Song Mei Yao Chen

The sun and foot clouds are intermittent, like a broken beach.

Suddenly Jin Shu began to know the Qin Nuwa.

Changed it to a cow, decorated with a single picture.

It's dark and crowded, and the forehead city has not been gouged out yet.

There was no wind, so I stood at the bow and watched.

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The black clouds in the evening breeze spread out, like a fragmented river beach, not yet connected.

Under the sunshine, the sunset glow on the horizon suddenly spread its golden tail, as if it were a group of phoenixes attracted by the fairy Nong Yu;

Later, it became a cow covered with colorful brocade, with a fiery torch tied to its tail, just like the fire bull array under the command of Qi Dan; In a short time, it became a silent infantry array, like secretly surrounding the enemy's village, waiting for an opportunity to raid at night and enter the cave city.

A gust of wind blew away the sunset glow, and there was nothing on the horizon, only I stood motionless at the bow and stared.

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This is a landscape poem written by the poet 1048 (Li Qing eight years). It fully depicts all kinds of clouds in the evening, with bright colors, wonderful metaphors and refreshing. Generally speaking, it is more difficult to write moving scenes than static scenes, especially to grasp the rapidly changing forms in objective scenery, which requires quick eyes and quick hands. It is the author of this article who "shakes his head and catches up with what he sees" (Su Shi's Biography of Yan Gu Yan Zhu), thus capturing and carving the fleeting wonders of the sunset glow.

Start with two sentences, write down the initial shape of the night cloud you see, and point out the topic conveniently. Mud is used to describe dark clouds, such as Cao Pi's Poem of Mourning for the Past: "The dark clouds are full of four plugs." "Temple" originally refers to sunlight shining through clouds, and "temple cloud" refers to low-altitude clouds at sunset. This sentence clearly describes the object.

The middle six sentences are written about the wonders formed by the change of sunset glow. Due to the influence of clouds and sunshine, the sunset glow on the horizon presents a colorful and gorgeous image: suddenly, the golden green tail unfolds like a group of phoenixes attracted by the fairy Nong Yu; Later, it became a cow covered with colorful brocade, with a fiery torch tied to its tail, just like the fire bull array under the command of Qi Dan; In a short time, it became a silent infantry formation, like secretly surrounding the enemy's village, waiting for a sudden attack at night and entering the cave city ... The poem "Qin Nvluan" refers to the phoenix, which is a story borrowed from Qin Mugong's daughter Nong Yu. Legend of the Immortal said: Young Shaw History taught Nong Yu to play the flute, making the sound of a phoenix, which attracted many phoenixes. Later, both of them "flew with the Phoenix". "Lian Niu" and "Zhuan Xiang" refer to the fire bull array, which is a story borrowed from Tian Dan. "Biography of Tian Dan in Historical Records" said: Tian Dan in the State of Qi fought against the State of Yan. He used more than a thousand cows, put on colorful dragon-shaped clothes, put daggers in the corners, tied torches at the tails and lit torches. The ox was burned and rushed to the enemy line angrily, and the Yan army was defeated. The sentence in "Waiting for the Black" is about the siege of Indiana Jones. Well, describe the height of the city; No gouge out, the acupoints are not dug through. Here, the poet let his imagination fly, and with the help of ancient stories and a series of complicated metaphors, he wrote the wonderful changes of the sunset glow, which was novel and ingenious.

The conclusion is the scene that the poet is attracted by the wonderful sight of the sunset glow. A gust of wind blew away the evening clouds and there was nothing on the horizon. The poet still stood motionless at the bow and stared. This not only implies the wonder of the scenery, but also keeps witnesses busy; He also wrote about the illusion of night clouds, when magnificent objects suddenly passed by. But also added the foothold of writing landscape, pointing out that everything described above belongs to what the poet saw on the way, thus enhancing the authenticity. Mei believes that a good poem should be "vivid and artistic" and "the difficult scene is what it is now". With the help of novel metaphors and associations, this article shows people a scene that is difficult to write in "Late Clouds".

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