Fast and slow are two symphonies with different rhythms. Fast is passionate and exciting. Slow is smooth, soothing and refreshing. It is these two symphonies with different styles that interweave the magnificent movements in human life. -Inscription

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I live in a strict family. I grew up on the track laid by my parents, and I dare not cross the line. Their blueprint for the future is vibrant and outstanding. But they don't know that what I yearn for in my heart is a quiet and leisurely life.

The first movement: quick

I worked hard for my parents' gratified smile, for the envious eyes of others, and for the grand blueprint I should have in my relatives and friends.

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When others are still sleeping, I will get up and study, because I know that even parents will smile when they hear the sound of reading in their sleep. Classes in the morning, afternoon and even evening are full. I just left.

Learning and English came one after another, only to English, and then Chinese came up, and Chinese, physics, chemistry, health and other subjects were swept away. Even if the school leaders occasionally show mercy and take a day or two off, it is all kinds.

The remedial class seized the land. At night, I came home covered in stars, so I had to go back to the dining table and swim in the sea of books and mountains, without taking a cup of hot milk from my mother. Every night, everything is quiet.

At this time, I can't help but think of my deep dream, that is …

The second movement: slow

When I sat up from the bed, the fresh sunshine in the morning had covered my quilt. Outside the window.

This is a quiet picture of "we look at the green trees surrounding your village and the light blue distant mountains". Sitting indoors, you can play the violin, sing and write poems. When you go outdoors, you can enjoy the picturesque scenery. Every moonlit night, you can take the moon as your companion to think of the ancients.

Away from the noise of the world, I finally found inner peace. I don't need to worry about other people's eyes and comments. It's best to be yourself. This is what I have been longing for, Tao Yuanming's style of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely"

This seems unrealistic in an impetuous world, but I still have such a dream in my heart. ...

Borrowing songs

I am still busy every day. When I get used to this life, I have nothing to complain about. Fast and slow melodies are inseparable. I believe and look forward to the day when these two completely different melodies can be merged into a harmonious symphony.

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Exquisite and decent topic. The article entitled "Symphony of Fast and Slow" not only sticks to the theme, points out the main idea, but also is novel and unique.

Natural and round structure. The full text adopts the form of a subtitle, which leads to a string of beads through inscription, overture, first movement, second movement and ending song in turn, describing the helplessness of fast-paced life and the extravagant hope of slow-paced life.

The structure is complete and the purpose is clear.

Vivid and authentic language. The language in this article is fresh, natural, true and touching, expressing the true feelings of a senior three student, the fast-paced school life, the heavy learning tasks of various subjects, the heavy pressure brought to the students, and the anxious mood.

The yearning for life is truly and naturally expressed.