Example 1

What is a person?

There is a sentence written under a huge dinosaur photo: "Many behemoths have disappeared from the earth and will not adapt to change." What about that guy? What is a person? Is it a monster relative to ants, or a small ant at the foot of dinosaurs? Are they advanced animals that we call ourselves, or are they idiots who actually know nothing? Is it the owner of our lovely earth hukou book, or a group of poor slaves of nature? Oh, who is it!

Ever since there were humans on the earth, it has been neither fish nor fowl. It's said to be a monkey, but it can't jump from branch to branch. It's said to be an ape, with a little short arm, and doesn't like to do graceful movements of patting the chest.

This kind of thing is inherently destructive. It has ulterior motives to create a fire that can destroy everything, just as it makes an atomic bomb today. It tries every means to attack other innocent animals and leisurely shuttles through all the nutrient chains in the food chain-it will eat anything as long as it can eat. This ability is increasing with each generation. Now almost all animals in the world are rare except mice, and they are protected all day. Stop. It is also shameless to say that animals can't adapt to "change". It endlessly asks nature to turn her lush green into delicious black charcoal for cooking, her beautiful river into a carrier of sewage, her blue sky into riddled rags, and her originally wet and flat ground into a trap-like funnel. Even they are digging hard soil day after day, trying to squeeze out every element in her body-as long as she is comfortable. As long as they are comfortable, people are willing to do anything, shave their heads with tools invented by their ancestors, and some places still have pus and black smoke! The earth groans and cries. Will the next disappearing behemoth be the earth itself? Because she can't adapt to crazy humans! It is said that people don't care about it-they are still thinking about living on Mars, the sun or other places! It seems that mankind will not stop until the universe is turned into powder!

What is a person? I still don't understand.

Comment: Lu Xun said: "Laughing and cursing are both articles." Saying "what is man" is almost swearing. But sometimes, it is not as good as a heartfelt criticism, which makes people happy and easy to wake up. The author is interested in humans.

Selfish instinct crazily destroys the bad behavior of nature and ecology, and makes ruthless exposure and bitter ridicule. They all say that nature uses "she" and human beings use "it", and repeatedly emphasize that they don't know what a person is, which is neither fish nor fowl, and their dissatisfaction with human behavior is beyond words. Compared with all kinds of warnings, rules and even prayers, the article shows a pungent and sharp fighting style and a serious and cold character behind humor, which leaves a deep impression on people.

Example 2

The self-report of the last monkey

For centuries, I was just an ordinary animal on the earth, running around all day-looking for food and avoiding the killing of advanced animals. However, now, I have become a key protected object, guarded by hundreds of advanced animals. What a wonderful thing!

Advanced animals-that is, animals that claim to be human beings-have turned me into a large "forest". There are mountains, waterfalls, flowers, birds and fruits covered with branches in the forest. However, the mountains are not lofty, the waterfalls are not spectacular, the flowers are not fragrant, the birds are not singing, and the fruits are not edible. Nevertheless, many people come to see this fake forest every day to see the real me inside. It is said that there is not even a small piece of real forest on this planet, and I have become the only low-level animal on this planet. Every time I see the joy of human beings entering the "forest", I wonder what kind of expression they will have if they see the real big forest.

I lived in a real big forest when I was a child. There are blue sky, clear water, green grass and red flowers, as well as my close friends and other residents.

In the early morning, the mist in the forest slowly dispersed, and the sun shone through the cracks in the leaves, leaving a flashing bright spot on the ground: the deer wandered on the green grass with beautiful horns; Birds open their throats happily and spit out crisp notes; My friends and I climbed the tree and played in it ... so a busy and happy day in the forest began. In the evening, the sunset covered the forest with a strange red dress. In the forest, the voice of the mother calling her son home echoed everywhere. This is a beautiful and quiet place. Only when the tiger appears will it cause commotion, but when the tiger is not hungry, it will never easily disturb our lives.

However, somehow, human beings invaded our place, so a disaster came quietly.

Humans first catch tigers, then look for deer in droves and cut off their beautiful horns cruelly. What scares me most is the way humans treat my loved ones. I saw with my own eyes how quickly they tied my relatives' limbs to the iron frame, how calmly they broke their heads and how happily they tasted the gray brains. Tigers hunt for survival. What are humans for?

Sometimes I really want to kill myself to avoid being killed, but I can't. Before her mother died, she predicted that "mankind will be destroyed by wisdom." I want to see with my own eyes how human beings came to the end. When others try to prolong my life, I also actively cooperate with them. I can't remember how old I am until now.

I know this day is coming. They cut down forests and mined Tibet indiscriminately, and their iron claws extended to the core. The air is polluted beyond control, and the earth is getting warmer. It is hot and dry all year round, and sandstorms are rolling in. Although the vaccine for X disease was successfully developed, a freak in the new environment, Y disease, appeared. The disease is spread through the air and will soon sweep the world. I am afraid that humans who pretend to be smart will never escape this fate again.

I want to laugh, learn to laugh like that; I want to cry again, my mother's prediction has come true, and my last monkey can also "die". But those fond memories of shaking in under the greenwood tree will vanish and disappear into the vast universe forever, which makes me very sad ... If human beings are not so self-righteous and greedy, and can give other creatures a little rebirth and tolerance and live in peace with nature, then maybe on this beautiful blue planet, human beings will embark on another road.

But it's too late, too late.

Comments: Introducing New February Flowers, the novelty of this article lies in expressing the theme of environmental protection through the self-report of the last monkey on earth. According to people's wanton destruction of the environment today, the author deduces the story several years later: the forest disappears, the species disappears, the river stops flowing, and the earth warms. "Humans will be destroyed by wisdom." Fortunately, all this has not yet come true, and mankind has now realized the importance of protecting the earth's home.

★ Topic 2: Environmental protection

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Once, the sky was blue; Once, the river was clear enough to blend with the blue sky; Once, the green mountains merged into an endless ocean ... however, it all became so far away. Cry naturally, and she will retaliate! Will the last drop of liquid that humans see be their own tears?

Please write a composition on the topic of "environmental protection", and the content must be within the scope of this topic.

Writing Tip: This question is to examine the examinee's ability to observe and think about reality.

The destruction and pollution of the environment is a major threat to human survival at present, which is related to the future development of the world. If candidates pay attention to current events, pay attention to this information and think deeply, they can quickly grasp the main idea. We can compare the earth to a "global village" with "every villager has the responsibility to protect the earth" as the center. This paper first introduces the concepts of "global village" and "villagers", and then points out the numbness of "villagers" by citing examples such as the extinction of wild animals, thus further highlighting the seriousness of the problem and pointing out that all this is caused by people. Finally, human beings are awakened, but everyone should take more responsibilities.

Based on the argument that "what we need is sustainable development", this paper first puts forward some thoughts on the way of resource development with the story of "fishing while doing" Then review the consequences of iron and steel smelting and other development activities, point out that this kind of development cannot last long, then clarify the connotation and significance of "sustainable development", and finally summarize the argument. The ancients said that "heaven and man are one" and "man can conquer nature". So is the relationship between man and nature harmonious or struggling? Judging from the current situation, it is still difficult to determine which is more powerful, man or nature. How should human beings deal with the relationship with nature for long-term development and well-being? This is something that we should seriously consider.

Example 1

For you? For me? For him

You once looked up at the blue sky and white clouds with deep affection. You said the blue sky is a mirror, which makes your heart so pure. I used to like being surrounded by green trees. I said that green trees are partners and make my life full of fun. He left his footprints on this vast land. He said that the land is his root and will always tie his heart. You, me and him have all lived in such a beautiful environment, and have always felt the happiness and hope brought by blue sky, white clouds, green trees and land! Over time, you have built a modern factory, and smoke is rolling out of the towering chimney and heading straight for the mirror-like blue sky. You said you wanted to be an entrepreneur; I, rows of tall buildings have risen from the ground, turning the kingdom of green trees into a bustling shopping mall. I said, I want to be based on business; He built a well-equipped chemical factory, and the sewage from the factory covered his footprints. He said that he would catch up with modern people. ...

The blue sky has become a mirror that has not been polished for a long time, eclipsed and filthy; Green trees are like seriously ill companions, groaning lazily in pain; The land is like a festering root, scarred and riddled with holes. You, he and I saw the blue sky, happy birds, beautiful trees and the vast land full of flowers in Ming Che in our dreams. But after waking up, you, me and him can no longer find the colorful world in that dream, only see the dark sky, bare trees and deserted desert. ...

You woke up, I woke up, and he understood that blue sky, white clouds, green trees and land are our homes for survival. Without a home, how can there be you, me and him? Blue sky, white clouds, green trees and land are the pillars of our life. Without pillars, where can there be you, me and him? Blue sky, white clouds, green trees and land are the source of our hope. Without the source, where can there be you, me and him? You, thinking under the blue sky; I, thinking deeply by the green trees; He, remembering on the land. Why did the past happiness find its value only when it was lost? How I wish I could go back in time and keep the happiness and hope that you, I and he once had!

Tell you gently: we only have one earth, for you, for me and for him, protect the earth and keep the best environment. ...

Comments: This article is a short and pithy on-site composition. It is not so much a narrative as a prose. Clever conception, great leap forward in time, beautiful environment when I was a child, and entrepreneurship when I grew up, but it destroyed the environment. The sharp contrast makes people think, and it is urgent to protect the environment! The poetic language and neat sentence patterns of the full text have profound implications. Isn't he a portrayal of all mankind?

Example 2

animal migration

Just after the autumnal equinox, the leaves are still dozing listlessly on the branches. Mr. Owl, chairman of the "Winter" Preparatory Committee, is going to hold a meeting in advance.

So the little sparrow spread the news in all directions: "There is an animal meeting! Every household should gather in the jujube forest behind the village after sunset! "

In the evening, all kinds of animals came to the meeting place one after another. Seeing that everyone was almost here, the owl spoke first: "Dear compatriots, this year's wintering preparatory meeting was held earlier than in previous years, mainly for two reasons: First, this year's pests were rampant, crops failed, and it was difficult to reserve wintering food; Second, after living for a period of time, I found that there was too much harassment, too unsafe and the environment was too bad, so I prepared to move my family. Today, please talk about your own views and opinions. "

"Relocation? Mr. Owl, do you really want to move? " Falcon asked doubtfully.

"yes! I can't help it! Although scientists have long rehabilitated us, there are still many people here who regard us as "ominous things", throwing stones and shooting with shotguns. My family and I live in fear all day. " The chairman shook his head helplessly.

"Yes. It seems that human beings have a deep hatred with us. Seeing that we are going to kill us, we are also living in fear! " Hedgehog echoed.

"Dad, Mom, let's move with Uncle Owl!" Cried the little snakes.

"Not bad!" "Not bad!" "Not bad!" "Let's move!"

Sparrows began to chirp. "We are kind and want to catch insects in the field. People plant dummies, drug us and do everything they can to keep us away. Recently, someone wanted to get rich, arrested us and sold us to restaurants for cooking. Let's see, it turns out that our huge family is now pitiful! " The old sparrow couldn't help crying when she talked about the sad place.

"Sparrow bro, don't cry! Speaking of food, we frogs are worse than you. People have established a "catch-collect-transport-eat" one-stop. In their eyes, we are not friends of crops, and we have long been snacks on their table! " Brother frog said this, his stomach bulged and he was almost furious.

"In fact, no one has arrested us, and our compatriots are getting less and less. So many agricultural chemicals were sprayed into the ground, and the bugs didn't die. Our dragonfly died many times. Some people threw the medicine bottle into the ditch after eating the medicine, which killed many of our relatives! " Dragonfly went on to say.

"yes! Yes! Move! "

"This is no longer a beautiful country. If we stay here, we will be childless sooner or later! " The animals were filled with indignation.

The owl didn't expect the members to coincide with herself, and tentatively said, "Everybody be quiet! Please think calmly again. "

"Forget it, we are determined to get out of here!" The little bee also said indignantly, "In those days, we came here with admiration. When we first arrived, we were really intoxicated by this boundless sea of flowers. Who knows, those delicate flowers have been soaked in pesticides. You can only pick some wild flowers to live in, where there is extra honey for the winter! It is better to leave early! "

"yes! It is better to leave here as soon as possible than to wait for death here! "

"Let's move! Stay away from the crowd! " Swallows, magpies, foxes and squirrels shout together.

"good! Now that everyone has made up their minds, let's go home and pack up and get ready to move! " Chairman Owl waved firmly.

Comments: This fairy tale reveals a heavy topic of environmental protection through personification of various animals, and the anthropomorphic writing technique plays a wonderful role in expressing the theme of the work.

★ Topic 3: Water

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Water is a colorless and odorless transparent liquid. With ordinary water, there will be rivers flowing with white clouds fluttering, mountains and rivers with green trees, flowers and birds singing, eagles hitting the sky, fish flying to the shallow bottom, and all kinds of frost fighting for freedom. However, due to the deterioration of the environment, the serious pollution of water quality, the drying up of rivers, the desertification of land, and the "water shortage" of human beings ... there are "National Water Conservation Publicity Week", "China Water Week" and "World Water Day" ... What do you think of when you see the above words? Please write an article centering on "water".

Writing Tip: The topic of this essay aims to guide people to know about water, pay attention to water, cherish and protect water resources, raise the awareness of water conservation among the whole people, build a water-saving society and realize the strategy of sustainable economic development. Water is the survival of human beings, and each of us can't live without water in our daily life. We have to brush our teeth and wash our faces, wash vegetables and cook, wash dishes, drink water to quench our thirst and water the flowers ... In some places, we have to carry water dozens of miles away. People in some places don't know what it's like to take a bath all their lives In some places, water is restricted and sold in the market ... so every student has more or less experience and views on water ... writing a vivid story about water is a narrative. Analyze and study the understanding of water, views on water saving and measures to control water, and write an argumentative paper; Express the joy of water, the pain of water shortage, feel the behavior of wasting and polluting water, and write essays; You can also use the scientific knowledge you have learned to write some popular science sketches about water, or you can make up stories and write fables to inspire people.

Sample text

Don't let the tears be the last drop of water.

Water is very important to human beings. Without water, human beings will not survive.

Everyone knows this truth, but most of us don't feel how precious water is because of it. Although I have seen the situation of water shortage in remote rural areas on TV, the villagers have to bear the draught of more than ten miles or even dozens of miles away. Water drops are as expensive as oil, and most villagers don't know what it's like to take a bath all their lives. However, for those of us who live in cities and towns, as soon as tap water is turned on, fresh water rushes in, which seems inexhaustible. A ton of water is only a few cents, and there seems to be nothing to waste. So we can pour out a pot of water without drinking two cups, wash a piece of clothing and bleach it several times or more, and rinse the mop for ten minutes. Especially in public places, "water overflows Jinshan" and no one asks, and the faucet is not turned off after going to the toilet.

While squandering water resources, we don't seem to hear the footsteps of "water shortage" approaching! Nature is affectionate, and she has given us extremely rich natural resources; Nature is merciless, and people who plunder and abuse resources destructively will be retaliated by her. Today, the desert area on the earth is expanding at an alarming rate, which is her punishment for human deforestation, and the sandstorm raging in the wind is her warning to us. If we don't cherish water resources and control water use, water shortage will surely become a big problem for our human survival. Diverting Luanhe River into Tianjin and Yellow River into Tianjin, those huge projects that arouse the masses, cost a lot of manpower, material resources and financial resources, just to solve the water shortage problem in Tianjin. Now, many big cities in China are also facing the threat of water shortage, so they have to take measures such as limited water supply and water transfer in pieces to temporarily deal with the problem.

What would human beings be like without water? This is a question put forward by a TV public service advertisement, and then it appears on the screen: pieces of dry land, groups of unkempt people, stretching out their dry arms to the sky, shaking their equally dry lips, groaning in despair and expecting. This scene is shocking. If we waste water resources unscrupulously again, maybe some of us will be "lucky" to experience this imaginary tragedy. Our future generations will also "thank us" and suffer from poor water.

An advertisement said: If we don't save water, the last drop of water on the earth will be our human tears. After reading it, it was shocking and enlightening. For the future of our descendants, for the prosperity of mankind, and to prevent our desperate tears from becoming the last drop of water on the earth, let each of us cherish every drop of water from now on.

Comments: This is an argumentative paper with a novel and unique title, which attracts people's attention. The full text is divided into four parts: water waste, water damage, scenarios after waterless, and suggestions. It has a strong sense of criticizing the current disadvantages and educational significance.

★ Topic 4: Protect the mother river and build a reader's forest.

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In the spring of 2000, Beijing was hit by sandstorms five times in a row. The yellow sand covered the sky, making it difficult to move, and even the trees fell down, injuring pedestrians. Sandstorms also affected Jinan, Wuhan and other places, and it actually rained mud in Shanghai, which is close to the East China Sea. At the same time, an action of "Protecting Mother River-21Century Green Hope Project" is being launched. For example, Reader magazine is calling for the activity of "protecting mother river and building readers' forest".

Requirements: Please write an article on the above issues. Apart from poetry, other genres are not limited. The topic is self-drawn. No less than 700 words.

Sample text

One-day tour in the desert

At night, the bell at 10 brought me into the 23 rd century.

In 2220, the "Earth Protection Organization" took a special holiday for 7 days in recognition of my initial success in transforming the Sahara Desert. I can finally use this short holiday to return to my motherland and see the lovely capital-Beijing.

I drove a totally enclosed "desert boat" designed by myself on the former Chang 'an Avenue. Both sides are no longer tree-lined, red flowers and green grass, only a few "cactus" stubbornly stuck there. Looking around, it is no longer the high-rise buildings and cars of the past, but the endless desert and bare. As far as my eyes can see, it is amazing yellow.

Not far away, a group of people are coming to me under the banner of "desert trip" "Ladies and gentlemen, this is Chang 'an Avenue more than 200 years ago, opposite Tiananmen Square. Since the founding of New China, several generations of leaders have conducted military parades here. At that time, the place where we stood was full of flowers and green grass, all kinds of colored balls in the sky and pigeons flying in the square. Well, that's all history! Beijing used to be the residence of many princes and princes in ancient China, the capital of many ancient dynasties, and one of the most prosperous cities in the world ... "The tour guide told people yesterday's story with a megaphone, but the tour guide's every move seemed to be very familiar, and it was windy and could not be seen clearly." According to relevant data, the first serious sandstorm occurred in the spring of 2000, which should have been the season of flowers and birds. However, the Beijing area has been hit by sandstorms for five times in a row, and the yellow sand blocks the sun, making it difficult to walk, and even trees fall down, hurting pedestrians; Sandstorms also affected Jinan, Wuhan and other places, and there was a mud rain in Shanghai near the East China Sea. Since then, such sand attacks have occurred frequently, and the frequency is getting higher and higher. Until today, Beijing, once the capital of China people, has become one of the world-famous deserts. At that time, the country also took a series of measures, but because people still go their own way, deforestation and destruction of the ecological environment, the situation is getting worse and worse, and it is too late to regret it today ... "

The tour group is getting closer and closer to me. Suddenly, the guide stopped talking and stared at me. Oh! Isn't this my old classmate Zhang Huan? She has always liked traveling, and today she has become a tour guide of "Desert Tour". "Hello, Zhang Huan!" "Hi, Yang Ming, long time no see, just the same. I heard that you work in the International Desert Governance Association? "

"yes."

"Is it really you who successfully transformed the Sahara desert?"

"What, you don't believe it?"

"No, I don't believe it. I'm so happy. I feel very honored to be your classmate. "

"In fact, these are the results of the efforts of my colleagues and me."

"Hey, everybody please come here! Let me introduce you to my classmate Yang Ming, who has been fired so hot in recent days-the winner of transforming the Sahara desert. Let's ask him to say something for us, shall we? "

Zhang Huan this sudden move let me at a loss, I quickly took the horn, very excited:

"My friends, as you can see, this is the bustling city of Beijing yesterday, and today it has become one of the world-famous deserts. Who can blame this? We have only ourselves to blame. We destroyed our home. Of course, it is useless to complain and regret. The most important thing is to transform desert management and rebuild this ancient city. It's a pity that I came back here to have a look during my break, and I was thinking more about how to manage these deserts. When I go back this time, I will apply to join the Beijing Desert Management Team to transform the Beijing desert and rebuild the capital as soon as possible! At the same time, I also call on the people of China and the people of the world to protect nature, protect our planet and protect our own cradle of life ... "

"Nothing, get up!" My mother's crying woke me up from my sleep. It was a dream!

Comments: The times call for innovation, and innovation is the magic weapon to win the college entrance examination composition. This article is ingenious in conception, novel in style and accurate in language. In a limited time, the author carefully conceived and skillfully used skillful brushwork to capture fragments of life, and with reasonable imagination, revealed a truth in the article: the earth is our common home, please cherish life and start from environmental protection. The article is profound and thought-provoking.

★ Topic 4: Green

When you are in the green mountains and green waters, when you see a team of olives passing by, when you read Mr. Zhu Ziqing's essay "Green", when you eat green food … how do you feel? what do you think?

Requirements: Please write a composition of not less than 800 words with the theme of "green" and choose your own angle. Style is not limited, except poetry.

Writing Tip: Although this material is a composition for materials, it is very similar to a propositional composition. This topic is limited to "green", that is, as long as it is related to green. There is no need to analyze and abstract the material in depth, so is this material still meaningful for choosing the angle? Of course there is. It can inspire us, for example, from "when you are between green mountains and green waters", we can choose to write about nature and life. From When You See a Team of Olives Passing by, we can choose to write about peace and soldiers. From "When you read Mr. Zhu Ziqing's prose" Green ",we can choose to write literature; From "when you eat green food", we can choose to write about contemporary hot topics. ...

Example 1

The depravity of green

The dust brought by the hurried footsteps embraces the confusion of rouge charmingly; The sweat of Generate is "frozen" in people's chests because of restlessness and sultry (because of indifference and loneliness in reality); Not the beginning of plants flashing green light; This is the life of modern urbanites, this is the life of a new generation, and this is fashion. In this world which is short of "green" but not green, watching her green lips move, watching her long green hair flying, and watching her green eyebrows tease the air in the scorching sun, I am very confused, whether she is Asura in my fantasy or an angel of Satan. The world stops turning, except for the roaring rock music in my ear. She came up to me and melted into another piece of green.

The thick river under the bridge flows slowly, glowing green under the "dark" light. Numerous bubbles rising from the water burst in the air, like souls waiting for redemption. The creatures in the water are waiting for the only thing we can get from this world-death.

At night, under the dark background, in a dark corner of the city, there are countless fluorescent lights flashing. Like the call of a wild wolf in the wilderness. However, this green eye belongs to human beings, even though it is full of wildness, desire and unbridled arrogance. It's everywhere. It shines in front of money, power and fame.

I have fallen with green, but we should not fall. We should not let beautiful green fall with us.

Still green.

You know, people are responsible for what they do.

Comments: This article is unique. Under the surface of "green", it is in line with the meaning of the topic to explore its materials and topics with deep social significance. Innovation is the biggest feature of this article, and most people dare not think about it. Several materials are innovative and typical. The dazzling green hair of new and new human beings represents a kind of urban flavor far from the real nature. This is a world lacking in green, but it is not lacking in green. The polluted river is green, and countless bubbles rising from the water surface are like souls waiting for redemption, completely breaking the depravity of the souls of the world dragged by the desire of modern society. Greedy eyes are green, full of wildness, desire and unbridled arrogance, but such green eyes belong to human beings. The author grasps the distorted green color of modern society and reveals profound social ills. Such a wonderful article is amazing.

This article is prominent in the center, substantial in content, rigorous in structure and fluent in language, and can be read in one go.