You can't live without caution.

First act

Time: Spring and Autumn Period and Warring States Period

Location: Lu Guomen.

Summary: On a cold night, Liu Xiahui stayed in the country.

Careful composition. There is a beautiful woman who has no place to live. Liu Xiahui was afraid that she would freeze to death, so she sat in her arms, unbuttoned her coat and wrapped her tightly. I sat with her all night and didn't molest her until dawn the next day.

Voice-over: Liu Xiahui is called a "keep calm" gentleman because he can insist on his prudence and independence. Late at night, in the face of lovely beauty, I am not tempted, can challenge myself, overcome my lust, and show the noble life accomplishment of a scholar.

Act ii

Time: Song Dynasty

Location: Zi Han's home.

Summary: In Song Dynasty, a man gave a doctor Zi Han a good jade, but Zi Han refused to accept it. The jade sender mistakenly thought that he thought the quality of jade was not good, and quickly explained that Baoyu was judged by the jade craftsman. Unexpectedly, Zi Han said, "I regard not coveting other people's property as a treasure, and you regard this treasure as a treasure. If you give it to me, then we all lose our treasure. Keep our own baby! "

Voice-over: Zi Han's "not greedy for treasures" is known as an eternal beauty talk. He is in a high position, but he can keep his shirt on his sleeve. Faced with priceless jewels, he can challenge himself, overcome material desires, stick to ethics, and show the noble moral sentiments of an official.

Act iii

Time: A summer day in the Yuan Dynasty War.

Location: next to the big pear tree

Summary: Xu Heng, a great scholar in Yuan Dynasty, went out one day because of the hot weather and unbearable thirst. There happened to be a pear tree by the roadside, and pedestrians went to pick pears to quench their thirst. Only Xu Heng was unmoved. Then someone asked him, "Why don't you pick pears?" Xu Heng said, "If it's not your own pear, how can you pick it casually?" The man laughed at him for being pedantic: "The world is such a mess, no matter whose pears it is." Xu Heng said: "Although pears have no owners, their hearts have owners."

Voice-over: "Although pears have no owners, their hearts have owners". What a good promise! It fully shows Xu Heng's noble sentiment, and more importantly, it reveals a truth of being a man: being a man should firmly adhere to the lofty principles of being a man, and always remember that no matter how the external environment changes, you can't go with the flow, challenge yourself, overcome your desires and be cautious and independent.

Act IV

Time: late 20th century 2 1 early 20th century

Venue: Mabanyou Road, Yunnan

Summary: For 20 years, an ordinary rural postman has been alone, leading a horse and walking on a hard and lonely postal road. He risked his life to trudge on a lonely mountain: he fell and got up; When you are thirsty, take a sip of spring water; Eat some dry food when you are hungry; It was raining, so I hid in the tent. Horses carry people and walk village by village. Walking alone in the mountains 53 Wan Li. Despite the harsh living environment and working conditions, he never missed a class or lost an email, and the delivery accuracy reached 100%. He said: "It is my responsibility to ensure the delivery of the mail."

Voice-over: "It is my responsibility to ensure the delivery of the mail." Wang Shunyou, the "messenger of mountains", is full of enthusiasm for the people in mountainous areas. In the past 20 years, he has been in the mountains and valleys, braving the cold and heat, being strict with himself, meticulous and independent, which is a model.

Conclusion: Liu Xiahui is not chaotic, Song Zihan is not greedy for treasures, Xu Heng doesn't eat pears without owners, and Wang Shunyou sends letters seriously: same cautious independence, different expressions. The world is cautious and independent, shining everywhere all the time.

short review

In the form of novel and distinct four-act drama, it is concluded that we should be cautious and independent everywhere in life, and we must not miss it, otherwise we will regret it for life. It is of far-reaching significance to grasp the people and events in history and reality and grasp the topics in chronological order. The overall structure of the article is summarized, and the middle part adopts the method of "summary+evaluation", which is very novel and shows the author's grasp of the article. The article is distinctive and eye-catching; The combination of ancient and modern, strong radiation. (high nebula)

Example 2

A gentleman is cautious and independent.

Chairman Mao once said: "It is not difficult for a person to do a good deed, but it is difficult to do it all his life." Similarly, it is not difficult to be a gentleman in public, but it is difficult to be a gentleman when you are alone.

Cautious independence is a high-level moral cultivation. The ancient sages of China have long understood that a gentleman should be cautious. As early as in the Book of Rites, it was recorded: "Mo is insignificant, and a gentleman is cautious and independent.

"Looking through the sages of the past dynasties, people who have demonstrated morality in history are cautious. Confucius, a sage, not only strictly abides by the ceremony of "monarch, monarch and minister" in the court, but also abides by the ceremony of a gentleman on the way of being demoted, and does not sit up straight and say indecent words. Qu Yuan, a poet, was deposed and exiled in troubled times, but he can still "play the crown after bathing and change clothes after bathing". Sizhitang exclaimed, "Heaven knows, earth knows, you know, I know, but nobody knows! "Let the polluters run around and let the virtues last forever, thus becoming the best footnote of" a gentleman is cautious and independent ". "

"A gentleman is cautious and independent" is a person's honesty to himself. A person can be loyal to others only if he is honest with himself. There is a story about the Five Yuan Lantern Festival: Due to the war, the Buddhist monks of Putuo Temple decided to move the temple site. During the migration, Master Yutong was the only one who insisted on attending the morning class and never gave up. Someone advised, "There is no Buddha here, so the master doesn't have to." Master Yu Tong replied, "There is no Buddha here, but there is a Buddha in my heart. I am sincere and sincere. " What a "sincere to my heart, sincere to my Buddha"! In fact, everyone has a Buddha in his heart-his own conscience. A gentleman in public is a gentleman among all gentlemen, and only a gentleman who is alone in a room is his own gentleman. A gentleman is cautious and sincere to himself, just like an empty valley and a secluded orchid. Even if no one knows it, it always exudes fragrance. And those who don't know how to be "cautious and independent" deceive their conscience in vain, and their hearts will eventually become the stinking place of abalone!

"A gentleman is cautious and independent" is still a kind of examination of himself. Whenever you are alone in a room in the dead of night, when the faces of a billion generations are hanging high above your head, can you indulge your body and mind because you don't care about others? No, the bright stars are looking at you, and the bright moon is looking at you. Vaguely, there is a sound, as if the soul is torturing itself, in this lonely silence. A gentleman is cautious and independent, and his soul is always cautious.

When a new moon rises and shines in the lonely valley, there is a unique orchid, pure and beautiful, standing in its own fragrance. It is in this complete solitude that he won the stars all over the sky.

short review

Middle school students are generally not easy to write "cautious independence". This paper can accurately understand the meaning of the problem and adopt the structural model of "total-sub-total". The main part discusses from "Prudent independence is a kind of high-level moral cultivation", "Prudent independence is a person's honesty to himself" and "Prudent independence is a kind of self-examination", and the application of factual arguments and the understanding of the materials used in the discussion are accurate. Although the composition structure and materials are not novel, they show the accumulation of the author's culture and thoughts. (high nebula)

Full score composition

"Cautious independence" and "Lotus"

I sat alone in the garden, quietly watching the blooming lotus flowers in the pond, and the cool breeze brought the faint fragrance of the summer sunset. The bud quivers, and the pink tip is like a girl's pink cheek, which makes people fondle it ... stand up, walk to the pond and touch the attractive petal edge like a gauze. I want to break a branch and insert it in the study, so that this fragrance can accompany me! There is no one around, just me and the lotus in the pond, and we are relatively speechless.

The slender fingertips finally slipped down the flower vein and closed on the side. Look out, look out! I left the garden silently, and the sunset shone from behind, sending me a shadow to accompany me on my way home.

The starry sky is shining, the moonlight is flowing, and there is a lotus flower missing from the desk, but I don't regret it. I even think willfully, will a pool of lotus flowers whisper in the middle of the night and quietly recall the charm of the moment when fingers and petals leave at dusk?

It's a bit silly to think about it, and suddenly it's a bit astringent: if it were someone else, what would the situation of Lotus be like?

This may be a difficult problem that only you can solve. The word "cautious independence", between my babbling, my grandfather, who is full of poetry books, reminded me again and again that unknown so was a child, but at this moment, it was dusk, and I suddenly realized. This is indeed a wise saying, which is worth remembering all my life.

When I'm alone, my heart is a little different. It seems that everything can be relaxed. On weekdays, do good deeds, speak carefully, and be a little sincere and hypocritical? The city is bizarre and the world is full of variables. Who can thoroughly understand and tell you what is right and what is not? Unconsciously, life may have been irresistible, covering your face with a veil, and you can't control it! A disguise makes people become another person, life is like a play, beggars are like generals, who knows the true face under that veil? When you are alone, everything can be unloaded, and everything is distributed all over your body, leaving only yourself and yourself whispering.

Maybe you know everything in front of people, but you know it's all hypocritical decoration; Maybe you do good things in front of others, but you know it's not selfish ... how do you treat yourself when you are alone? Is it hooliganism or moody, completely unlike usual?

Show how a person talks to himself. People who are sincere to themselves are the highest praise for mankind. People come to this bustling world alone and leave quietly. Self-cultivation and self-improvement are more worthy of practice than begging others. When no one is around, one eye can reveal the truest self. A person walks through a bright future and shows his gentleness with his own efforts. Face the sick dog alone, pity and avoid showing your kindness; Face difficulties alone, calm the past, and show your arrogance. ...

It is the desire to be "cautious and independent"! When you are alone, face a pure heart with kindness and thrift. This casual move reveals your truth and sincerity.

I face the window and the moon, as if I smell the lotus fragrance not far away. When I am alone, I am not the only one who appreciates such a fresh and beautiful time. What's more, it is the temperament and fragrance left by my actions inadvertently.

The full text of the brief comment is full of a kind of cultural atmosphere, and "cautious independence" is a kind of realm, which is manifested in the posture, combined with the cultivation pursued by Confucianism, and the article has cultural connotation. The combination of "cautious independence" and "lotus" enriches the connotation of "cautious independence" and is full of aesthetic demands. Candidates use inner monologues to structure the whole article, interspersed with their own life experiences, which is easy to make readers feel intimate. In the way of expression, it avoids the boredom of positive discussion, which not only embodies the profundity of argumentative writing, but also has the agility of prose.

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Life should bear loneliness.

Loneliness is an unaccompanied journey, a starry night sky and a trip.

Time without songs. It makes empty people lonely, shallow people impetuous and wise.

People are deep.

People with rich thoughts can walk with the soul by virtue of lonely emptiness and historical dialogue.

Take inspiration into your arms.

People, noble, dirty, excellent, obscene, wise and dull, are all in silence.

Lonely situation doesn't mean falling into lonely embarrassment. The environment is like a cloud, warm and gathering.

Widowed; Calm as water, quiet and gentle, moving and surging. People just live in these two places.

In the movie world, different fates are shown by changing roles.

Many people are afraid of loneliness. No matter who they are, whether they are lonely or not depends on their dependence.

Mood.

Being alone is boring and there is nothing to send, so it will be lonely. This shows that he is alive.

Pity.

When you are alone, if you are longing, thinking about things, thinking about friends, and your feelings are bright, you will not be lonely.

Because he has a warm, self-designed environment.

When you are alone, you are full of ideas and good at writing. You will never feel lonely. You will never feel lonely.

Loneliness is because he is immersed in the joy of creation.

Elegant people, alone in a quiet corner, or enjoying literature or listening to music, is another kind of leisure enjoyment.

; It is not too much for those who are waiting to entertain themselves by reading some deductive stories with a roll in their hands.

Worry about loneliness.

Life is alive, road, but also on their own. On the voyage of fate, there is no doubt that everyone

I'm a lone ranger. Some people may have smooth sailing, but more will be bumpy. Yifan wind

Shunzhe, such as boating in the blue sea, can hardly enjoy the pleasure of hunting; Once the boat of life runs aground.

Lonely embarrassment will keep going forward and evolve into countless gnawing feelings. Rough and unruly person

If you climb a mountain and a pile, your breath is still there, and your heart is not strong, you will find flowers and grass all the way, and the scenery is amazing.

Have a rare life experience. This is tempering and wealth. He chews life and smashes it.

Loneliness.

Perhaps, people get married and make friends in order not to be lonely. However, it is easy to get married and complete.

A big task in life, but unfamiliar with strange bedfellows's misfortune, is it worth it? Although it's just a casual acquaintance.

However, with new friends and old friends, but I don't feel close to my heart, will it be more lonely?

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Perhaps, people pursue the realization of self-worth I in order not to be lonely in their careers. Zhenxixiu

Taoren, painstaking and inspirational, indulges in lonely corners, and has no hesitation before success; Hide one's feelings

The people who decorate it are arty, floating in the air, doing it dry, and finally seeing it humble and generous.

Loneliness is the brilliance of life, and it is the night dew dripping with emotion. So, really experience.

Lonely people will feel the warmth of life more.

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