Beginning of composition
1, the beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the environmental description sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic.
2. The beginning is brief and to the point.
3. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
5. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
6, the beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers.
7. The beginning is touching and has real feelings.
8. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
9. This article is novel in material selection, which aroused readers' desire to read.
building-up process
1, spoken English is widely used in life, which makes the article more natural and friendly.
2, focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.
5 ... tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.
7. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
9. This article is lyrical in narration.
10, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.
1 1. The author observes carefully and narrates orderly.
12, the use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
13, the article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
14, the article is reasonable.
15, through vivid language description, let readers feel like they are in a dream.
16, the article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely surrounding …
17, the details are quite clever. Extremely rich in skills.
18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.
19, delicate description, strong life breath, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
20. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.
2 1. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their identity characteristics.
22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is true and interesting, and the writing is reasonable.
23. The article writes in detail that ...
24. The language is lively and interesting.
End of synthesis
1, the ending is just right, the center is clear, the language is concise and profound, and it is thought-provoking.
2, use the feeling switch, ending with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
4. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
5. Focus on the end to express emotions, give consideration to the beginning, and summarize the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
6. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.
7. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
8. At the end of the article, the central sentence is really clear, and the conclusion is short and powerful.
9. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. Words are done, meaning is still unfinished.
10, the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
1 1. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.
12. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
13, the end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
14, ending in …, clear and meaningful.
2. How to write a good composition evaluation is generally a very formal thing!
This student is a qualified college student with good academic performance. He is a serious and responsible student, good at thinking, strict with himself in life, sincere, enthusiastic, practical and responsible, able to complete the tasks assigned to him well, and has certain team spirit and innovative ability.
This student is an all-round excellent college student, who actively demands progress, respects teachers, is helpful, has strong learning autonomy, excellent grades, has the sense of challenging competition and innovative ability, is conscientious and responsible in his work, has good leadership organization and communication and cooperation spirit, has a wide range of interests and hobbies, and has good psychological quality.
The student is diligent and earnest, excellent in study, positive in thinking, United and friendly, and can finish the tasks assigned by the teacher in time. As a class cadre, I am conscientious and responsible in my work, do a good job in cleaning the dormitory, respect teachers, abide by various systems, have strong hands-on ability and application ability, and actively participate in various social activities and social practices.
The student is honest and trustworthy, upright, practical, well-planned and conscientious. Study hard, work hard, respect teachers, care about classmates, have harmonious interpersonal relationships and be positive. I joined the first computer interest group of Taihu University, observed the rules and regulations of the school, actively participated in social activities, and was enthusiastic about public welfare undertakings. I once participated in young volunteers in Wuxi and won an award.
The student has a correct learning attitude, studies hard, has passed CET-4, and has strong thinking ability and practical ability. Hard-working, simple and generous, serious about work, get along well with classmates, respect teachers, abide by various systems and have rich social practice experience.
I want to make progress ideologically, be close to the Party organization actively, study hard, like sports, be helpful, live in harmony with my classmates, respect teachers, abide by various systems, have rich social practice experience, and have strong hands-on ability and innovation ability.
3. Composition evaluation How to write the composition evaluation of the sixth grade in primary school is the teacher's evaluation of students' homework, which provides a platform for improving students' homework level.
How to use this platform? I will throw a brick to attract jade and say a few of my ways: people often say that a compliment can warm a winter. A teacher's comment full of affectionate encouragement and praise is a good medicine to cure students' "headache" and "upset" in writing, and it is also a sweet and far-reaching "sugar-coated tablet".
There is a child in the class who is very clever, but afraid of writing. Once, I asked to write about a classmate, and he wrote "A Funny Man" seriously.
The composition begins with a question and answer, then tells a funny story, and finally reveals the mystery. It turns out that this funny person is himself. Obviously, this does not meet the requirements of this exercise, but this composition is really good.
So I wrote this comment: "1. Outstanding advantages: the article is novel and fascinating. It is suggested that after printing, the teacher help you contribute! 2. Friendly reminder: if you write yourself so well, then from another angle, with your discerning eye, you can certainly write your classmates' well, right? Don't believe me, give it a try! " .
4. How to write comments on Chinese composition in primary schools? Example of correcting Chinese composition in primary schools: A is written delicately and neatly, just like a street in a seaside town, without any dirt ... Straight handwriting makes people feel very comfortable ... Your handwriting is as beautiful as printed ... I am ashamed that my handwriting is not as good as yours ... B, casually, how can it not be like a cat's handwriting ... It is not in the middle of the grid. Is it because the wind is too strong today ... I don't believe that your handwriting is not good, and you will always be so sloppy ... Write carefully and patiently, and you will write better than me ... Content A is as rich as the author's ... Your exercise is flesh and blood, and reading is really a great enjoyment ... Your composition is very specific, and I read it happily ... I must love it at ordinary times. Write so many words ... The fluent and vivid sentences in Statement A are like Lushan Waterfall, flowing down the river smoothly ... This metaphor is very apt, which shows that you have always been very careful in observation ... How did you come up with such a clever anthropomorphic sentence ... How appropriate this rhetorical question is to be used here ... This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time ... The ancient poetry is quoted just right. In the future, I will use the poems I have learned in my composition ... My stomach hurts when I laugh ... B The composition is bumpy and difficult to read, just like walking on a bumpy road in the country, and I will easily fall down if I am not careful ... The sentence seems to be cut off and incomplete ... Write well.