There is a candle in my heart that will never go out, burning the fire of life forever, full of vitality and vitality forever. Isn't this candle like a person around us who deserves our admiration? He told us the truth of being a man in class; After class, she is our good friend. If a student encounters a problem that she doesn't understand, she will teach us patiently. Yes, he is our teacher. "Candles always remind us to think of others everywhere." This may be what teachers often say!
How many pearls did the teacher drop for us in a year? What about us? However, I often make her angry. I think it's really hard, and I regret it: I, a middle school student, didn't work wholeheartedly. Teacher, I want to say to you: "You worked hard for us, worked hard;" You took us into the ocean of knowledge and swam there, which made us understand the fun in the book; You prepare your lessons carefully and enjoy the wonderful lunch in the book with us; You care about us like a good friend; Is it you, is it you, or is it you! You are like a red candle, giving all the light and heat to the younger generation! Your quality and spirit can be described in two words-burning! Keep burning! You come to give us a lecture like a talking bird. It is so colorful. Each chapter seems to open a window in front of me and let me see a colorful new world. ...
Great teacher, we admire you.
(2) How can we write a good character appearance? We might as well start from the following three aspects.
1, the description should be "accurate". Accuracy is to accurately describe the appearance of a character, and the character will be authentic.
(1) People's appearance is often influenced by their status, occupation, age, upbringing, habits, life experience, family environment, physical condition and other factors. People in different occupations often have different appearances.
For example, dancers have thick legs and slender limbs; Weightlifters are often strong; Fishermen, on the other hand, have darker skin and open their toes like cattail fans, because they have been walking on the boat for a long time. There are obvious differences in appearance between people of different ages. Children are innocent and lovely, young people are full of blood, middle-aged people are mature and steady, and old people are deaf and blind. All these reflect the natural laws of his life.
(2) Of course, people's different habits often show different characteristics. For example, smokers seem to lack front teeth and smell tobacco from time to time; Non-smokers have white teeth. People's upbringing is different, and it can often be seen from the appearance that educated people are sitting and standing; Educated people speak elegantly and clearly; Uneducated people sit and stand unsteadily, and speak rudely and disorganized ... These must be carefully observed and described in accurate language in order to accurately portray the image of the characters.
Example 1: I have a small head and a long face like my mother and thick eyebrows like my father. There are many brown freckles on the face that is not white enough. Because of the incorrect posture of reading and writing, I became nearsighted, which is not correct. Recently, I wore a pair of glasses on my nose. Although I am not beautiful, I have never worried about my appearance.
Analysis: Features: freckle+myopia.
Exodus 2: My father is the first mate of a merchant ship of an ocean shipping company. He is very tall, his yellowish hair is naturally curly, his white square face is embedded with a pair of smart eyes, and his nose is particularly big under his high nose. When I was a child, I often looked at his nostrils and asked, "Dad, why are your nostrils so big?" He always answers with a smile: "Dad belongs to a horse, and a horse with a big nose runs fast. Dad was a sprint champion at school when he was a child. Do not believe you ask your mother. " At this time, my mother and I will look at his big nostrils and laugh.
Analysis: Features: large nostrils.
2, the appearance description should be "fine", and the sketch describing the teacher's appearance (/). The essence is to carefully choose the appearance characteristics of the characters, concentrate on pen and ink description, and make the characters accurate and clear.
There is no one who looks exactly the same in the world. According to the needs of performance, we should carefully choose the distinctive features from the appearance of the characters, concentrate on pen and ink description, and omit or brush away the others to make the appearance of the characters more accurate and distinctive.
Sometimes, according to the actual situation of the materials at hand, or for the need of some kind of expression, we can put the highlight of appearance description on a certain part of the character. If you write grandpa's hand, it's hard and cracked. Although ugly, it is a testimony of hard work. Help me knit toys and be smart. Writing in this way will often make the hardworking and clever grandfather jump to the page.
We can often write new ideas by carefully choosing the distinctive appearance of the characters, accurately describing them.
Example 1: Grandpa is as thin as an old osprey.
Analysis: Appearance characteristics: thin; Status Occupation: Poor old fisherman.
Example 2: Xiao Mingjuan holds a pencil in her left hand and presses her right hand on the exercise book. Her face is slightly pale, her big round eyes are staring at the front, flashing with extraordinary splendour burned by curiosity, and she is clearly shouting: "I want to study!" " "
Analysis: Appearance characteristics: eager eyes; Inner feelings: I want to learn.
3. The description of appearance should be "deep". "Deep" means that the description of the appearance of the characters should reflect the spiritual quality of the characters and write the depth of the characters.
When describing the appearance of a character, we should focus on choosing the appearance characteristics that best reflect the character's ideological quality, mental outlook, personality characteristics and temperament and emotion, so as to make the character image more vivid and touching and reach the realm of spiritual likeness.
Of course, we should also pay attention to the order of writing, choose a good writing angle, regardless of the front, back and left, face up, side down, head down, and look at it from a close distance. From which angle can we describe the mental outlook and personality characteristics of the characters best?
Appearance description should also be combined with the description of characters' movements, demeanor and language, so as to better express the characters' personality characteristics and write vivid characters.
Example: the dirt runner described by Lu Xun (young "red and lively", middle-aged "pine bark")
(C), the emergence of the "five laws"
1, sketch description.
It is to draw vivid and vivid characters with concise and simple pen and ink without rendering or contrast or rhetoric. The application of this description method can give readers a simple and vivid impression. For example, in Mr. Fujino, Fujino's "black and thin", "moustache", "slow and very depressed tone", "wearing glasses and carrying a pile of books", his clothes are "fuzzy" and he wears an old coat in winter. Grasping the characteristics, sketching a few strokes, vividly portraying a scholar image with simple life and rigorous scholarship.
2. Comic description.
In character description, it is necessary to emphasize a certain feature of the character's appearance, and exaggeration can be used. Describing a person's appearance in an exaggerated way is a comic description. For example, Lu Xun's "Ah Q": "The most irritating thing is that there are many scars on his scalp that I don't know when." Although this is also on him, it seems that it is not expensive to see the meaning of Ah Q, because he dare not say' Beijing' and his pronunciation is close to' Lai'. Later, he popularized, as well as "lights" and "light", and later, even "lights" and "candles" were popularized. "Mr. Lu Xun grasped the most striking and humorous feature of Ah Q's appearance-the scar on his head, and made an exaggerated description in humorous language. Showed a humorous cartoon for readers.
3. Detailed description.
Meticulous brushwork refers to the detailed description of characters with pen and ink. Just like the close-ups of figures in movies or meticulous figure painting in paintings, the appearance characteristics, costumes, clothes and subtle expressions of figures can make readers see clearly and leave a deep impression. For example, in Liu Shaotang's "Yu Qian Fan": "My aunt is bolder than others: she wraps black and shiny big braid around her neck, with white teeth biting her braids and bare feet, holding the tree body thicker than her waist with both hands and spinning until she climbs to the top of the tree and straddles the branches." This passage vividly depicts a "wild" and "bold" hungry "aunt" with meticulous brushwork. The detailed description of the appearance of the characters is unforgettable.
4. Indirect description.
That is, the author does not directly write the appearance characteristics of the characters, but expresses the appearance characteristics of specific characters by writing the reactions of people around him. This method is implicit and meaningful, giving people a broad imagination space. Rusang described Luo Fu's outstanding beauty: "When the monkey saw Luo Fu, he put his moustache on his shoulder. When the teenager saw Luo Fu, he took off his hat and hung his head. The tiller forgets to plow, and the hoe forgets to hoe. Come to complain, but sit and watch Luo Fu. " "Monkey" saw Luo Fu put down his baggage, touching his beard, and immersed himself in the enjoyment of beauty. "Teenager" saw Luo's father take off his hat and only wore a scarf, hoping to attract the girl's attention. The "cultivators" and "hoes" near Luofu are not the first to see Luofu, but they often stop working because of watching Luofu, which leads to the delay of working hours. None of these words directly describe Luo Fu's appearance. We don't even know whether Luo Fu is tall or short, slim or plump, but we just think she is beautiful. Indirect description is implicit, adding endless charm and charm.
5. Use rhetoric to describe.
Describe the appearance by metaphor, exaggeration and contrast.