Improve a sentence

Liu Ming and Jin Gyeong are good friends. Liu Ming often invites Jin Gyeong to play ball.

Types of Ill Sentences and Methods of Modifying Example Sentences

1. Incomplete synthesis

She was praised by her teachers and classmates for her good grades. What is the subject of "get"? Because of such good grades, she got ...)

10 14, with the idea of learning from the aviation department, our blackboard newspaper was also founded. The subject of "hug" is obviously "we", but the subject of the latter sentence is "blackboard newspaper" instead of "we", and the latter sentence should be changed to "we also run blackboard newspaper". )

Through this study, I received a profound education. The subject of "yes" should be "Xue", because with the preposition "through", the subject is gone. )

Although she is busy at work every day, she still studies with her classmates or reads books by herself. ("insist" on what? The word "time" cannot be saved. )

2. Incorrect word order

In order to commend the advanced, we have learned many touching stories about Mr. Li's loyalty to the party's education. In recognition of being advanced, we have learned many touching stories about Teacher Li's loyalty to the Party's education. )

This seminar was jointly organized by the National Vocational Education Management Committee and the State Economic Commission at the end of May this year. (co-organized at the end of May this year) was changed to "co-organized at the end of May this year"

(3) In yesterday's semi-final, Cuba and Peru beat South Korea and Czech Republic with 3: 1 and 2: 1 respectively. (In yesterday's semi-final, Cuba and Peru beat South Korea and Czech Republic by 3: 1 and 2: 1 respectively. )

3. Improper collocation

Although he didn't feel tired at work, the more he worked, the more energetic he became. Change "although" to "not only" and "not only".

We should accept everyone's opinions and correct mistakes and shortcomings in our work. "Right" and "shortcomings" don't match, we should say "overcome shortcomings and correct mistakes". "

At the meeting, he actively listened to criticism from others. The word "positive" should be changed to "open-minded"

Over the past four years, he has studied hard and mastered this technology maturely. "Mature" should be changed to "skilled".

4. The meaning is not clear

(1) Before Xiao Wang arrived at school, the class teacher said anxiously, "She never asks for leave" ("Never asks for leave" is ambiguous, which can mean that Xiao Wang has always been undisciplined and never asks for leave; It can also mean that Xiao Wang is strict with himself at ordinary times, observes discipline, always arrives at school on time and never asks for leave.

(2) Xiao Gan told me that when she finished the gouache painting that participated in the competition, we could travel to Qingdao together. ("She" can refer to Xiao Gan or another person)

It is important to improve the quality of breakfast. Breakfast nutrition should provide vitamins and minerals that account for two-thirds of the total daily demand of the human body, so we must not be careless about breakfast. Breakfast should provide two-thirds of the total vitamins and minerals needed by the human body every day.

I heard that the village doctor Pan is going to give you a lecture on agricultural technology. Everyone is in high spirits. Before the time, the meeting room of the village Committee was crowded with many villagers who came to listen to the lecture. The scene was so lively that it was changed from "it's not time yet" to "it's not time for class" and "villagers come to attend classes" was changed to "villagers come to attend classes".

The water on the mountain is precious, so we will leave it to those who come at night. There is an ambiguity about "people who come at night" or "people who come late".

5. illogical

1. The Chinese review materials compiled by our school have been printed. (deleted)

2. Young people are the period when the world outlook is formed. "Youth is a period" is not appropriate. You can change "youth" into "youth".

More than 800 people, with a few withered arms, struggled with the storm and flood for a day and a night. (How can "more than 800 people" have thousands of arms? The word "thousands" should be changed to "more than one thousand"

Last year, Forbes magazine listed you as the second richest man in China. Do you think it is accurate? The contradiction between "the richest man" and "the second child"

In order to prevent such traffic accidents from happening again, we have strengthened traffic safety education and management.

6. Semantic repetition

1. After a whole day's exercise, he was black and blue all over. (Revision: "All over" and "All over" are repeated, the latter is a word, and the former has been deleted.

Uncle Li is old, and the hair on his head is white. Where is the hair without it? It can be seen that the word "head" is unnecessary, otherwise it will be verbose. )

3. Ma Lao and Lao Li have conducted rice high-yield experiments for many times. ("Repeated" and "repeated" have the same meaning, so there is no need to use them repeatedly. One of them should be deleted. )

4. The heavy schoolwork burden of primary and middle school students is a chronic disease that puzzles our basic education. ("stubborn disease" and "disease" are repetitive, and both should be deleted.

I corrected the incorrect typo. Don't repeat incorrect and wrong words. Just remove one at random.