1, the proportion of narration and discussion is very important. This has a lot to do with style. If you want to write an argumentative essay, the proportion of discussion will be large, and the narrative is only used as an argument to demonstrate your own views; If you want to write a narrative, the narrative is more important than it is, and then you should sublimate it appropriately.
2. Narrative, you need a complete description of the event, six elements: time, place, people, occurrence, development and ending. You can also add some environmental descriptions or detailed descriptions appropriately to enrich your own narrative.
3. Then turn from narration to discussion, that is, the content associated with things, and sublimate the theme. For example, you described your experience of visiting the Great Wall and saw the words "So-and-so came here to visit" engraved on the wall, so you discussed the importance of protecting cultural relics and talked about how to protect cultural relics and defend national culture, which to some extent sublimated the theme.
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