When writing short comments, there are three steps: we must adjust, summarize and integrate. Setting the tone is to establish an opinion and put forward an opinion on the work. It is to extract relevant sentences from works as arguments to analyze and prove opinions. Abstract can be an excerpt from the original text or a summary report of the original content. If it is an excerpt, it is generally required to mark these sentences with quotation marks, but if it is a report, it is not necessary to use quotation marks. Integration includes preparing a title, analyzing opinions, and arranging arguments into short articles that meet the requirements. Because students usually stay at many levels when reading literary works, there are relatively few opportunities to speak words, and the accumulation in this respect is also insufficient. Therefore, teachers must provide students with necessary appreciation terms and some typical examples to help them become familiar with the mode and writing of literary criticism. Please look at the following example:

You don't have to cry if you want to —— On metonymy in Homesickness. A major feature of homesickness is the use of metonymy rhetoric to express strong homesickness. The poet is ingenious, using "small stamps", "narrow boat tickets", "short graves" and "shallow bays" to replace the homesickness in different periods, such as childhood, adulthood, later and present, and make it materialized. At first glance, it seems a little free and easy for us to wave goodbye, but after reading it several times, you will feel the poet's tears, and you will be moved by the deep affection between mother and son, the love between husband and wife, and the wanderer's longing for the reunification of the motherland. It is stamps, boat tickets, graves and straits that show the poet's constant sadness. If you want to cry, you can do it through an agent.

This is a typical micro-literary criticism, and the subtitle has clearly defined the content of the article. The use of terms and the style of sentences reflect the characteristics of comments. The article comes straight to the point, closely following the limited topic, puts forward the view that "the characteristic of homesickness is to express strong homesickness by metonymy", and then points out the application of metonymy in poetry, and analyzes the connotation and artistic effect of this technique. The full text has clear viewpoints and pertinent comments, which is of great reference for students to write micro-literary comments.

Let's take a look at the comments on the article "Spring" that students are familiar with. The following comments are about their language features. When reading, pay attention to the methods of excerpt and comment.

Fresh, meaningful and alert —— Comment on the language features of Spring

The reason why Zhu Ziqing's Spring is beautiful and moving is that he is good at introducing readers into a specific natural environment with simple and meaningful sentences, enjoying the fun of spring with the author and appreciating the charm of mountains and rivers. Zhu Ziqing is good at refining easy-to-understand and vivid spoken language, and his prose language is fresh and simple. Such as writing grass "in the garden, in the field, you see, a large area is full of flowers" and writing flowers "you won't let me, I won't let you, all of them are full of flowers to chase", these short phrases come from spoken English. In a sense, it is easy to understand, and in rhetoric, after artistic processing by the author, it has a bright rhythm and a strong lyrical flavor. The author is also good at using wonderful metaphors to enhance the emotional taste of language. For example, writing Spring Breeze says, "Like a mother's hand touching you" and compares spring to "a newborn doll", "a little girl" and "a strong young man". These metaphors are novel, appropriate, unconventional, vivid, profound, intentional, simple and fresh, and meaningful.

The poetry of Zhu Ziqing's prose is also reflected in the expression language. Some words are simply warnings, and a few strokes in natural places have the effect of making the finishing point. His language has no trace of chisel, nor is it engraved with the idea that "words are not surprising and endless", but it has a simple beauty, which shows a summary of the usual image, appropriately conveys his own mood, and even contains some philosophy of life.

"One year's plan lies in spring, just starting, some work, some hope." Finally, the author couldn't help singing spring:

"Spring is like a newborn doll. It's new from head to toe and still growing.

Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.

Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward. "

It's a strange ending, police strategy. After a perfect description of spring, the author sincerely admires it, further revealing the unstoppable creativity and infinite hope of spring, thus opening up the artistic conception and revealing the theme.

The title of this short comment sums up the linguistic features of the article "Spring" in three terms, and the center is clear at a glance. This paper analyzes its language features from two aspects. The first paragraph focuses on its fresh, natural, simple and meaningful language style, followed by its warning and tactical philosophy of life, and its writing has strong reference value.