1, Excellent Composition of Senior High School Entrance Examination in Changsha, Hunan Province in 2003

In the storm, I hurt the wrong person.

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Some people say that people begin to overdraw their mothers' lives as soon as they are born. But I was born to get back at my father. I will never forget his divorce from his mother. At the trial, I finally chose my father, and I want to make him sad for life. Not long after, my father got married again, which deepened my hatred for him.

Although my stepmother always tries to please me, I have never smiled at her once. My father is often angry with me. At this time, my heart will always ignite a terrible joy. A few years later, they had a child of their own, but he was just a sick seedling and had to be sent to the hospital every three days. I often wake up in the middle of the night to see my father driving my brother to the hospital and my stepmother crying in front of the door. I became a numb audience without any worries.

That day, I received a notice from a key middle school, which was my greatest wish except for revenge for my father for more than ten years. When I got home, I threw the notice on the table. "I was admitted to a key middle school. I'm going to report tomorrow, and I'll pay 3 thousand first! " "My father took the notice and raised his eyes a little, but immediately regained his weight. I know that in recent years, my brother's illness has almost spent all his savings at home. But I won't give up anyway, I can only watch my father get up slowly and pace back and forth. Finally, he made up his mind to go to his stepmother and said, "Xiao Wei's illness needs to be cured and Mencius' book needs to be read." "There are only three thousand left at home. The doctor said that Xiao Wei could have an operation at any moment. This money can't be used "Stepmother cried." But we can't miss the future! "Say that finish, my father rushed out of the house. Looking at all this, I feel a little sad.

The next day, the hospital came to inform us that my brother might not be able to come, so we should be mentally prepared. At that moment, I was shocked for the first time. That day, I took a look at my brother with a ashamed heart, which was the first and last look after leaving.

The night before I went to a key middle school, my father called me into his room and said earnestly, "MengMeng, in fact, I am not your biological father. At first, he abandoned your mother and daughter. I married your mother to protect her reputation. We agreed not to divorce until you grew up. I didn't expect you to choose to follow me ... "

It's like a bolt from the blue. How can I believe that my father, who has been taking revenge, is actually my greatest benefactor, a person who has nothing to do with me but has raised me for more than ten years in vain ... Looking at my aging father in front of me, my hatred has become vulnerable. I threw myself into my father's arms and cried loudly, "Dad, I'm sorry!" " My father patted me and said, "A father will never blame his children!" " "

It turns out that I have lived in vain for more than ten years. Only today can I truly find myself.

The masterpiece discusses victory: "There is warmth and care here; Our life and surroundings are full of sunshine, rain and dew, family friendship, cooperation and competition. " This article makes readers more deeply aware of this. The author narrates a family life story around the material center, putting the emotional conflict of two generations in contradiction, and effectively revealing the theme to be expressed. It is difficult to write the true father's love and affection directly, but the author of this paper conveys this kind of emotional contradiction with comparative and misunderstood brushwork, which is particularly profound and makes people feel worried. Bai Juyi said that "people who touch people's hearts don't care about their feelings first", so it can be said that the greatest advantage of this paper is to talk about their true feelings and tell them their true feelings. Excellent composition of Hebei college entrance examination in 2004

Love with "pain"

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I am a child in the countryside. As long as I can remember, my father told me many times that the countryside is bitter and the children in the countryside should be strong. For more than ten years, I have been growing up in a "painful" love.

When I graduated from primary school, the god of luck came to me. Because of my excellent grades, I was admitted to a private middle school in the county for free.

I remember on the first day of school, my father rode a bicycle that accompanied him for more than 20 years and carried bedding for me. I trotted behind with my big bag on my back. Along the way, the father and the daughter didn't say a word. I know, dad is still in a hurry to go to work. He said that ten dollars would be deducted for absenteeism for half a day.

There are as many people coming to the new school as going to the market: cars, vans and motorcycles are parked at the school gate. Dad leaned his broken bike against a small tree, unlocked it and walked into the crowd with his bedroll. I followed my father closely for fear of getting separated from him. I was surrounded by adults, small people, and it took me a lot of effort to squeeze in. Dad helped me find the dormitory and chose a bed by the window. Dad says it's sunny here, it's not wet, and it's warm in winter. As for other comforts, I didn't say a word. I put down my bedroll and turned away. "Dad," I shouted, and Dad turned around. "What's the matter?" I looked at my father silently. Father gave a wry smile, turned around and left again. I held back my tears and made my own bed. Watching other parents help their children tidy their bedding and things, my tears came down, but I wiped them off at once. Dad said that children in rural areas need to be strong.

From now on, every school holiday, I will go home by myself, sometimes by car, sometimes on foot. When I get home, I make a fire to cook and clean my room, and then I wait for my parents and my brother to come back while reading. This is a habit I have developed for many years and has never changed.

Time flies, and it is three years in a blink of an eye. The mid-term exam is coming today, and I got up at five in the morning. My mother didn't come back from work in the factory last night, and my father went to work early. I cooked my own meal and went to the examination room by car after dinner. Just as I was about to enter the examination room, a familiar figure suddenly appeared in my field of vision. Unexpectedly, it was dad, riding a broken bike. Suddenly, my tears swirled in my eyes. "Dad, why are you here? You lost more than ten dollars a day! " "No matter how busy the farm work is, my daughter will go to the exam alone. I don't trust. Get in there. The exam will be held soon. Dad is waiting for you outside. "

Writing here, I can't help crying. Dad, don't worry, I will do well in the exam, because you are waiting for me outside, and you have entrusted that sentence to me for many years. ...

The author of this paper grasps the center revealed by the materials: parents' seemingly "cruel" love for their children's healthy growth. Only by truly understanding this kind of love can we write this composition well, otherwise it will be easy to flow above the general parental care. Throughout the full text, there are three main highlights of this paper: First, the center is properly expressed with an appropriate title, which is vivid, powerful and speculative. Secondly, the author transforms fatherly love into the understanding of cultivating his own strength, making the theme concrete and reasonable, which is conducive to the writing of the article. Thirdly, the touching story is expressed in narrative language full of true feelings, getting rid of too gorgeous and untrue rhetoric and revealing a natural sincerity.

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A group of newborn mussels lie quietly in the warm embrace of the sea. The sea gently stroked them with the palm of its hand, bringing them grains of fine sand.

Young mussels know it's time for their mother to test themselves. So, they use their huts to receive sand. But some mussels can stop the sand. Because the sand is angular, it will bring great pain to mussels.

The mussels that received the sand were already scarred. They want to squeeze the sand out, but the sand is so stubborn that even if the mussels try their best, the sand remains firmly in it, motionless. All the efforts of mussels have been in vain, and the sand is torturing them and bringing them heartbreaking pain.

In desperation, mussels have to lick with their own lips and muscles. Rub it. Mussels are doing the same work day and night, hoping to destroy the fine sand in this oldest way ... slowly, the previous pain is relieved and they work harder. ...

Time passes in the roar of the waves ... mussels are young and mature. The sea is still vast, but more unfathomable. One day, all the mussels came to the beach and invited everyone to test their lives.

The sea let them stand in the sun and open their huts. In an instant, beams of light came out of the mussel shell-after painful hardships, they produced the most fruitful fruit. Of course, there are still a few mussels that are still bleak.

At this moment, the sea said, "This is your achievement. Maybe you didn't realize that you had amazing patience before and didn't want to be with pain. You want to get rid of the pain and anxiety caused by sand. However, what you can't believe is that pearls are formed in the process of struggling with pain. You overcome difficulties and setbacks, which is actually the process of your success. If you don't accept hardships at all, then you will be rejected by success ... "

The bright sunshine shone on the sparkling pearls, and the dull mussel bowed his head in shame.

Comments: Bitterness is also a blessing. Only through painful tempering can you change from an ordinary grain of sand to a crystal clear pearl. Should the way mother Hai educates her children arouse our deep thoughts?

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There is such a measure in Japanese education: send teenagers as young as five years old and as old as 1 1 to a field camp, and let them start from the camp, cross mountains and rivers and meet at their destination. On the road, they must be self-reliant, handle everything alone and deal with all possible situations.

This kind of education is impossible in the eyes of some people, who will loudly object: "This is nonsense! Let such a small child do such a dangerous thing, that is, hurt the child, I want to sue! " The Japanese church only responded with a faint smile to these voices. I support this kind of education with both hands, because this kind of education can exercise people's self-reliance, and what children need most now is self-reliance. Self-reliance is the foundation of self-improvement.

Throughout the ancient heroes, most of them suffered from poverty and loneliness, and their relatives were often unable to help. These people have to stand on their own feet since childhood. Emperor Gaozu Liu Bangting was born in Tingchang, and his family hated his incompetence and refused to make friends with him. He fought alone and became the king of the world. Genghis Khan's parents were killed, living alone outside and establishing an imperial industry; Zhu Yuanzhang had no relatives since he was a child, and later he became Ming Taizu. Many people who have established world hegemony use personal stories to describe people: self-reliance can strengthen themselves.

We need to stand on our own feet, because "it is human nature to be idle and hate work". If people don't stand on their own feet and try their best to help others, they will have to wait for death when faced with difficulties and no assistance. People who are not used to their own efforts are naturally unwilling and unable to survive on their own. A lazy man with a cake around his neck is a portrayal. Because he usually depends on his wife for everything, and he is lazy, his wife will starve to death because she is too lazy to go out.

Looking at Adou and Liu Chan again, I don't think this person can't afford to help, but Kong Ming has "helped" too much, and he is abrasive. The young people who witnessed the invasion of Wei's Fifth Route Army were very calm. He resolutely invited Empress Dowager Cixi to restrain all ministers and visit Kong Ming in person. After entering the DPRK, he did not ask anxiously about the plan to withdraw troops, but "stood by Kong Ming for a long time and asked,' Is the Prime Minister happy?' "The language of blame implies how young and wise, how wise and decisive, without losing the prestige of the king. Unfortunately, Liu Bei told him to "listen to his father", which made him unable to stand on his own feet. How can he succeed if he is pampered and pampered? The death of Shu and Kongming is also hard to blame!

Nowadays, with the rapid development of society and fierce competition, we must rely on our own efforts to get opportunities. In the face of the tide of survival of the fittest, if we don't get out of the "greenhouse" as soon as possible and learn to take the helm and travel far, we will eventually get lost in the tide of history and be eliminated by society.

Self-reliance is a motto tempered by ancient people's personal experience. Japanese educators realized this and took necessary actions. As a new force in the 2 1 century, are we willing to be the future? All those who want to show their skills in the future will stand on their own feet! Only by self-reliance can you have a brilliant tomorrow!

Comments: Why do we need self-reliance most? Based on the reality, young writers can quickly think of typical examples of ancient heroes' self-reliance and self-improvement, especially the analysis of "Adou" Liu Chan, which is unique and incisive, thus effectively demonstrating their views from both positive and negative aspects. It is not difficult to see that profound historical knowledge and unique insights are the important reasons for this article to win.

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I have heard of such a thing. A couple engaged in chemical research have been feeding distilled water to their children from birth to 6 years old. They think distilled water is distilled at high temperature, without impurities and bacteria, and it is the cleanest. As a result, the child died because of lack of immunity.

Couples who study chemistry don't understand that what the human body needs is water containing many elements, which leads to the premature death of children. This left us with deep thinking. A person's growth needs all kinds of nutrients and elements, and a person's growth also needs all kinds of experiences and hardships. And many of our middle school students' parents let their children study all day and do nothing else. I wonder if the consequences are similar to simply feeding distilled water to children? Some of these middle school students under the strict "care" of their parents have simply become "parasites". There is a middle school student in Sichuan who does nothing but study at home. Later, although he was admitted to Peking University with excellent results, on the first day of school, he couldn't even touch the door of the canteen. Because I couldn't take care of myself, I quickly jumped off the building and committed suicide. Examples of living without self-care like this are very common among our middle school students. This is in line with the saying that "you can't run a swift horse in the shed, and you can't grow a permanent pine in the flowerpot".

In order to make children become useful people to society, it is necessary for parents to let their children go through the storm, see the world and exercise in the big waves. Commander-in-Chief Zhu wrote in Memory of Mother: "I am grateful to my mother. She taught me the experience of struggling with difficulties. My family suffered hardships, so that I was not intimidated by difficulties in the military struggle for more than 30 years. " At all times and in all countries, the growth of all successful people can not be achieved behind closed doors.

"The sea is wide and the fish jumps, and the sky is high and birds fly." Let children go out of the family, out of the "protection" of their parents, and into social practice.

Comments: A couple engaged in chemical research gave their children distilled water, which led to the child's death due to lack of immunity. From this, it is concluded that a person's growth needs to go through many experiences and hardships, and he needs to exercise in the wind and waves to become a talent. The author cites many examples of characters in ancient and modern times, at home and abroad as evidence, which is very realistic and targeted in connection with today's reality.

According to a bird-loving association somewhere, when the baby eagle grows big enough, the mother eagle ruthlessly drives the baby eagle off the cliff. When the young eagles begin to fall to the bottom of the valley, they will flap their wings desperately to stop themselves from falling further, and at the same time they have mastered the basic skill-flying.

Some reporters found this report very interesting. The next day, the reporter interviewed an eagle mother.

Reporter: Hello, mother eagle! I read a report about you, saying that when you taught your children to fly, you drove them off a cliff without giving directions or giving a demonstration. ...

Mother Eagle: You don't understand this. How can I not point them out? When the eagles were older, they opened their mouths and stared at each other, watching me fly around looking for food to feed them. Is this not a demonstration? When they are old enough, they should practice by themselves. It's no use talking about theory.

Reporter: (thinking) Oh! It is the same as swimming. You'll never learn if you don't get into the water. Should they be allowed to exercise and practice their true knowledge?

Mother Eagle: Yes, but their practical activities are more challenging and adventurous than those of sparrow, cuckoo and magpie.

Reporter: aren't you afraid that they will never fly again if they fall to the bottom?

Mother Eagle: (with tears in her eyes) Poor Chengfeng, my own child, can I not feel bad? But if they don't do this, how can they forge the clank of iron and when can they soar in the blue sky? All this is for survival, for the continuation of life!

Reporter: It is said that adversity makes talents. It seems that this dangerous situation can also bring up talents, and it is an extraordinary talent!

Mother Eagle: Yes, I believe my heart and blood will not flow in vain. I am so cruel, the young eagle will understand my pains when he grows up.

Reporter: wouldn't you be sad if the baby eagle broke into pieces?

Mother Eagle: (laughs) Actually, it doesn't hurt to tell you. I have laid a thick layer of reeds at the bottom of the valley, and it won't hurt even if I fall. In addition, I will bring them up and let them continue to practice until they learn.

Reporter: I really understand "thinking about change when you are poor". Parents can do whatever they want! Mother Eagle, my interview purpose has been achieved. Thank you for accepting my interview. Goodbye!

Goodbye, mother eagle!

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It is because of this kind of training that the eagle can become a strong one in the sky. ...

If life is a seedling, frustration is the storm of the four seasons. Destroying it nourishes it and makes it thrive. If life is a sky, frustration is a sudden rainstorm, which darkens it but becomes beautiful, giving it the beauty of Changhong. If life is a clear spring, frustration is a boulder cliff, which has blocked it but achieved it, giving it the charming charm of flying flowers and splashing jade, and "going straight down to thousands of feet". Setbacks are inevitable. We should learn to enjoy setbacks and let them become the driving force for our happiness and progress.

Frustration is an indispensable decoration of life. Only by learning to enjoy setbacks can we enjoy life. Life without setbacks is like a lake without fish, just a stagnant pool; A life without setbacks is like an ocean without waves and fresh flowers, which is boring; A life without setbacks, like a cloudless sky, is always monotonous. In the confrontation with setbacks, learn to appreciate setbacks, and you will find that setbacks are actually beautiful. Because of setbacks, your life is more colorful.

Enjoy setbacks and always be full of hope for life. In the difficult predicament of "Bashan Chushui abandoned in 23 years", Liu Yuxi still has the firm confidence of "sinking the boat to cross Qian Fan, and the sick tree is ahead of Wan Muchun"; Li Bai's sadness of "stepping on the Taihang Mountain in the snow" and "pulling out a dagger and peeping around in vain" still has the lofty ambition of "one day, I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight and cross the deep sea"; Even though "clothes are as cold as iron for many years", Du Gongbu still has the pious expectation of "there are thousands of spacious buildings, and the earth is covered with cold soil". Facing the vast desert where "the daytime smokes thousands of miles of Huang Yun, and the north wind blows geese and snow one after another", Gao Shi still holds the lofty spirit of "there is no confidant before Mochow, and no one knows the king in the world". Although Tao Qian was "caged for a long time", he finally got the leisure of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely". It is precisely because they are full of expectations for life, because they are brave enough to face setbacks, so they can enjoy the endless fun of life.

Enjoy setbacks and let them become the driving force for progress. Since ancient times, many literati have risen in difficulties. Zhou Wenwang wrote Zhouyi in prison; Confucius was rejected by other countries, but he compiled Chunqiu. Qu Yuan was exiled many times, but he wrote Li Sao. Han Feizi was imprisoned in the state of Qin and was written as Difficult Argument and Lonely Anger. Sima Qian was severely punished by the imperial court and left a magnificent history book. Shi Tiesheng's legs were disabled when he was young, but he took it as a driving force and created a place in China's literary world. Beethoven, who was deaf in both ears, bravely grasped the throat of fate and made a thrilling symphony of fate. Helen Keller was blind and deaf when she was a child, but she became an outstanding American woman writer with amazing perseverance. We can't say that they won't make great achievements without these setbacks, but turning these setbacks into inexhaustible motivation must be the secret of their success after setbacks.

In the face of setbacks, I always believe that it is a clear spring that should nourish the earth; It is grass that should decorate the earth; If it is a flower, it will bloom incisively and vividly; If you are an eagle, you should fly in the blue sky; A sailor can't be afraid of wind and waves; If you are a warrior, you should face setbacks calmly! Because setbacks are only temporary, as long as you work hard, setbacks are sailing boats leading to the other side of victory and ladders leading to the top of success; Is the key to the door of honor.

The sunshine is always after the storm, and the cruel baptism given by the eagle mother makes the eagle strong. Experienced setbacks, but also to face life strongly!