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Fanka continued to dream, and suddenly felt a terrible pain. It turned out that the boss had a wicker in his hand and pulled it down hard. While smoking a cigarette, he cursed, "Get up and do something, you lazy bastard." Fanka got up quickly, hugged Xiao Zi and drank ... Suddenly, Xiao Zi began to cry. It turned out that he was hungry. Fanka hurried to pour water, poured it and then rushed over to give it to the little guys. The water was very hot, so the boss quickly grabbed it. Who knows that Fanka thought the boss had it? As soon as the hand was released, the bottle fell and the baby was scalded by boiling water. The cry of the cubs was earth-shattering, and the boss flew into a rage when he saw the fire, and he wanted to strangle Fanka. The proprietress picked up the cub, lovingly coaxed the cub and scolded Fanka. The boss was very angry, and the proprietress added fuel to the fire. The boss called the servant and shouted, "Help me take this boy to the woodshed!" " "The boss wants to kill him. The servant picked up Fanka and Fanka stared at him motionless, like a frightened bird. Where does he know, how much bad luck he has faced? ...

Later, I only heard the noise in the yard, full of whipping, crying and barking ... maybe the boss was tired and he stopped. Fanka lay motionless on the ground, he was dying. He looked at the moon in the sky, and the bright moonlight was so sad ... He said "Grandpa" and his head tilted. He finally got rid of it. He died in tears. ...

Ii Fanka continued to write 400 words, with a tragic ending.

"Small zai son, quick give me up! Why, you are still sleeping soundly, I will kick you to death! " When the boss came back and saw Fanka asleep in the street, he scolded him and kicked him hard with his feet. Fanka woke up from the pain.

The boss pulled up the skinny van card like a cat and slapped him hard. Then he threw him to the ground and said, "Get up quickly and go back to the store to clean up for me."

Fanka cried and stood up slowly. I thought to myself: Grandpa will definitely receive my letter soon.

Back in the shop, Fanka picked up an old broom that was about to fall apart and swept the floor. After cleaning for half an hour, I finally finished cleaning. The proprietress came to check and suddenly saw some rubbish in a corner. She said angrily to Fanka, "Look, it hasn't been cleaned yet." The boss heard this, came out, picked up the belt and hit Fanka. The boss was beaten up before he left. Fanka was black and blue, so she got up and picked up a broom to clean the corner.

In the evening, Fanka accidentally fell asleep while shaking the cradle for the boss's baby. 1 hour later, their little boy began to cry, woke Fanka, and the boss woke up. He raised his chin and threw it at Fanka. Van Gogh was shot in the head before he could react. People say, "What a pity!" ) Fanka covered her head with her hand and began to cry in pain.

A few months later, Fanka sat at the door. A man came over and asked Fanka, "Hello, little friend, do you know if Fanka is there?" "ah! Uncle, I am Fanka! " Then, the man said, "Ah, you are Fanka. I'm sorry to tell you that your grandfather just received your letter and passed away! " ""What, grandpa died? " "That's right!" "ah! My dear grandpa! "Every card is very painful.

A few months later, in winter, the cold wind blew and it began to snow. Fanka was still beaten by the boss.

In a cold winter, Fanka made a mistake and was dragged to the backyard by his boss, making him kneel on the ground. Fanka curled up in a ball with cold and fainted.

The next day, the boss came to the backyard and watched Fanka curl up and freeze to death. But there was a smile on her lips. Fanka saw the loach, saw his dear grandfather and hugged him. ..........

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Ⅲ nasty nasty nasty! ! Keep writing Fanka! ! ! About 300 to 400 words! !

After more than an hour, Fanka fell asleep hopefully. He saw his grandfather sitting on a warm kang, pulling his leg and reading his letter, while Misgurnus wagged his tail and walked around. Grandpa frowned while reading and suddenly put on his tattered fur coat. Out of the house, driving a broken carriage. Come "creaking". Ah! Grandpa came to pick me up, and Fanka jumped at him excitedly, suddenly with empty air, and grandpa was gone. Then there was a burst of spicy pain and unbearable shouting: "Little rabbit, dare to sleep, even staring at my son's quilt, and saying that you are talking in your sleep, trying to wake him up?" Ah! The boss pulled out his whip and was beaten again, leaving Fanka scarred and rolling on the ground in pain, unconscious. ...

In the coldest winter in Moscow, the cold wind roared and the snow fell heavily. Walking in the street, my face hurt like a knife. Today is the coldest day since winter. Poor Fanka is wearing a thin dress and a pair of flat slippers. His mother made the clothes for him, and even the slippers were worn by adults. Fanka finally woke up, her eyes braved Venus, and she looked at her distant hometown and shed tears. Shake the basket helplessly.

Besides, Fanka's letter was put in the mailbox and taken out by the postman: "Who wrote this letter?" What's the name of' country grandpa'? This must have been written by some ignorant child. Forget it, put it in the mail bag first! " "Ding, ding, ding" "Hey, old friend, Jim, come in and have a drink!" It turns out that the postman's name is Jim. He passes by here every day and becomes friends with his boss over time. Sometimes the boss always lets him in for a drink to warm himself up: "Aria, I met an interesting thing when I received my email today. An ignorant child wrote a letter saying,' Grandfather in the country received it-Constantine McAuliffe'. It's ridiculous! " "What, that's not every card's grandfather? Fanka dares to write to Grandpa. " The boss thought for a moment and said, "Leave it to me!" He picked up the letter and tore it open as he spoke. Suddenly, he flew into a rage: "This' little rabbit' eats my clothes and wears mine, and dares to write a complaint to see how I provoke him." So he went to Fanka, left a shoulder pole and two big buckets, and said, "Go, fetch me water in the suburbs three kilometers away." It turns out that the water pipes in Moscow freeze in winter, so water can only be used in the suburbs. Fanka looked at two vats in a daze: yeah! How to carry water in such a big bucket? Seeing Fanka in a daze, the boss cursed: "Let's go!" As he spoke, he kicked out every card with one foot. Fanka had to fetch water. Walking with one foot deep and one foot shallow, it seems that every step takes 1000 kilograms. The wind is blowing, and the snow is falling harder. Finally, not far from home, Fanka fell down forever. ...

Ⅳ Continue to write a 400-word "Fanka" composition in lesson 15 of the second volume of the sixth grade.

Wake up ...

-"Fanka" continued.

Fanka seems to get up earlier than anything. Who knows how happy he is this day! Fanka was called by the boss to wash the dishes. He was so excited to wash the dishes, because he thought that Grandpa would pick him up after receiving the letter, and his heart was full of expectations. But-suddenly, the boss grabbed Fanka by the ear, dragged him into the yard, slapped him with a belt and said, "Who told you to rinse so hard?" You ruined Lao Tzu's bowl! "

Fanka was knocked unconscious and it took a long time to wake up. He was sent to drink by those guys again. His life is getting worse every day. Ten days passed, twenty days passed, and a month passed. Fanka still hasn't received any news from Grandpa, and Fanka has completely lost confidence in Grandpa. Those people asked Fanka to have a drink. Fanka walked down the street without feeling. Suddenly, a carriage rushed over quickly. Fanka was knocked out of 18 meters before he could get out of the way, and Fanka fainted. Many people gathered around, and a kind woman, Sally Lev, saved Fanka and took him home to recuperate. Sally Lev has a son about the age of Fanka. He is the most famous troublemaker in town, but he has a kind heart. As soon as he learned that there were guests at home, he quickly came out to visit Fanka. It took Fanka a long time to wake up. Lev Sally's son greeted Fanka: "Hello, my name is Peter Lev." Fanka woke up when she saw herself lying in a strange bed and heard someone say hello to him. "Hello, my name is Ivan zhukov. Please call me Fanka! " Peter kept asking Fanka, who told his story from beginning to end. Debbie's mother, Sally Lev, burst into tears when she learned about Fanka's life. She stroked Fanka's head and said, "Poor child, you will live here in the future!" " God bless you, you don't have to suffer any more! "

After that, Fanka and Derby lived a happy life, but it didn't last long. When the shoemaker Ariasini learned that Fanka was adopted by others, she was so angry that she immediately ran to Sally's house to find Fanka. On this day, Fanka and Debbie went to play in the street. When they went home, they heard a loud noise from the house. They looked in through the window. Fanka met the shoemaker at home and recalled that painful life. They were afraid to enter the house before the shoemaker left. Sally saw two children coming back, and hurriedly asked Fanka to pack her bags. Three days later, the shoemaker will come and take Fanka away. Fanka thought she would return to that hellish life, and suddenly knelt in front of Sally and begged her not to let the shoemaker take him away, otherwise, he would die!

Sally is a very caring person. Of course, she won't let Fanka suffer any more. After dinner, Sally prepared food and other luggage for Fanka, and told Fanka to leave the next day and live in the country with Sally's sister. In the evening, Fanka and Debbie were lying in bed, telling each other the taste of parting. "Fanka, what are your plans in the future?" "Go to your aunt's house first, otherwise, go wandering." On hearing the word "wandering", Peter got excited. "Wandering, isn't that a very interesting thing? Otherwise, I will go with you! " Fanka immediately said, "No, if you leave, your mother will be unbearable and will die of pain!" " "Peter had to stop talking.

The next morning, Fanka and the Derby family simply said goodbye and left. Fanka walked for more than a month and finally came to Sally's sister's house. Sally's sister Siepoli is an evil woman. Poor Sally can't see it. She put Fanka sheep in the jaws of death.

As soon as Fanka came to Polly's house, everyone looked at him with contempt and everyone bullied him. Fanka came to Polly's house and was punished all day. He was forced to work all day. Polly's brother is crazy. When he is happy, he plays with Fanka, either asking him to ride a horse or letting him go crazy with him. Fanka can't stand this kind of life. In a rage, he put on his backpack and ran away with Jim, his partner of the same age, in the middle of the night. Jim is also an unfortunate child. His parents died after he was born, so he had no choice but to work at Polly's house.

Fanka took Jim the whole time. When they are hungry, they buy brown bread to eat. In the end, Fanka only spent a copper coin. A beggar younger than them begged from Fanka, who gave him his only copper coin.

Poor Fanka doesn't even have a penny now. What do they live on? When they are hungry, they pick up the garbage on the road to eat; When you are sleepy, you snuggle up to each other and soon fall asleep.

One morning, a heavy snow came and Fanka and Jim died.

(Because the teacher said that Fanka could not have such a happy ending! Because society is dark. )

Ⅳ Continue to write 400 words of Fanka. quick

An hour later, he fell asleep with sweet hope and had a sweet dream ... "Get up, little beast! Why are you sleeping on my workbench! " This is the voice of the boss. The boss is back? ! Fanka woke up from a dream and looked around with dim eyes. Suddenly, he saw the fierce face of the boss. Suddenly, I looked at my boss without sleep and fear. The boss glanced at the stage and suddenly grabbed Fanka's ear and shouted, "You damn little beast, how dare you steal my pen and ink! Hum, I will give you a good beating today! " Fanka was very scared, but she was afraid to speak. She just looked at her boss imploringly. But the boss didn't notice these things, so he picked up a big shoe last and hit Fanka on the head. Fanka screamed in pain, and even a heart of stone would be affected by this tragic voice. However, the boss's heart is harder than a heart of stone and will not be soft at all. As soon as he hit him, he scolded, "Well, I gave you food and clothes, and you stole from me. I really raised this little beast for nothing! ..... "Finally, the boss hit Van Card on the head again, and Van Card fainted ... When Van Card woke up, it was already the next afternoon. When the boss saw him awake, he asked him to pay for Xiao Zi to shake the cradle. Fanka didn't dare to disobey. He staggered over and shook his cradle gently and slowly ... Suddenly, he heard a stranger talking outside. Fanka thought it was grandpa and rushed out to see it excitedly. As a result, he went back to the house in disappointment and shook his cradle again ... On several occasions, when Fanka was working, he heard a stranger talking and thought it was grandpa, but they all ran out to watch. However, Fanka still firmly believes that Grandpa will come and will definitely pick him up ... Fanka went out so many times without being discovered by his boss, and felt lucky until one day ... it was a night of thunder and lightning, and it was stormy and rainy. Fanka was rocking the cradle for the cub again, and he heard a strange sound. Fanka thought to herself, "Since I haven't been a grandfather so many times, I'm afraid I won't be this time." But when he listened carefully again, the man's voice was old, and he could no longer restrain his excitement. He ran to the door and looked, alas, it was the old man who delivered milk. Fanka went back to the house again in disappointment. But just then, it thundered and the little boy cried with a "wow". Fanka got a fright and ran to shake the cradle. However, the boss still heard the sound of running, and he was furious with Fanka: "Little beast, what did you do to make you shake the cradle?" I want to play all day ... "Fanka doesn't know where he got the courage at this moment:" My grandfather is here, and you are awesome for a few days! "When the boss heard this, the fire whooshed up and roared," You learned to talk back. Look, I won't skin you today! "The boss grabbed the belt and took a sip, picked up the last tree, lifted his foot and kicked it ... This time he played worse than ever, beat Van Card black and blue, broke his head and broke a leg. ...

Fanka can't move in bed. The boss didn't give him anything to eat when he saw that he didn't work. After a few days, the boss felt that Fanka would not live for a few days, fearing that dying in his own home would affect his reputation. He used a broken mat and asked the man to take him out into the wild. ...

Fanka was shivering with cold, and her mouth was still chanting, "Grandpa, I'm really going to die. Why don't you pick me up? " Why, why ... "He was hungry and cold, and his whole body ached. After a while, Fanka, the poor child silently closed his eyes, stopped breathing and embarked on the road to heaven. ...

ⅵ Continue to write 400 words on each card.

Continue to write about 400 words per card.

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The next morning, the boss saw Fanka who had not got up yet, and grabbed his hair with his hand and pulled it hard. Fanka woke up screaming. The boss gave Fanka a hard look. Fanka was afraid and worried. The boss didn't hit him today, but his three meals today were cancelled. With tears in her eyes, Fanka reluctantly began to work. Fanka, who was hungry all day, managed to stay up until the evening. Fanka returned to the aisle and thought, the postman should give the letter to grandpa! It's very cold, and Fanka is shivering with cold, but the thought that she can go back to the village soon makes me feel that the cold wind seems to be smiling and singing. A month passed and Christmas came again. Grandpa didn't come to pick up Fanka. Fanka was beaten by her boss, and her body was covered with numerous whip marks. That night, Fanka sat in the aisle, aching all over. He heard the cry of the cold wind and wanted to run away. While the boss was asleep, Fanka stole a pair of shoes, a leather coat and dry food in the kitchen. Fanka put on her leather shoes and ran away overnight. On the way, Fanka ate all the dry food he stole. He advanced against the cold wind. In order to catch up with the time, Fanka only slept for a short time at night and set off immediately. One day, Fanka seemed to see a group of people watching and laughing somewhere. Curiosity drove Fanka through. He took a closer look and found that this place was the "guillotine". Fanka didn't understand what everyone was laughing at and walked away. The person behind Fanka seems to be shrinking, shrinking, shrinking, and finally turned into a dust. I don't know how far he has gone. Fanka trembled, her lips were white and her face was purple with cold. There is only one thing in his mind-grandpa's smiling face. I think the happy days in the country will come back soon, and I will return to my grandfather soon. Fanka has a smile on her lips. Fanka fell down in the singing of the cold wind, and Fanka seemed to be bright in the dark. ...

It's snowing like goose feather, and it's very cold. Fanka fell asleep in a thin quilt. Suddenly the door was knocked, and the boss shouted, "Get up quickly!" Buy some vegetables quickly, then mop the floor and wash these clothes! "Fanka rubbed his eyes and came out." Boss, I am so cold. Can you give me a cotton-padded jacket? "Bang, the boss slapped Xiao Fanka." Get out! "XiaoFan card quickly picked up the vegetable blue and went out. At the door, she met a fat cook who kindly stuffed a piece of bread. Fan Xiao Kolor ran to the market with bread ... It was so cold that little Fanka was frozen stiff. He picked up bread and wanted to eat it. He saw a young mother holding a child and holding a little girl selling flowers. The child in his arms saw Xiao Fanka's bread and shouted, "I want bread!" " The mother kept patting the child's head and kept shouting, "sell flowers for one yuan!" "What beautiful flowers!" Passers-by hurried by, ignored. Xiao Fanka looked at the bread and ran to give it to the children. The child smiled happily. The young mother gave Xiao Fanka a flower and said, "Thank you! Good people. " Fan Xiao smelled the flowers in Kolor. How fragrant they are! He ran away with a smile. Xiao Fanka bought good food and walked back. When she sees an old man, she always follows him. Xiao Fanka sent him flowers and ran into the house. A few days later, the old man found a house and asked the boss for his apprentice Xiao Fanka. It turns out that the old man is very rich, but he has no descendants. He has been looking for a kind person and training him to succeed him in running the business. He found that little Fanka was just the person he needed. Little Fanka is very happy to finally leave his cruel boss. He told the old man that he still had a grandfather in the country. He misses him very much and hopes to live with him. The old man is very sympathetic to Fanka and friendly to Fanka. He sent people to the countryside to pick up Fanka's grandfather, and sent Fanka to school to learn literacy and receive a good education. A few years later, Fanka grew up. He has become an elegant gentleman. ...

When the postman saw that there was no detailed address on the envelope and was about to throw it away, he found Constantine. The familiar name "Makarik", the postman said to himself: "Isn't this a good friend? I haven't seen him for years. I wonder how he is now? " The next day, the postman took the letter and drove the carriage to the place where his friend once lived. After many twists and turns, he finally found his friend Constantine. Makaric. I gave the letter to Fanka's grandfather. Grandpa was very sad to learn that his precious grandson had suffered a lot, but he said helplessly to the postman, "I am also a sponsor, and Fanka can only leave it to fate." The postman also became sad. Fanka has been waiting in the shoe store for a day, two days, January, two months ... and he hasn't seen his grandfather pick him up yet. He felt very disappointed and thought in dismay, "Grandpa doesn't love me? "Half a year passed, and one day a letter came from the countryside, saying that grandpa had passed away. Fanka collapsed. Fanka has been suffering in the shoe store for another eight years, and now she has grown up. During this period, he secretly learned the technology of making leather shoes. One day, he escaped from his boss's shoe store and went to the street to shine shoes. After another two years, he saved a little money, began to make his own leather shoes, and lived a free and contented life.

The seventh composition: continuing Fanka

The next morning, Fanka woke up from her sleep. Life is as usual, beaten and starved. But Fanka's heart is sweet. She always hoped that grandpa would write back soon after reading her letter and take her home. Leave this place where he was tortured and beaten forever. But things are not as beautiful as Fanka imagined. One day passed, two days passed, and every day there was a petite figure in front of the door, but grandpa never came again after a week. Fanka began to be anxious and absent-minded, always thinking, "Did Grandpa read my letter?" "Why hasn't Grandpa come to take me home?" So he always screwed up the tasks assigned by the boss, so the boss hit him a lot. Van Cade was black and blue. Finally, Fanka was exhausted and never got up again. He left and went to a place where there was no hunger and pain. Maybe he has the happy life he really wants.

ⅷ Fanka continued to write a 400-word composition.

Fanka felt a sharp pain. When he woke up, it turned out that the boss was beating him with a belt. He said, "Son of a bitch, dare to use my ink, you have no patience!" " Ah! Pretend you can't hear, you want to die! Get up and go to work. "Say that finish, he also kicked Fan Ka. Fanka had to endure fatigue and help the boss make wine and wash clothes. There is only one wish in his heart now, that is, I hope grandpa will take him back after reading the letter.

A few days later, Fanka hasn't received a reply, and he is a little worried. It was not until the other day that Fanka learned from others that stamps were needed to write letters. He wanted to write another letter, but there was no chance.

"Start". He is always trying to find a way. He is absent-minded in his work. Well, he was beaten by the boss again. . . . . .

A postman came today and the boss went to collect it. The postman said, "I saw that this letter was not stamped, so I looked at the address and finally let me find you." Please put a stamp on the letter before sending it. I'm leaving. "The boss opened the letter immediately after the postman left, and when he finished reading it, Fanka would be beaten again. Tonight, Fanka endured the pain again.

Finally, he came up with a top secret plan. That night, after everyone in Fanka's shop slept, they took a pair of shoes, opened the window and sneaked away. . . . . .

ⅸ "Fanka" continued to write 400 words

The continuation of Fanka

When Fanka was dreaming a beautiful dream, the boss and proprietress came back. They were very angry when they saw Fanka sleeping. They replied that the boss picked up what was in his hand and hit it. Fanka woke with a start. When I saw that the proprietress and the boss were very angry, the boss wanted to hit Fanka again. Their baby cried, so the boss had to stop and let Fanka shake the cradle for the baby. Fanka had to shake the cradle for the baby.

The next day, these guys teased Fanka again. At this time, Fanka was very sad. I cried sadly. At this moment, Fanka thought of Grandpa, so she looked at the door to see if the letter had reached Grandpa. Fanka is very worried.

The postman took the letter from the mailbox and saw a letter without an address and postal code. He wanted to return it, but he didn't know who wrote it and threw it away. This letter is a letter from Fanka to Grandpa.

Grandpa misses his grandson, too. He wants to know if Fanka is doing well in the city and to see his grandson.

So, grandpa took a few days off and went to the city to see Fanka. Fanka was sitting at the door of the shoe store, looking around, and saw a familiar figure. Fanka shouted, "Grandpa." He threw himself into grandpa's arms. Grandpa cried with joy when he saw his little grandson. Fanka asked grandpa if he had received the letter, and grandpa said "no", so Fanka told grandpa his life story and asked him to take him back. Grandpa agreed.

Grandpa took Fanka back to the country. Although life is hard, he is also very happy. Fanka has no regrets.

ⅹ Fanka continues to write about 400 words.

The next day, before dawn, Fanka rubbed his sleepy eyes and ran to the gate with brisk steps. He waited anxiously for grandpa there, but grandpa never came. Fanka asked a passerby in a friendly way, "What time is it?" "Let me see, it's six thirty-two." Hearing this, Fanka was so anxious that she ran away without saying thank you. Because he has to get back to the store before everyone wakes up.

When Fanka came to the front of the store, the boss and proprietress had already stood at the door. The expression is very scary, and Fanka's eyes are full of extreme panic. So, he wanted to get through the boss and the proprietress, but before Fanka got through, the boss grabbed the short blond hair and dragged it into the yard, but the proprietress kicked Fanka hard in the back, and Fanka couldn't help crying. After the boss dragged Fanka to an open space in the yard, he pulled out his arm-wide belt and gave Fanka a good beating. Fanka cried. He cried so sad, so painful, so sad ... He knelt on the ground and prayed to Almighty God to let his dear grandfather come and take him home quickly. He can't stand this kind of abuse any longer. Fanka carefully uncovered her clothes, carefully looked at the red marks on her body, and cried even more. Bitter tears ran down his cheeks on both sides, leaving tears on his face.

The days of flying away passed day by day, and grandpa hasn't come yet. Fanka is still beaten, scolded, frozen, hungry and beaten every day ... Fanka no longer calls Grandpa, but Fanka thinks Grandpa won't come and is full of disappointment with that letter!

Another week later, near noon, those guys played a trick on Fanka again and asked Fanka to give them a glass of wine. Fanka bowed her head and walked reluctantly, accidentally knocking down an old man. Fanka quickly picked up the old man, patted off the dust for the old man, and sincerely apologized to the old man. Fanka looked up, ah, it was grandpa. Grandpa is still the same after a few months. When you look closely, there are only a few shallow wrinkles. However, Fanka became fierce: his face was sallow and sallow, and he was as thin as a bag of bones ... Grandpa grabbed Fanka, wiped his tearful face and said regretfully, "Good grandson, it's all Grandpa's fault. I shouldn't have sent you to be an apprentice. Stop it, let's go home, let's go home! I will never let you be an apprentice again ... "Grandpa said, stroking Fanka's head.

Fanka finally ended his miserable apprenticeship. But what is waiting for him below?