn from failure and move towards glory step by step!

On this road, people will always gain something. When young, harvest youth and vitality; After adulthood, harvest maturity and charm; Gain experience and wisdom in old age; Harvest peace and tranquility in old age. When you fail, you reap sadness and lessons; When you succeed, you reap happiness and joy. The road of life is always fruitful, and I believe that different seasons will yield different fruits. In the face of success, I learned to be calm; In the face of failure, I learned to be indifferent and tolerant because of wealth. This is the biggest gain of my life!

On this road, everyone, like Kuafu, is always chasing the sun in his heart and struggling to catch up. In the hard pursuit, you may not catch up with the ideal sun, but you drive away laziness and emptiness, exercise your body, enrich your life, taste the pleasure of climbing constantly, and add color to your life!

Some people say that there is no road in the world, and more people walk, it becomes a road; It is also said that there is a road in the world, and there are many people walking, but there is no road. In fact, people and roads are inseparable. Where people are, there is a way! Life is a road, which needs to be thought, paid, failed, succeeded and gained!

Comments:

This is a well-argued and well-structured article. At the beginning, it points out the central argument that "one's life is a road", and then points out that "one needs to think", "one needs to contribute", "one is bound to fail and then succeed", "one gains from time to time" and "strives for it", and demonstrates it from various aspects. The story is typical, the quotation is appropriate, and the use of a large number of contrast and parallelism sentences adds to the charm of the article.

Two sides of a coin

Once upon a time, Little Tiger's dynamic rhythm and Stephen Liu's childhood songs accompanied us from youth to youth, from flowers to flowers, from spring to Qiu Lai.

As people often say, a good song can affect a person for a lifetime. Looking back, parents sang "Singing the Motherland", which inspired people to advance wave after wave for the socialist cause. Looking back, today Jay Chou's song Snail was included in the school song as a patriotic song. A stone stirs up a thousand waves, which can be described as "fighting violence with violence." Suddenly, the major media, newspapers and magazines have launched a heated discussion. The topic of discussion is whether pop songs are suitable to become school songs. Therefore, I think as long as it is positive and healthy, why can't it be popularized? But some people say that pop songs can't be elegant, and they can't be used as school songs for everyone to learn to sing together. But now we young people, don't we all spend all day with Jay Chou and Stephanie? Since everyone likes his works, why can't they agree?

I don't dislike pop songs, but one thing is worth affirming, such a move is a big step forward compared with usual! Our society is still a more traditional and conservative society. Although people's values have changed greatly, when some traditional concepts conflict with modern concepts, our teachers and parents will still tell us to choose the former, which is actually related to our country's traditional culture, history and concepts. Today, society is facing great transformation, culture is facing great development, and the traditional way of thinking is gradually in line with international standards. Why don't we change our way of thinking?

As we all know, Jin Yong is a very famous martial arts novelist. I also grew up watching his works. It can be said that his works are good and bad. But overall, the essence is more than the dross. He has a lot of life insights and truths. Everyone was deeply impressed by a passage. In The Condor Heroes, when Yang Guo learned that Mr. and Mrs. Guo Jing were his father's enemies, he had the psychology of revenge. On the day he was ready to lay hands on Guo Jing, he accompanied Guo Jing to inspect Xiangyang City. At that time, Guo Jing said this to him: "People call me a knight-errant, but I didn't know that I could also call myself a knight-errant. This has two meanings. One is to worry about the country and the people and save the people from fire and water. This is the great man of chivalry Second, it is a villain's move to save the suffering. " At that time, Xiangyang was attacked on all sides, and Guo Jing and his wife saved the people from fire and water, which was a great man! So, Yang Guo was ashamed and couldn't bear to do it. This episode deeply infected me. Until now, it still affects the way I interact with people.

Therefore, you can't kill pop culture with one stick. They are like two sides of a coin, which need us to examine and analyze, take its essence and discard its dross.

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The success of this paper lies in the small opening, new material selection, rigorous argumentation and beautiful language. Small opening. Focusing on pop songs and martial arts novels, the author expounds his own unique opinion by looking at the essence through phenomena: pop culture can't be killed with a stick, they are like two sides of a coin, which need us to examine and analyze, take its essence and discard its dross. This discussion is both concentrated and profound. New material selection. The author carefully examines and discriminates Little Tiger's dynamic rhythm, Steven Liu's childhood ballads, the song "Singing the Motherland" sung by parents, the song "Snail" by Jay Chou as the school song, my attitude towards popular songs, traditional thinking mode and the enlightenment from reading Jin Yong's martial arts novels, and strongly demonstrates his own views. The argument is rigorous. In the process of argumentation, the author not only uses examples, quotations and metaphors, but also uses positive and negative arguments and inductive reasoning to make his argument rigorous, rigorous and impeccable. The author also carefully dressed up the language, which is not only smooth and beautiful, but also connected with the readers everywhere, and can't help but make you nod.

* * * In America

Wisteria and morning glory, supported by fences and dead trees, have achieved their own beauty; Fences and dead trees are also dotted with wisteria and morning glory, casting their own brilliance. So is life. Every footprint of ours includes our hard work, the sweat shed by others and the achievements of others. Life needs tacit understanding between people, interdependence between people and help between people. Only in this way can we be beautiful.

In the long history, there are many such wise men. Sima Qian, who wrote "Historian's swan song, Li Sao has no rhyme", is good at taking history as a mirror, touching generations of Chinese children with historical realism, and reappearing generations of historiography. If there were no dribs and drabs in history, historical records would only be passive water and trees without roots, and perhaps we can't be moved by it today; Without Sima Qian's assiduous study and exploration, Xiang Yu's bravery, Cao Cao's Xiao Yong and Guan Gong's loyalty might not be so truly displayed before our eyes. It is because of the mutual help of Sima Qian and history that they have the opportunity to be beautiful together and forever. ...

Humans know beauty, and to create conditions to create their own brilliance, everything in the world should stop tasting, right?

Red flowers and green leaves are beautiful, but have you thought about it? What would a solitary red flower and a mass of dense green leaves look like? Maybe they are still beautiful, but I don't know how many times worse than their tacit cooperation.

The black velvet night sky is desolate and dim, with no stars; The stars shining like pearls are invisible to our naked eyes unless they are set off at night. They can never flash mysteriously in the sky, showing the mystery of the universe to mankind.

Surrounded by water, the mountain shows its stability; In the embrace of mountains, water shows its agility. Surrounded by mountains and rivers, mountains and rivers are reflected, and what a charming and exciting picture nature has!

In life, we need to help each other, we know how to help each other, we gather the strength that everyone can do and work together to create our beauty. A person's beauty is rare, we should learn to be beautiful together!

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The theme of "borrowing" in this article is * * * and beauty, which is quite innovative. Based on the well-known historical facts of Sima Qian's writing historical records in high school textbooks, this paper proves that history and history books are complementary, and history has been circulated through the ages because of history books, and history books have been truly enriched because of history. To expand, except for human beings, everything in nature is the same, and the beauty of * * * is achieved through mutual "borrowing". The structure of this paper is complete, and the language in the last few sections also shows a certain literary grace. The shortcomings of this paper are that the language is not concise and fluent, and the materials are not sufficient.

Win-win

In the ever-changing business war, many enterprises adopt the strategy of complementary advantages, for example, enterprise A lacks funds and technology, while enterprise B has strong financial resources and insufficient technology. The enterprises of Party A and Party B cooperate to develop a certain project, offset each other's disadvantages and win high profits, and both sides are happy. This is called "win-win".

In the law of the jungle nature, there are many animals living together, such as soybeans and rhizobia. Soybean provides food for rhizobia, and rhizobia provides nitrogen nutrition for soybean. Both sides live happily, which is called "mutual benefit".

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Numerous examples show us the benefits of mutual borrowing and mutual benefit. Not only things, but also people.

It is an ironclad fact that no one is perfect. But as long as we can study hard, "borrow" some other people's advantages, improve ourselves, and borrow some of our own "advantages" to improve others, then we are win-win.

Shen Congwen became famous by writing "Border Town" with the beautiful scenery of his hometown Fenghuang County, which is famous all over the world because of Shen Congwen. Mathematician Euler is easy to learn mathematics intuitively, which is a bit calm and insufficient, while Lagrange is famous for his strict logic and a little lack of agility. When the two giants met, generate showed dazzling sparks and brought out the best in each other, which had a far-reaching impact on their later mathematical research work; Engels and Marx also complement each other in their close contacts, making them go down in history forever.

However, people's selfishness is very heavy, and they are often unwilling to impart their own advantages or experiences to others for fear that others will surpass them. People are too proud to admit their shortcomings, let alone correct them.

Confucius said, "Knowing is knowing, and not knowing is not knowing." Don't pretend to understand what you don't understand, study hard and understand. People who want to be proud pretend to understand, so most people who want to be proud will not achieve anything, but Confucius's "asking why" has brought a lifetime of glory.

Only by correcting one's innate defects in understanding, actively exposing one's own shortcomings, learning from others to correct one's own shortcomings, and passing on one's meager experience and advantages to others, can there be a "win-win" situation between them. Therefore, people who can cooperate and complement each other's advantages will eventually succeed because of "win-win"

Selfish, face-saving people will only hesitate on the road to success, even if they see success, they can't catch it.

I hope your life will be filled with "win-win" and your life will be brilliant because of "win-win".

Comments:

From the great significance of achieving "win-win" to how to achieve "win-win", this paper also uses positive and negative comparative arguments, which is accurate and sufficient, clear and logical, and is a very prominent discussion article.

Hey, calm down!

Do you have an idol? Different people have different answers. Those who are interested in the economy must worship Bill Gates, with a net worth of 5 10 billion! For eleven consecutive years, wealth ranked first! I feel uncomfortable not talking about him. People who are interested in music will, of course, pay close attention to their favorite singers.

When you found that you spent five hours in front of the TV watching whether Bill Gates planned to annex Yahoo with Microsoft, and when you found that you couldn't sleep well while waiting for Rowling's seventh Harry Potter, did you think it was a bit too much to treat idols like this?

After all, idols are just people. After all, there is no God in the world.

Bill Gates is great, he has extraordinary economic mind and superb computer technology, but do you know what the reporters who interviewed him first impressed him? "It's a bit rigid. You talk to him about technical problems. He can talk all morning, but he can also talk about other things. More than 10 minutes is hard to say. " Gates seems to be doing nothing well except making money and programming. No one can only have advantages, so look at anyone calmly.

Calm down, when you only judge others by all their advantages, you will surely find that he is your idol and how great he is.

When you admire someone's flexible thinking, do you notice that he is very slow? When you admire someone's literary talent, do you find that he is afraid to speak in front of many people? Behind any success, there may be one shortcoming after another, failure and giving up. No one is perfect, so learn to analyze calmly.

With the warming of Harry Potter, Rowling, the author of Harry Potter, has changed from a poor laid-off teacher to the richest woman in Britain. She is a master of language, but when she gave a speech to the public, the first thing she said was: "I'm very happy, but I dare not stand on the podium, there are too many people …", and then she ended her speech with a shy voice. An unstable person, after idolizing her, still learns to speak so shyly and thinks he is fashionable. Is it silly? Rowling's shyness is her shortcoming, and your eagerness to emulate it is your shortcoming!

It is good to have an idol and a goal, but you must be calm. Don't learn bad habits if you don't learn the advantages of idols.

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The greatest feature of this article is its rigorous argumentation and its layering. The headline is "Hey, calm down! Clarify the author's concept of idol. The article begins by asking, "Do you have an idol?" Then introduce the example of worshipping Bill Gates, and use another sentence: "After all, idols are just people, after all, there is no God in the world." Then introduce Bill Gates and highlight its shortcomings. Point out the center of the article Take the example of Rowling for discussion. This makes the article more convincing. Clear-cut attitude and unique language.