1. On a beautiful rainy day with few words, the soft rain outside the window pulled up my thoughts. Looking around, it is a field, a golden world, full of the temptation of harvest. I really want to leave the glittering and translucent rain flower in my hand, and the beauty of the moment always makes people think. I don't know when the nameless loneliness climbed into my heart, causing ripples in my heart. Once upon a time, I also reached out and picked a flower like this, at the foot of the 800-mile Qinchuan. There, there is my haunted hometown. "Being alone in a foreign land is a stranger, and I miss my relatives twice every festive season." I miss home, but I frown, but I miss home. In my memory, the autumn rain in my hometown is so delicate and lingering that it binds the hearts of every Sanqin son and daughter. Looking at the rain outside the window, I seem to see my hometown in the rain. Rain gently stroked the blue tiles on the house, rustling, rustling, like silkworms eating mulberry leaves; The river on the edge of the village is still so cheerful, and the raindrops hit the water surface, rolling up the vortex and drifting with the waves; The distance is green, the wheat seedlings are green, immersed in the bath of autumn rain and growing happily. Another bumper harvest year. It seems that I can still smell the faint fragrance in my trance. Yeah, it's sweet. It smells like autumn. I always like to walk casually in the alley, especially like to walk quietly in the rain alone. Let the wind roll up her hair and let the rain wet her whole body. In the world separated by the rain curtain, she savors the tranquility alone and another interpretation of life in the haze. In misty rain, there is always a faint fragrance. Youyou, so sweet! In autumn, the Han River in the light rain is full of strange tenderness. The water waves gently stroked the stones by the river, and the sound of the waves turned into whispers between lovers, which were soft. Light smoke mist hangs over the river, and there are some shadows of sails in the distance, as well as the rumble of stone crusher. Working people, regardless of spring, summer, autumn and winter, always feel the fullness of life in their busyness. Gone with the wind, gone with the wind, the soft rain has woven into a continuous fine net, trapping several mysteries, several illusions and several strands of meditation! Cool, the rain fell on my face, awakened a distant dream and gently pulled my mood back. What you see is the dying leaves. Smell it carefully There is also a faint fragrance in the air, which is refreshing-that is the smell of autumn!

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I always write a composition with few words, so if time is tight, I must learn how to write more words. The teacher said that I could express a meaning in a few words and write more examples and so on. If you really want to write a good composition, you should lay a good foundation, read more articles and recite more articles, understand the author's writing ideas and remember more sentences. Like the author, you can write an article after reading each article when time permits. As long as you can follow this line of thinking, you will gain something. You can remember the author's sentence fragments as much as you have learned in this article. Then you can try to break through the author and pursue greater progress. Of course, reading more beautiful articles and masterpieces is also very beneficial to cultivate Chinese literacy. But remember, don't spend time on students' compositions, because students' compositions are not mature enough to help us much. As long as you can catch them.

3. Excerpt from a good article 1 If God wants to destroy a person, he will go crazy. But I have been crazy for so long, why hasn't God killed me? We let go of dignity, personality and stubbornness because we can't let go of one person.

In this sad and bright March, I whipped my horse from my thin youth, through corydalis, through kapok, through the sadness and impermanence that appeared and disappeared. Some people will be engraved in their memories forever, even if they forget her voice, her smile and her face, but the feeling when they think of her will never change. The wind blows like a broken flower, and your smile is swaying, becoming the most beautiful ornament in my life. Looking at the sky, the snow, and the deep shadow of the season, I thought they were going to sleep quietly this summer, but they were remembered and swarmed.

It runs through the whole city. Those camphor trees, along the rolling mountain roads of the city, have grown into endless memories.

They are standing on the roadside, standing in every corner of the city. Standing by the river of memories, watching the swaying ferry silently ferry all year round.

In this way, they quietly drew dusk and morning. 10 I miss you in the past, I miss the age of seventeen when I left by bike, I miss the wind aroused by your smile, and I walk through my thin youth with sadness and joy and yesterday that is gone forever.

Bright. Sadness.

Endless. 1 1 I saw the mottled and deep shadows cast by life when it flew over my head. The hourglass tossed and turned, and the thousand cranes bloomed brilliantly for another season.

I know another year has passed. Many things have also changed. 12 How can I remember something I haven't remembered for a long time?

Those silent expressions lie quietly on the floating grass. 13 I always recall countless times, those snowy winters, the broken clouds in the city and the sunrise that never appeared.

Your shoulders have been stretched all summer. I can't see the end of it.

14 that kind of loneliness goes hand in hand. Lost one heavy dusk after another.

Turn your hands for the clouds and cover your hands for the rain. How do you know I'm not alone? 15 those endless fires, the temperature cursed every inch of the earth.

The surging tide surged on the hot bank, washed along the road and burned along the road. The bondage of who is who is stubbornly passed down in the lifeline of thousands of miles.

16 staggered. Three staggered.

A thousand crosses make up a legend with endless words. No one knows whose past.

Buried the pallor of vows and the green of waiting. Is that you? Is that you? 17 The other is that the essence of youth is loneliness, or loneliness permeates the whole youth. 18 hide in a certain time and miss the palmprint for a while; Hiding somewhere, missing someone standing on the road, on the road, makes me worry.

19 graduation is like a window pane. We're going to smash it, then walk over there with sharp fragments and start a completely different life bloody. Twenty pieces of time are like clouds, and our youth flies across the blue sky.

2 1 We are flies on the glass window, with a bright future and no way out. I often laugh, but I am not always happy. Before 23, I was a person who loved looking up at the sky, and the wall of the blue sky always gave me the courage to live. Now I like the deep night sky, all-inclusive darkness and forbearance, and no one sees the tears left. Those warm but sad sunsets cut our posture into a sad silhouette and left it in the air full of flowers.

Go back the way you walked before. Relive the scenery you have seen.

Even the cricket that sang in the grass ten years ago is still singing now. I passed by them, passing through places called once again, and slowly, soft moss grew in my heart. They fly slowly over our bodies, pulling out white fuzzy light in the air and crisscrossing in the dim sky above us.

It rained cats and dogs, and they were forgotten here by me, forgotten in the dead corner of time and space, silent and covered by rain and years for ten years. I have walked through the playground you described in your dream countless times.

Those huge glass bottles scattered around are full of happy candy. Goldfish are swinging in the air.

The huge tail fin fanned the bigger dark clouds in the sky. They stirred the air, and the whirlwind blurred their eyes.

The horizon rippled with the swing, so the afterimage of the sunset fluctuated repeatedly. Those dim lights on the horizon hit the lonely ground like seals in the trajectory of the swing, but you can't be found in the wet reflection.

3 1 When you leave, the time becomes unusual. Sometimes it's slow, just like slow motion in movies. Everyone laughs or cries at you a thousand times slower.

Sometimes, like a sudden frame jump, it becomes out of control. I always have the illusion that those huge clock faces appear on the ground, those hands are ticking under my feet, and these sounds haunt every absent-minded gap. Everyone reminds me that after you left, you seem to have taken time with you.

Not every effort will be rewarded, but every effort must be rewarded, which is an unfair and irreversible proposition. There is no legend that the grass grows and the warbler flies in this city. It always lives in reality, with fast drums, hurried figures, numb eyes and fake smiles, and I am being assimilated. Reference books are the most sought-after printed matter in China besides banknotes.

Infinite tenderness for a long time, infinite tenderness for a long time, 36 time is the best healing medicine. No matter how many wounds, they will disappear on the skin and dissolve into the heart, becoming beautiful patterns on the ventricular wall. There is no logic in the world. In a blink of an eye, the soft moon halo turned into a cold sword light, the circuitous path turned into a continuous blood flow, the swaying madder turned into a wandering soul, and my life became a ripe fruit hanging on the branches, teetering. Something in your heart is cracked, a very solid thing is broken in two, and it melts in blood. Even if all my shoes are drowned, my schoolbag can't escape the attack of scrawl.

There are too few words in this composition. Briefly answer the question of how many points are deducted from IELTS composition. I hope I can help you.

1. About the problem of insufficient words: IELTS composition is not enough words, and it will definitely lose points. The specified number of words is 150. If you only write 139, deduct 1 minute.

But if you can write 145, the examiner will think that "the length of the article is ok" and may judge it according to the level of the article to avoid deducting 1 point. If you have nothing to write, your word count should not be too bad. The same rule applies to a 250-word composition.

2. About the problem of too many words: If your IELTS composition has too many words, check whether there are some lengthy and unnecessary descriptions, and don't deduct points because of these unnecessary information, which is not worth the loss. In addition, if one composition is too long, it will definitely affect the performance of another composition, because there is only 1 hour in total.

Especially if you ignore the big composition because of the small composition, the total score will be more affected. In IELTS writing, the number of words in IELTS writing should not be too outrageous, otherwise you will only suffer.

If there are too many words in the IELTS composition, the marking teacher will think that you are too wordy, unfocused and disorganized. If the number of words in IELTS composition is too small, the teacher will doubt your writing ability and level.

5. Silent monument with few words, the night is quiet and the moon is as cool as water.

I walked on the silent boulevard, and everything in nature was quiet, even cicadas and crickets fell asleep. Bending down, I picked up a fallen leaf. In the mottled moonlight, I saw Liu Bang walking leisurely on a white horse. He came to me through time and space.

He was silent but smiling. The slightly rising radian of the corners of the mouth reflects an undercurrent and dangerous banquet at the Hongmen Gate thousands of years ago. Facing Xiang Yu's ambition of haste makes waste, he kept silent and held millions of heroes.

Under the clear sky, on the bank of Wujiang River, he overlooks the tyrant of Chu, and he has lost all hope. With a wave of his sword, he declared to the world with silence: it was strength that made him hold the throat of a strong enemy! Yes, success or failure lies not in the overlord's arrogance, but in the wordless strategy of Emperor Gaozu's Jin Goma Railway.

The power of silence has created a Millennium monument. Straighten up and walk slowly, tracing back the time, as if I had come to a country house and a wild home in western Europe.

I looked up and saw Woolf. The smell of coffee is dazzling ... She is writing a letter to Orlando.

Fame is undoubtedly cruel to him. This talented writer, who lingered on the edge of life and death all his life and finally could not get rid of the shackles, may have raised his head and issued a loud question to the sun, the crowd and the gods. Why did he attach the disease to her alone, and his hand holding the pen became tighter? Finally, he bowed his head, just smiled bitterly and paid thousands of dollars to this circulating pen. Words are silent, but Woolf's amazing talent has quietly created a great monument in his painstaking book.

Confucius said, "I want to be speechless." Strength is silent, diligence is silent, and glory is silent after all.

This is a monument to silence. Facing the ridicule of overseas students, Xu Beihong splashed ink and declared that those beautiful masterpieces were monuments of silence.

Make international students feel ashamed and contribute to the rise of the nation; At the Olympic Games, Liu Xiang said nothing and was furious. After the whistle sounded, his figure was faster than the high wind, and he was a silent monument, creating brilliance for China people and miracles for Asia! I don't want to say anything ... I walked home late at night. The years flow quietly in my ear, my hand is loose, and a fallen leaf silently returns to the dust.

All is silent ... Let or not let Kong Rong's story make Pear Blossom an eternal beauty talk, and Dangliuchi Hutong has always been praised by everyone. Yes, in the face of the glittering gold medal in the World Table Tennis Championships, I can't help but ask, do you want to give up? Give up what? It is true that the people of China were so proud when the national anthem was played again and again in the table tennis competition. However, in the face of endless so-called "monopoly" doubts, we will also be anxious and reflect. So, should we let go? In my opinion, we can give up technology, not medals, and we can give up scientific training methods, but we must never deliberately weaken our own strength in order to win gold medals for other countries and whitewash the illusion of prosperity and pluralism in the world economy.

Time flies. One hundred years ago, China had just released drastic changes, and a shocking change had just begun. In the past 100 years, we have felt the great changes in China. We are proud to say that these changes were created by the hands of the people of China. When did we ask Britain and America to give up a piece of heaven and earth? It is better to teach people to fish than to teach them to fish.

When our advanced table tennis training methods reach the world's leading level, we have reason to exchange technology with other countries and give up our technology. When our rice planting technology was improved by Yuan Longping's achievements, we also offered to let him train rice planting talents for the world.

Only in this way can we solve the food problem instead of giving up food blindly to help the hungry. Kong Rong gave way to pears, six feet and one lane, giving up a traditional virtue and a beauty of human nature.

However, it is not the case that medals, food and money are given, and all materials are only needed for a while, sometimes even violating the most basic moral standards. Only advanced technology is shared by the world.

We can really see high-level competitions, we can really see that there are no hungry and crying children in this world, and we can really see people's smiling faces blooming in every corner of the world. Whether you change the world or not; No one will force you to let it go.

However, before you consider giving up, please remember to consider whether to give up a temporary honor for a temporary world "glory", or to give up technology and science for a long and happy life, for a brilliant laugh in the world. Sincerely, Zhicheng pine and cypress will not betray their commitment to evergreen trees because of several rain and snow attacks. Rivers will not break the eternal agreement with the sea because of several droughts.

Mountains and rivers will not withdraw their commitment to vegetation because of a little cracked scar. Even so, what about the person who is the head of "Heaven and Earth"? Yes, honesty is the most precious character in the world, which gives the world a stable reliance and a stable pure land for the people.

Honesty is the foundation of career. Today, with melamine, clenbuterol and plasticizer one after another, which enterprise can keep its promise of being responsible to customers will win half the battle. When Alibaba's credit crisis broke out and the internal credit system collapsed, what we expected was an enterprise that could really make a good commitment, promising tens of millions of enterprises, so that consumers could really rest assured, and the commitment was an iron promise! Only such enterprises can truly support the backbone of the motherland! Only such enterprises can truly achieve a group of honest and trustworthy entrepreneurs, rather than mercenary criminals.

Honesty is the way to be a man. At the time of "three rescues a day", it is important to keep your word. The first step of being a man is to cultivate one's morality, and the first step of cultivating one's morality is to keep one's word.

The ancients often traveled not far from Wan Li for a promise to an old friend; Confucius' disciples spent time and energy on his last wishes; Even in Liangshan, Shui Bo, where outlaws and Jianghu thieves gather, there are two words in the first place: "faithfulness" and "righteousness".

6. Ask for four essays with as few words as possible ~ ~ ~ I am anxious to give everything to me today, enough is enough.

Of course, stopping at perfection is the most desirable result for everyone. Both farmers and fishermen in remote villages and workers and executives in prosperous cities are playing a harmonious rhythm for this fast-paced social development. However, Foxconn's brothers and sisters paid the price of their lives because they couldn't keep up with this harmonious rhythm. Environment is an important factor to change a person, but they can't be trapped in the present environment and don't know how to repay. Life can't be better. It is most appropriate to use the words of Mr. Ma Yun, the founder of Alibaba,' Today is cruel, tomorrow is even more cruel, and the day after tomorrow is beautiful, but most people die tomorrow night and can't see the sun the day after tomorrow' to reflect these people who can't stand the ups and downs of life. If you can't stand the blow, you will lose the beauty of the day after tomorrow. Perhaps, the environment is just a mistake in life choice. People's crossroads, wrong choices, missed opportunities, indeed, there are many. If this group is really not suitable for you, you can consider changing it. You don't have to wait until the boss thinks you are not qualified for the job before you choose to leave. You should find people who suit you in life, not people who make do with you. Even if the salary of this job is good, it goes against your principles and moral bottom line. You can say' no' generously, which is nothing shameful and vulgar. In recent years, a celebrity has appeared in Anhui. The names "Jay Chou's successor" and "Han Han in music" show his influence. Needless to say, the shadow of who he is, any search by any search engine, is his massive credit. Anyone who has read his resume knows that he is a graduate of Anhui Medical University. But he has embarked on the road of independent music creation, and the collection of songs and records is made by one person, which is creative. Only through official website's publicity can we get good sales. He has a large number of fans around the world. So many people like him, which shows that he is successful and an example for everyone. Medicine and music are two unrelated industries, but Vae has found its own way to maximize this choice infinitely. It is important to choose one that suits you. What doesn't suit you will only make you lose more. Take marriage as an example. Finding a loved one is a lifetime, not a so-so life. The road of life is not long, but short. Can't live on the spot. If you want to live, you must enjoy it. Now David's blind date programs are all about men choosing women and women choosing men. It is shocking that foreigners have China's views on love and love. If you ask others, you must first weigh yourself. The right bond is tied to two people, not on the condition that one of them is out of line and violates the social atmosphere. In that case, one end of a suitable balance will be unbalanced and tilted. The satirical Xifeng, Fuguishan, is so deep that she can't even figure out her own weight. She boasted that only graduate students from Peking University and Tsinghua were suitable for her, and she didn't blame me for being thrown eggs at the show. Pebbles must be thrown. Someone made an accurate estimate. There are six people in China who meet the requirements of Xifeng. I hope one of these six people can stay with Xifeng until the end of her life. Onions are onions, and garlic can't be put anywhere. Everyone knows this simple common sense: wheat can't be grown in paddy fields and rice can't be grown in dry lands. If we have to go against objective laws and act subjectively, it will only backfire and end up in a mess. It starts with energy and ends with energy. When it meets the thinking of "the history of human development", it is just a lost family waiting for the dust to fall on the bookshelf. When it stands in front of the world with a fairy-tale posture, it becomes the hometown of children all over the world and a miracle factory for building dreams.

Life is also like this fairy tale in danger of being buried: standing on the right stage has achieved success. When countless admiring eyes turned to Haruki Murakami, the Nobel Prize in Literature winner, who could have imagined that he once opened a small shop with his wife and worried about trivial matters such as daily necessities? How can a pen that can engrave mountains and rivers and write life in sequence evaporate ink in the secular world? He resolutely decided to move his family to the countryside and live a quiet life.

Finally, he became the purest writer, he found the stage where literature really belongs to him, and he created the most dazzling success! The choice of life is made in an instant, and from then on, life reverses and moves forward with an extremely bright front. When countless applause resounded through the stadium, pole queen Isinbayeva once again faced success with a fragrant smile.

When she is as beautiful as a rose, who knows that she is facing a gymnastics field? Self-defeating? The sudden increase in height forced her to say goodbye to gymnastics.

But she chose a field that suits her better. From then on, one shot, a beautiful woman, interpreted a fairy tale of the sports kingdom, swaying her name at the top of a wonderful life. On that stage, she gained not only fame and fortune, but also a heartfelt joy.

When people close their eyes and enjoy the natural sounds of Belga farmers, will there be a voice to remind you? He works hard in politics! Every day and night, when he speaks everywhere as the Brazilian Minister of Culture, his mouth is thirsty and his voice is seriously uncomfortable, Bell will sit in a quiet corner. He expects change, and he will do something really appropriate and interesting. Finally, there is a politician who is obviously not too smooth in politics and a singer who can stir people's hearts in music.

Yes, he stood on the right stage and sang the strongest voice of his life in front of the microphone. This choice is undoubtedly more touching than countless programmed speeches. In fact, everyone is the protagonist of life. Many people just stand on the wrong stage and let their short but precious life be spent in a role with no retreat.

Smart friend, there are many stages in this world, and it is this infinite choice that gives you the opportunity to achieve yourself. Let's open our smart eyes, discover such a beautiful world, release the energy of life, and complete the gorgeous turn from an unremarkable stone to Qiong Yao that everyone admires.

Stand on the stage of life and achieve the glory of life! what do you think?

7. Seeking composition When we grow up day by day, our parents get old day by day; When our children grow up day by day, we will inevitably get old day by day; At this time, our parents are either dead or dying, and time is running out.

Life is such a cycle, endless cycle, inheritance and continuation; Birth and death, metabolism, passed down from generation to generation. The laws of nature are irresistible! When we are both parents and children, we really understand parents' feelings, deep love and infatuation for children. Only when we become people's parents can we deeply understand the efforts, efforts and efforts of our parents without asking for anything in return.

Parents' love for their children is really the most selfless and greatest love in the world! In the early years, because I was young and energetic, I often inadvertently angered my parents because of some problems and different understandings of social life, even going home once a year.

Think about it, I really don't understand! Can't you say something to make your parents happy? Can't you just do what they say and not argue with them? Are you happy to make them angry? Alas! I can wait until I regret it, but it's too late. There is no chance. Of course parents don't care about their children. No matter how wrong their children are, parents always care about their fate and future.

I remember those years when my little sister was not married, my father always said, "When the old man has his own home, I have nothing to worry about, so I am relieved." But where can I reassure my parents? They think about their children all the time, about our work, study, family, sister's unity, personal development and so on. They always give us encouragement and confidence when we encounter setbacks, so that we can overcome difficulties and get out of the predicament. When we get carried away, give us a wake-up call, calm down and come from the province, so as to do things without arrogance, honesty and down-to-earth manner. No matter in good times or bad times, parents always point out our shortcomings in time, help us see ourselves clearly and know ourselves. They always care about our every achievement and mistake and worry about our responsibility of walking on the right channel.

Our parents really appreciate us, as deep as the sea! But how much love has an inch of grass, and I got three spring rays. "The world says that immortals are good, but only children and grandchildren can't forget them; Infatuated parents have existed since ancient times. Who has seen filial piety? " We could have done better! It was parents who built their families, and it was their life combination that gave birth to the life of each of us at that moment, making us unique among hundreds of millions of people.

From our study to toddler, it is our parents who pull, care, nurture and discipline all the way, so that we can become a real person and live up to the title of human beings all our lives. Although I have always been a person who respects my parents, I have not fully realized my good wishes because I left my parents for many years. I always thought that I could spend a lot of time with them after retirement, do some trivial things for them, take care of their diet and daily life, accompany them day and night, share family relationships and give them more joy and pleasure in their later years; I want to walk with them when I can. After a lifetime of hard work, they should feel the sweetness of life and the great changes of the times.

But now, my son wants to be filial, and his relatives are not there! My good wish to take good care of them has not come true, but I never have a chance to listen to my father's teachings again. Just like a machine, it keeps running all its life without maintenance, and many parts are badly worn.

Father left quietly one morning, without saying goodbye to us or leaving a last word! Now I can only burn incense and pray for my father's portrait: dear dad, although my daughter loves you very much, she can also make you angry. My daughter is sorry for you! Your daughter knows that you love her the most and often praises her to colleagues in the bureau. As we all know, your daughter is your pride, your happiness and your happiness. But in front of your daughter, you always find fault and point out shortcomings. You want your daughter to be more perfect and progressive! Why can't your daughter understand your heart? You are a loving father and a strict father. You and your mother raised us together.

If mom takes care of us more in life, then dad, you cultivate us more ideologically. Father! Are you okay over there? My daughter will always be grateful to you and miss you forever. We must take good care of our mother. You will rest in peace! Dear father, on your tombstone, your sons and daughters carefully carved such a eulogy for you: "heroic and vigorous, strong and strong, fighting against the enemy in the battlefield, having a clear reputation in his later years, and having a high edge tree."

This is a portrayal of your integrity and aboveboard, and you are worthy of being our role models! Here, I want to say to my parents affectionately with my heartfelt voice: thank my parents for their hard work and hardship for my growth; We thank our parents for injecting the fountain of love and the true meaning of love into our lives. Grateful to my parents: you taught me how to face bad luck firmly, so that I have not lost confidence in any difficulties in my independent life in recent years and can face them calmly and bravely; You taught me a lot about being a man, and made me understand that I should help those who are in trouble, encourage those who are frustrated, help those who are embarrassed, remind those who have doubts, say a word of pride to those who feel inferior and comfort those who are in pain.

I thank my parents for inculcating me all my life, letting me know what is good, kind and honest, and what is evil, ugly and despicable; What is worth emulating and what can't be involved; What to strive for and what to consciously resist; What should be generous and kind and what should be hateful! Thanking parents is also thanking yourself. Parents' today is our own tomorrow! Let us be grateful, there will be a virtuous circle in the cycle of life, and there will be beautiful luster! O(∩_∩)o I hope I can help you. O(∩_∩)o Please give me favorable comments or adoption in time. Thank you very much (*^__^*)。