Example 1

Learning is expensive.

"People are ambitious and learn more." This truth is summed up by human beings in thousands of years of practice. It is profoundly clarified that the most valuable thing for a person is ambition, and the most rare thing in learning is perseverance.

Aren't there many scholars with this spirit in the world? Marx's talent is amazing, because he has persistent spirit and tenacious character in his study. He said: "There is no royal road to science, and only those who do not dread the fatiguing climb along steep mountain roads can hope to reach its glorious summit." Lu Xun's literary accomplishment is outstanding, because he has a hard-working spirit and perseverance in his studies. He once said, "Where there is a genius, I spend all my time drinking coffee in other people's works. Grasping time is equivalent to prolonging life. " Beethoven became a world-famous musician because of his perseverance and fearless spirit. As he said, "Not a day goes by without writing. If I sometimes make the god of art sleepy, it is only to make him more excited after waking up. "

However, some people, they don't understand the truth that "learning from time to time is the most important thing." They think studying every day is too boring. There are still some people whose ideals are great, but they have not been realized because of lack of perseverance. Horace, a novel by French writer george sand, vividly depicts such a typical figure: he has ideals, said a lot of rhetoric, and even pursued great achievements in his dreams, but once he started to implement it, he was at a loss in the face of difficulties; When you encounter setbacks, you will be depressed and depressed. In learning, it is even more exposed to the cold, and finally it ends up wasting time and achieving nothing, becoming the laughing stock of people. Facts have proved that only by combining thinking with doing, being down-to-earth and persevering can we succeed. Xun Ziyun: "Perseverance can open the stone; Perseverance, rotten wood can't be carved. "That's one thing.

The process of learning is the process of constantly overcoming difficulties and solving contradictions. It's like a confrontation between two armies. If you don't persist until the last moment, all your efforts will be in vain and you will be defeated. Scientific knowledge is like a brilliant and dazzling treasure house, which needs people to explore and absorb nutrients. Numerous facts have proved that learning cannot be accomplished overnight. Only through hard and persistent study can we absorb the wealth of knowledge created by human beings and enrich our thoughts. Only in this way can we achieve scientific and artistic achievements. It is not difficult to understand that if Leonardo da Vinci had not started with painting eggs and practiced his basic skills day after day, would he have achieved such high artistic achievements?

Before, I didn't realize that "learning from time to time is expensive." In the process of learning, I was once a defeated soldier and a prisoner. Take learning a foreign language as an example. I want to learn a foreign language. If I learn well, I will become an envoy to communicate with foreign countries in the future. When I was a beginner, my heart was like a wild goose flying high, but when I put it into action, it was always cold and hot, and I got nothing. Failure taught me, and I began to make up my mind to study persistently and not bow to difficulties. Through several years of study and practice, my foreign language performance has been rising, and I have a deeper understanding of the truth that "learning from time to time is more important than continuous learning". I deeply realize that a successful ship can only sail in the ocean of sweat, and the greatest secret of success lies in perseverance.

Glorious goals and great victories rose from their own feet. If a person does not have the spirit of "perseverance" in his career, how can he have a feat of "stone can be carved"? Life is so fair, and victory always belongs to those who are diligent and persistent.

Analysis: "Learning is expensive" is a difficult topic to write, but the author is skillful in conception, material selection, demonstration and expression. The article is written with flesh and blood and is quite touching. The author completed the demonstration task step by step along the steps of establishing arguments, stating facts, explaining reasons, connecting with reality and drawing conclusions, with clear hierarchy, strict logic and seamless integration.

Example 2

The theory of "only study hard" can be stopped.

At school and at home, I often hear such a teaching: "There is no end to the study of mountains, and there is no end to the study of the sea." "If you don't freeze your bones, you won't get plum blossom fragrance." "Learning is very hard. If you don't suffer, you won't get good grades." Is that really the case?

Please don't escape from reality! It is really difficult for us students to study and live now. In the morning, the alarm clock woke us up, and we hurried to school with heavy schoolbags on our backs. All that flashed through our minds was the homework left by the teacher. In order to complete my study task, I swam in the sea of questions day and night, so that the night was still. That series of supplementary questions, which are both difficult and deep, makes people exhausted. Alas! We sighed more than once: "It's so hard to be a student now!"

During the day, sitting in the classroom with bright windows, we gave our whole body and mind to the teacher. Forty-five minutes later, all kinds of knowledge appeared in my mind like lanterns: just now, on the battlefield of "Chu and Han contending", I suddenly entered the maze of "gravity"; This section has not ended the trip to the Peach Blossom Garden, but the hall of "Plane Geometry" has begun. We were so absorbed that our beloved teacher led the tour guide that we were nervous. To tell the truth, we are absorbed in our study. When we got home at night, our parents still locked us in a small room. We seldom watch TV or listen to music. We still gathered our thoughts and finished our homework honestly. Poverty inherits the wind! It is a kind of inculcation that "you can be a teacher only after you have suffered a lot". Excuse me: isn't this kind of study life hard? Who can solve the taste?

In our bulging schoolbags, besides textbooks and homework, there are also various books and materials, such as study guide, practice, solving problems and giving directions to Tianjin, which are almost increasing day by day. We have to read, recite, write and practice, and the "heavy exercise" in our study is unbearable. Bitter? Bitter! This really focuses on us underage students.

Putting these facts out does not violate the good intentions of parents and teachers, nor does it violate the traditional virtue of hard work. I just want to ask one question: Is hard work the only way to become a talent? Can't we train high-level talents without this? I think the answer is no!

There is no end to learning, when is the end? If we emphasize hard work blindly, things will go to extremes, and if we exceed the limit, we will go to the opposite side of things. According to a youth daily report, the reporter once investigated in a school, and the students' eyesight dropped significantly. 14- 16 students are nearsighted, accounting for 23%. Students are in poor health, and there are more people with rickets and hunchbacks. What a shock! This evil result has something to do with hard work! Can't "only study hard" rest?

We teenagers are in a period of long body and long knowledge. We need to learn scientific and cultural knowledge, as well as various nutrients such as sunshine and rain. With the deepening of education reform, many excellent teachers with wisdom and insight have created a pleasant and skilled learning experience, which is a gratifying achievement to reduce the burden on students and benefit their physical and mental health. The ancients also said: "A studious person can learn from others and get twice the result with half the effort." This is exactly what we earnestly hope. May the tide of reform break away from the shackles of "only studying hard", and may the brand-new wind of happy learning let us grow up healthily in laughter.

Analysis: This argumentative paper is clear and to the point. Firstly, the article describes the objective phenomenon, puts forward rhetorical questions, and naturally transitions to this theory; Then list the facts of life and clarify the "bitterness" of studying hard. The wrong view is that it is self-inflicted, and the arguments are practical and sufficient and irrefutable; Then, with a turn of the pen, stick to the theme, show your point of view, and take the reported facts as evidence to reveal the harm of the effort in essence; Finally, I hope it can inspire people. The whole article is rigorous in structure, sharp in writing, concise and lively, and catchy to read.

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