1. Self-confidence is the premise of writing a good composition.
Believe in yourself without stage fright, keep your thinking in the best state, and fully mobilize your potential ability. On the other hand, if you doubt your ability, lose control of your emotions and suppress your thoughts, you will be disqualified from writing. Remember the clock you learned? Gorky said: "As long as you have the desire to live and have confidence in your own strength, then the whole life is a grand clock, a great clock full of spiritual strength and shocking people with its lofty achievements." The same is true of composition. I believe I will work miracles.
2. Set aside enough time for writing. If self-confidence is the ideological guarantee for writing a good exam-oriented composition, then time is the material guarantee for writing a good exam-oriented composition.
If you have enough time and don't panic, you can think like a stream and gurgle out. Otherwise, how can you reproduce your knowledge if there is not enough time? If you scribble, you will inevitably lose something. Judging from the operation practice of candidates over the years, the composition should account for about 70 minutes of the Chinese examination time 150 minutes. This year, the number of words in the national unified adult college entrance examination composition has increased from 700 words for five consecutive years to 800 words, which makes it even more necessary to leave enough time for the composition.
3. Read the composition of the topic carefully, carefully examine the topic, narrow the wide topic, and find the eye of the narrow topic.
In order to embody the principle of writability, adult college entrance examination proposition compositions are mostly wide topics. This year's Shanghai Adult College Entrance Examination composition is a generalized propositional composition with the topic of "responsibility". How to narrow this problem? The so-called narrow works are to modify and restrict the content involved in the topic, and then expand the connotation for a certain side after being restricted. For example, the scope of "responsibility" is too wide to write; It will be much easier to write from the perspective of "responsibility (the history of our contemporary youth)" Feed ingredients should be carefully checked. Feeding composition is different from proposition composition. Before examining the expression ability, we should examine the reading ability. Candidates should carefully analyze the material to understand what social or ideological issues it directly or indirectly raises that deserve discussion. This year's national unified adult college entrance examination composition is argumentative, and the material provided is the fable poem "Comment on Birds". Candidates can only write this article well if they accurately read the meaning of the poem "Treat others correctly". Otherwise, it is difficult to write a successful story. The proposer's requirement for writing is the premise for candidates to write well. You must write as required, without any randomness. Demand is also the scoring point of reviewers, so they should have a strong scoring consciousness. It is necessary to clearly understand the requirements put forward in obvious forms such as "requirements" or "attention", and to clearly understand the specific requirements implied in the topic. This year's national unified adult college entrance examination composition "Dialogue between bristles", the word "requirement" is in bold, to remind candidates. It is obvious from the aspects of dialogue content, dialogue mode, dialogue center, description means, language and examination paper. However, the restrictions on writing objects, tips on writing methods, filling in the blanks of semi-propositions, and the provisions on the number of words and genre expressed in this topic are easily overlooked. By the way, how to understand words limited by words. What is "about 200 words"? "Left", not less than 150 words; "Yes", no more than 250 words. The concept of "left and right" is 50 words each. What is "not less than 600 words"? Generally speaking, 1 point will be deducted for every 50 or 30 words missing. "Not less than" does not mean that there is no limit to writing too much, but it should not exceed 100 words. The above two points can be proved by extra spaces on the paper.
4. According to the formula, it should be written like this: "It's like the poor number of good games." (Liu Xie, "Wen Xin Diao Long". General technology ")
If candidates can have a clear understanding of all kinds of styles, then the control of the article will be handy. The basic structure of argumentative writing is: opening a topic+analysis and argumentation+closing a topic. The basic structure of an argumentative essay is: introduction+analysis+writing+collection. The basic structure of narrative writing is: event occurrence (clarity)+event development (vivid twists and turns)+event ending (implied enlightenment). The basic structure of a writer's narrative is: intervention (including appearance, language, environment and details)+foreshadowing (briefly describing several events)+climax (describing typical events in detail)+sharpness (making the finishing point or ending lyric sentences). The basic structure of explanatory text: put forward the explanatory object+explanatory order (primary and secondary, total score, internal and external, sequential)/explanatory method (definition, analogy, number of columns, analogy)+explanatory object at the end of the text. The above structural formula is not immutable, and many variants can be deduced. As Yao Nai said: "For writers, there is a rule that can be changed and then changed."
There is not enough material in this text. To write an exam-oriented composition well, you should not only master the writing mode, but also have writing materials.
Mode is the law of writing, and material is the basis of writing. "The important thing to say is that there are some things." (Zhang Xuecheng's Literature and History) This "thing" is the material, which shows that the material is also very important to the article. Because of the lack of materials in the examination room, don't forget the Chinese textbook you have learned when holding a pen! There are inexhaustible materials for you. On practice, Su Shi's Shi Zhongshan Collection says, "What is it?" On reform, Lv Buwei's Tea Classic said: "The world has changed, and reform is appropriate." If we say ideal, Tao Zhu's Great Ideal says: "It is a great ideal that conforms to the law of social and historical development." If we say the value of life, Gorky's The Clock says, "If you have self-esteem and are ashamed of succumbing to the darkness of time, then leave something in your life that you will never forget."
6. Draw up a good topic, which is the window of the article.
Writing with a clear theme can draw up a good theme for your composition and add a lot of value to the article. So, how can we draw up a question? The proposed topic should be clear, concise and novel. The basic method of the proposed topic: argument is based on the ideological proposition of argument or the content of the topic; Argumentative writing can adopt the method of argumentative writing, or delete materials to put forward topics; Narration takes specific characters as the topic, or major events as the topic; Explanatory text takes the object of explanation as the theme. If you want to create a new topic, you can use foreign words, mathematical formulas, classical Chinese sentences, poems, idioms and so on. This year's national unified adult college entrance examination composition, if using mathematical formula, can write "you accuse him+he accuses me+I accuse you = you can't treat others correctly"; If you use poetry to raise a topic, you can write "When is everyone responsible?" .
7. Have a good beginning and end. "Feng Shou" said that the whole opening article should be as small and beautiful as Feng Shou; "Leopard tail" means to be as short and powerful as a leopard tail when closing the full text.
How do we do this? "Money is a good teacher", but we still need to master more methods. Commonly used opening methods: argumentative essays include the first sentence to the point, the opening of epigrams, direct opinions and questions; Narration includes describing environmental law, portraying characters, explaining events and creating suspense; There are quoted materials and paraphrased materials in the supply argumentative papers. Common ending methods: argumentative essays include taking care of the title, starting with a counterattack, summarizing the full text, showing the story of the deceased, ending the narrative with a climax, ending naturally, supplementing explanations, inspiring thinking and so on; Providing argumentative essays is a bit like material collection and extended material collection. Wen Wei Po published two excellent compositions "Responsibility" in this year's Shanghai Adult College Entrance Examination. The first sentence at the beginning of an article is: "Responsibility, is it a confession of the past or a commitment to the future?" Use the first sentence to explain the problem. It is not simple to cut to the chase with "what is the responsibility". At the end of another article, I wrote: "I will use my enterprise, endurance and dedication to accept the responsibility entrusted to me by the times and provoke the burden of 2 1 century!" Adopt the method of summarizing the full text. This exclamatory sentence sums up the full text from three aspects: "dedication, endurance and professionalism", which is powerful.
8. Dialectical viewpoints As far as the ideological content of the article is concerned, the national unified adult college entrance examination composition always emphasizes the ability to examine candidates' dialectical understanding of things.
Propositional argumentative essay "Worry in the world first, happiness in the world later" examines the dialectical relationship between "worry and happiness"; "There is no water under here, so go and dig somewhere else!" This paper aims to investigate the dialectical relationship between "a little taste" and "careful consideration"; 9 1, an argumentative paper entitled "Those who are near the ink are black/those who are near the ink are not necessarily black", examining the dialectical relationship between "external causes and internal causes"; 1993 describes the phenomenon of "new and old bark", and investigates the dialectical relationship of "the alternation of new and old"; This year's bird review examines the dialectical relationship between "accusing others and being accused". It can be seen that the contents and methods of adult college entrance examination compositions have changed in recent ten years, but the main line of examining the all-round development of understanding problems has not changed.
9. Think differently. The atmosphere in the examination room is different from that in the classroom on weekdays. Candidates are often closed-minded.
How to open this temporary mental block caused by tension? People's thinking is nothing more than vertical and horizontal. Longitudinal thinking is from front to back, and horizontal thinking is from here to there. The structure of an article or a paragraph is either vertical, horizontal or cross. The excellent composition "Responsibility" published in the eighth edition of Wen Wei Po in July 17 shows that candidates use lateral thinking, that is, as commented by the editor: this paper expounds the importance of enterprise, endurance and professionalism, and discusses how to assume their own responsibilities; When explaining dedication, we use vertical thinking, from the dedication of Marx to the dedication of our generation.
10. The language should be decent and wonderful. As the saying goes, "What song to sing on the mountain."
The same is true of composition. You can say anything you write. The language of argumentation should be rigorous and thorough, the language of narration should be vivid and vivid, and the language of elaboration should be accurate and concise. "Shi Yuyu and Shanhui, Water and Pearl and Sichuan Mei." If there are some wonderful sentences in the article, it will make the whole article shine like "jade" and "pearl". How can I write such good sentences? Mainly to mobilize various rhetorical devices, such as figurative images, double beauty, parallelism, contrast, repeated emphasis, rhetorical irony, graceful and restrained hints and so on. There are some such sentences in the article, and the reviewers may not like them when they see them, and the article may not go up a step! In addition, the combination of long sentences and short sentences, elegant sentences and common sayings complement each other, can also make the article rich and colorful.
1 1. Don't recite the aria of "timely articles", but hold high the main theme of the times, describe the excellent situation of deepening reform, and express the heroic pride of making waves. We should have a correct understanding of the dark side of society, as Gorky said in New Life: "In the sunniest days, dirty things and rotten things are always particularly conspicuous, but often, we are too focused on it and run counter to good hopes, so we can't see the sunshine and feel its power to breed everything." Today, the people of the whole country are working together to realize the four modernizations, which is an extremely important thing. From this perspective, we should know the good things that make us happy and the bad things that make us sad. A candidate wrote a lot of complaints in his composition, which can only reflect his immaturity.
12. Don't lose your emotional point. We should realize that scrawled handwriting and dirty roll paper have brought unpleasant consequences to the reviewers, not just the problem of losing a few points. Teacher Li from the Adult College Entrance Examination Department of Zhongshan Education said: "In short, you should be confident in yourself and write well;" Have materials at hand and formulas in mind; Always change and change, and the article should be written skillfully. "