Graduation thesis supervisor comments 1 1. The topic selection of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal, and the graduation thesis can achieve the comprehensive training goal, which is difficult and has a large workload. This topic has academic research value.
2. The title of this article does not meet the requirements of financial management; Students are not serious in the process of writing and can't complete the writing task; The paper is not comprehensive, the research content is too shallow, the structure of the paper is unreasonable, the logic is not rigorous, the conclusion of the paper is wrong, and the format basically does not meet the requirements of paper writing; There is no innovation at work.
3. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, can comprehensively collect information about the examination system, can comprehensively use the knowledge of the examination system in the writing process, can comprehensively analyze the graduation thesis of the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively use knowledge.
4. The topic of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tried to learn from Lev? Looking for the connection between Tolstoy and a character in Cao Yu's novels. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw your own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
5. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Rich references and strong timeliness; No plagiarism was found.
6. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
7. The topic is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.
8. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to XXXXX's writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also very sharp, and the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, with unique views, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
9. The length of the article fully conforms to the regulations of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions.
10, the topic of the paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference) value (great practical guiding significance).
Thesis tutor's comments on the two topics are basically the same, and the arguments are more prominent, so discussion can better serve the arguments.
The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.
The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal, and can basically achieve the comprehensive training goal, with less difficulty and less workload. The theme of the paper is general.
Students' ability to consult documents is poor, and they can't collect information about the examination system comprehensively. In the process of writing, his ability to comprehensively apply the knowledge of examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of examination system is poor.
The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion.
The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme.
The language expression is poor and the format meets the requirements of the specification; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.
Graduation thesis supervisor comments 3 1. This paper takes-as the theme, which fully embodies the social value of the times and reality. The full text is divided into three parts. This paper first discusses-,and then focuses on-. The full text is basically discussed around the theme. In the process of discussion, students make good use of the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze and solve problems. The language is fluent, but the point of view is not refined enough. In the process of argumentation, we can properly use theoretical argumentation methods and practical argumentation methods. Accurate expression of views, clear thinking and strong integrity of the article. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty.
2. The references in this paper are sufficient and meet the needs of the topic. Taking-as an example, this paper focuses on-. The topic of the paper meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear thinking, accurate expression of views and standardized format, which can better use administrative professional knowledge to analyze practical administrative problems in reality. But the argument of personal views is not sufficient. Generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
3. This paper mainly discusses that the structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the arguments are sufficient, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, and the argumentation method is rigorous. Generally speaking, it is basically qualified.
4. The theme of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are basically clear, and the views are basically accurate. The format is basically standardized, and the topic is suitable for the training requirements of administrative management specialty, but there are too few documents to consult and refer to, some demonstration materials are not closely combined with the theme, and there are some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.
5. The topic is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full-text materials are compiled according to the requirements of the administrative management specialty, which fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to independent innovation. Generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
6. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the paper materials are sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
7. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. In the process of writing, the materials consulted in this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
8. The focus of this paper is. The topic is in line with the training objectives and professional characteristics of the administrative management major, and it is highly targeted and practical. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, and the related documents and materials cited in the writing are closely related to the theme, and the cited materials are relatively new. In the process of writing, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management to analyze administrative management, and in the process of argumentation, he mainly uses theoretical argumentation and factual argumentation. However, the shortcomings of the article are unclear expression of some sentences, insufficient argumentation and insufficient innovation. Generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
9. This paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, it analyzes the practical benefits of the official accountability system, then deeply analyzes the predicament of the official accountability system in China, and finally puts forward effective suggestions to solve the predicament. The full text embodies the requirements of professional characteristics, meets the training requirements of administrative management specialty, and the references meet the needs of the viewpoints and themes of the paper. The actual argument is not enough, but there are not many materials that really belong to independent innovation. Generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
10, the topic of this paper has strong application value, the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.