22. Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. (60 points)

A piece of news published by Chutian Metropolis Daily in Weibo has aroused social concern. Recently, in Chongqing, some banks reported that some people forged certificates of deposit to withdraw money. When the police arrived, they learned that a young man who was engaged in graphic design in other places had worked hard for a year before saving 300 yuan money. With the Chinese New Year coming, he was ashamed to meet his parents. He used his specialty to convert a 300 yuan certificate of deposit PS into 30,000 yuan, but his mother took it directly to withdraw money, so he was betrayed.

In Weibo's comments, some netizens said, "Mom is going to cheat. As long as you have the heart, no money is enough. "

Some netizens also said, "If you follow the script, you should not withdraw money."

Some netizens commented that this is a "white lie".

How to treat the young man's behavior of modifying the deposit certificate? Write an article to illustrate your point of view.

It is required to synthesize the content and significance of the material, choose a good angle, determine the concept, clarify the style, and draw up a title by yourself without plagiarism.

Material analysis

This material can have different thoughts from the perspective of different netizens, and it can also combine several thoughts to have new thoughts. From the mother's point of view, netizens believe that filial piety does not necessarily lie in specific content, but in inner sincerity. False certificates of deposit are a kind of insincere filial piety. Netizen 2 believes that according to common sense, parents should save money for their children, and it is an accident for this mother to withdraw money. Netizen three thinks from his son's point of view that he is not easy. He made fake certificates of deposit to reassure his mother. Even if it is fake, he really wants to be good to his parents. Of course, these three statements are not necessarily correct, nor are they definitive. Students can think comprehensively and even put forward new ideas on this basis. But it is particularly noteworthy that no matter what opinions you choose or put forward, one thing is certain: my son's PS certificate of deposit is wrong. Compassionate, understandable, but can not be considered right, because it is illegal.

Fan Wenyi

Don't let illegal travel stain filial piety.

A young man bought a deposit slip for fear of losing face to his parents, and was exposed because his unwitting mother took the deposit slip to withdraw money. This matter has caused controversy. In my opinion, although the young man's filial piety is understandable, it is also true that he violated relevant laws and regulations, and such behavior also defiled such a filial piety of the young man.

Summarize the materials, put on an attitude and put forward an opinion.

As the year is approaching, I am understandably worried about losing face to see my parents because of my meager savings. However, it is irrational to tamper with 300 yuan's certificate of deposit to 30,000 yuan through ps. Maybe that guy didn't expect that his mother would take this deposit slip to withdraw money, not to mention such serious consequences; But the young man's ps certificate of deposit is a fact and illegal. No matter for what purpose, you can't cross the bottom line of laws and regulations.

From the young people's point of view, the bottom line of the law is that it can't cross three floors, and the reason is simpler. )

To say the least, if the young man's mother didn't take this deposit slip to withdraw money, would the young man feel at ease? Do young people feel more guilty when they look at their old mother in the dark and smile for their "hard work"? Does the young man feel more guilty when his mother praises his son in front of relatives and friends? Think about it from another angle: Why are parents happy? It is because my son cares about them, and it is a relief for my son to stand on his own feet. When all this is pinned on utopia, it is just a spiritual masturbation like Ah Q.

From the two-way point of view of the son and the mother, the young man's behavior only gave the mother an unreasonable spiritual comfort.

In fact, even if the young man goes back with a deposit slip and only gets 300 yuan, his parents will certainly not blame him. Home is a place where children can be accommodated. I believe that parents who have experienced wind and frost can understand his difficulties. Besides, I want to be a parent, and I don't want to be cheated by my children. If you are really filial and really want to make your parents happy, you might as well do more things for them and spend more time with them, instead of deceiving them with such irrational or even illegal acts as tampering with certificates of deposit.

Further extend the reasons for backtracking, and explain that you shouldn't cheat your parents in this way in a hypothetical way.

However, disaster will come after all, and young people will pay for their actions. And the disaster he caused may also hurt others. Parents will also be affected and feel sad. Will the young man regret it? This will not only leave a stain on his life track, but also defile his filial piety with good thoughts.

Due to the ending of the story, this way hurts feelings and even defiles kindness and filial piety.

In today's noisy society, there are still many people who are as ignorant of the law as boys. The reason may be sympathetic, but it is by no means an excuse for breaking the law and discipline. This kind of behavior will not only harm others and yourself, disturb social order, but also despise the law. If everyone breaks the law with so-called goodwill and filial piety, then society will be in chaos!

When the social order is stable and this practice is rejected, we should put the law before filial piety. The richness of the argument seems to be insufficient)

Therefore, I can only say that this is desirable and this trip is not possible. Don't let illegal travel stain filial piety!

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Simulation score: 49 points

General comment: the conjunctions in the paragraphs are interlocking, the structure of the article is complete, the reasoning cycle is closely related to the object, and it can show hierarchy. However, defining this behavior as "filial piety" is not strict enough, and expanding it to the point of stopping it is suspected of empty talk.

Fan wener

Sympathize with his heart and grieve his behavior.

A young man got a certificate of deposit because he was ashamed to meet his parents. There are different opinions about this. In my opinion, his heart is pitiful and his behavior is pathetic.

What is "compassion"?

We might as well talk about words. "Compassionate" people, next to their own hearts, open a door of compassion and humanity; Those who "have a heart" are ashamed to see their parents. From this perspective, "pity for his heart" is a pity for him to be ashamed to meet his parents. Why is he ashamed to meet his parents? A big boy, who saved only 300 yuan a year ago, is really ashamed to meet his elders in Jiangdong, let alone his parents who have been waiting for him at home for a year. From the perspective of "face", the young man's approach deserves sympathy.

What is "sad behavior"?

First of all, this is an act of deceiving parents; When my mother happily went to the bank to withdraw money, did she treat the eyes of the bank clerk as a thief? Have you ever thought about going to court with the police? The joy of the sky instantly turned into a feeling of shame, how deeply it hurt! Secondly, it is against laws and regulations; The young man may not have thought that his PS certificate of deposit behavior, even if it is not exposed, is a violation of laws and regulations; Once exposed, it may face sanctions from laws and regulations. Once again, I want to "return to China" but I don't; False is false after all, even if parents don't withdraw money, it is an indisputable fact that they are short of money; During the Spring Festival, people come and go, and there are very few "Grandpa Mao". Where did you get your brocade? If something goes wrong, it will become a laughing stock. Aren't you sad?

Of course, the young man also has a deep cultural psychology when he sees his parents. Xiang Yu said, "Returning home without a full load is like walking at night. Who knows? " Since ancient times, the concept of returning home in rags has been deeply imprinted in our blood.

Under the psychology of returning home with clothes, we see all kinds of "PS", such as renting a boyfriend and girlfriend to cope with parents, renting a car to go home and saying that it is your own to cope with seven aunts and eight aunts, and spending a lot of money to go home to show that you are doing well ... All this is understandable; However, this kind of behavior has a bottom line: untouchable laws and regulations. Unfortunately, this young man broke the law. So from the psychological level, we show pity for it, but from the behavioral level, we think it is very sad.

So, apart from "sympathy" and "sadness", what else can we see from this young man?

If the young man's income is ok, but he is a "moonlight family", he must learn to plan; If there is almost no income because the technology is not up to standard, then he should strengthen technical research in order to work hard in the coming year; If the unit is jealous of talents and leaves them idle, it is necessary to find a way to jump ship and develop in a suitable place ... In any case, he should not go to the PS deposit certificate because it is illegal.

Thanks to that young man, he gave me a vivid and profound lesson, which made me deeply understand that no matter what kind of wish I have, even if the original intention is good, it can't be realized beyond the legal bottom line!

Analyze the thinking of the article:

It's been more than a year since I met Mr. Li Jialiang by chance in Fujian school group, and I almost have the opportunity to read every article in his next Hydrology. I saw his article "Hydrology under Quality Inspection in Fuzhou" last night, and I liked it very much. The title is concise and eye-catching and very appropriate.

The first paragraph of the article briefly summarizes the materials, and then clearly shows the point of view: pity its heart and cherish its actions. Simple language, accurate thinking and clear views! This kind of beginning conforms to the standard, has strong maneuverability and is convenient for the majority of candidates to imitate!

Starting from the second paragraph, the article discusses the viewpoints of "compassion" and "mourning for his behavior" respectively, and the definition and analysis of the concept can be described as appropriate and original. In the process of analysis and reasoning, the author did not suddenly stand on the moral high ground to criticize the absurdity and illegal behavior of the young man, that is, to "pity his heart" first and pity his filial piety. On this basis, the author further "angered his indisputable, sad his misfortune", that is, "sad his behavior." The whole reasoning process can be described as nuanced and reasonable!

Then, the author didn't just stay in the shallow analysis of this forged deposit slip, but thought about the reason why the young man did it from the perspective of cultural psychology: returning home with clothes and worshipping his ancestors. As a result, in order to live up to the ardent expectations of his parents, and to hold his head in front of the elders in Jiangdong, the face-saving psychology drove the young man to try his own methods, which eventually chilled his parents and hurt himself. It's really sad and lamentable, causing readers' emotional singing and deep thinking!

On this basis, the author extends this kind of behavior to all kinds of ps behaviors in today's society, so that we can understand the helplessness and sadness behind this kind of behavior, cite similar examples and extend them appropriately, without drawing a red line for this kind of behavior, and point out that although the young man's behavior is poor, it is not worth emulating, but even more illegal, which has universal educational thinking significance!

Next, the author also analyzes the plight of young people and puts forward reasonable suggestions: if young people's income is ok, but they are "moonlight family", they must learn to plan; Technology is not enough, and there is almost no income. This kind of suggestion does not feel condescending, conforms to the conjecture of social life and is easily accepted by others! At the end of the article, the author begins with a deep and serious tone, reiterating his own views, which is thought-provoking!

Danzel Yu, the leader of Fujian composition marking group, said: Argumentative writing pays attention to the promotion at different levels, and the driving force of the promotion lies in constantly asking questions. Demonstration is an interlocking work, the previous step serves the second step, and so on. This article is like this, from "sympathy for his heart" to "sadness for his behavior" to "psychological analysis of national culture" to this kind of phenomenon in society, until we jump out of this kind of phenomenon and analyze the material hero from another level of the problem. Link by link, the train of thought presents the process of advancement, the cultural psychological analysis deepens the argument, and the situation analysis is reasonable.