Zhong Gaoyun

Examination composition questions (60 points) (omitted)

Discuss this topic

1, pay attention to the characteristics of the questions (materials plus topics)

2. Pay attention to the significance of research materials and tips.

Three people who studied painting sold their masterpieces at the price of 1000 yuan on the way to study fine arts. Their first customers all said the same thing: "I'm afraid your paintings are not worth that much money?" Are other people's criticisms sincere and well-intentioned? Why do customers say such things? )

Not all other people's criticisms are sincere and well-intentioned, which is directly related to the critic's own personality and motivation. Customers may say this out of a kind reminder, or they may want to lower the price.

After hearing this, one of them carefully weighed his own painting and finally sold it for 2000 yuan. After hard work, he became a famous painter. This is Tintoretto. Why doesn't he listen to the customer? Did he do the right thing? Why? This shows what to do in the face of criticism from others. )

We should check ourselves against other people's criticism, so as to find out whether other people's criticism is in line with our actual situation. If it doesn't conform to our own reality, we will never follow blindly.

Hearing this, the other one just gently tore up the painting and changed careers, studying sculpture and becoming a master. He is the famous sculptor Yang Huizhi in the Tang Dynasty. Why should he listen to the customer? Is he right to do this? Why? This shows what to do in the face of criticism from others. If you find that other people's criticism is well-intentioned and conforms to your own actual situation, you should accept it with an open mind and listen carefully.

The third thought that his painting might not be worth the price, so he lowered his demand and sold it in 500 yuan. So far, he is only a third-rate painter, living by selling paintings and living a wandering life. He has always lived by our side. This third person does exactly the same thing as the second person, but why is the effect completely different? )

He doesn't make a concrete analysis of other people's criticism, but listens blindly, believes blindly and follows others' criticism blindly.

What conclusions can be drawn from the practices of the above three people? )

We should treat other people's criticism correctly, keep a clear head and take facts as the basis. Listen with an open mind when you should listen, and stick to yourself when you shouldn't. In short, we should correct what we have and encourage what we don't have.

This is the power of criticism. Criticism is sometimes the motivation to stimulate people's upward desire; Sometimes it is a turning point, leading to another peak of success; Sometimes it is poison, which can ruin a person's life if you are not careful. In fact, the most important thing is everyone's attitude towards criticism. Is the key word in the prompt "strength" or "attitude"? What kind of mentality do we need in the face of criticism? )

The key word is "mentality". In the face of criticism, we should have such a mentality: sincere and open-minded, rational and confident.

Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "criticism": the topic is self-made, the style is self-selected (except poetry), and the content must be within the topic.

(To sum up, should you write a composition on this topic from the perspective of critics or from the perspective of the criticized? )

3. What "meaning" can we "establish" by studying the meaning of materials and combining with reality?

(1) If yes, correct it; If not, encourage it.

Or (2) accept criticism from others critically.

Or (3) correctly "rationally" treat other people's criticism with a good attitude.

Or something else, such as "learn to grow in the criticism of others" and so on.

Among them, the best ideas are as follows: ① Because it reflects the theme most accurately, it can best reflect the correct mentality when facing criticism. )

4. Pay attention to what style of writing this topic is most suitable for.

grading standards

1, the conception is basically accurate, which can be higher than 36 points; If the topic is serious, it can only be lower than 36 points; Completely beside the point, it is even lower.

2. In addition to accidents, language, structure, materials and length are also important indicators for scoring. Based on these five aspects, the composition can be divided into grade one (above 50 points), grade two (45-49 points), grade three (42-44 points), grade four (36-4 1 point) and grade five (below 36 points).

3. If the number of words differs by one line (20 words), deduct 1 minute, and deduct 5 points at most (5 lines); If the difference is more than 5 lines, count the second volume (relatively complete structure) or incomplete volume (incomplete structure), and score 36-40 points if the intention in the second volume is more accurate; Whether the intention is accurate or not, the remaining amount is below 36 points.

4. If the topic is wrongly selected or misspelled, 1 point will be deducted; Deduct 2 points if there is no title. 5. Poor writing 1-3 points.

Main existing problems

1. In the examination of questions: deviate from the topic and talk about "the art of criticism", "the mentality determines success or failure" and "people's confidence"; Misunderstanding the concept, so that "criticism" is replaced by "slander", "blow", "frustration", "adversity" and "trial";

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"Edge ball" or "random interview", such as "the power of criticism is enormous, which can make people succeed or fail", and then talk about "the success or failure of life"; Smuggling entrained and added contents, such as writing "batch"

Comment on life, criticism and self-criticism, criticism and tolerance, etc. The concept is vague and lacks the necessary points; We can't look at the problem dialectically, so that we hold a one-sided and absolute view; Limited to materials, the whole article is practical, from

When the first person talks about the third person, the article is over.

2. Materials: There is nothing to say, and there is no basis; The material is inconsistent with the main idea; Copy the material in the question intact in the text; Too much or too little material; The material is fake.

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Writing: there is no clear central sentence; No penalty points, penalty points; Argumentative writing does not rely on logical reasoning to expand the level, but on describing and piling up examples to piece together the article; Argumentative essays are more narrative essays and less argumentative essays; Write at the beginning or end

Some irrelevant metaphors and parallelism sentences; There are also several unrelated ancients such as Li Bai, Tao Yuanming and Su Dongpo, all of whom have given hard resistance. The inscription 100 is more than one word, and the postscript 100 is more than one word, which is sparse in the middle. divide

The style of writing is erratic

4. Structure: write wherever you think, without structure and rules; Piece together, pile up, no logic, scattered articles; The argumentative essay is incomplete in structure and lacks the part of "how to do it" (this topic should be there). In short, it is chaotic, scattered and incomplete.

5. Language: lack of literary talent, even a lot of typos.

6. There are still some serious injuries, the topic is irrelevant, the words are misspelled, the words are not enough, and the writing is not good.

Some reminders

1, when writing a composition with materials and topics, be on the safe side and try to make the meaning of the article consistent with the meaning of the materials;

2. Pay attention to the tips when reviewing the questions;

3, the title should be drawn up;

4. Have a clear central sentence;

5. Put forward necessary opinions;

6. Write at the beginning and the end;

7. The materials should be accurate;

8. The logic should be strict and the level should be clear.

Article review

Pain and happiness.

Wang Huan

Criticism is the driving force of human progress and stimulates people's upward desire. Criticism is like a dazzling star in the night, which illuminates the way forward for us. In the face of other people's criticism, we should be painful and happy.

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Non-saints always make mistakes. At this time, someone mercilessly pointed out to us that we were damaged in vanity, embarrassed in face, and there would inevitably be pain and scars in our hearts. However, without criticism, we will

What will happen? Without criticism, it is like a mirror without mind. We can't realize our shortcomings, so we think we are perfect and omnipotent, so we are arrogant and conceited, so we do whatever we want, so we stick to our guns.

So we live in a world full of illusory happiness and terrible danger. Without pain, happiness is illusory!

Therefore, criticism can make us feel proper pain and keep necessary vigilance, so that we can finally get the truest, deepest and most lasting happiness.

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In fact, criticism brings us more happiness, just like those warm hands that guide us to the light when we are lost in the dark. After people are obsessed with one thing, they go their own way and ignore it.

Other people's opinions, regardless of other people's eyes, think that this is their own personality and outstanding performance, but they don't realize that it is very dangerous to do so, just like "a blind man rides a blind horse and rides a deep pool at midnight." At this time, a little kindness from others.

Italian criticism is really the most useful reminder. After listening, you can brake urgently and adjust it in time to avoid repeating the same mistakes. Therefore, criticism is sometimes a turning point, leading us out of the foggy swamp and into the sunny land.

On the road to success. Isn't it a kind of happiness to get such kind and even sharp criticism? Is there any reason not to be grateful but full of happiness?

Measure your own energy in the criticism of others.

National boundaries, unexpected potential will erupt. Without Wei Zhi's criticism, would Emperor Taizong create a prosperous era of "Zhenguan rule"? Criticism is like a friend, always around us, pointing out our shortcomings and helping us correct them.

Please don't refuse such kind help, and don't lose the happiness of being helped, rehabilitated and succeeded because of the pain of being criticized.

In a complex world, criticism is like a clear spring. How pleasant it is to wash the dusty mind with a stick!

Of course, not all criticism must be accepted. We can laugh at other people's unwarranted accusations, and we don't have to pay too much attention to other people's bad words. Why screw up your progress because others are vulgar and boring? It's not worthwhile to suffer for it, but it's crazy to be happy for it.

When faced with sincere criticism and well-meaning accusations from others, we should have a rational mind, a calm mind and a grateful mood. Be brave when you are in pain and happy, and correct when you know your mistakes.

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This is the most special article read by the reviewers. Pain and Happiness is the title of a book by Bai, and the author skillfully uses it as the main sentence of this paper, which is both in line with the theme and novel and unique. The article closely follows this point.

Sentences, from "pain" to "happiness", are very smooth and natural. The language is scattered and combined, and the momentum is seen in fluency. If the beginning and the end are more colorful, the article will be more colorful and more impactful.

Correct opinions to be approved

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Simple-minded, criticism is the imperial edict. I know that I am wrong and will not hesitate to correct it.

In a rebellious mind, criticism is a spark that can instantly ignite inner restlessness.

Criticism is the poison of inferiority complex, which can easily destroy a growing dream.

In a mature mind, criticism is like a fresh ganoderma lucidum, which instantly glows with youth.

Criticism seems to be a magical medicine with uncertain nature, which can make people "dead" or "alive", depending on whether you can find a matching medicine.

Some people pulled back from the brink after hearing criticism and walked out of the misunderstanding; Some people get angry after hearing the criticism, and finally get deeper and deeper.

Therefore, when you hear criticism, you should treat yourself correctly and not be impulsive.

This is an experience I had before.

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Twenty-three years old, rebellious and manic, seems so sure about everything. Impatience inevitably leads to carelessness. I remember once, I received an admission ticket for an art test, and my mother asked me to collect it myself.

Ok, I put it in my pocket. My mother reminded me: "Take it away! You will lose it like this! " I said impatiently, "I know!" But I didn't notice. Sure enough, I went shopping in the afternoon, because when I took something,

I forgot to take the admission ticket out of my bag. I didn't know it at that time, but fortunately my mother saw it. My mother scolded me as a result. At that time, because of my arrogance, I refused to admit defeat at all, but I accepted it in a rage.

The admission ticket was put back in my pocket. A few days later, just before the exam, I really can't find it. I was anxious and regretted not listening to my mother, but it was too late.

When I thought about it, I really felt stupid. Why gamble on that stupidity and refuse to accept criticism? Now that I think about it, I understand that when you listen to criticism, you should be calm and calm. Only with a calm heart can we examine ourselves correctly when we hear criticism.

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Therefore, when listening to criticism, we should keep a peaceful and modest attitude and not be arrogant and impetuous. In fact, criticism is a kind of vigilance after careful observation of others. It is like a mirror, which clearly shows its own shortcomings.

If you don't want to admit and correct calmly, who else can eliminate it for you? Isn't that why you have to bear those dirty spots all your life? Therefore, it is wise to face and accept criticism with an open mind.

It can make you erase the flaws in your life and make your life better.

Therefore, treating criticism correctly can help you improve yourself and become mature. Only by treating criticism correctly can he become a good medicine, cure the defects in your life and make you truly a successful person.

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The language is natural and fluent, and the metaphor and parallelism at the beginning are relatively coordinated, which has great influence (note: this sentence must be fluent and coordinated, and it must not be misused or abused). The article is closely related to the theme, with prominent center and rigorous structure.

In fact, it pays attention to the transition and care between levels, which makes the article clear and logical. The material selection is close to its own reality and more accurate. Disadvantages are monotonous hierarchy, too long intermediate narrative examples and reasonable reasoning.

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Incorporate criticism into your heart.

Guo Lei

Everyone makes mistakes. Life is like sailing against the current, and criticism is to push us away.

If you turn a deaf ear to criticism, the boat will lose its motivation to move forward, spin in place, and even be repelled by rapids; And blindly follow the criticism, the boat will lose its direction and drift with the flow.

Treat criticism naturally and put it in your heart, and the boat of life will have strong motivation and the right direction, and keep moving forward.

Broad-minded is the premise of rational treatment of criticism. Emperor Taizong has supreme status.

The honorable emperor is always criticized by Wei Zhi for what he has done. Emperor Taizong should have let Wei Zhi "disappear", but he always listened to Wei Zhi's criticism with tolerance, followed good advice, refrained from extravagance and frugality, and made great efforts to govern, thus creating "Zhenguan".

The flourishing age of "governance" Imagine if Emperor Taizong was narrow-minded, bent on his own way and didn't listen to correct criticism and suggestions. Then, limited to one person's reason, he would make many mistakes, and how could there be a prosperous time?

Treat criticism rationally, but also critically absorb the opinions of critics. We stand in the world, and others look at our behavior from the perspective of bystanders. Sometimes it is right, sometimes it is just a narrow view. Only by learning to critically absorb the opinions of critics can we correctly play the role of criticism.

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Coca-Cola Company, as a world-famous enterprise, also entered a trough because it blindly believed other people's opinions. Decades after the taste of Coca-Cola was introduced to the world, the managers of the company began to hear some negative opinions, some of which

Some people think its taste is too monotonous, too outdated and not fresh. Should be improved as soon as possible. So high-level personnel blindly listened to the criticisms and suggestions of these few consumers, and mobilized the employees of the whole company to carry out taste reform and change the original collocation.

The party is looking forward to the arrival of higher sales. However, since the formula was changed, the sales volume has decreased instead of increasing. At this time, many consumers criticized that these tastes were completely out of the proper taste of cola and changed to cola.

This time, the company leaders carefully analyzed the opinions of consumers and restored the original flavor of Coca-Cola before it came out of the trough.

How important it is to treat others' criticism correctly in business! At first, Coca-Cola Company blindly believed the criticism of a few people, which made the company fall into a trough. Later, it was criticized by most people, but it made the company see the light of day again.

Treating criticism rationally will certainly turn criticism into motivation and push us forward.

The road of life is long, but Xiu Yuan, if we treat other people's criticism rationally, we will certainly be able to search up and down and gain new hope.

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In the first paragraph of the comment, I put forward my point of view with a very vivid and interesting metaphor ("treat criticism rationally and take it into my arms"); Then, from the "broad mind" and "critical absorption" two aspects to expand the level.

Second, the former is the premise, and the latter is the key and logic; The former takes Emperor Taizong (ancient China) as an example for positive discussion, while the latter takes Coca-Cola (foreign contemporary) as an example for negative discussion, the change and angle of materials.

The changes in degree are intertwined, simple and rich, monotonous and diverse. Unfortunately, the sentence "take criticism into your arms" is vague and confusing, but it is still used as the title; After all, the level is not rich enough, and the reasoning ultimately lacks depth.

Degree; And language does not have literary talent and strong impact. Hope to continue to work hard!

Let criticism accompany us to success.

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Each of us will face criticism from others, which may make us go forward bravely or ruin our lives. Therefore, we must treat criticism correctly.

Criticism is a way to expose our own shortcomings. When what we do makes others unhappy, there will be criticism from them. At the same time, a gentleman's "saving himself from Japan's participation" also smacks of self-criticism. Criticism, because of its directness and even meanness, often makes us feel uncomfortable, which requires further understanding and understanding of criticism.

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There are two kinds of comments: one is out of goodwill, and the purpose is to make people constantly improve and criticize; The other is the malicious and despicable offensive criticism of some people. When we face these two kinds of criticisms, we often fail to do so.

Correct analysis and identification can be subjectively divided into "good" or "bad" only by the weight of tone. In fact, this is not right, such as the criticism of teachers and parents, although it seems heavy, but

Often they sincerely hope that we can get rid of our shortcomings and succeed. The criticism made by other so-called "enemies" who don't like us is often that they have nothing to say in order to slander me.

Our good mood makes us unhappy. For these two different situations, we should also have different countermeasures.

In any case, criticism will make us feel unhappy, so we might as well calm down and think about that person.

What will you criticize? Is there something wrong with yourself? Or ... in short, we can't blindly reject criticism and let emotions lead us by the nose. Criticism often hits the nail on the head.

Don't be angry about our shortcomings! As long as it is improved, won't anyone criticize this deficiency in the future? We should accept the criticism of teachers, parents and friends around us with an open mind and try to improve.

Life, it is in constant progress! Didn't the ancients often say that "good medicine tastes bitter and is good for illness, but advice when most unpleasant is good for action"? Relax, don't pay too much attention to the tone of criticism, but ask those who have nothing to criticize.

Don't pay too much attention to criticism, just ignore it.

Criticism can be used as a booster of life, stimulating people's upward desire, or as a beacon to guide us to the other side of success, but sometimes, if we don't treat it carefully, it will hurt ourselves. Therefore, we should all treat criticism with a calm and correct attitude. Let criticism accompany us to success!

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There are three highlights in commenting on this article: 1, which can dialectically analyze the criticism and take it as an argument, and the topic is accurate; 2. Starting from "there are two kinds of criticism", infer how to treat criticism correctly and have a clear thinking; 3, heavy

As far as arguments are concerned, the stylistic features of the article are more prominent. The disadvantage is: 1, the title is "Let criticism accompany us to success", but the article actually says "We must treat criticism correctly."

Comment "; 2. The level is monotonous; 3. Lack of accurate materials, especially factual materials; 4. Lack of language and literary talent.

Be kind to criticism

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In this life, we will encounter countless criticisms: indignation; A gentle and kind reminder; Hate iron not to produce; Objective and true comments ... Are you angry, depressed or sinking in the face of various criticisms? Do you care nothing, or should you be kind to these criticisms?

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To be criticized, don't let this chronic poison erode yourself. (Criticism is a "chronic poison"? Is this statement consistent with the specific content discussed later? If a person is just depressed and indulges in criticism, he may be better.

Erase your ambition and confidence a little bit. Setbacks and blows in life are criticisms again and again. Accept them sincerely and try to improve and treat them correctly. Are "frustration" and "blow" criticisms? Accept "frustration"

Fold ","strike "or" criticize "? ) You can walk through the ditch again and again. Dumas said: "Let's thank the criticism! Thank you for the pain after failure, thank you for being shattered after the attack, and thank you for being frustrated.

Fear and thank them for the pain they have caused us. (The four "thanks" seem a bit confusing) Let us clearly realize that we are still alive. "A person who is depressed in the face of criticism is just a person who can't see himself clearly.

Man, a timid coward, a walking corpse who has lost the sense of the road ahead. They turn criticism into chronic poison, eat people and ruin people's lives. Only by being kind to criticism can we find a rainbow on the beach after the rain.

Looking for your own oasis in the desert.

Be kind to criticism, don't be indifferent and angry with others' criticism. A person who dares not admit and face criticism is a person who dares not face shortcomings and life.

People, what qualifications, what confidence to realize their ideals and great achievements, and how to face themselves confidently? Only by being kind to criticism can we gain the motivation to move forward. Criticism is a mirror that shows shortcomings and makes people see themselves clearly.

Self, correct yourself and improve yourself step by step. Emperor Taizong said, "With copper as a mirror, you can dress straight; Taking history as a mirror, we can know the rise and fall; Take people as a mirror and you can know the gains and losses. " It is the mirror of good words that made Tang.

Emperor Taizong kept growing and making achievements, and made steady progress on the road of governing the country. Isn't the magnificent atmosphere in the history of China the natural result of Emperor Taizong's admonition and kindness to criticism?

Up and down for five thousand years, tens of thousands of miles.

The footprints of a successful person and the achievements of a great man are all critically washed and finally reach the peak of success. I can see that Churchill honed himself in countless criticisms, perfected himself and practiced greatness that surprised countless people.

A gift for debate; After training, I only "fall" on "practicing eloquence", which is a bit shallow and not in harmony with the next negative example. ) I also saw that Shang, Zhou and Xia Jie ignored criticism, abandoned their talents and their country, and eventually fell through the ages.

An infamous ending. Criticism has given us too much and taught us too much, and taught people how to treat criticism badly.

Be kind to criticism, and it will return you a lot. ...

[Brief Comment] The article has a clear-cut banner and follows the rules, and makes a clear and rigorous interpretation around the viewpoint of "being kind to criticism". The language is plain and neat, but the literary talent and flexibility are insufficient. The second and third paragraphs are not very tight, the views are a bit vague and the level depth is not enough. If the writing horizon is broadened, it will add some luster.

A review of symbolic number theory

Zhang Mao

If life is a book, then criticism is a meaningful annotation symbol in the book. For different chapters, criticism can be transformed into different symbols to interpret its true taste.

Criticism is a full stop.

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In the journey of life, no one can be smooth sailing, and no one can always be intoxicated with flowers and applause. It is inevitable to make mistakes and be criticized. The key is what attitude to take in the face of criticism. Some people are arrogant, others are arrogant.

People will underestimate themselves. After encountering the storm of criticism, they may become inferior, feel useless, feel inferior to others, doubt themselves again and again, and blindly deny themselves. As everyone knows, this inferiority complex after being criticized may be

Will ruin your bright future, and the result will be a big mistake caused by licking yourself. These people regard criticism as poison, blame themselves as an antidote to cover up their pain, and finally end up with an unfortunate ending? ("depravity" and "ending"? )

For these fools, criticism is a full stop, which will end a bright future.

Criticism is a question mark.

In the face of criticism, smart people will deeply reflect and seriously analyze their mistakes. They think criticism

This will be a turning point, guiding yourself to another peak of success. Einstein is such a clever man. Einstein loved music as a child and fell in love with playing the violin, but after practicing for a long time, his level was not good.

Progress is in direct proportion to efforts. When Einstein asked the teacher for advice, the teacher only left one sentence: You have no talent to learn the violin, and you can't learn to play it well. Such a harsh sentence came as a bolt from the blue.

The heart of little Einstein. Fortunately, Einstein accepted the teacher's criticism, walked out of the haze and devoted himself to the study of physics. After many troubles, the child who was looked down upon by the teacher finally became great.

This is the power of criticism. Criticism is like a thought-provoking question mark, which guides you to reposition yourself and start over.

Criticism is an exclamation point.

People often say, "Advice is hard to listen to.

Line up. "Criticism is always sharp, like a sharp dagger straight into the heart. But criticism has the power to inspire people. It is like a whip, and every time it is whipped, it will push the horse forward. In the eyes of some people,

Over the years, criticism is the wealth of their success, and they will regard criticism as a baptism of the soul and wash away the broken thoughts. Steve Jobs of Apple once made a big mistake and was criticized and fired by the board of directors, but the criticism made him suffer greatly.

Self-reflection, correcting mistakes, entering Apple for the second time, developing products such as i-pod, and making great contributions to the company. Criticism is like an exclamation point, which not only reminds itself, but also stimulates people's upward desire.

Criticism is a series of thought-provoking ellipsis, which brings us infinite thinking. Clever, do you want to turn it into a period, a question mark or an exclamation point? (It is wonderful to use "criticism is a series of intriguing ellipsis" to drive thinking.)

[Brief Comment] What does criticism mean to life? At the beginning of this paper, based on life, metaphor is introduced, and the theme is closely followed, and several different meanings are criticized, thus the full text is organized organically. The argument is clear but not conventional, and the language is clear. The disadvantage is that the article is not literary enough, and the content can be rich.

I hope I can help you!