IELTS writing argumentative essay loses points: 1. inconformity
The so-called inconsistency not only refers to the inconsistency between subject and predicate, but also includes the inconsistency between numbers, tenses and pronouns. For example, when a person has money, he can do what he wants.
Analysis: First, the third person is singular, so have in this sentence should be changed to have; Want should be changed to want. This sentence is a typical inconsistency between subject and predicate.
When a person has money, he can do what he wants.
IELTS writing argumentative essay loses points II. Dislocation of modifiers
English is different from Chinese. The meaning of a sentence may change when the same modifier is placed in different positions in the sentence. Candidates often don't pay enough attention to this point, which leads to unnecessary misunderstanding. I believe I can do well, and I will better understand the world outside the campus.