Your self-summary is too formulaic, because most people write it like this now. You should write something about your work and try to write as few formulaic sentences as possible when evaluating.

For example, you have done administrative work.

An administrative assistant with internship experience completes the classification and sorting of data every day in this work.

Coordinate all departments to do a good job, draft and file company documents, receive and contact outreach companies, etc. . Not as general as you write;

Self-evaluation can be written in the work, learn more about how to do things, how to be serious, how to get along with people, and have a better development in your treatment of people. . Writing should be humanized, not formulaic.

And the more experience, the better. Resume is to be concise, not too procrastinating. You can read some excellent resumes on the internet, but it doesn't mean you can copy them completely. You need to have your own style and be sincere.

There are special skills and so on. If you can cook, you can also write that you can cook spicy and hot fish, but writing about singing and dancing is not necessarily new.

Hehe, having said so much, I wish you good luck in your work. Let's go