Read the following text and write as required.

People often say that the eyes are the windows to the soul. The eyes are the light of the soul in this window. Different minds, hearts, emotions, knowledge and accomplishments ... will radiate different eyes. On the contrary, different eyes will also reflect different minds, hearts, emotions, knowledge and accomplishments ... At the same time, they will give people different feelings and have different influences on themselves and others.

Please write an argumentative essay or narrative of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Vision". (Note: The word "eyes" has multiple meanings. When writing, please always keep your chosen meaning and don't wander between several meanings. )

Writing instruction

1. The title "Eye" has the following three levels of interpretation:

The first level is the people, things, sights and things seen in the eyes. A flower and a world, a leaf and a Buddha, a person with empty eyes will definitely not live a vigorous life; A smart and alert person must have bright and lively eyes. People with different identities, different ages, different personalities, different mentalities and different circumstances will inevitably have different perspectives. Even if they see the same thing, they will have different feelings and get different life insights. ...

The second level is the feelings conveyed in "eyes": disappointment, hope, helplessness, firmness, naughty, kindness, indifference, indifference, concern, gesture, anger, liveliness, affection, desolation, despair and compassion ... Each kind of eyes can contain an experience, a story, an emotion and reflect different hearts.

The third level is the meaning carried by the "vision". For example, caring and kind eyes can make people in trouble feel the warmth like the warm sun in March; Full of expectation and inspiring eyes, brave and inspiring; Compassion can reflect some people's inner spiritual qualities such as "worrying about the country and the people" and caring about people's livelihood. ...

2. The direction of "eyes" also presents the following three dimensions: one is to observe the outside world by oneself, the other is to observe the outside world by oneself, and the third is to communicate with the outside world in two directions. Different directions reflect the observer's different views on the world, human feelings and social Vientiane.

In short, in order to write the title "Vision" well, we not only need to have a pair of "eyes" that can shine; And you need a "heart of wisdom" that can shine the world.

Celebrity classic

Muguang

Li Hanrong

It is said that eyes have mass and weight, as well as humidity and temperature. There is often a burning, sharp, humid, warm and oppressive feeling when eyes fall on your body or heart. We feel that our lives are neither vigorous nor respected, but we have accumulated some things. What have you accumulated? Emotion? Stories? Ideas? Scar? Memory? These are all, but not all. In my opinion, what we have accumulated is mainly some vision.

When we recall a certain emotion, the sieve of memory picks up a ray of vision in the deep sea of consciousness, so we remember a pair of eyes behind our eyes, whether wet or warm.

When we recall some past events, we may not be able to search for specific scenes and plots, and the events have faded into clouds. However, those eyes hanging over the event, like lightning, have taken root and sprouted in the past night.

When we remember an idea, we always remember a certain look in an instant, which is thoughtful, anxious, epiphany, ecstasy and clarity. This idea is made up of such eyes.

The quality of life is not only the quality of the body, but also the quality of the eyes stored inside the body.

In a saint's body, there must be high-quality eyes, such as water, snow, rainbow, star, moon, drizzle, cotton, night light, winter fire, charming green hills, grass leaves after rain, the vast gaze of the Tianhe River in the middle of the night, the deep meditation and compassion of the sea in the moonlight, and the lightning that penetrates and humbly dissolves in the long night ... Tolstoy, everyone's eyes, eyes in his heart. The sage walked through the jungle of eyes and waded through the river of biological tears and blood. Their eyes saw the news in the depths of the sea of suffering and the painful back of the wilderness of existence. At the same time, their thoughts and loving eyes from people's hearts also came to this world.

So, I often ask myself:

What kind of eyes should be stored in the body? Are those good eyes you are eager to collect dead or long? Through the increasingly dilapidated forest, how do you find the dim eyes of seeds? After watching it for a long time, do you plant it and pray to see the tearful bud in the morning after the rain to express your timid hope?

What kind of eyes should I look at life, history and land covered with graves, meteorites and grass? What kind of eyes should I look at the thin streams and springs? Look, that little wormwood flower is about to bloom, as if a little rough sound would make it go out. How should I look at its only few minutes of childhood with gentle eyes? Homeless swallows timidly landed on my balcony, timidly testing my mind. What kind of eyes should I use to greet it? What kind of eyes should I use to cast on those sacred stars that have been staring at me at the highest place in the dark? What kind of eyes should I use to cast on the magnificent sunset that was bleeding heavily that day and died with the flame of love every day?

Yes, I collect history, nature, life and people's eyes. At the same time, my eyes will be collected, collected by a tree, collected by a flower, collected by a river, collected by a lamp, collected by a star in the middle of the night, collected by a soul near or far away.

In this way, our eyes have changed the light in the daytime and the quality at night, and even changed the quality of the universe more or less. ...

Student masterpiece? Argumentative writing

sight

Peng Ting, Hunan Liuyang No.6 Middle School.

Eyes are the window of the soul, eyes are the light of the soul, and they are the most beautiful scenery radiated from this window.

In the ever-changing tide of the times, in the bizarre real life, no matter how strong a person is, there are times when he is fragile; No matter how brave a person is, sometimes he will be timid. At that moment, we need a kind of strength to help us dispel the haze of life, lead us out of the predicament and let life blossom and bear fruit again. Then, we saw a kind of eyes, a kind of warm eyes reflected from the depths of our hearts!

From the eyes of the loving mother who sewed clothes carefully for the wanderer in the dim candlelight, from the silent gaze of "holding hands to see tears" and from the affectionate concern of the friend who advised you to have a glass of wine. Our confused heart then has a kind of supporting strength, feeling the hope and sudden strength! So, we see:

It is mother's earnest eyes that support Shi Tiesheng's immortal hope. Even if he shivers in the "cold winter" of life, his heart will always be warm because of that look; Even if he fell in the difficult trek, he got up and chose the front because of that look. His mother's eyes have always been a crutch in his life, supporting his unyielding belief and his great reputation in Chinese and foreign literary circles.

It was his wife's affectionate eyes that supported Wei Desheng's heroism. In the depression of pain, he wanted to vent more than once, because his eyes finally swallowed weakness and stood up masculine; Under the torture of failure, he also wanted to shake again and again, because of that vision, he finally gave up his inferiority complex, but still held up his dignity. His wife's eyes have always been the cornerstone of his support, supporting him to shoot Cape No.7, which set the highest box office record in the history of Chinese movies in Taiwan Province Province, and supported his life's backbone and height.

It is Xu Sanduo's silent eyes that support the confidence of never giving up. Even if you are alienated because of misunderstanding, because of that look, you will always listen to each other's true heart sound in honest meeting; Even if you become strange because you have been apart for too long, because of that look, the tacit understanding of true feelings can always penetrate the barrier of time and space. The eyes of friends have always been the power to support him out of trouble, supporting his indomitable soul and perseverance.

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Some people say that Vision is a thick book, which embodies practical wisdom and philosophy. It is also said that the eye is a deep ancient well, and what is precipitated is endless ancient rhyme and high wind; At this moment, the eyes are a curved boat, carrying eternal love and true feelings! The affection, love and friendship passed down by warm eyes will warm you and me, and will become the wealth of our life, supporting us to walk through the torrent of life. ...

So, my friend, please don't be stingy with your warm eyes, because it is a supporting force and the most affectionate scenery!

Comments:

Content: Eye-to-eye communication is actually heart-to-heart communication, and the biggest highlight of this article is "conveying (heart) feelings with eyes (light)". The author skillfully uses the method of adding factors to clarify the viewpoint that "eyes are a kind of supporting force" from a close-up point of view, which accords with the meaning of the topic and has a prominent center.

Statement: The author starts with the difficulties in real life and naturally leads to the arguments of the article. Then, by using the parallel argument structure, three examples, Shi Tiesheng, Wei Desheng and Cai Cheng, are cited for analysis and demonstration, and finally a conclusion is drawn, taking into account the topic and the previous article, and the structure is smooth and rigorous.

Development level: the author can profoundly reveal the internal causal relationship of things through phenomena, and his views are enlightening. In addition, the author adopts the sentence pattern of combining long and short, combining whole with dispersed phase, which makes the writing language smooth, scattered and relaxed; A large number of rhetorical devices such as metaphor, parallelism, antithesis and quotation are used to make the language of the article meaningful, showing rich ideological and cultural connotations and showing the author's profound cultural accumulation.

According to the scoring rules, the score is as follows: content 18+ expression 17+ development 19 = 54.

Student masterpiece? narrate

sight

Chen Xianmai, No.6 Middle School in Liuyang City, Hunan Province

Spring breeze and rain warm my heart/I care for my life and pay silently/How warm your eyes are/Teach me to look forward/Tell me not to give up when I fall/Can't explain how I can repay my kindness/Love is infinite.

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Day, gloomy, dark clouds; The biting cold wind is as tight as a burst, whistling in the face; Snowflakes all over the sky, like cotton wool torn at will, are endless. I shrink my neck, rub my numb hands with cold, carry a heavy schoolbag, and drag my stiff and heavy legs, trudging through the first heavy snow of 20 1 1.

In a blink of an eye, more than half of senior three has passed, but my academic performance has not improved, especially in the final senior high school entrance examination. I tried my best to reverse the previous decline, but I fell into a deeper quagmire. In this way, the flame of dreams gradually extinguished, and my heart slowly fell to the bottom, such as these nine winters, biting cold.

Near, near, the outline of the village in the snowstorm gradually became clear in my sight. In this stormy winter night, the big camphor tree at the head of the village is still standing ... It's a long way home, and home has finally arrived. I feel an uncontrollable excitement in my heart, and I can't help but speed up my steps ... Near, near, there is a thin figure looking forward under the tree ... Could it be that ... I wiped it?

It was my mother. The red scarf and clothes on her head have been covered with messy snowflakes. She stamped her feet under the tree, rubbed her hands with her mouth from time to time, looked up at the front from time to time, and the silver hair at her temples danced wildly in the wind.

"Mom ..." I choked back my tears and squeezed the word out of my dry throat. When I saw it was me, my mother's stiff eyes suddenly lit up, full of endless warmth, and then quickly came to me. I suddenly felt the despair of failing in the senior high school entrance examination, the hardships of trudging in the wind and rain, all the hunger and cold were dissolved in my mother's warm eyes, and I also felt an unspeakable guilt and self-blame in my heart.

Because of this nasty heavy snow, the school suddenly put off its winter vacation early. Without the key, I'm afraid my mother will go out on business. When I left, I made a special phone call to ask her to wait for me at home, but this call made my mother wait in the snow for two hours.

Facing my mother's warm eyes, I suddenly found how familiar these eyes are: when I was a child, these eyes, like shining iron plows, cut through the land of my heart and gently spread the seeds of love; When I was young and frivolous, this look, like a clear spring, moistened my anxious and impetuous mind and slowly injected my indifferent and calm temperament; In the bleak pain, this look, like a magical medicine, dispelled the rampant diseases in my body and quietly injected optimism and perseverance; In pessimism and disappointment, this look, like a pair of magical hands, soothes my helpless nerves and gently conveys infinite love and strength. ...

Spring breeze and rain have warmed my heart, and I have been caring for it all my life without saying anything. It was your warm eyes that taught me to look forward firmly and told me not to give up when I fell. I can't explain how to repay my kindness Love is infinite ... I don't know where Beyond's "I really love you" came from. Facing my mother's warm eyes, I struggled to shake off the snow, held my head high again and walked into the snow with my mother.

Because I know that no matter how far I go, I can't leave my mother's caring eyes; No matter how thick the ice in my heart is, my mother's eyes can always melt slowly.

Comments:

Content: The author vividly describes the details of the mother's hope for her children to go home in the snow and explores the deep meaning in her eyes-warmth, love, spirit, strength and so on.

Expression: The author describes what he sees, hears, thinks and feels as "I" in the first person, which makes readers feel as if they are there, looking at someone and feeling their feelings. At the same time, write an inscription skillfully to reveal the connotation of the work, which has rich implications and lasting affection. In addition, it adopts the method of "wanting to rise first and restraining", paving the way for gaining momentum, creating a lot of suspense and vividly interpreting the deep meaning of eyes.

Development level: the accurate metaphor, orderly parallelism, clever quotation and delicate and vivid detail description in the text all show the author's writing spirituality to the fullest. At the same time, the combination of long and short sentences and patchwork sentence patterns make the language of the article fluent and relaxed, showing the beauty of Chinese phonology.

According to the scoring rules, the score is as follows: content 19+ expression 19+ development 19 = 57.

Student masterpiece? novel

sight

anonymous

It was a dark corner with no sunshine; It was a forgotten corner, with no eyes to stay. Only loneliness and depression.

The classroom is on the ground floor of the teaching building, and there will be sunshine only in the morning and evening. But the corner of the back door of the classroom seems to be blocked, and there is no sunshine forever. There is a very clean table there. If no one is lying on it, you will never think that this table has been used.

This man is always dressed in black, and his messy hair covers his eyes. No one really saw his face. Every day, his compulsory course is sleeping. I don't know when he started, and no one cares about him anymore. He seems to be used to this kind of life.

The days passed silently, and the laughter and laughter of the students will never reach that corner.

One day, the teacher bought a wall clock, which was very beautiful. While he was still sleeping, the students' eyes immediately focused on the wall clock.

Since the advent of this wall clock, people have turned to appreciate its streamlined shape from time to time.

Once, when the bell was about to ring, he woke up. When he looked up, he happened to meet a bunch of warm eyes, and he bowed his head shyly. After several classes in a row, he met this kind of look, and he began to feel strange, but he was happier.

The next day, he appeared in the corner on time. Different from usual, his desk is no longer empty, but has a pen and a book. In the following days, he still saw the meaningful eyes in every class, and the things on his desk were increasing.

Although it is a corner where the sun shines, there is still a person who keeps taking notes. He is no longer alone, but carrying a schoolbag. This change has also attracted the attention of teachers, who occasionally look at him during lectures.

It's the exam again, and another student in the class was severely reprimanded by the teacher-because he took the last place, the teacher was even more surprised at his progress. The whole class "brushed" their heads and looked at that corner together. He was dressed in white in that corner and his face was red.

In his diary that day, he wrote: Those eyes made me feel warm and confident. I shouldn't give up on myself. I must work hard until one day, I can accept that gaze. ...

In fact, the eyes are not on him, but on the wall clock above him.

Perhaps, just a bunch of casual eyes can make a person change dramatically.

Comments:

Content: The article narrates the experience that a bunch of eyes make a person change dramatically, and naturally expounds the profound truth that "maybe, just a bunch of casual eyes can make a person change dramatically", with a clear theme.

Expression: The beauty of this article is condensed in a word "Zhuan". The first "turn" is from "nothing" (eyes) to "something" (eyes). This "turn" has contributed to his "five changes"-from clean things on the table to added things, from single clothes to schoolbags on his back, from black clothes to white clothes, from sleeping to taking notes in compulsory courses, from the bottom of his grades to progress, which vividly shows the "warmth and confidence" brought by his "eyes". The second turn is from "yes" (meaning) to "no" (meaning). This "turn" not only brought the plot to Europe? The situation at the end of Henry's novel makes the theme of the article reach a steep height-a casual look can make a person change dramatically; If it is a casual look, it is more enough to affect people's life. It can be described as ingenious!

Development level: The author has a keen insight into the essence through phenomena and arouses people's vigilance. At the same time, the characterization is exquisite and vivid, and the layout is exquisite and rigorous.

According to the scoring rules, the score is as follows: content 19+ expression 20+ development 19 = 58.