Compared with self-recommended students, students with secondary school recommendation qualifications are more likely to pass the preliminary examination in colleges and universities, so if possible, parents are advised to strive for school recommendation qualifications as much as possible. If the self-recommended students don't have hard proof of winning the prize, the only thing that can convince the college teachers to give the candidates a chance to take the exam may be the personal statement materials.
It is not easy to write a personal account. You need to invest a lot of time and energy. In the initial stage of independent enrollment, personal statement is an important means for college enrollment teachers to understand students. The main criterion for candidates to pass the initial stage of independent enrollment is personal statement. A good personal statement is a booster for candidates, and even an excellent personal statement can determine whether you can pass the initial stage.
Before writing a personal statement, you should clear up a train of thought. Recall the stories and characters that had a great influence on you when you were growing up, and then list all your strengths and specialties. Don't feel that you don't have any strengths. You can discuss with your parents or some close people and discover and know yourself through their mouths.
Learn more about the characteristics of the university you want to apply for through various channels, but it is difficult for a senior three candidate to understand the characteristics of a university in a short time. We can first check the university motto, history, regional characteristics, dominant disciplines, some touching stories, famous teachers and well-known alumni on the Internet to learn about a university. In addition, you need to know what career you want to pursue in the future, whether it conforms to your life ideal, and what courses you want to study in the university.
Next, you need to determine the general idea of an article, and combine the characteristics of the university and major you are applying for to determine which advantages and majors you should focus on. Then you need to establish the idea of sorting out the article, the expression at the beginning should be novel, and the middle part should focus on your specialty and learning and growth process, plus some feelings about your life. Finally, you'd better explain the reasons for your application to this university and major, and then express your plans for the future and your ideals.
The general framework of such a personal statement is relatively complete.
There are some precautions in the writing process:
1, to distinguish between primary and secondary, focused; Be sure to write around the content and ideas determined in advance. When writing, don't give a hammer and a stick. If you think it's so important, it's also important. Everyone wants to put it in and write themselves well. This lack of coherence in the article makes readers and teachers feel that you are impetuous. Be sure to highlight the advantages that can meet the requirements of your university and major among many advantages, and simply mention other advantages, or even not mention them;
2, new ideas, there must be a better starting point. A good beginning can impress your teachers and attract them to read;
3. The main body of the article is expository text, which can be expressed in many ways, such as narration, discussion, description and lyricism.
4. As a result of explaining the situation of candidates, insert the awards won by candidates into candidates' hobbies, articles, opinions and stories. Make the most of the prizes won in high school. There's really nothing to use before high school. Write down the ranking and name of the award. The use of these awards should be organically combined with the article to explain your strengths and advantages, and you can't write for the sake of explaining the awards;
5, sincere feelings, not artificial. When the concrete image shows the candidate's achievements and abilities, the key is to be sincere and show a real person; For a candidate who applies for science and engineering and whose language performance is not very prominent, the text should be as simple and straightforward as possible, and there is no need to pile up so many gorgeous words;
6. Give full play to the personality of post-90s college entrance examination candidates. Everyone has their own dreams. Imagine that at least three or four thousand people apply for the independent enrollment of a university every year, and a recruiting teacher may need to look at thousands of personal statements. A good article will not make the teacher feel bored, but will like you through your personal statement;
7. When writing, students with good writing style should pay attention to the fluency of words, no typos and mistakes, a certain literary talent, concise and meaningful words, the ability to quote classics, and the use of rhetorical devices such as parallelism, personification and metaphor to highlight their personality, which can make the marking teacher leave a deep and beautiful impression when reading;
8. You can write down why you want to apply for this university, why you want to apply for this major, and appropriately show the candidates' yearning for the university and their love for the major.
Letter of recommendation for independent enrollment of Beijing Normal University
Dear teacher:
Hello.
My name is * * and I'm eighteen years old. I am a senior three student in Zhongwei No.1 Middle School in Ningxia Hui Autonomous Region. Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to read my recommendation letter. Your school has a long history, profound cultural heritage, rich teaching resources and good academic atmosphere, and has trained many outstanding talents for the society. It is the key construction university of "2 1 1" project and "985" project directly under the Ministry of Education, and many majors are among the best in China. Many of my brothers and sisters have chosen your school as their first choice. I am also eager to get your admission notice next summer. I hope to be a student in your school, pursue further studies in your school, become a useful talent for society and the motherland, and become a witness to the glorious history of your school. I hope this independent entrance examination can change my life track, let me fall into the arms of your school, and hope to be admitted to your school. I think I have such qualifications.
I come from the experimental class of science in Zhongwei No.1 Middle School. In this class, my academic performance is always slightly superior. Such achievements have made me firmly rooted in the forefront of school academic performance. In fact, my potential is still great, and my score still has room for appreciation. My in-depth analysis of problems and mastery of knowledge are not fully reflected in my thesis. Many times, my answer is correct, but the problem-solving process is not understood by the marking teacher. Sometimes, the process is clear, but the result is missed because of a small mistake. I chose your school because I think your school pays attention to both process and result. I think I am personally suitable for education in your school. I'm a science student, and I pay attention to being well founded. I not only attach importance to IQ, but also attach great importance to the development of emotional intelligence while developing brain intelligence resources. I was a math class representative when I was a freshman. At that time, I collected and distributed homework every day to help teachers complete their teaching tasks. When I was a sophomore, I was assigned to a liberal arts class and was elected as a representative of biology class by my classmates. After studying, I often help students with weak biology and explain problems to them. Therefore, I was welcomed by my classmates and was selected as "three good students" many times. I took an active part in class activities, and once arranged historical dramas "Tiger Symbol" and "Thunderstorm", which were warmly praised by my classmates. In the debate organized by our school, I helped our class win all six wars and hung the banner of "first place". In my opinion, senior high school students should develop morally, intellectually, physically and aesthetically. Senior high schools should not only cultivate "talents" with a large amount of knowledge reserves, but also cultivate "talents" who can fully and flexibly use knowledge reserves. My goal in high school is not only to be admitted to a famous university like your school, but also to have enough food and clothing in the future. My goal in senior high school is to become an all-round high-quality talent with thoughts, morality, knowledge and skills. I want to devote myself to the modernization of the motherland. I don't want to be a knowledgeable person with nothing to do and a mediocre life. My interest in literature has broadened my horizons and broadened my thinking. He has published more than ten essays in provincial and municipal newspapers and many articles on Lianyuan original literature website. I think a big tree, no matter how big it is, its roots are always deeply rooted in the soil. The root of literature is deeply rooted in China's long-standing traditional culture. I like Journey to the West, especially Romance of the Three Kingdoms and Dream of Red Mansions. I love Romance of the Three Kingdoms because it is simple and capable, and I like Dream of Red Mansions because it is gentle and lovely. Reading that Zhuge Liang fell after five wars, there is always infinite lament. Every time I see the scene of Lin Daiyu before she died, I can't help but say "Baoyu, you-"and "Baoyu, you are so cruel." Then my heart ached. I think The Romance of the Three Kingdoms has taught me to look at problems with suspicion, and A Dream of Red Mansions has taught me to solve problems with an ideal vision. I use traditional masterpieces to build a unified bridge between ideal and reality. I am also proud of my achievements in the Olympic Games. what can I say? My grades are not the best, but they are enough to make me proud. When I was a freshman, I took part in a chemistry competition and won the third prize in the city. At that time, I was just trying. When I was a sophomore, I started taking biology classes. My interest in biology made me take part in the competition class without hesitation and devote myself to the vast ocean of "biology" In fact, it is only ten days from the city competition and only half a month from the provincial competition. Hungry for less than ten days, I chewed up the 600-page Biology Olympiad Course and did dozens of exercises at the same time. Many things happen. I entered the provincial competition as the second place in the city competition. In order to meet the provincial competition, I taught myself the college biology course and did the Olympic math test for nearly five years. Busy until late at night every day and get to the school library early in the morning. At that time, the school was holding a summer sports meeting, and the athletes were sweating profusely on the field. I was sweating in a stuffy room. I am fully prepared and ambitious, and I will definitely win. I even boasted: "Strive to save one province and protect two provinces". Now it seems that I was like a bow, mentally and physically overloaded, and the exhaustion of days overflowed the warning line like a flood. After sitting on a long-distance bus for more than five hours, I feel carsick, vomiting, dizziness and nausea. As a result, dreams may come was not two points behind the provincial second prize. I only won the third prize in the province. At that time, I was very sad. I was sorry for my efforts. My mother advised me: "This process of hard work is a lot of wealth in life." Now it seems that even the third prize in the province plays a great role in independent enrollment. Doesn't it also help me get closer to my favorite university? I think the Olympic Games is an unforgettable experience for me. It taught me that the process is as important as the result. I'm just a Communist Youth League member now, and I actively demand to join the Party, because I believe in materialism. I admire the great Mao Zedong very much. "If you don't reach the Great Wall, you are not a hero, and you will fight for twenty thousand." To me, your school is the Great Wall in my heart. I think, only by entering your school can "heroes be useful".
Look forward to your approval!