Starting with a question can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people's interest and thinking, and have fascinating effects. For example:

Did you jump off the cliff in order to get rid of that cold and hunger? Did you throw yourself off this cliff to avoid the shame of being captured? (Trees on the Cliff)

2. Use ellipsis skillfully. (What should be omitted is omitted. )

We often watch TV plays or movies, often for the development of the plot. A hero in the play was talking to the people next to him when he was dying, and he died before he finished. This technique is also very attractive in our writing. You see, the last time Kong Yiji went to Xianheng Hotel for wine, he met the shopkeeper to collect the bill. With only four coppers in his pocket, he was in an awkward position, but he couldn't help saying, "Pay it back next time!" " A broken sentence in this sentence vividly draws the speaker's dilemma and situation. Then the shopkeeper asked him about the theft and the broken leg. Kong Yiji was embarrassed and panicked, and wanted to say: It's broken. Kong Yiji, a scholar who is not used to lying, only said two of the three words, and then he stammered, and the result became: broken, falling, falling. Ellipsis is used here to create the rhyme of the language, which makes people think deeply after reading it. Cao Xueqin wrote in A Dream of Red Mansions: Tanchun came to touch Daiyu's hand. It was so cold that even her eyes were scattered. Tanchun Zijuan cried and asked someone to bring water to scrub Daiyu. Just as she was wiping, she heard Daiyu say, "Baoyu! Baoyu! " Hello "Speaking of the word" good ",he was covered in cold sweat and fell silent. Here, Daiyu had a lot to say when she was dying, but her physical strength was exhausted. I want to say it again, only on the word "hello". What a rich subtext there is behind this, which makes people memorable.

3. Flashback (ingenious suspense method)

The purpose of flashback at the beginning is to set suspense, arouse readers' attention and interest, and at the same time increase the faltering of the article and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique appears frequently in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. Most students' expression angle is usually based on the angle of showing the end of the article, which is often relatively simple when there are many forms.

In fact, flashback starts from a variety of angles, such as: (1) first ask an unsolved problem. (2) First intercept a wonderful event fragment. (3) first explain an object that plays a clue role. (4) First, arrange a scene that triggers the story.

(5) Introduce people closely related to the story. (6) Show the ending of the story or character first. Chess and Perfect Zhang Xinmin's American Example

The selection of casting workshop director focused on the names of rhubarb and Xiao Li through opinion polls and surveys. When it comes to working ability and mass relations, they are neck and neck. This stumped Wang Kechang of the personnel department. After much deliberation, he can't decide. He is going to listen to the opinions of the new director.

After thinking for a moment, the factory director suddenly asked, "Can you tell me some other details?" "About them?" The section chief is at a loss. He cut his hair before his forehead and suddenly remembered, "Oh, these two are both chess masters. Rhubarb won the championship of the whole factory for three consecutive years; Although Xiao Li is not as stable as rhubarb, he won the third place last year. "

The factory director stood up cheerfully: "Well, I'll go and play with them!" " "It turns out that the factory director is also a chess fan.

In order to know ourselves and ourselves, the factory director personally found many workers to understand the situation, and finally formally made a battle list. I played three games of chess with rhubarb last night. Rhubarb has always been a slow and steady hand, and it is known as "soft-hearted, attacking later". But yesterday he didn't play very well, shaking hands for three consecutive games. The factory director bowed and said, "I'm really sorry for letting you lose three games in a row."

It is Xiao Li who plays today. His chess friends nicknamed him "Cheng". It is said that he not only has a "three axes" from the beginning, but also often comes up with some tricks such as "fighting a way to Jin Yao" when encountering adversity, which makes his opponents hard to prevent. After two innings, the director was forced to fight back by his fierce offensive. In the third game, when he got down to his pride, Xiao Li swept away the formality when he first entered the door, and even patted the director on the shoulder: "Dude, solve the battle within ten steps."

"Huh?" The director didn't buy it. "What if I can't win?" "Don't play chess in this life!" "It's a deal?" "Of course!"

After all, the director still has a few tricks. He put some cool oil on his temples, refreshed himself, calmly accepted the battle, and finally made the game a piece. He began to close the stall cheerfully, and Xiao Li suddenly grabbed his hand and said, "Slow down, have another plate."

"Didn't you say you wouldn't play chess in your life?" The director looked at Xiao Li with a smile and asked meaningfully. Xiao Li said unconvinced: "No way! I missed something just now, so I can't sleep until I make it up. " Clearing his throat, the director smiled: "I don't care if you can't sleep." Anyway, I can have a good sleep today. " He saw Xiao Li out of the house and walked towards Wang's home.

Playing chess with sound is a very meaningful article. It attracts readers to read the full text with strong interest by setting different levels of suspense. At the beginning of the article, it immediately showed suspense: the candidates for foundry workshop director, public opinion survey and investigation discussion focused on Huang Xiao and Xiao Li, who were "neck and neck". How to produce substitutes? This is a sensitive issue involving society: the criteria for selecting cadres. After reading this, we can't help guessing according to our own ideas. This kind of opening can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people's interest and thinking, and has a fascinating effect.

2007 classic [original title of senior high school entrance examination]

In 2006, Huzhou City, Zhejiang Province read the following materials and wrote as required. Bai is an ordinary old man in Tianjin. In the last 18 years of his life, he scrimped and saved, regardless of the wind and rain, and ran all over the street, donating nearly 350,000 yuan accumulated by riding a tricycle to many primary and secondary schools in Tianjin and subsidizing nearly 300 poor students. However, his personal life is almost a beggar and his private property bill is zero. He pressed material life to the lowest point, but released energy to the highest. 365 days a year, he has never rested. If each tricycle 1 km charges 50 cents, the contribution of the elderly is equivalent to running around the equator 18 weeks. This is not a myth. Bai tried his best to shed his light and heat on many students in need. On the morning of September 23, 2005, 93-year-old Bai quietly left. Countless living people remember him by word of mouth-the old man riding a tricycle.

Bai's deeds touched countless kind people. Each of us will have some people and things in our hearts that move us. In retrospect, what moved you the most? Please write a composition on the topic of "moving".

[high score composition]

Remember a blue rain umbrella, a candidate

My sight was blocked by a blue rain umbrella for so long. Blue is as clear as the sky.

When I was a child, when it rained, my mother always picked me up from school with a blue umbrella. My head is blue, my shoulders are blue, and everything I can see is a blue sky without rain.

Later, on a rainy day, I looked up and talked to my mother, only to find that half of her sky was gray, and the wind mixed with raindrops fell into her gray sky. My mother's shoulders are wet, and the hair on my forehead is wet, but I am still in a blue rainless sky.

"Mom, the umbrella is crooked," I warned. "No, the umbrella is not crooked." Mother replied softly, and my eyes rested on the oblique umbrella handle. "It's true, the umbrella is crooked." Mother stubbornly said, "No, really not."

Later, when I grew up, I didn't want my mother to pick me up in rainy days. The blue umbrella faded year after year in the cupboard. I used to think that I had forgotten.

Maybe it's a coincidence, another rainy day and that blue umbrella. Under the umbrella, my mother and I hold an umbrella. I am about the same height as my mother.

My eyes unconsciously fell on the umbrella handle, and the scene was mixed with the scene when I was a child. My mother is shrouded in a blue rainless sky. My shoulders are wet and my hair is wet.

"The umbrella is crooked," my mother reminded me. "No, it's not crooked." "It's true, the umbrella is crooked," mom repeated. "Mom, it's really not crooked, it's not." There was silence for a long time under the umbrella, but when I turned around, I caught a glimpse of the glittering water drops across my mother's face and cheeks.

The faded umbrella reappears the blue that was as clear as the sky before.

Finally understand, for a long time, my mother propped up a rainy day for me. Now, I want to give my mother a happy day, although Meng Jiao said, "But an inch of grass can get much love."

So my eyes are tied to a blue umbrella. I am the one who fights under the lamp every night, and I am the one who shuttles to the cram school every weekend.

All this is because of the oblique blue umbrella.

That blue, clear as the sky, makes my eyes dare not move, never dare to move. Material review

The beginning of this article is very concise, but it is quite interesting. "My vision was blocked by a blue rain umbrella for too long." Why? The author didn't make it clear, but skillfully set the question with an ellipsis. This naturally aroused the interest of readers. Will think: what kind of story will happen to this blue rain umbrella on the little author? Such a beginning will undoubtedly play a leading role.