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Life grows in the process of constantly facing and overcoming setbacks. On the road of life, only by leaving a solid footprint step by step can we reflect the value of life. This was inspired when my father and I walked together on a dirt road.

When the results of the competition came out, I learned that I had lost my name in Sun Shan. My mood is like the weather at that time, gloomy and restless for a long time.

When I got home and finished my meal, my father looked at me dejected and said that he would take me for a walk in the fields when I got home. I promised listlessly, because it had just rained, the air was fresh, and the surrounding ears of rice and Shan Ye had experienced the baptism of wind and rain, which made them look full of vitality. I looked at a vibrant scene and relaxed a little. At this time, my father said, "Can you find the footprints when we came?" I looked down at the ground and found it soon. I pointed to my father and asked, "Can you find these footprints when the weather is fine?" I immediately answeredno. My father asked me why, and I said, "Because of the rain, the land became muddy, so I left traces." Father walked and said, "It's just like life!" "Life?" I suddenly realized, yes, only after experiencing the baptism of wind and rain can we leave traces on the road of life and realize the value of life. I watched my father's firm steps and thought carefully about the wisdom gained in the process.

Frustration is the storm on the road of life. After the baptism of wind and rain, we can leave traces of life, create the value of life and write the meaning of life.

I am full of energy and fighting spirit. I will never forget the wisdom I gained when I walked with my father on a dirt road. I will come out one by one, show my value, and write a road to success for myself with actions.

Teacher's comment: There are two points in the article that are worth learning: first, the use of writing techniques to see the big from the small, such as "taking the dirt road" in the article is very common in life, and it is commendable that the author can understand a profound philosophy of life from it; Second, the idea is ingenious. The author does not directly write the process of "taking the dirt road", but expresses it through emotional changes, such as "I can't be calm for a long time", "I am a little relaxed" and "I am full of fighting spirit", thus avoiding the "rigidity" of the narrative.

The enlightenment to students' writing is that they should pay more attention to the people and things around them (especially those common and ordinary people and things), and write their own feelings when writing, which can make the article profound; Think from different aspects and write from different angles when conceiving. Maybe you will find something unusual and write an original article.