In the ice ballet, I wrapped my thoughts in withered branches and leaves.
Bury sorrow in the weeds behind the house
When I was spinning ballet wildly on the frozen river.
The cold wind swept through my long hair.
I want to take my repressed heart away.
Ruthless, I laugh wildly at the cold wind
Cry for the cold frost
In the dirty sky
Another lingering winter rain.
I'm still spinning ballet wildly on the glacier.
When the plaintive flute rings
Wild and cold
Only the rustle of the sobbing north wind.
Fly on the ice with me
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This "Ballet on Ice" is novel in materials, fantastic in conception, lively in language, and reveals fresh life breath and children's interest between the lines. Only children who are full of infinite love for nature can have such a magical and appropriate metaphor.
Ballet Girl made me grow up. We are constantly changing ourselves every day, through parents, teachers, classmates, environment and many things we have experienced. Or teach us how to treat people and how to be a person; Or summon up our confidence and courage in the face of setbacks. Unconsciously, we gradually understand a lot of life truths, and unconsciously, we are also growing up. However, after the Wenchuan earthquake, I have been moved by the unimaginable strength of a girl. She inspired me to forge ahead; She encouraged me to face setbacks bravely; It is she who makes me love life more; It was she who made me feel more deeply about life and made me grow up overnight. She is "Ballet Girl" Li Yue.
The story goes like this: Li Yue, a girl of 1 1 years old, studied ballet for two years before the earthquake and was successfully rescued 77 hours after the earthquake. However, she lost her left leg forever. Fate seems to have killed all her hopes of becoming a dancer since childhood. However, with superhuman strength, she trampled on setbacks and sadness. At the opening ceremony of the Paralympic Games, she danced again, conquered the world with her perseverance and smile, and became a "ballet girl" admired by Chinese people.
Her strong and optimistic personality in the face of setbacks deeply touched me. I learned to be strong from her. Think about yourself. Although I am a sound person, I can never learn to be strong from sadness. Since the third grade, I have been suppressed by my classmates' accusations, and I haven't even said a word all day. From now on, if I do something right, I can discuss with my classmates patiently in the face of their accusations; If I do something wrong, I will take the initiative to admit my mistake and ask my classmates to forgive me.
I learned to be optimistic and face setbacks from her. In the past, if I didn't do well in the exam, I would pout and look angry. After reading the story of Ballet Girl, I was deeply moved. Why can't I face setbacks with her optimism? If you don't do well in the exam in the future, you can calm yourself down, seriously find your own shortcomings and correct them. It can be said that "Ballet Girl" taught me the truth of being a man and made me grow up.
Ballet Girl, thank you for giving me the opportunity to grow up and teaching me the character that a person should have-that is, being strong. A strong person is a truly perfect person.
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By telling the story of "Li Yue, a girl of 1 1 year-old", this narrative makes the young author realize the "strong and optimistic character of facing setbacks". The whole narrative is coherent, vivid and fluent, and its structure is quite special. Both the beginning and the end are "ballet girls", which is a very good exercise in general.
Feel the quiet rotation, gentle jumping, femininity and elegance of ballet. This is my first understanding of ballet. By chance, I met ballet. Young and ignorant, I only saw its radiant side, but ignored its hard and cruel side. ?
Every time a ballet dancer jumps, she doesn't know how many times she has to go through the test of blood and tears under the stage, and how many times she has to fall down and struggle to stand up under the stage every time she rotates. Someone once said, "What is the most beautiful dance in the world? It's ballet. What is the coolest art in the world? Or ballet. " Yes, ballet is a combination of angels and demons. Behind it, the actors' feet are baked again and again by red-hot iron sheets until long and thick cocoons are formed, while the actors often stand up in great pain until the oozing blood stains the vamp, but it has become the most popular dance in the world because of its cruel back. ?
When the ugly duckling flies high, people are only surprised at its beautiful moment, but ignore the fact that it is frozen in the ice and snow. When a person is successful, people often only envy his brilliant side, but ignore his back struggling under the lamp. Bing Xin once said: "A successful flower is often only surprised by its beauty, but its bud is soaked with sweat of struggle." Therefore, only countless falls can achieve your final glory. ?
I used to think that successful people were "Illuminati". Everywhere they go, they hear praise, applause and flowers, but they don't know that they have achieved themselves with their own intentions and beliefs in countless failures. They often say, "Life is like a trip. The scenery in front of us has never been beyond our control, and neither can we. All we can do is to stay calm after going out. " Rapids, cliffs and dead ends are not terrible. The key is how to convince yourself with reason and continue the next journey. "Yes, if ballet gives up its cruelty, how can it have its beauty? Beauty itself is not beautiful, but the story behind it, which makes it beautiful. ?
Goethe once said: "The reason why people's hands are upward is not to pick the most beautiful stars, but to maintain an upward posture." The beauty of ballet is best interpreted here. No music, just struggling, no audience, just myself. Although the stars are beautiful, they are short and cruel. It was so cruel that we couldn't cry out in pain, and it knocked you down severely; It's too short for us to face. It has disappeared without a trace, but our upward posture is eternal. Whether it is night or day, it will always go up and will not sag because it can't reach the stars. ?
Beauty is my pursuit, my dream, it is like a wisp of flowers, floating around my soul, and beauty will only be suddenly realized after you have tasted all the ups and downs and all kinds of life.
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At the beginning of this paper, I speak my mind directly, pointing out "my initial understanding of ballet", "quietly rotating, gently jumping, gentle and elegant" and quickly taking care of the words below the core word "sentiment" to express my feelings, which embodies a spirit of persistent pursuit. The writing is fluent and full of philosophical thoughts.
Lily, a ballet shoe, lay quietly on the wooden floor, scattered in the center of broken glass and water. The water spread around and merged with the tears dripping next to it.
The girl sat on the floor of the dance studio with her hair hanging down in front of her, covering her eyes that were crying quietly. Her thin body trembled intermittently, her messy dancing skirt stuck to the floor, but her dancing shoes were thrown somewhere.
This girl is fifteen years old. When she was ten years old, her parents sent her to learn ballet. At an early age, she was full of yearning for ballet. She likes the feeling of flying on the stage, and even wants to put on her white skirt and dancing shoes and fly with her youth.
At the age of thirteen, she finally got her wish to put on a skirt and dancing shoes, but just after two steps, she felt a terrible pain in her toes. Dance shoes are different from ordinary shoes. There is a cuboid block of wood at the front end of the shoe. She tried to stand on tiptoe like a ballet dancer on TV, but the severe pain in her toes made her fall to the ground again and again.
She stands in front of the big mirror in the dance studio every day, trying to jump out of the movements taught by the teacher again and again, but once she puts on these shoes, her feet won't listen to her and she doesn't need any strength at all. Every time she stands on tiptoe and walks in pain, her eyes are full of tears.
She wanted to give up more than once and hated dancing shoes more than once. This made her feet grind out one bubble after another. This made her legs unable to support her thin body. This made her graceful dance unable to show. This is a stumbling block on the ballet stage.
I don't know how many times she threw dancing shoes. However, whenever she calms down, she will remember what her mother, who is already in heaven, said to her: "Children, if you want to see the colorful sunrise, you must go through the darkness before dawn;" If you want to jump out of the beautiful ballet, you must be integrated with dancing shoes. "
Mother's words haunted her ears. The girl stopped crying, walked slowly to the front of the dancing shoes, put them on gently and continued to hover on the wooden floor.
Day after day, year after year. In the daily running-in with dancing shoes, the girl can finally wear dancing shoes to draw a beautiful arc on the floor freely.
At the age of eighteen, the girl performed in public for the first time, and her beautiful dance won warm applause from the audience.
The girl came to her mother's grave with a bunch of Bai Baihe in her hand. She stroked her mother's photo and told her "distant" mother, "Mom, I saw the morning glow." At this moment, the girl's smile and the fragrance of lily filled the clear sky instantly.
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This article "Ballet Shoes" is a narrative about people. The selected event is not big, but it is real and touching. The author pays special attention to expressing the situation, thoughts and feelings of the characters through the description of the environment and details, which is very valuable.
The light dance of ballet life, gentle melody, soft and close-fitting white gauze skirt.
Like a pure white swan, free and unrestrained. Ballet, the beauty of harmony and calm.
Warm and soft lighting, hazy and illusory stage, the beauty of ballet is being released and interpreted under the relaxed and pleasant melody. Soft as a cloud, light as the wind, pure as hibiscus, relaxed! Her beauty is intoxicating and amazing. Her beauty lies in lightness, her lightness comes from tiptoe, her beauty is the charm deduction of "four Liang", and her beauty is the freedom and perfection of "point" under tiptoe. The essence of tiptoe "point" explains the life art of ballet.
Rodin once said: "In this world, what is lacking is not beauty, but the eyes that find beauty." Ballet is beautiful, so pure, so wonderful ... The artistic achievement under tiptoe is not only a perfect interpretation of ballet itself, but also a rational thinking of ballet on life.
We marveled at the art of "dots" on the toes of ballet. While marveling, we are thinking about the meaning of ballet life, and we understand the wisdom of ballet life: life needs to find the support point of self-development and base on "point" to interpret the ballet of self-life wonderfully.
In fact, life is too subtle to be properly defined. I used to think that life was just a scenery that passed by in a hurry, and it passed away before I could taste it. People, just passers-by, are so mediocre all their lives ... long ago, they wanted to find something to enrich their lives. In an accidental time, they saw the interpretation of ballet and read Mr. Wang Yichuan's Brilliant Moment of Meaning. In a trance, they realized that it is possible to find that the "point" of ballet belongs to a certain moment, which is not brilliant, but it is also an epiphany when thinking about life.
The increasingly urbanized mind is full of people and traffic, full of specious ideas. Life is full of material desires and temptations. In today's modern civilization, life is mechanical and boring. We can't go with the flow like duckweed. Life should be full of wisdom and rationality. Like ballet, we should find the fulcrum to support development, constantly show ourselves and interpret life from the height of "point". Never envy the bright Polaris, nor be dazzled by the dazzling meteor. We all have our own little stars, calling us in the Xinghai. We should find that little star that develops itself and can light up the whole sky.
Throughout the ages, no matter Jia Xuan on Gubei Pavilion, Dongpo under Chibi, Tao Qian who scattered chrysanthemums, Lu Xun who shouted for awakening, Zhang Ailing who was in love for half a life, and Qian Zhongshu in the besieged city all expressed their national feelings and self-feelings endlessly. They have ideals, beliefs and determination. As contemporary college students, although we can't have the boldness of vision of great men, we can also perform a beautiful "ballet" on the stage of life, and we can also express ourselves and interpret life under the support of "points".
Life itself is a process of pursuing the limit, and the spiritual connotation of ballet is constantly being pursued and improved. With the role of support, we can draw brilliant light in the trajectory of life. In 2006, the deaf-mute dancers Huang Ge and He Lihua, who moved China, lived brilliant lives not because of their great contribution to society, but because of their own spirit. That "point" supports their lives and always performs their "ballet" on the stage of life.
I am far from being a philosopher, but I also know that life is like the sea. Sailors in life must dare to steer alone in the unpredictable sea, find the fulcrum at the helm, and fight and chase in the wind and waves, but they are not born with a beautiful life.
Young heart, pursuit of life. I like to pursue infinite sublimity in a limited space. Ballet's eternal interpretation of wonderful "points" on the stage inspires our understanding of life.
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This article is ingenious in conception and beautiful in language. The author quoted Rodin's famous sentences into the article, adding a lot of literary grace to the article, and expressed his maturity in Ballet Life with his personality with fluent and beautiful language and picturesque artistic conception.
On the road of growing up, I have a hobby and specialty, that is ballet. Ballet is difficult, but I think it is more interesting.
When I first learned ballet, my toes hurt and my legs were sore. Because your movements were not standard at first, the teacher always tried to pull your legs and even hit your hands to correct the position of your hands and legs. Sometimes I say you are wrong here, and sometimes you are wrong there. I feel ashamed to hear that. Nevertheless, I still insist on taking off ballet early every day. Jump for two and a half hours at a time. There is no rest time, but it is very regular. Pull up after practice, practice the middle, practice the middle jump, and practice the toe after jump. You can't waste a minute except tying your shoelaces or changing your shoes. Once, I felt so tired that I told my mother,' I don't want to learn'. My mother said, "don't be lazy, you have to perform." How can you give up halfway? "
So, I persisted for a while, and through continuous efforts, I danced ballet better. In 2009, I had the opportunity to perform in Malaysia. The performances and programs are wonderful. I was a little nervous when I went backstage to make up, but I looked in the mirror and said, "Wow!" " What lovely clothes, big eyes, small ears, long tail, a picture of an elf. At this point, my mood suddenly relaxed.
Here we go. The curtain of "Wow" opened and the audience applauded warmly. The performance has begun. As soon as I stepped on the stage, I danced on the stage like a little clever. Listening to the applause of the audience, I became more excited and more confident. Finally, our dance won the gold medal.
Looking at the medals, my heart is full of joy. From then on, I understood the truth that "one minute on stage, ten years off stage" and enjoyed the pleasure of success.
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This narrative describes the author's "learning to dance ballet". The language is unpretentious, such as "big eyes, small ears, long tail, an elf picture" and "one minute on stage, ten years off stage", full of life and rich feelings.
When I was nine years old, my mother told me that I was weak and asked me to learn ballet. As soon as I heard it, didn't all girls study this? I don't want to go. My mother seemed to read my mind and said, "If you study well, I will take you to Shanghai next summer vacation." Shanghai is my dream place. Well, well, for the sake of Shanghai, I decided to learn ballet.
So my mother found me a ballet training class and sent me to the training class. On the first day, I just started practicing the basic skills-learning to split. The coach told me to split my legs left and right. It was too painful, so I quit. It was so painful that I stopped studying. But another thought: if you study well, you can go to Shanghai. For Shanghai, you should listen to the coach and do it! But no matter how I chop it, my crotch is free. When the coach saw it, he pushed me down mercilessly, only to hear a "crack" and my leg rang! At this moment, I was in tears. I thought to myself: persistence can succeed, and giving up is equal to failure. My tears squeezed back in an instant.
Ten minutes passed, half an hour passed ... an hour passed, and I stood up and looked at the other partners, all practicing splits. I was going to continue practicing, but the coach asked me to learn from leg press. What? Leg press? Put one foot on the crossbar and grab the foot on the crossbar with your hand! Oh, it's simple. I did this, which aroused the dissatisfaction of the coach and said sternly, "Keep your legs straight!" " "I straightened up, but I couldn't catch my foot on the crossbar." Ah, "the voice couldn't help calling out from my mouth. It turned out that the coach was holding my waist and holding my feet with his hands. At this moment, I cried again. I thought it was easy to learn dance, but I found it difficult. On the first day of this training class, I felt like I was in a demon class. Coach did it too hard. I can think that I can go to Shanghai if I study well. I must stick to it. Giving up is tantamount to failure.
A month has passed, and it's time to take part in the competition. The coach chose me to participate. I don't want to go. I told the coach many times, but the coach should let me participate. I have no choice but to attend. But on second thought, isn't this an opportunity to test my training results this month? On the day of the game, my uncle accompanied me to the stadium. My uncle said, "Jump better, I like you!" " "The game began. I put on a ballet costume and walked onto the stage in pointed shoes. I started to jump, and my heart was pounding like a rabbit. Jump and jump, my heart dances to the music. After the game, I actually won the silver prize. This month's hard work is really worth it. I am so happy.
Ballet not only made me understand the truth that "persistence can succeed, and giving up is equal to failure", but also made me feel that no matter what I do, there is pain to be happy.
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The author of this article was deeply moved by the detailed description of "learning ballet" and felt its perseverance in the face of setbacks, thus realizing the true meaning of life. Delicate and vivid descriptions, such as "persistence can succeed, giving up equals failure", are very infectious.
Ballet is the holy night of 18, so quiet. The slightly dim sky embraces the Hangzhou Grand Theatre, from which some golden lights are revealed, which is somewhat sad and noble. I got goose bumps when I came to this noble place. This time, I am going to interview Lausanne Dance Company in Rebecca, Switzerland in English and enjoy their ballet performance.
Ballet has always been sacred in my heart. Think about it, stand on tiptoe, stand on one leg, turn around gently, turn around again and again, the more relaxed you are; Time and time again, it becomes more and more beautiful ... so beautiful! But to be honest, I really don't know much about ballet, so I added an expectation to this trip.
However, I was still very nervous when I interviewed in English for the first time. I didn't recover a little until the interview began. A dancer said that he thought the hotels in Hangzhou were luxurious and liked them best! This sentence made us all laugh, and I relaxed a lot, so I went forward and asked: Do you think it is difficult to learn ballet? He said he thought it was fun to learn ballet. Although it is sometimes difficult, he is very interested in it. Yes, no matter what you study, happiness is the most important thing!
I will enjoy the performance soon, and my reddish face is full of excitement. I followed the crowd into the room and sat in my seat. The performance began, and the dancers were absorbed in the performance. They are integrated into their whole body and mind and play their roles with heart. You see, a beautiful female dancer dances gracefully, makes several difficult movements, dances like a fish, and her limbs are very soft, which makes me envy ... All the dancers are elites, and they devote themselves wholeheartedly to this art.
Ballet is indeed sacred because so many people love it so much; Ballet is indeed sacred, because too many people perform it to the extreme. This trip gave me a new understanding of ballet. I think: when a person loves something so much, he will do it well regardless! Just like these dancers.
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In this paper, children's words are used to tell that "ballet is sacred". The language expression is clear and fluent, and the description of characters is very vivid, such as "dancing like a fish with very soft limbs", which can give people a beautiful feeling after reading and arouse readers' thinking.