The article "Internet Help" tells the story of Susan, a Finnish female college student, who relapsed her old illness and sought help online. With the help of American boy Thorne, she was finally rescued, showing the speed and convenience of modern information technology and the virtue of mutual help and friendship between people.

According to the incident, the full text is based on the idea of "calling for help-rescue-being rescued":

Call for help-The article first wrote the information that American boy Thorne got a call for help on the Internet, and then described who the caller was and why he called for help.

Rescue-describes in detail how Thorne rescued Susan through the emergency rescue center.

Rescued-Briefly describe how Susan was finally rescued with the help of Thorne, Amy and rescuers.

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Main writing characteristics

1, write mutual assistance first, and then explain the reasons to enhance the expression effect.

From the beginning, the article highlighted the content of Susan's online help, and went straight to the meaning of the problem. It seems that the incident is sudden and urgent, and it is easy to attract readers' attention, thus generating concern. Then, use supplementary brushwork to explain the ins and outs of the matter, so that readers can understand the reasons for calling for help, clearly and orderly.

If you write first that Susan is suddenly ill and can't move, and there is no phone around, then you have a brainwave and use the Internet to transmit information. It is too slow to get into the topic and can't cause tension, so the expression effect will naturally be greatly affected.

2, point out the time, enrich the connotation, and receive a double effect.

Pointing out time for many times is rich in connotation, and we can understand the author's intention mainly from two aspects.

First of all, modern information technology is fast and convenient. For example, a distress message was sent at "nearly 6 o'clock", the emergency rescue center was connected at "6 o'clock 14", Amy connected the phone in Finland, and rescuers rushed to the school to rescue Susan "a few minutes later" ... Finland and the United States are far apart, but modern information technology is developing so fast.

The second is to show the spirit of helping each other. It's already "after two o'clock in the morning" in Finland, but Thorne is still contacting Susan for help. Amy from the American Emergency Rescue Center and the rescuers from the Finnish Emergency Rescue Center are also racing against time, and there is no time to delay. How valuable is the spirit of mutual assistance between people.