1. Proposition composition
Let's focus on the examination of propositional composition and the places that need attention.
Determine the content scope
Some topics define the content of writing. Therefore, when reviewing the topic, we should determine the content scope of the topic: remember who people should remember; Narration, what to say; What scenery people should write about; Things, things to like, and so on.
Wonderful exercise
Childhood fun
Childhood is a pure land without weeds and filth, and a clear sky without shelter and barrier. The innocence and sweetness flowing here will always make people have unforgettable memories.
I remember when I was 4 years old, my superstitious grandmother told me, "Cut off the hair on your arm and you will go crazy." Naive and curious, I listened with a grain of salt, and my hands itched. I've always wanted to try, but I'm afraid my family and relatives will worry about me. But if I don't try, I will always think. The more I think about it, the more I want to try.
So, I'll try it right away. I took out the terrible scissors and slowly approached a hair on my left arm with my trembling right hand. I was about to cut when I stopped again. I thought, "If I really become crazy, will everyone yell at me like a street mouse?" Will mom, dad and grandma stop loving this silly child? "The more I think about it, the more afraid I am. I hesitated for a long time before I cut the hair off my arm. As soon as I finished cutting, I got into bed without thinking about anything and fell asleep before I knew it. I woke up and found myself the same, a normal little girl. So, I don't care about anything, jump to my grandmother happily and say coquetry, "grandma, grandma!" "I cut a hair on my arm today, but I'm not crazy!" Grandma smiled and touched my little head without saying anything.
This interesting childhood story has always remained in my memory. But as I get older, I understand that I should believe in science, not superstition.
Wonderful click
(1) the little author described the story of cutting arm hair by way of memory. This happened in childhood, which is very interesting and meets the requirements of the text.
(2) The process of things is clearly explained, and the psychological description of the characters is vivid and lifelike.
(3) The conclusion points out the truth and deepens the theme of the article.
Determine the time range
Some topics define the scope of writing in time. Therefore, the composition must reflect things within the specified time range.
Wonderful exercise
When the teacher is away.
"Ding Ling-",the bell rang for the morning reading class, but the teacher was late. As The monitor on duty, I looked anxiously in the direction where the teacher came.
Suddenly, there was a "giggle" of footsteps in the corridor, followed by a "report!" When I looked back, it turned out to be Zhang Qing, the neighbor of the Chinese teacher. I saw her face flushed and she said breathlessly, "Oh, no, the Chinese teacher-she is ill-can't come to class." I listened to it, and my heart was like a mess. what can I do? Students also talk to each other, and the class is "boiling".
My brain is running fast: "What should I do now that the teacher is away?" ? Today I am The monitor on duty, and I should be in charge of this class. Now ... yes, that's it! "So, I cleared my throat, quickly stepped onto the platform and said loudly," Please be quiet now! " "Everyone stopped talking at once, and 55 pairs of eyes in the class looked at me uniformly. I stood on the platform like a little teacher and directed everyone. "Pink, read it!" "What is the lesson?" "17 lesson." As a result, the students began to read loudly in the morning. Suddenly, the sound of reading in the classroom was loud and clear.
Although the class has settled down temporarily, I am still extremely anxious. Because after the morning class, it is the morning exercise class. Without a teacher to lead the team, I'm afraid the students will be confused. It's almost time, and I'm so anxious that I stamp my feet. Why hasn't the teacher come yet? When the bell rang, I had to bite the bullet and say to everyone, "classmates, the teacher didn't come today." I will lead the morning exercise class. I hope everyone can do this class in an orderly way. " "Yes!" The students answered in unison. In spite of this, I still can't rest assured that something will happen. But my worry is unnecessary-the students are disciplined, the team is neat, and their actions are consistent, even better than when the teacher is around! A stone in my heart finally fell to the ground.
When I brought the team back to the classroom, I found that the teacher was already waiting for us. There was a gratified smile on the teacher's face, and I was happy from the heart.
Wonderful click
The deduction is accurate, and the time range is "when the teacher is away".
(2) Clearly and clearly described that "I" boldly and properly handled two things-morning reading and morning exercises when the teacher was away.
(3) narrative properly, the psychological activities and events of the characters are true and natural.
Determine the quantitative range
Some composition topics specify the number of materials to be selected. Be sure to pay attention to the examination of the topic, and you can't choose the topic beyond the scope. Too many materials, not only failed, but made mistakes.
Wonderful exercise
One thing that happened after the exam
After the mid-term exam, Mr Meng asked me and Li Haixia, the mid-team leader, to correct the math papers in the office. Dig out the paper yourself, the standard answer continues, and the final total score is 98 points. My heart is full of sweetness. But when I think about it, I will revise my own paper, and others will definitely say this and that when they know it. So I asked Li Haixia to take a look at it for me. Li Haixia looked it over and said, "Yes, it's 98 points. It seems that you are the first in your class. It's really not easy! " I said, "I haven't finished approving it yet. Maybe there is a better answer than me! " "But my heart was secretly happy. Well, if it weren't for the first place, how could I be the representative of this math class?
While humming a song, I continued to correct it. Suddenly found a paper with a score of 99. Look at the name, it's Li Shihua, the representative of Chinese class! I really can't believe my eyes-Li Shihua is better at Chinese than me, but not as good as me in math every time. How did you climb on my head this time? I stare big eyes, face the standard answer, check the questions one by one, even a decimal point. But I really can't find a deduction point. I thought to myself: a math class representative, usually the first in the class, failed this Chinese class representative, which is too shameful. What will teachers and classmates think of me in the future? With this in mind, my heart sank. I deducted 2 points from an answer and changed Li Shihua's total score to 97. I thought to myself, just don't let you surpass me!
After doing this, somehow, my heart is always uneasy, my face is feverish, my head is sweating, and my hand holding the pen is shaking. Li Haixia is still absorbed in correcting homework. I leaned down and saw her typing a bright red "X" on a scribbled number. I said, "You are too strict. This number is correct, but it is not clearly written. " I said, opening the paper. It was originally from Li Haixia.
At this time, I felt that my face was burning worse. I didn't dare to look Li Haixia in the eye, for fear that she would find me embarrassed. I quickly turned out Li Shihua's paper and changed my score from 97 to 99. Then I breathed a sigh of relief, and the stone in my heart finally fell to the ground ...
Wonderful click
The title of this composition stipulates to write "one thing" after the exam, so the author only chooses one thing to write.
The story is vivid enough to reflect the author's psychological process from "vanity" to "vanity", and the language expression is true and vivid.
Determine the scope of personnel
Some writing themes are defined for the author. When reviewing questions, we should determine the scope of people according to the requirements, and make it clear whether to write for ourselves or others. If we use the first person, we must never use the second person or the third person.
Wonderful exercise
My Deskmate
"Bad luck, bad luck!" At the beginning of the new semester, the class teacher transferred a boy who was not learning well to my side and sat at my desk. I was really angry at that time, because he knew nothing, so I hated him and wanted to stay away from him all the time.
His name is Mao Hongwei, with a round head and a round brain and a silly face. Come to school every morning, and this "pain in the ass" is already in my seat. When he saw me coming, he smiled and said, "Wu Yao, you're here!" However, I am ungrateful and always give him a dirty look. Many times, I threw the waste paper after wiping the ink into his desk. He didn't say anything, but smiled at me and threw the waste paper into the dustbin. So, I pretended that I couldn't see the words written by the teacher on the blackboard, so I stood up and deliberately squeezed into his side. I often push him to the ground and break his ass. But he still smiled casually and got up from the ground.
Last Wednesday, at the end of the third class, a classmate asked me to explain a problem to him. When I finished the topic and walked to my seat, the teacher was already handing out the exercise books. There are two books on our desk, one is good and the other is bad. Mao Hongwei is sitting on the seat. I want to run to grab that good book, but I'm afraid my classmates will laugh at me, so I have to admit that I'm unlucky and think that a pain in the ass like him will definitely grab that good book. But the situation is just the opposite. Mao Hongwei's action surprised me. Without hesitation, he took the "rotten" book with his name written on it and put the intact book on my desk. What an amazing move! His behavior made me feel ashamed and my heart was pounding. You know, this is not a simple action, it contains sincere feelings and embodies a noble quality.
My deskmate, he really impressed me! Compared with him, I look so small. Although he can't achieve ideal results in the examination paper or publish excellent articles in the composition selection, I can see from his behavior that he has a shining heart.
Wonderful click
(1) In the article, "I am me and he is him", the usage of person is accurate and meets the requirements of the text.
② Contrast "I" and "He" to highlight the selfishness of "I" and the preciousness of "He". Very infectious and persuasive.