There are rare blue sky and white clouds in the sky of mountain city. Of course, the joy in my heart is hard to suppress, and the smile on my face is exposed.
So I ran home at a speed of 100 meters. "Mom-"I called before I got home.
"Come back, come in!" My mother gave me a Chinese smile. After giving my mother an American hug in return, I lay in bed in the coolest "big" shape.
"How did you do in the math exam?" My mother sat next to me, still smiling. "99!" I finished and took a sip of water.
"Good, good, good test!" Mom's voice is 8 degrees high and her face is very happy. Although I heard a lot of praise, my heart was still sweet.
"However, my mother suddenly quietly turned a tune. Have you ever wondered where you lost that? "This sentence is really in my mind. I really didn't think about it. Then there was silence, frightening and suffocating.
"Being unable to keep improving is your biggest problem, son!" Mother's tone is very different from that just now. The sweetness in my heart seems to be sour.
Mother quietly closed the door and went out. I felt that she stood at the door for a long time.
The empty room was just me and the curtains blown by the wind ... then I began to think from another angle. I began to feel the art of mother's speech.
Praise is enthusiastic, but criticism is silent. Praise seems to have nothing to do with criticism. Actually, it is not. Think about it carefully, it still makes sense. So I tried to sum up a formula, which is the title of this article.
"Criticism is a kind of enjoyment" Everyone wants to be praised by others, not criticized by others, but I think criticism is a kind of enjoyment, because it can benefit us, so as to strive to improve ourselves and make progress. The teacher criticized people for being very strategic.
The first is tepid education, which will make you fully realize the artistic conception that silence is better than sound. Then the teacher's voice will be raised a little, and an angry storm will completely disintegrate your mind and make you gasp in admiration, thus accepting Kong Old Master Q's way of being a man, and then he will show you a smug smile and watch you walk out of the office. If you don't like him, but want to make a scene with him, you are a mistake. As the saying goes, "He who knows the times is a hero."
However, occasionally, I will meet a few "nail households", which will make the teacher lose face and completely lose his reputation. But when the teacher sees the smug "disciple" below, he will try his best to restore his reputation and rebuild Benwei. First of all, he will raise his voice by an octave, and his words will flood like the tide in Qiantang River. If you are an old hand, you may be able to resist, but the teacher's offensive will get higher and higher, and then he will talk to you about the purpose of learning at lightning speed. What is Anbang's big-headed life philosophy of governing the country and rejuvenating the country, which will make you puzzled and unable to dodge, and then the teacher will use attack tactics. Just like the ever-changing passing skills on the football field, it hits your heart again and again. At this time, your inner defense line is slowly shaking, and finally you break through your solid "Ma Qinuo" defense line.
At this time, the most proud is the teacher, the best audience is the classmates, but the most unlucky is you, because you will know that the teacher will make an example of you and let you write about the experience of hating fire. However, if you have been patient, an interesting criticism will certainly benefit you a lot, just like listening to Beethoven's symphony.
Criticism is a kind of enjoyment without admission tickets. As long as you listen carefully and understand the profound philosophy, it will definitely resonate with me. Remember that criticism is a pleasure, my friend, don't you think? The arena of life chasing criticism often begins like this: there are flowers cheered by friends on both sides, and behind them are the eyes of parents' support and praise, so we grow up in the applause of praise.
However, since we want to move forward, we must wander alone. At that time, can the lonely soul withstand the blow of criticism? Many times, praise always wears a beautiful coat, permeates your blood like a devil, destroys all your cognitive fields like a landslide and tsunami, and devours a beautiful spiritual home; You who obey praise will only become its poor slave.
Perhaps, for those who are eager for praise and pursue fame and fortune, criticism is the destruction and loss of will. For those who have indomitable determination and unswerving original intention, criticism is the realization and sublimation of ideals! "Without a little chill, where does the plum blossom fragrance come from?"
Yes, the creator will never let a person without pain, suffering or even criticism become a strong man, a hero and a pillar. I am not a person who advocates praise. I hope criticism can freeze my soul and make me stronger.
Because, I will never go boating in the open sea for romance, even if there are white waves, layers of wonderful waves and beautiful blue. Because I deeply understand that if I want to hug them, all I get is foam with fishy smell.
I will choose to jump into the depths of the sea bravely and let seaweed and shells beat my body. However, I firmly believe that I will rely on my own efforts to touch that enormous pearl, and I will rely on my own pursuit to feel the happiness after withstanding the blow. Should we praise those who are really successful? Please don't, because they only pay attention to the thorns and bumps on the road of knowledge.
Then please give them severe criticism, and they will definitely stop to find their own shortcomings and deficiencies, so as to gradually move towards perfection. With criticism, we still sing sincerely.
With criticism, we still hold our heads high. How's this? I hope I can help you. If you have any questions, you can ask me. If you think so, thank you for your adoption! I really appreciate it.
2. The essay on criticism is alive, and people are not sages.
However, it's great that you can correct your mistakes! Criticism is also a way to give people a chance to correct their mistakes. Life has been played, can you recognize it? The sages once said: life is like that hanging tile, and criticism is unintentional wind. If you are not careful, life may fall into the bottom of fate at any time.
With this knowledge, we may learn to treat others' criticism correctly. Sima Qian is an upright historical singer. He fairly sang the life stories of princes and princes in past dynasties with his "The Farewell of Historians", and criticized some of them more rationally.
However, the change of dynasties and the passage of time, even if Sima Qian's criticism was incisive and sincere, could not reverse the situation, let alone the confusion of Emperor Wu of Han Dynasty? Sima Qian's criticism came late, but he was not absent. Although the wind of rational criticism can't awaken the chaotic mind of the emperor and affect the current situation, it warns mankind in the next Millennium. Sima Qian has repeatedly remonstrated with Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty. Although he took a great risk, he was narrowly missed.
Sima Qian criticized the stupidity of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, humiliated him in prison and ventured to heaven. The power of criticism is so great that Sima Qian's hanging beam has been shattered all his life.
The confusion of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty can not only be criticized. As for life, we really can't just criticize the major events in our country.
Remember "that doesn't help"? Is there less criticism and education of Adou? Adou can only be accused of being "powerless" because the mountains and rivers worked so hard by his ancestors have not been destroyed. However, without criticism, Shu might have died faster.
Tong Dizhou, a famous mathematician in China, was lively and active in his childhood. He didn't study hard and failed math many times. He also wanted to give up his studies, but then "criticism" came. Even though this criticism came late, Tong Dizhou realized that he studied not only for himself, but also for the rise of China.
Later, there was a story about him: "In the middle of the night, under the light of the toilet, the child's heart and ambition were Tong Dizhou". The existence of criticism saved the pillars of the motherland; There is light in accepting criticism.
As the saying goes, those who achieve great things are informal. I said that people who don't even have the courage to accept criticism can't achieve great things.
Criticism is just the starlight embellishment of the long night. Criticism lies in education. We should accept it as early as possible, pursue hard work, wait and have a good time. Why are you afraid of the word "criticism"?
Please write a composition (more than 600 words) on the topic of "criticism" and "praise". In the face of praise, I have seen such a poem: an encouraging word and a sincere smile are enough to make a heavy heart suddenly lift gently. Everyone's life is covered with golden seeds, and when the storm strikes, these seeds will slowly wither.
At this critical moment, people put up a big green umbrella to shelter the seeds from the wind and rain and let them blossom and bear fruit in the mature season. This umbrella is: sincere encouragement and praise. When we strive for a goal, when we think we have done something right, sincere praise from teachers and parents is the first cup of green tea we drank under the scorching sun; When we confess what we have done wrong to others and make up our minds to correct it, when we help because of our conscience, we say, "If you dare to correct your mistakes, you are a good boy!" " Or "You are already great, I am grateful to you!" In this case, it is when we are traumatized and about to scar, a bottle of crystal clear and delicious moisturizing cream is needed.
In the face of praise, we should work harder and go forward bravely! In the face of praise, we should cherish today's labor income more and continue to brew the wine of life! How bright the sunshine is after the rain, and how happy we are that the seeds bear rich fruits! Immersed in the joy of being praised all day, we began to be proud: look how powerful I am! Wherever I go, I will take my success story with me. I am used to seeing hundreds of envious eyes and surprised faces. I don't think my life has returned to the past. I am still the same, but I am no longer dissatisfied with this quiet life without praise! Then, gradually, gradually ... when a thunderbolt crossed the sky, the seeds finally burst, and we failed ... crying can't solve the problem, find the root! It's too many compliments on weekdays that get to your head, and you can't get away all day. Since then, you have worked hard again, the seeds have been compounded, and you have succeeded again.
But this time, other people's praise did not affect you, but strengthened your confidence. Some people say that praise is the window of the soul and will guide you to the path of sunshine; Some people say that praise is another bottomless trap. Indulge in it and you'll never get out! In the face of praise, we should think: after praise, the seeds are calm again. Why don't we use this moment to fertilize the seeds and receive more sunshine to make ourselves more dazzling? References:
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Please write a composition on the topic of "criticism" or "praise" and express your criticism with a self-created topic.
Good medicine tastes bitter and is good for illness, but advice when most unpleasant is good for action. I think everyone understands this truth. At that time, Shang Zhouwang was headstrong, did not listen to correct opinions, and formed an opposition at the top, fighting with each other, imprisoned Ji Zi and lost the hearts of the people. I still remember a generation of pioneer model Lei Feng, who was criticized by the cook for eating rice crust and went out with a snort. What happens when I am criticized?
Throughout history, the word "criticism" has always been unpopular. It is like a sword that goes straight into the chest of others. Although it helps to remove cancer, not everyone can accept it calmly. For me, criticism is like a curse, which has always been with me.
Playing small, silly and naughty, I am like a radio, always receiving critical signals from all corners.
When I was a child, I always thought adults were a strange creature. How can they be so fond of pointing fingers? It is useless to throw a stone into the sea, but they are in such a hurry to "recite". When they criticize, I always bury my head silently, "shamefully" play with my fingers, posing as a dead virtue that I will correct my mistakes, but adults will never know, and I am secretly laughing and boring. ...
When I grow up, there are fewer naughty things, but I unconsciously have rebellious psychology. I used to hate criticism, the bad looks of my parents and teachers, and I was unconvinced. I thought: you want me to do this, but I want that. I love criticism, so I will let you criticize. Thus, an emotional tug-of-war began. After a long time of "fighting", I found that their faces became heavier and heavier, and they were less severe, replaced by constant sighs. At first, I was ecstatic and thought I had won the game. But in the end, my cold eyes and tired back scared me, and I was at a loss and depressed. I regret leaving tears, I know, they don't want to talk to me ... outside the window, the stars are dim.
It was another silent dinner, and my parents sat as cold as ice, and the originally lively streets only strolled with relish in the evening breeze. I am looking forward to a car passing by, which can break the dead silence. "Dad, today, the teacher sent the paper and asked the parents to sign it. I didn't do well this time and failed. " I swallowed and said bravely. "Oh." Dad always looks at the food, and if there is anything, he answers. "Mom, I broke my classmate's glasses today, and I want to pay for it." My mother caught the food, turned to look at me, turned to me with a straight face, and didn't say a word ... My heart thumped, like a stone falling into the abyss, my body was getting weaker and my nose was sour. All I remember is that tears can no longer hold the gate. I looked down and sobbed and said, "Dad ... Mom, can you criticize me again?" I ... I know I was wrong. I will be obedient in the future. No ... leave me alone, okay? "That night, I wiped my swollen eyes, and vaguely, I saw the stars laughing. ...
From then on, I dare not slack off when dealing with criticism. I take every criticism seriously with an open mind, correct it if there is criticism, and encourage it if there is no criticism. Gradually, I understand that behind every criticism, there is always goodwill. They all hope that I can make progress and become stronger.
When I am criticized, I will not choose to escape.
It is also beautiful to write an argumentative essay on the topic of "criticism".
Criticizing others is a kind of beauty.
"Don't look up to you just because you pay too much", I especially like Han Han's unconventional comments. Comments: The mascots of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games are really not so good. The criterion for evaluating a person is not his efforts and fame, but the quality of what he casts. So it is natural for Han Han to criticize Han Meilin in public.
This criticism supports fairness in the world. It is precisely because someone objectively points out mistakes that human beings will not lose their way and reach the coast of truth.
This criticism sounded the alarm. If Han Meilin is a wise man, he should wake up after seeing Han Han's comments, and then do further research to save his lost face.
This criticism also reminds the public that people who follow the crowd are ignorant. Only by bravely showing your true thoughts to the world can you be called the real me and this nation will have hope.
This criticism also safeguarded the dignity of China's 5,000-year-old Mandarin. The mascot of the 2008 Olympic Games is an important event related to the culture of China and the honor of the whole nation. If such a mascot is blindly welcomed by China people, and no one raises any objection, it is an insult to the national Putonghua.
Not only this kind of criticism is beautiful, but also many well-founded and reasonable criticisms, such as teachers treating students who have made mistakes and bosses treating subordinates who are not practical in their work. . . . . . . . Criticism is also beautiful.
6. Writing a composition with the theme of "criticism" or "praise" is in urgent need of "criticism". Comment on the composition topic of the bell test (60 points) (omitted). Review the topic, 1. Pay attention to the characteristics of the questions (materials plus topics). 2. Pay attention to the significance of research materials and tips. Three people who study painting will regard their favorite works as 65438 on the way to learn fine arts. Is the criticism from others sincere and well-intentioned? Why do customers say such things? ) Other people's criticisms are not all sincere and well-intentioned, which is directly related to the critic's own personality and motivation.
Customers may say this out of a kind reminder, or they may want to lower the price. After hearing this, one of them carefully weighed his own painting and finally sold it for 2000 yuan. After hard work, he became a famous painter.
This is Tintoretto. Why doesn't he listen to the client? Did he do the right thing? Why? This shows what to do in the face of criticism from others. ) check yourself against other people's criticism to find out whether other people's criticism is in line with your actual situation.
Those who do not conform to their own reality will never follow blindly. Hearing this, the other one just gently tore up the painting, then switched careers, studied sculpture and became a master.
He is the famous sculptor Yang Huizhi in the Tang Dynasty. Why should he listen to the client? Is he right to do this? Why? This shows what to do in the face of criticism from others. If you find that other people's criticism is well-intentioned and conforms to your own actual situation, you should accept it with an open mind and listen carefully.
The third one, thinking that his paintings might not really be worth the price, lowered his requirements and sold them in 500 yuan. So far, he is only a third-rate painter, living by selling paintings and living a wandering life.
He has always lived by our side. (This third person does exactly the same as the second person. Why is the effect completely different? He doesn't make a concrete analysis of other people's criticism, but listens blindly, believes blindly and follows others' criticism blindly.
What conclusions can be drawn from the practices of the above three people? ) We must have a correct attitude and a clear head when criticizing others. Based on facts, listen modestly when you should, and stick to yourself when you shouldn't. In short, if there is something, change it, and if there is nothing, encourage it. This is the power of criticism.
Criticism is sometimes the motivation to stimulate people's upward desire; Sometimes it is a turning point, leading to another peak of success; Sometimes it is poison, which can ruin a person's life if you are not careful. In fact, the most important thing is everyone's attitude towards criticism.
Is the key word in the prompt "strength" or "mentality"? What kind of mentality do we need in the face of criticism? The key word is "mentality". In the face of criticism, we should have such a mentality: sincere and open-minded, rational and confident.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "criticism": the topic is self-made, the style is optional (except poetry), and the content written must be within the topic. (To sum up, should you write a composition on this topic from the perspective of critics or from the perspective of the criticized? ) 3. What "meaning" can we "establish" by studying the meaning of materials and combining with reality? (1) If there is one, correct it; if not, encourage it.
Or (2) accept criticism from others. Or (3) correctly "rationally" treat other people's criticism with a good attitude.
Or something else, such as "learn to grow in the criticism of others" and so on. Among them, the best ideas are as follows: ① Because it most accurately reflects the theme and best reflects the correct mentality when facing criticism.
4. Pay attention to what style of article this question is most suitable for writing. The scoring standard 1 is basically accurate and can be higher than 36 points; If the topic is serious, it can only be lower than 36 points; Completely beside the point, it is even lower. 2. In addition to accidents, language, structure, materials and length are also important indicators for scoring.
Based on these five aspects, the composition is divided into first class (above 50 points), second class (45-49 points), third class (42-44 points), fourth class (36-4 1 point) and fifth class (below 36 points). 3. If the number of words differs by one line (20 words), deduct 1 minute, and deduct 5 points at most (5 lines); If the difference is more than 5 lines, count the second volume (relatively complete structure) or incomplete volume (incomplete structure), and score 36-40 points if the intention in the second volume is more accurate; Whether the intention is accurate or not, the remaining amount is below 36 points.
4. If the topic is wrongly selected or misspelled, 1 point will be deducted; Deduct 2 points if there is no title. 5, poor writing, deduct 1-3 points as appropriate.
The main problem is 1. In the examination of questions: deviating from the theme, talking about "the art of criticism", "mentality determines success or failure" and "people's confidence"; Misunderstanding the concept, so that "criticism" is replaced by "slander", "blow", "frustration", "adversity" and "trial"; Play "edge ball" or "random door-to-door", such as "the power of criticism is enormous, which can make people succeed or fail", and then talk about "the success or failure of life"; Smuggling with and adding content, such as writing "criticism and life", "criticism and self-criticism" and "criticism and tolerance"; The concept is vague and lacks the necessary points; We can't look at the problem dialectically, so that we hold a one-sided and absolute view; Limited by the materials, the whole article is practical, from the first person to the third person, the article is finished. 2. Materials: There is nothing to say, and there is no basis; The material is inconsistent with the main idea; Copy the material in the question intact in the text; Too much or too little material; The material is fake.
3. Writing: there is no clear central sentence; No penalty points, penalty points; Argumentative writing does not rely on logical reasoning to expand the level, but on describing and piling up examples to piece together the article; Argumentative essays are more narrative essays and less argumentative essays; Write some irrelevant metaphors and parallelism at the beginning or end; And take Li Bai, Tao Yuanming, Su Dongpo and other unrelated ancients to make a fuss. Inscription 100 words, postscript 100 words, sparse in the middle; Fragmented paragraphs (such as a sentence) and erratic writing.
4. Structure: write wherever you think, without structure and rules; Piece together, pile up, no logic, scattered articles; The argumentative essay is incomplete in structure and lacks the "how to do" part (this topic should be there). In short, chaos, dispersion and disability.
5. Language: lack of literary talent, even a lot of typos. 6. There are some serious injuries, such as irrelevant title, spelling mistakes, insufficient words and poor writing.
A few reminders 1, when writing a composition with materials and topics, it is insurance.