Lei Yuanzhou, Zhangzhuang Middle School, Gongan County, Hubei Province (43432 1)

[topic focus]:

Lu Deng Ting, president of Harvard University, once said: "Without curiosity and pure thirst for knowledge as the driving force, it is impossible to produce inventions of great value to mankind and society." People are brave to explore because of curiosity, and they are constantly seeking knowledge and making progress because of exploration, so the world is beautiful and prosperous today. Please write your own composition on the topic of "exploring knowledge". Except poetry, the style is not limited, not less than 550 words.

[thinking pilot]:

"Exploring knowledge" is a very broad topic, and the idea of examining the topic can follow the following four steps:

1, review the questions and determine the writing scope.

The topic only requires "exploring knowledge", and there are no restrictions on the center, materials, structure and style (except poetry), which gives candidates a relatively open space for conception. In the dictionary, "exploration" means "seeking answers from many aspects" and "seeking knowledge" means "seeking knowledge, checking or researching in order to gain more knowledge". Exploring knowledge pays attention to the process and enjoys the results. From this perspective, those who seek, study and investigate on and off campus in a complicated society are all within the scope of writing. However, if we don't pay attention to the topic and narrow the gap in writing, there will often be a problem of "writing a thousand words, digressing Wan Li". We should pay attention to narrowing the "encirclement" and choose smaller entry points, such as a story of seeking knowledge in life, an inspiration from seeking knowledge, life experience and so on. So as to concentrate on making a breakthrough, write a certain angle of the topic in detail and thoroughly, and strive to achieve "seeing the big from the small" and explain it in simple terms.

2, conception, clear composition style.

Dialectically speaking, everything is a double-edged sword. The same is true of topic composition. Topic composition downplays stylistic requirements and relaxes stylistic restrictions until stylistic restrictions are unlimited. However, it is this kind of looseness that may make candidates make up their minds at once: what genre should they write? Just like shopping in a small shop in the country, the variety is single, so you can buy whatever you want and go straight to the point; And topic composition is like going to a luxury supermarket in the city. Faced with a dazzling array of goods, I really can't decide which one to choose for a while. The principle of our conception is to choose the genre you are most familiar with. For example, some students have strong observation ability and rich life accumulation, so they might as well extract the wonderful fragments of life and write vivid and touching narratives; Some students are imaginative and good at writing stories. They might as well write fairy tales, fables and even science fiction. Some students have strong logical thinking ability and are good at reasoning, so they might as well write an argumentative essay with sufficient reasons; Some students have delicate and rich feelings, so they might as well write a beautiful and lyrical composition, which will be excellent.

3. Raise the topic and polish the eyes of the article.

The title is the "eye" of the article, as the saying goes, "the article is half done". Topic composition allows us to draw up a topic, so we should strive to improve the preparation level of the topic, make our own topic accurate, concise, implicit and novel, and integrate our feelings, characters' characteristics, action details or the theme of the article into the topic, so that the marking teacher can "fall in love at first sight". How to draw up an eye-catching topic can generally be done from the flexible use of rhetoric, such as metaphor, exaggeration, quotation, comparison, rhetorical questions, duality and so on. For example, this article can be drafted as growing up in exploration, seeking knowledge in the flower season, smiling at success and so on. Of course, there is no need to make a fuss, such as "symbolic method" and "mathematical method", which are a bit mysterious and easily offensive.

4, composition, optimize the full text chapters.

"A full mind lies not in the richness of language, but in the content, not in showing off." Shakespeare's famous saying tells us that the beauty of an article depends on the beauty of its content. The content should be fresh and true, don't make it up against the common sense of life, and don't use old millet to rot sesame seeds; The content should be specific and sufficient, not one scale and one claw, lacking arms and elbows and thighs; The content should be sincere and sincere, and avoid posturing and moaning. Therefore, you should be a conscientious person at ordinary times, do a good job in collecting and sorting out information, and don't cook without rice. The story material of the composition should have the characteristics of the times, and famous aphorisms can be quoted appropriately to make the composition convincing. At the same time, we should also pay attention to the depth of thought, the positive viewpoint and the novelty of language, and write our own unique understanding and feelings.

In a word, your composition should be in sharp synchronization with the conception materials and styles, the title and sentence connotation of the article should be as novel as possible, the readers should be impressed by beautiful language and attracted by meaningful philosophy, so as to be successful.

【 material treasure house 】:

1, famous English:

Stars at night! Your beautiful light shines in the west! Lift your glorious head from the clouds, and your steps are solemn on the hills. What do you see in the wilderness? The storm stopped and the murmur of the rapids came in the distance. The roaring waves climbed the cliff in the distance. After dusk, gnats stirred their weak wings, and the buzzing music resounded through Yuan Ye. What do you see, beautiful starlight? You're all smiles, so leave slowly. The waves happily surround you and bathe your beautiful clouds. Goodbye, quiet glory!

-personify people with things, [Germany] Goethe: Young Werther

2, one of the materials:

One day, a four-year-old baby was playing in the yard. I saw him busy in front of the sand pile, holding the sand in his small hand for a while, inserting the picked leaves and grass sticks into the sand pile for a while, and then the baby stood up and looked around. It seems that there are still some unsatisfactory places. He rolled his eyes and peed on the sand, then squatted down eagerly, stirring the wet sand with his hands, with a happy smile on his lips. Mom rushed over: "My God, how can you be so naughty!" " Do you play with such dirty things? "The baby looked up and looked at his mother in confusion. ...

3, the second material:

When Edison was a child, he used his brains and was very curious. One day, he suspected that grass could not be burned and hay could be burned, so he ran to the warehouse and lit the haystack with fire, and made a field experiment, but it turned into a fire and burned the hay accumulated by his father. However, Edison's more than 2,000 inventions in his life benefited from his strong curiosity, courage to think and fear of failure.

[Language Highlights]:

I watched silently, thought silently, and felt the ebb and flow of Bing Xin. Bing Xin's prose and thoughts are as profound as alpine forests; Her feelings are like undercurrents surging in the depths of the ocean; Her heart is like a rich and broad gold mine.

Bing Xin's prose is so beautiful, so beautiful. Although Bing Xin is a woman, she has burning passion, stormy pain, deep affection, thorough understanding, prayer, confession, inner sadness and passion.

Bing Xin's prose is so soft, so soft that it has a sad face like water, a drizzle like silk, silent regrets and a dream of hometown like white silk. I feel her inner happiness and sadness.

Bing Xin's prose is so beautiful, so beautiful. A clear and soft room, like a clear spring flowing down from a mountain, like an independent high branch between rocks; When it is intense, it is like a green tree in the abyss, like a unique boulder in the turbulence.

I can only read and read Bing Xin's prose, savor and read, read and read.

-Excerpted from the Book Sound of Xiong Miao by the Field Literature Society of Zhangzhuang Middle School, Public Security County, Hubei Province.

I returned to my seat, and for a moment, I walked to the long-lost windowsill, so close to me, but I felt so far away. There was a layer of dust on the windowsill, and I wiped it with my hand. The windowsill is not clean, but my hands are stained with dust. I pushed open the window hard, but the tree still exists: thin and tough. Before my eyes, it is so clear; But in my mind, the tree gradually blurred and blurred until it almost disappeared. ...

—— Excerpted from "Trees on Campus" by Ma, a field literature club in Zhangzhuang Middle School, Public Security County, Hubei Province.

[Famous sayings]:

1, people can't live like animals, they should pursue knowledge and virtue. -Dante

The enemy of learning is your own satisfaction. Study hard and never be complacent. We should adopt this attitude towards ourselves, "never tire of learning" and treat others "never tire of teaching". Mao Zedong

3, the light is midnight chicken, when men are angry. Teenagers only know how to play, but don't know how to study hard. When they are old, they regret why they didn't know how to study hard when they were young. -Yan Zhenqing

4. A bad teacher teaches students the truth, while a good teacher makes students seek the truth. In the first case, the movement is carried out from top to bottom; In the second case, the movement is from bottom to top. The former is that students start from the peak and work hard to the foundation; The latter starts from the foundation, students stand on the foundation, then enter the finish line and rise to the peak. -Stowe Hui

The process of personal development should be encouraged as much as possible in education. Children should be guided to explore and infer for themselves. Tell them as little as possible and guide them to discover as much as possible. Spencer

(Published in the first edition of Jilin Language Learning News, p-4, 65438+February 2005, 65438+February 2005, serial number: CN22-0045, mailing code: 7- 150)