1. This topic has a novel angle, clear context, fluent writing and clear views. However, there are still some problems in the article, such as incomplete information, in-depth analysis and insufficient argumentation.

2. The title of the article is consistent, the argument is prominent, the argument is sufficient, closely related to the theme, the expression is smooth, and the format is correct.

3. The topic of this paper has strong application value, comprehensive literature, reasonable data and correct conclusion. In addition, the paper has correct format, standardized writing, smooth expression, clear organization and good quality.

4. The structure of the article is reasonable, the logical thinking is clear, the viewpoint is expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the reference materials meet the requirements, but there are few innovations.

5. The topic of the paper is novel and practical, the structure of the article is reasonable, the thinking is clear, the argumentation method is reasonable, and the argumentation content is convincing, which meets the overall requirements.

6. The paper meets the professional requirements, reflects social hot issues, and puts forward solutions, which have certain practicability, appropriate structure, clear thinking, basically correct views and meet the requirements.

7. The topic of this paper has strong pertinence and practical significance. On the basis of consulting the literature, I conducted in-depth research, put forward my own unique views, and had my own innovative parts, but the data part was lacking, which met the requirements of graduation thesis as a whole.

8. The article is novel in conception, scientific and reasonable in content demonstration and standardized in format, but lacking in innovation and data.

9. The references in this paper are sufficient and meet the requirements, and the structure of the article is complete and the ideas are clear, but individual viewpoints are not fully demonstrated and generally meet the requirements.

10, this paper is scientific and reasonable in structure, rigorous in logic, clear in thinking, clear in viewpoint and reasonable in demonstration method. In this paper, a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the argument, but the language expression is not clear enough and meets the requirements as a whole.

1 1. The topic of this paper meets the requirements, the content is sufficient, the reference materials meet the requirements, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, and the viewpoint is clearly expressed, but the depth and innovation of demonstration are insufficient.

12, the full text is closely related to the theme, with reasonable structure, fluent language expression, accurate viewpoint expression, clear thinking and strong integrity, which meets the requirements of graduation thesis.

13, the structure of the paper is complete, it conforms to the writing norms, the topic is valuable, the content is comprehensive, the organization is clear, the arguments are sufficient, and the viewpoints are unique. It is recommended to be elected as an excellent paper at the school level.

14, the length of the article conforms to the regulations, the information is basically complete, the content is comprehensive, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable, but it lacks personal opinions and innovation.

15. The topic of this paper is realistic and practical. The structure of the article is scientific and reasonable, the level is clear, the parts are closely related, the demonstration materials are convincing, but the innovation is insufficient, and it meets the requirements on the whole.