2. The content is empty. For PS, experts have always stressed that they must write with examples to show their ability and love for application specialty. Many applicants write PS, many of them state their abilities, are interested in their major, have learning ability and strong hands-on ability. They put these personal characteristics in the article, but there is no following to support the above argument, which is unconvincing. A good PS is enriched by examples, and the excellent quality and ability of candidates are also shown to readers through examples, not simply enumerated.
3, wordy, the language is not concise enough. The PS language written by many applicants is not concise enough. When exclamatory sentences or modal particles are used properly, it is easy for readers to resonate, but in an article, repeating such sentences, especially similar sentences, is melodramatic. It can't impress readers.
The recommendation letter should pay attention to:
First, it is objective and true. There is no denying that letters of recommendation are praised to some extent, both at home and abroad, but they must not be praised. After all, the applicant is going for further study. If it is "perfect", why should it be lost overseas?
Second, the real case. The quality and ability of the applicant demonstrated through real cases are the most credible and convincing. Whether it is a letter of recommendation or in real life, we should avoid emptiness in evaluating a person. Gorgeous words are beautiful, but they are not supported by real and reliable examples and still have no reference value.
Third, pay attention to the angle and tone of writing. Because the recommendation letter is evaluated by a third person, the applicant should pay attention to the expression and angle when writing. Change your mind and try to write in the tone and angle of the professor or other referees.
Fourth, we should avoid obvious low-level mistakes such as grammar and spelling.
Fifth, we should pay attention to the collocation between letters of recommendation. American universities basically require applicants to submit three letters of recommendation. This is because American schools value the ability of applicants not only in one aspect, but also because students have strong learning ability or practical ability. What they want to see is the applicant's comprehensive academic and non-academic image. Therefore, when writing a letter of recommendation, we should pay attention to showing the quality and ability of the applicant from many aspects to avoid repetition. Letters of recommendation should be well matched to reflect the quality and ability of the applicant from different aspects. Through the letter of recommendation, you can be fully recognized by the admission Committee.
Matters needing attention in writing resume:
1, personal information, that is, personal information, including your name, contact address and telephone number, emai.
2. Education, that is, starting from university, starting and ending time, school, department, degree, GPA, thesis title. You can write some core courses you have studied, but be careful not to overdo it. 5-6 courses are enough.
3. Personal experience is experience. Including work experience, academic experience, volunteer experience and so on. : the beginning and end of time, the name, position, brief description of job responsibilities and specific work of the company or institution. This part can be written emphatically.
4. Honor is honor. It's all kinds of rewards you get. Academic and social activities should be respected. The format is: time, award name, award unit (in English), award scope (that is, how many students are selected, according to the department or the whole school), and award reason.
5. Personal publishing. Title, author, time, magazine (including page number) (in both Chinese and English, the original magazine shall prevail). Attach importance to academic works.
6. Participating organizations, namely members &; Affiliation. That is, what clubs, associations and the like you have joined. At the same time, indicate your position and work.
7. Others: including standardized test scores, computer skills, major experimental skills, hobbies, etc. Note that different majors should have different emphases, and you can add some things that are helpful to the application.