"The dwarf pine on the mountain is getting darker and darker, and there is a bun of white flowers on the top of the tree, like a Japanese wet nurse." Using Japanese wet nurse to describe the scene of dwarf pine standing against the snow vividly shows the fresh and lovely shape of dwarf pine after snow, which not only makes dwarf pine full of vitality, but also makes people feel novel and unique.

"On the hillside, some places have thick snow, and some places are still grassy; In this way, one is white and the other is dark yellow, and the mountain is covered with a floral dress with water patterns. " Here, the "water-patterned flowered clothes" are used to describe the yellow and white beauty on the hillside after snow, which is full of layered aesthetic feeling, making the vast scenery on the hillside seem subtle and sensible, not out of reach.

"When the sun is about to set, the yellowish sunshine shines obliquely on the hillside, as if Bo Xue suddenly felt ashamed and showed a little pink." This sentence uses the figure of speech of word splitting. Word splitting is a common rhetorical device. Clever use of word splitting can not only make things clear vividly and concisely, but also express feelings better.

Taking "shyness" apart in the sentence not only makes the whole sentence rhythm harmonious, but also vividly depicts the beautiful modality of the setting sun's oblique snow color. Moreover, the state of "shame" is the author's unique feeling, which can better reflect the author's love for "erudition" than "shame" This sentence is also described, using the word "slightly" to simulate the beautiful expression of sunset snow, which makes people really feel the scene of "dew".

"It's just a light snow. Jinan can't stand heavy snow. Those hills are so exquisite! " This sentence uses a complicated sentence pattern, which could have been written in the same format: "Can't stand the heavy snow in Jinan", which forms a unified format with the previous sentence, but the author changed it in order to avoid dullness and let the feelings show naturally.

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In Winter in Jinan, Lao She, contrary to the heavy and vicissitudes of realism in the past, depicts a treasure land of winter in a relaxed and natural style. The theme of this article is to love and praise Jinan's unique winter scenery. Through the description of Jinan's winter scene, it fully embodies the author's love for Jinan's winter and the city, as well as the author's life sentiment of loving nature, life and life.

Creation background

Lao She came to Shandong around 1930, and taught in cheeloo university of Jinan and Qingdao University of Shandong for seven years. He has a deep affection for Shandong, which is called his "second hometown". According to Lao She's wife Hu Jieqing, Lao She "often misses the years she spent in Shandong from marriage to the outbreak of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression".

This article was written by Lao She193/KLOC-0 when she was teaching in cheeloo university, Jinan in the spring of. It turned out to be the fifth in a series of long prose "Some Impressions" that directly described Jinan's scenic spots, and it was published in the sixth issue of European Volume I of Qi Da Monthly (193 1 April).

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