(10 National Volume 1)
2 1. Read the pictures below and write an article of at least 800 words as required. (60 points) It is required to choose the right angle, clear thinking, choose your own style and make your own title; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.
Composition analysis: Writing cartoons is nothing new. The 2007 national examination paper 1 was that many students cried in surprise at that time, which was too difficult. In fact, it's easy to turn comics into written narratives. It is difficult because there is an extra program to read the theme of comics and then determine the theme and intention of the composition. Because of the mistakes in Chinese teaching, our students find it difficult to read cartoons.
Cartoon is a kind of painting form that reflects the author's views on a phenomenon or event in society with deformation or distortion and lines. It is not only used for satire and flogging, but also for praise and praise. When reading comics, we should grasp the key points of comics, combine the corresponding background knowledge and find out the author's intention, then we can judge the theme and start writing.
The cartoon pictures in the test questions are simple and the theme is clear. Four cats. There are four plates of fish on the table in front of them. Four cats are different. The first hair on the left is touching his stomach with both hands, and his face is satisfied. The second cat stared at the third cat, with one hand touching her mouth and her face full of surprise. The third cat pointed at the fourth cat with one hand, opened its mouth and stared at the words on it. The content of the sentence is "What age is it, and there are still fish to eat?" This is the whole picture.
In the cartoon, the words of the third cat are very easy to arouse people's association. In fact, it can be speculated that living conditions are good now. Cats eating fish is nothing new. The key is what happened between the third cat and the fourth cat, which makes us curious. It is normal for cats to catch mice. As a result, because there are fish to eat, it has become the laughing stock of others. So we will continue to associate and explore the life society, and we will find that the moral of this cartoon is so high and the living standard is so high. What are our duties? The duty of police is to maintain social order, the duty of soldiers is to protect people's lives and property safety and the integrity and dignity of national territorial sovereignty, the duty of teachers is to teach their students wholeheartedly, and the duty of students is to do their own study well. If you do your duty and are laughed at by others, it is a bit abnormal, but now people often say, "What time is it?" Candidates must have heard of it in social life, so why is this happening? Just because the living standard has improved, can you give up your duties as a human being by eating fish? At this point, the examinee's question is not out? Let's start writing here!
(10 National Volume II)
2 1. Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. (60 points)
On this year's World Book Day, a discussion about "shallow reading" was launched on the Internet.
A: What is shallow reading?
B: It is the pursuit of simple, relaxed, practical and interesting reading. Shallow reading is very fashionable.
C: Now is the era of reading pictures. People like visual impact and enjoyment.
D: Light reading is like eating fast food. Delicious and nutritious, you can't accumulate any knowledge.
B: The social competition is fierce, the pace of life is so fast, and everyone is under such great pressure. I want to read deeply and enjoy it slowly, okay?
C: Everyone has his own reading preference. With the popularity of shallow reading, reading is more personalized and diversified, which is quite good.
Ding: I miss the old days-leaning in the corner of the bookstore, reading alone, not knowing that it was dark.
A: Did we lose something in shallow reading?
Ask for the right angle, clear thinking, choose your own style and draw up your own title; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.
(Beijing Volume 10)
20. Composition (60 points)
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Looking at the stars in a down-to-earth way". Style is not limited, except poetry.
(10 Shanghai Autumn Roll)
27. According to the following materials, choose an angle, do your own topic and write an article of not less than 800 words (don't write poetry).
Danes take a ruler with them when they go fishing. When they catch fish, they often measure them with a ruler and put small fish that are not big enough back into the river. They said, "Isn't it better to let the little fish grow up?" More than two thousand years ago, Mencius in our country once said, "If you don't count, you can't eat fish and turtles." It means, don't catch small fish in the pond with a fine net, so there will be more fish.
In fact, truth also runs through many aspects of our real life.
(Yue Juan 10)
24. Read the following text and write as required. (60 points)
You and I are neighbors and depend on each other. "You" can be tangible or intangible; "Neighborhood" is inevitable, but you can choose.
Please write an article with its own style, no less than 800 words, on the topic of "being your neighbor" according to your own life experience and feelings.
20 10 Guangdong college entrance examination composition is freshly released.
Neighborhood with you: you and I are neighbors and interdependent. You can be tangible or intangible. Neighbors can't avoid it, but they can choose. Please contact your own life experience and feelings, and write an article on the topic of "Being your neighbor". Not less than 800 words.
My neighbor is a dream.
That's a kind of artistic conception I've been looking for, and I suddenly saw that figure in the dim light. It seems that Li Bai, who was drunk, narrowed his sleepy eyes and shouted, "Let me, three hundred bowls, have a big drink!" " With great pride; It is also a graceful and affectionate Yang Yuhuan like Bai Letian's "If she just turns to smile, there are hundreds of spells cast, and the harem powder is bloodless"; Or Yi Anbei's helplessness of "just hanging on the eyebrows".
Occasionally, I will sit in the study and hold a word to fill my nose with the fragrance of jasmine. Half-closed eyes, as if completely intoxicated. In that dream, there are Nalan Rong Ruo's sentimental feelings for his wife in Drinking Water Ci and Li Qingzhao's sadness in Shuyu Ci. Once upon a time, I also saw a trace of bitterness and tears in Cao Xueqin's ridiculous words. I can't help dreaming. There are ups and downs in my dreams. Experiencing life is like Conan's dream. Look at those poets, laughing and crying, frowning and forgetting. In the end, only these lines of ink spread. Until our hearts.
I dreamed that Li Bai was splashing water in his dream. In the pavilions surrounded by peonies, he ordered Lux to take off his shoes and uncle Prince to grind ink, but he wrote: "Clouds want clothes and flowers, and spring breeze blows the threshold to show China"; In the spring breeze caressed by wicker, he burst into tears and was speechless, lamenting that "Peach Blossom Pond is deep in thousands of feet and not as good as Wang Lun"; Under the bright moon, he held up his cup and felt sorry for the shadow, so he had to mourn "until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and let us become three people". I just love his generosity, that white dress, or the atmosphere or elegance; That bottle of sake was also vividly written by the phrase "lanling wine tulip, jade bowl amber light". In my dream, I saw through his dream of the world of mortals, but it was just a sentence, "Oh, how can I bow and scrape to those high-ranking officials whose sincere faces will never be seen?" But my heart was full of desolation after being wild.
In my dream, I dreamed that Su Dongpo frowned slightly. When I first came to Huangzhou as a magistrate, the desolation everywhere was not as sad as my heart. It's a big dream in the world, how cold is life? Desolate; It was the Wutai poetry case committed by Dongpo when he was proud. In fact, what is wrong is not the absurdity of the sentence "The bright moon sings yellow dogs lie in the heart of flowers", but the helplessness of the sentence "I refuse to live when I pick up all the cold branches, and the lonely sandbar is cold"; Perhaps, that smile was for his "lady-like" understanding, and the phrase "ten years of life and death are endless, without thinking, never forgetting" has exhausted my sadness. What I see is a person with the temperament of "never betraying feelings", so he is not a person who can't leave for a hundred years. He is a talented person. Finally, he breathed a sigh of relief. Otherwise, how could he sing "Looking back at the bleak place, going home, rain or shine"? He was a thorn bird all his life, and finally he got all the beauty with the greatest pain.
I also dreamed that the smile of Yi 'an layman was the loss of her "awakening a pool of gulls and herons" and a pile of yellow flowers on the ground. Who can pick it now? "Helpless and desolate; I also dreamed of the sigh of Li Houzhu, the ancient emperor, the fragrance of "I can't be a slave, so I can be merciful", or the loneliness that "the jade carving should still be there, but Zhu Yan has changed".
In my dream, I realized that life is short, watching them "drink today and get drunk tomorrow", watching them "women are happy", watching them know themselves and watching them. ...
My neighbor is a dream.
Almost smiling.
A few golden rays of sunshine sprinkled on the dusty oil painting. Everywhere I look, she is smiling at me-Mona Lisa's smile fascinates me. This afternoon, I was thoughtful.
( 1)
It is said that the city is good, but where is the city good?
Going home from work at two o'clock and one line is unremarkable; Surrounded by reinforced concrete all day, people are crowded at rush hour.
It's raining heavily today, and there are fewer pedestrians on the road than usual. There was no traffic jam, so I got home early.
When I went upstairs, I hummed a cheerful song. I haven't been so happy for a long time.
At the corner of the stairs, I accidentally bumped into a lady carrying a big bag and dropped everything.
I think there must be one less scolding, because city people are always so unkind.
I quickly said I'm sorry, picked up the things that fell to the ground and showed an apologetic and sincere smile. I didn't expect her to tell me with a smile that I like the song you just hummed, too.
We smiled at each other and walked carefully, humming at the same time.
(2)
Finally, I look forward to Sunday, cleaning up my house and making my home look brand-new.
Sitting alone on the sofa in a daze, this city has no relatives or friends.
"Du-"The phone rang, and my friend affectionately called my nickname and said to come and see me later.
I took out all the delicious food at home, and then stood at the window and looked around. I'm glad to have friends visiting me.
When friends came, we chatted in our hometown dialect, from village east to village west, and we all burst into tears when we remembered the interesting things when we were children. She casually asked, "What are you doing to the door?"
"This is ... yes, it's on and off." A burst of laughter.
From then on, I became very curious about that door.
(3)
Maybe, by buying a plane ticket, I can reach the ends of the earth tomorrow. But I may not be able to sit on the sofa across the hall tomorrow.
That day, I made up my mind to knock on that door.
Raise your hand and put it down again.
After several hesitations, I knocked on the door with trepidation.
After a while, the door opened.
Sometimes, fate is really funny. The lady I met last time was actually opposite me.
We smiled at each other.
She invited me in, and I naturally sat on her sofa. I took the steaming cup of tea, which was misty and fragrant.
We chatted together all morning and had a good time. When she left, she said, "You are the first neighbor to come to my house. I am very happy to see your smile. "
I spit out my tongue embarrassedly: "I am also very happy to hear your words."
Every time I walk to her door, I can't help looking through the cat's eye.
Later I found out that she got off work very late. Sometimes when I hear footsteps, I get out of bed and turn on the door light to provide convenience for her. I'm happy to do so.
(4)
Another weekend, I washed my clothes and hung them on the outdoor balcony. I was so tired that I fell asleep on the sofa like falling apart. I don't know how long it took, but someone knocked at the door in a hurry. When I opened the door, it was her.
She said, "It's raining. Hurry up and collect clothes! "
I looked out of the window. It's raining hard. She helped me put my clothes in, soon.
Since then, we have become more and more close. We haven't seen each other for days, but we always miss each other. In case of holidays, send a message or two to congratulate each other; When you are greedy, go to the supermarket together; We stayed in the cold wind until midnight for Jay Chou's concert.
Later, we became very good friends, just because we both had sincere smiles.
Smile is a magic key, which brings me closer to my neighbors. It is a smile that makes me make friends in this strange city and makes me feel less lonely. Every day in front of all kinds of people, I smile, the most sincere smile, which makes me confident a lot. As a neighbor, I smiled and lived a full life.
So one afternoon, I went to the corner, picked up a dry rag and wiped off all the dust on the oil painting. A ray of golden sunshine spilled in, and Mona Lisa smiled even more charming.
(Zheng Yunfeng Jiangxia, instructor Wu Gaoyang of Class 9 of Liu Liping Town Middle School)
Comments: The author writes his communication with his neighbors in a deliberate and orderly way, paying attention to the role of smile, which is everywhere. From a local point of view, both foreshadowing and foreshadowing are reflected. If a friend's casual question causes "I" to be curious about the opposite door, the writing will be natural and smooth; My yearning for friendship and tolerance for the door left an important foreshadowing for the later development, which made the communication between the two sides natural and smooth, and also made the article structure rigorous and meticulous. The article echoes from beginning to end, expressing her feelings and feelings with Mona Lisa's smile, which is novel and unique, and embodies the subtlety of the author's conception. The title is a pun. The theme reflected has profound practical significance.
Take birds as neighbors.
Author: Xiao Fei.
If birds can live in groups.
On the same tree
There is no barrier between the wall and the floor.
Snoring or talking nonsense is not taboo.
Take shelter under the same moon.
How beautiful it would be
I have never seen such a scene.
Maybe birds have their privacy, too.
Maybe birds have their privacy, too.
They talked in code.
Speak with graceful limbs
I climb stairs every day.
Climb to the same height as a bird
Looking at the Woods in the distance
Then enter the featherless nest
Become a dream without bird language
Actually, I prefer to live next door to a bird.
Xing xing Zhen tou
Under the same roof
Even if you don't sleep
Note: This article won the gold medal in the first China Campus Literature Competition.
(Shandong Volume 10)
23. Read the following text and write as required.
All the changes, charm and beauty in life are made up of light and shadow.
Leo? tolstoy
Please write an article of not less than 800 words according to your thoughts and associations.
Requirements: ① Independent decision; 2 self-made titles; (3) Style is not limited, except poetry; (4) distinctive stylistic features.
(10 Jiangsu Volume)
18. Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye. Green is closely related to life and ecology. Today, green has become a brand-new life concept, which is closely related to everyone's life.
Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Green Life".
Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.
The answer is short.
On the Writing Guidance of the Composition Green Life
Generally speaking, this year's Jiangsu college entrance examination composition is relatively relaxed compared with last year's "taste fashion". Both urban and rural candidates have something to say and write. Students will not see the sudden thinking shock of the topic in the examination room, but it is not easy to write it well. This kind of topic is typically easier to write than to do. To write well, you must have an advantage in conception.
First, the idea of this composition can be written about environmental protection. Facing the current environmental pollution and climate warming, we should advocate living in low-carbon life. But this is the first thought of most candidates at the first time. If you only write from this angle, it is easy to follow suit and cause a crash.
Secondly, if we write about the quiet rural life, turn it into a small one, carefully depict the feelings of the local people, write about the quaint natural scenery full of rural flavor, and arouse people's desire to return to the green life in the countryside, it will produce fascinating results.
Third, if it is interesting, we should grasp daily life such as "eating" and write it out. Now that people's living standards have improved, they are paying more and more attention to "eating". They eat everything that flies in the sky, crawls on the ground and swims in the water, and their physical diseases are increasing. Therefore, we advocate the good habit of green life, which can play the role of "four or two"
Fourth, if the intention is deeper, take "green" as an analogy. "Green life" is a healthy, simple and peaceful life, and "green life" refers to an indifferent attitude towards life. Facing the current social and economic transition period, the competitive pressure is increasing, and people are impetuous and confused about the future. Suicide killings are endless, such as the "Foxconn Twelve Jumps" and the previous campus vicious incidents. Corruption, violence, pornography and other ugly phenomena have been repeatedly banned, such as Wen Qiang, who fell in Chongqing's crackdown, and the fall of Beijing's "heaven and earth." This appeals to people to live a natural life without secular pollution, advocate the truth of life and enjoy the "green life" of human true love. This idea is even higher, and it will definitely attract the favor of marking teachers.
As for the style of this article, I personally think it is better to write narrative and commentary. Narrative writing can arouse people's admiration for the "green life" of rural nature by describing simple natural scenery and simple customs. Writing a commentary can criticize the shortcomings of the times, arouse confusion, clarify the situation, be more realistic and targeted, and give people a refreshing feeling. If you write an argumentative paper, it is easy to get stuck in the drum and pile up too much, which will make the marking teacher visually tired and difficult to shine.
(Hubei Volume 10)
23. Read the following materials and write as required.
The Monkey King's somersault cloud and Nezha's hot wheels are the products of magical imagination, which embodies the beautiful desire of human beings to pursue rapid progress. Who would have thought that fantasy novel's "New China" in the late Qing Dynasty predicted that the World Expo would be held in Lujiazui, Shanghai more than 100 years later, and Verne's dream of "from the Earth to the Moon" was realized today? Fantasy originates from human job-hunting instinct and shows human extraordinary imagination. Fantasy drives reality, fantasy illuminates life and fantasy is the source of happiness. ...
Please choose a suitable angle and write a composition according to your understanding and experience of the above materials.
Requirements: Choose your own style and write your own topic (please write the topic on the answer sheet), not less than 800 words.
(Excerpted from China's Notes, with deletion)
(10 Hunan Volume)
22. Please write an argumentative essay or narrative with the topic of "Morning" of not less than 800 words. (60 points)
What kind of articles should candidates write? Judging from the composition of the topic, this year has broken through the phrase topic of previous years. From the running experience in 2005 to the poetic life in 2007 to the tiptoe in 2009, there will be a decorative element next to the central words of these topics, but this year there is only one word "early". It is easy to think of Beijing's "safety" and Shanghai's "busyness". But as far as topic composition is concerned, this year's topics are much wider than in previous years, which means that this year's candidates have more room to play in writing than in previous years. This also reflects the significance of the new curriculum reform in Hunan, which is to let candidates explore the meaning behind a topic in a short time.
From the perspective of examination, what is "early" and what is its connotation? All our candidates should easily think that the first meaning of "early" means "when the sun comes out", and the other one is a little hard to think of, which is "in advance, before a time". The topic "morning" belongs to the "word type" topic summarized in class. The topic of "word type" is characterized by rich meaning and large extension space, so in order to determine a suitable starting point that candidates can firmly grasp, we only need to use short grammar and sentence-making methods to converge and narrow the extension of this topic and ensure that we can cut into writing from a small place. Such as "morning", "morning sunshine", "morning news", "early morning" and "early morning"; Sentence types such as "Be famous early", "The early bird catches the worm", "Go out early and come home late", "Going out early and coming home late is a life attitude", "Prepare early", "Speak early" and "Grow up early" make the central idea based on what you have mastered in the shortest time.
At the same time, as long as the topic is "early" and based on the "four-point division of college entrance examination composition theme", it is easy to judge that its theme is about life: isn't everyone trying to get early on the road of life? Isn't it a perfect life to realize your dreams early? On the other hand, life has many regrets. Why can't you find it earlier and make up for it earlier? Pictures about life: Which candidate hasn't seen the majestic sunrise in the morning? Which candidate didn't complain that "I wish I had thought of this topic earlier"? Which candidate didn't get up with his parents in the morning and whispered "early"? In fact, in the final analysis, these things are all discussed and communicated in class.
In terms of style, structure and language expression, the topic of Algae is also very open, without too many restrictions. The most common "syllogism" can be well used in narrative and argumentative writing, and the external progressive structure can also achieve the ideal effect. But what's the point? Whether narrative or argumentative, there must be places that readers can remember. For example, in narrative, candidates can write 800 words without mentioning the word "early", but the things described, the words conveyed and the emotions conveyed are all conveying the word "early" to readers. Another example is argumentative writing. No matter what the central argument is, readers should feel that no matter how "early" is written, the original intention of "early" is not important. What matters is the profound connotation behind "early": why do everything "early", because only in this way can things be done well and a person's personality charm be reflected. For language expression, this topic will have higher requirements. The difficulty of this composition problem lies in how to write appropriate and literary languages, and at the same time, these languages can contain profound emotions. For narrative, it is suggested to mobilize one's true feelings, write out the real things one has experienced personally, express one's inner feelings in the most direct language, and cooperate with various rhetorical devices to impress readers in artistic appeal. For argumentative writing, it is suggested to dig deep into the examples cited by ourselves, demonstrate their views step by step from different angles, and adopt rhetorical devices such as parallelism sentences to enhance the momentum of the article and make the discussion at the end of the article reach a climax.
Generally speaking, the Chinese composition test in Hunan is a little more difficult than before, but there are not too many restrictions on the writing content. We can highlight the meaning of "early" through one or two things, or we can show that we should be "early" by discussing a point of view. At the same time, it should be clear that in the article, it doesn't matter how early it is and what its characteristics are. What is important is how to show the meaning behind "early".
(Tianjin Volume 10)
25. Read the following text and write as required (60 points).
The world is like a colorful color under a brush, and the world is like a beating note on a harp; The world is progressing because of innovation, and the world is harmonious and warm; The world can exist in the magical virtual network, and the world is more a deduction of ordinary real life; The world is very big, but it is actually very small. ...
Everyone has his own world and everyone lives in it. Please combine your own experience and feelings. Write an article on the topic "The world I live in".
Requirements: (1) Choose your own angle and do your own topic; (2) Except poetry, the style is not limited. (3) Not less than 800 words. (4) Write your true feelings; (5) Do not copy or copy.
Analysis: Contemporary youth are in a colorful and rapidly developing era. The inspiration of "big world" and the care of "small world" are isomorphic to the specific living environment of young students. The growth of youth can not be separated from family, society, times and knowledge, understanding and perception of today's world. This topic is helpful for candidates to write the observed world from their familiar world, appreciate the true feelings of the world, understand the true meaning of life, and show their aesthetic taste and ideological personality.
This topic is full of certain openness and flexibility, which provides a broader space for candidates to choose materials. Candidates can have a bird's eye view of the magnificent times, or they can focus on the trivial things around them; You can write about the richness of the material world and the progress of spiritual civilization; You can write about the development of the country and the changes in your hometown, and you can also write about the warmth of your loved ones and the joys and sorrows of the campus; You can write about real life or virtual online world. I can write about the influence of the world on me, and I can also write about my responsibility to the world ... focusing on the overall situation, writing deeply and writing widely; A small place to put pen to paper can be written in a delicate and touching way.
The "I" in the title leads the examinee's attention to individual feelings, and "I write my heart by hand" embodies the idea that the new curriculum reform pays attention to students' subject and their unique emotional experience. The topic provides a broad space for candidates to think, which helps each candidate to find a breakthrough point for his own ideas, so that everyone can have something to say, feel and express, and highlight the personality characteristics of candidates.
In addition, the topic itself contains the relationship factors such as subject and object, big and small, virtual and real, material and spirit, inner world and external environment. No matter what style candidates choose, it is easier to capture the connotation of speculation and better reflect their emotions, attitudes and values.
(Chongqing Volume 10)
22. Please write an article on the topic of "difficult problem".
Requirements: ① Independent decision; (2) in addition to poetry, there is no limit; (3) Not less than 800 words; (4) Don't copy, and don't copy.
Theme review and comments:
First of all, I think this topic is very popular, "the topic is not difficult", and it has not caused difficulties to students' examination and writing. The problem is not confusing and will not confuse students. Everyone can write and have something to say. Therefore, I think such a topic can take into account candidates at different levels and is very suitable for the college entrance examination.
Secondly, a difficult problem refers to "a problem that is not easy to solve or answer", which means a pun. It can be understood from the perspectives of reality and virtuality. It can refer to the problems encountered in learning, including homework and exam questions, and it can also refer to the intractable difficulties or ideological puzzles encountered in life. As a student, no matter from which angle you think, you can find the material for writing.
Third, it is still difficult to write high-level articles on seemingly ordinary topics. In other words, "problems", what problems to write and what life or social problems to reflect can examine students' "concern" about life and "concern" about society, that is, the breadth of life experience and the depth of thinking. As a college entrance examination, we can distinguish the comprehensive quality of candidates from writing level, attitude towards life and social responsibility.
Fourth, although this composition requires "not limited to style except poetry", it may be easier to write a narrative on the topic itself. We should take specific problems as clues, describe our experiences completely, and fully show our feelings, attitudes towards problems, the process of solving problems or the thinking that cannot be solved when encountering problems by narrative or the finishing touch. Of course, if you use purely argumentative essays, you should pay attention to the universality of the problem, its significance to life and society, and the value of finding and solving problems.
Fifth, it is precisely because of the universality of the problem that candidates can choose materials from their own experiences, parents' experiences or historical figures' experiences, talk about the past and the present, and show their knowledge accumulation and views on historical reality. The article should focus on expressing one's own experiences and opinions, because there is no present in the past, and some people don't have themselves, which is a big taboo.
Sixthly, I think that in the present era, most students have grown up under the care of their parents and the protection of their schools, and their experience of hard life is not enough. Therefore, I am worried that most candidates will only write from the "difficulties" in their studies, or from the surface to write about the "difficulties" in their lives, and it is difficult to write creatively and profoundly. This is not a question of the title of this composition, but a question that will certainly reflect the problems of students or education today.
Seventh, from the perspective of investigating students' attitudes and values towards life such as "study and life", the composition topic of Chongqing college entrance examination is very good, and it is very timely and necessary to guide students to think about how to deal with life problems under the situation of increasing pressure in real life and frequent jumping off buildings. But we should pay attention to the difference between "difficulty", "worry", "frustration" and "failure", and don't change the concept and digress.