1 At that time, in Nanjing, I just started to remember some fragmentary things. Beautiful villages often appear in this painting. I quietly walked away from the adults and sat alone on the grass. The leaves of the phoenix tree began to fall, and many mysterious aesthetic feelings fell into my heart. I was lost at once, and my little heart could hardly bear the excitement. I just picked up a fallen leaf in confusion. The leaves are yellow-brown and curved, like a boat carrying dreams. There are two beautiful phoenix trees beside the boat, which will last for a long time. Every time there is a gust of wind, I shuttle through the rain of fallen leaves and pick up the plane trees all over the ground. There must be one or two buttonwood trees that I didn't pick up sprouting on the grass, right? Twenty years later, I seem to hear the distant west wind and the rustling of leaves in the wind. I can also see those boats carrying dreams, sailing on the grassland, sailing in the hope of a seed.

-Autumn in Zhang Xiaofeng

Appreciation: This passage expresses the love for buttonwood leaves with beautiful brushstrokes. The onomatopoeic words of "Sasha Vujacic" are vivid and vivid, allowing readers to guess the scene. Mysterious Beauty describes the characteristics of phoenix tree in autumn, which is mysterious and beautiful. Indus leaves are full of infinite charm and beauty in the author's eyes, which is very infectious. The shape of buttonwood leaves is vividly described by metaphor. The author describes the color and shape, and compares the leaves to a ship, which has a side. On the ship's side is a buttonwood tree, which fascinates everyone who looks at it and wants to see this beautiful buttonwood tree. The author has a rich imagination and shows the beauty of autumn to the fullest.

Now, as the sun rises, the fog gradually dissipates. vilen looks soft and green, which makes me feel that even if I accidentally fall from this mountain, I won't scratch a piece of skin. If I am bounced twice at most, I will get a green that can't be washed out by a sock. And the river around the foot of the mountain is also green. It is another kind of green, bright, as if mixed with oil. As for the mountain, it's still green, but it's just a bunch of dark green, which makes people feel that no matter where you start, you can't open a crack. People think that even if you dig it down two floors, its green color will not fade. In addition, my screen window is also green, very light green, really as ethereal as the gauze skirt of ancient beauty under the sunlight. You think, how can I write to you on such a green morning without being full of vibrant green?

-Zhang Xiaofeng's "Green Letter"

Appreciation: The author fully mobilized his vision and touch, and wrote the green in spring. Metaphors are used in many places, and the images are vivid. I like this passage because it is very warm after reading it. Where does this warmth come from? I think it flowed from those warm words. "Bright", "rich" and "full of vitality" are more poetic and beautiful because they are written for children. The green color in the author's works seems to be alive and flowing, as if it appeared in the letter. I like green, too. I like this piece of green written by the author. Their energy makes people feel happy and hopeful.

At this point, the river is already a song. A truckload of corn was piled on the beach. A cart of millet was piled on the beach. There are bundles of soybeans and baskets of millet on the beach. It's time to call it a day, and we have to jump into the river, wash, clean and clean again. Healthy tendons and firm breasts are all exposed in your field of vision, which is a charming sculpture. Even if it is primitive and rough, it is soft and charming, intoxicated with no evil thoughts. Every elderly person has an old story, and that enviable experience, like a woman's sickle, is deeply engraved in her heart. Therefore, when young people's jokes go with the flow, they only add one sentence occasionally. Although the smile on their lips has not disappeared, they are thinking and calculating in their hearts.

Appreciate:

This passage is beautifully written, like flowing water. This is a vivid picture of autumn harvest: corn, millet, soybean, millet, river beach, young people, old people ... Jingmei people are more beautiful. Scenes blend, and this scene of autumn harvest is more beautiful. The author has beautiful writing and vivid language, and selected some representative things to express the unique beauty of autumn harvest.

I hope it will help you. If you are satisfied, I hope it can be adopted in time ~