Present situation and suggestions on the development of private economy in XXX province.
Private economy: private economy. Add the word "development" and use economic terms.
Present situation: present situation
Economic means: (Oxford Advanced)
1) Provide good service or value related to the time or money spent:
An economical car
It will be more economical to buy a large size.
2) Don't use unnecessary things:
Example: Economic use of land/space
3 Don't spend unnecessary money:
He is frugal in all aspects of life.
Few people will agree with the last point: in fact, it is not appropriate to say Beijing and Guangdong provinces, and all provinces and cities should be omitted.
Nobody in China understands this. Who has ever heard an American say California?
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