Writing theme
We learned "The Man in the Condom", knowing that Rykov was afraid of all new things and new ideas, put himself in a condom and finally went to die. Are there condoms in the real world? Are condoms all negative? ……
Please write an argumentative essay or narrative of more than 800 words on the topic of "condoms".
Writing instruction
A "cover" is something that is made into a certain shape and covered outside, such as a cloth cover for an umbrella. Is tangible, such as gloves, book covers, refrigerator covers; Invisibility can refer to the suppression of people by a phenomenon or thing, and it can also refer to all the forces that continuously and strongly bind people's subjective will, such as laws, regulations and rules. Sometimes it is a metaphor for a trap. Condoms are everywhere; Condoms, all the time. Condom is a double-edged sword. If the condom is too tight, people will be trapped; People cannot live without condoms. Without restraint, people will wrestle, horses will fall off cliffs, cars will derail, planes will crash and the world will fall into chaos. Condoms can cover the body, but not the mind, spirit and soul.
Suggested subject reference
1. Get out of the condom and show beauty; 2. Endless "condoms"; 3. Let education get out of the "condom"; 4. Correct the name of "condom"; 5. Never abandon the "condom"; 6. Officials should construct a "condom" for themselves; 7. The lyricism of condoms; 8. Do you dare to pierce the condom? 9 comes from the "tightening spell"; 10. Applause for obeying traffic laws; 1 1. gentle trap; 1 1. Success is also a condom, so is destruction; 12. Speaking rules 13. "Condom ingredients" should be suspended; 14. Give it up for 15. In addition to small condoms, there are larger condoms; 16. Should condoms be put in children's schoolbags? 17. Call for Internet "condoms".
Classic material
1. Fame and fortune are condoms.
When Emperor Qianlong of the Qing Dynasty went down to the south of the Yangtze River, at the Jinshan Temple in Zhenjiang, he asked Fa Pan, a monk at that time, "How many ships do you have to cross in a day when ships come and go in the Yangtze River?" Fa Pan replied, "There are only two boats." Gan Long asked, "Why are there only two boats?" Fa Pan said, "One is fame, and the other is profit. The whole Yangtze River is nothing more than these two boats. "
The world is bustling for profit, and the world is bustling for profit. (Biography of Historical Records and Huo Zhi). Fame and fortune are condoms. Romance of the Thirteen Dynasties in Qing Palace
2. Homework to keep students away from "condoms"
Recently, a street composition competition asked students to write an article on the topic of "love". It stands to reason that students can describe the most touching love in life time and space, but in the process of marking papers, we read some similar rigid love: on the bus, I saw a little sister give up her seat to the old man; An unknown aunt went to the hospital behind my back; I was admitted to the hospital because of an unexpected leg injury. A sunny girl who brings happiness to patients turns out to be a leukemia patient ... each student's personality, interests, life experiences and so on are different. Students' exercises should be rich and colorful, but why did they walk into the same "condom"? Isn't this phenomenon worthy of our reflection?
Looking at the homework of primary school students, some problems really have to be worrying. Such as "fake", telling lies and writing fake things; "Big", children talk like adults and have no childlike innocence; "Empty", the content is empty, unrealistic and not specific; "Copy", copying other people's compositions paragraph by paragraph or even the whole article; "Set", a thousand people, a cavity of ten thousand people, no personality and characteristics, almost the same model.
Therefore, we can't help shouting loudly that homework keeps students away from condoms.
3. "Parents should personally put' condoms' into the schoolbags of children aged 12 to 15." The deputy director of the Guangzhou Family Planning Bureau recently said in a special lecture on "Exploring children's sex, love and outlook on life with parents of middle school students" that the signs of children's precocious puberty have been advanced from 13 years old and 14 years old three years ago to 12 years old. This is a sign of children's health. Parents should understand and appreciate the advantages of their children. For example, when the opposite sex of the same age pursues more, this is a sign that children will be recognized by society and have more dominance in the future. Parents should break the embarrassing concept and take the initiative to tell their children the concept and topic of "sexual intercourse" that is not covered in all sexual knowledge books.
When this statement came out, it immediately attracted discussions from all parties.
Almost at the same time, the famous actor Pu Cunxin blew himself up and put a box of condoms in his daughter's suitcase, which seemed to set off the deputy director's point of view. After the news broke out, it immediately aroused heated discussion from all walks of life. Do you want to give condoms to the children? Will giving condoms make children feel that they are encouraging their sexual behavior? How to educate children about sex has become the focus of discussion for a time.
Excellent works show 1 endless "condom" (teacher writes in water)
When it comes to condoms, people will think of the man in Chekhov's works. He covers his face with an upright collar, wears sunglasses, a sweater, cotton in his ears and rain boots on sunny days ... In short, he weaves a tight condom for himself and is finally trapped alive. It's ridiculous, hateful and pathetic. After reading it, everyone shouted: "Condom" is a murderer, and I need to break it. Is it true?/You don't say. I don't think so.
Condom is a double-edged sword. It can not only sleepy people, but also make things more exciting.
As we all know, a condom is something made into a certain shape and put on the outside. It can be said that it is everywhere. Because of its existence, utensils can avoid contact with the outside world, avoid pollution, reduce oxidation and improve service life; It can improve the room temperature in the shed, and the vegetable seedlings can resist the cold current, thrive and improve the crop yield. Don't you see, because of the condom, the quilt has been as white as new for a long time; Because of the condom, the sword is deep and new; Because of condoms, a bumper harvest of vegetables is in sight; Or because of condoms, the life of mobile phones has been greatly improved.
As the saying goes, "Without rules, there would be no Fiona Fang." The rule is condoms. Without this condom, the world would really be in a mess, and how terrible the world would be. Nature is the real law. "I am in the country" wrote: "If you don't go against the farming season, you can't eat grains, you can't count them when you enter the pool, and fish and turtles can't eat; Axes and pounds enter the mountains in time, and wood and firewood cannot be used. " If the condom is broken, it means burning forest for hunting, drying up rivers for fishing, reducing vegetation and disappearing species, so it is natural that "there are no birds in hundreds of mountains".
Qian Zhongshu said: "Marriage is like a besieged city. People in the city want to go out and people outside the city want to come in. " Marriage is a condom. Without this condom. When men and women go in and out at will and never stop, they will be separated, their families will be broken, society will be unstable, and others will be harmed and society will be endangered. Because of condoms, women marry chickens and follow dogs, and women abide by women's morality; Because with condoms, your husband won't abandon the dross, and it's not easy for you to get married. Husband strictly abides by her husband's rules: husband and wife understand each other, respect each other as guests, and hold hands.
Condoms are traffic lights that block traffic at intersections; The cover is a thin thread in the sky to prevent flying kites from falling. Condoms are the timetable for trains to run on time; Condoms are the horn for soldiers to charge; The condom is the "curse" that gives the Monkey King a headache. It is precisely because of these condoms that vehicles are in order, kites are flying in the air, trains are running on time, soldiers are fighting bravely, and Wukong is obedient: what a gratifying sight!
It is true that some "condoms" also have their negative side, which imprisons humanity, stifles the soul, prohibits talents and hinders progress. Mine should break it without mercy.
After the founding of New China, the state abolished the imperial examination, broke through stereotyped writing, implemented the college entrance examination, and selected talents in an eclectic way, thus cultivating a large number of outstanding talents in governing the country. Mao Zedong dared to break through the trap that the city surrounded the countryside and the countryside surrounded the city, so the new People's Republic of China (PRC) was founded. Qian Xuesen broke the trap of China's "poor oil theory", investigated and demonstrated major events, developed Daqing Oilfield, and realized China's oil self-sufficiency. Deng Xiaoping dares to break through the planned economy, engage in household production quotas and implement a market economy, thus welcoming the spring of economic recovery in China.
Everyone should see the condom and use it, not be used by it, so that it can become a part of the body and become a condom. As students, we should not only abide by school rules and discipline, use condoms to restrain life and promote learning, but also abandon condoms, break the cocoon into a butterfly, publicize personality, interpret wonderful life and bloom colorful.
The teacher's comments were led by the story of Rykov, the protagonist in Chekhov's The Big Cover Man. The author asked the man trapped by a condom, Bi Rykov-should condoms really be broken? So as to show his point of view-condoms are a double-edged sword, we should abide by some condoms and break some condoms. Then, the author tells us what we need condoms through some objects, such as vegetables, quilts, swords and mobile phones in tents. And it's better to use because of condoms. Then quote the famous saying "No rules, no Fiona Fang" and tell us that life needs condoms and society needs condoms. Otherwise, society is not a society and life is not like life.
However, the author did not stop there, and demonstrated that some "condoms" should be broken through a large number of examples, thus proving the author's argument from the opposite side, and the ending also echoed the argument of this article.
In a word, this article is a rare masterpiece. The examples in this paper are handy, which shows that the author has a profound literary foundation and the parallelism enhances the momentum of the article. Moreover, this article has a complete structure, clear organization, questions at the beginning, ups and downs, rich materials, proper choice, free opening and ending, and a total score, which naturally makes the article a typical argumentative masterpiece.
Simulation score 23 points+expression 22 points+development level 65438 points +00 points 〓55 points.