True topic of composition
Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.
The selection of contemporary figures produced the last three candidates. Xiao Li, who is keen on learning and thinking, is determined to innovate, making great contributions to solving the mystery of life science and leading the team to become the international academic frontier. Lao Wang, who loves his job and is dedicated, has practiced his unique skills, turned ordinary technology into perfect art, and embarked on a journey from a vocational high school student to a welding master? Great country craftsman? Lu Xiaoliu loves photography and captures the beauty of time through mountains and rivers. His blog has won the admiration of netizens. You showed us the taste of the world, and you helped us keep our beautiful homesickness? .
Of these three people, who do you think is more elegant? Please write a composition according to the content and meaning of the material, reflecting your thinking, weighing and choosing.
Ask for a good angle, define the concept, define the style, and draw up a title yourself. Don't copy, and don't copy.
Proposition analysis and comment
20 15 the composition of the national college entrance examination in Volume 2 is still a material composition, but through comprehensive analysis, Pang Yi, a teacher of Haifeng Education Language, thinks that this year's national examination paper proposition reflects the composition proposition of the national college entrance examination? Invariance and change? .
Composition materials for National Volume 2? Innovation, technology, hobbies? , also continued in previous years? Life growth? The concern of this topic leads students to pay attention to reality, think about the fate of life, and link personal cognitive experience and growth with the future and destiny of the country. Judging from the tendency of proposition, the questioner is appreciative of all three characters, so candidates can choose any character to write a composition, but it is easy to examine the topic and difficult to conceive, which means it is easy to write such a topic that conforms to the material and does not stray from the topic, but it is not easy to write it in a novel, in-depth and level way, but our teacher once wrote in Conception? Small? 、? New? 、? Deep? Related methods have been developed in this lecture.
Examination of themes and concepts
This problem belongs to many material problems. For the examination of many materials, we should pay attention to seeking differences in similarities and seeking common ground in differences. What the three characters in the title have in common is that they all show different styles in their respective industries and have made their own achievements. The difference between them is that Xiao Li is committed to academic innovation, Lao Wang focuses on technical optimization, and Xiao Liu pursues artistic beauty. When we make up our minds, we can choose one of them and start writing. It should be noted that you should never scratch your eyebrows and beard, thinking that all three people are good, so all three people are very colorful in their comments. You can properly evaluate the uniqueness of your chosen role, that is, the aspects different from other roles, and add some comments.
Recommended conception angle:
Xiao Li's perspective: learning+sensitivity+determination = innovation.
Lao Wang's point of view: love and dedication+practice makes perfect = touch stone into gold.
Xiao Liu's perspective: hobby+efforts to cross mountains and rivers+eyes to discover beauty = conquering the audience.
Article 1: Selected compositions of full marks in college entrance examinations over the years: Who is the most elegant, dedicated to oneself and jointly promotes social civilization?
As the saying goes, 360 lines, each line is the best. Whether you are Lao Li, an ordinary mechanic Lao Wang or a freelance photographer, you can have a wonderful life as long as you want. Moreover, different you and I, through their own wonderful, finally jointly promoted social civilization.
So, how did they do it? In my opinion, the key for a person is not to always look at the heights of mountains, but to concentrate on himself, strive to raise himself to a higher level, cultivate his own land and harvest a good year!
But in real life, it is easy for us to look forward to the shining life of others, always thinking that others are taking a lucky road, and only ourselves are always walking in the mud. In fact, no matter what kind of career you choose, you have to go through the difficult side of hot water, and life will show more sweetness and happiness. Like Van Gogh said, chestnuts come from fire? . In other words, to focus on yourself, first of all, we must always have a sense of life of hard work and struggle.
Who knows, only by focusing on yourself can we create exquisiteness and embark on a solid life path. How did Lao Li, who is in charge of the company, lead the company to the international arena? Just think about Jack Ma, who has made Alibaba a truly world-class brand, and he himself is regarded as a business leader by the public. His life is shining now, but behind it is that he is full of passion and is working hard to cultivate Alibaba all the time. Have we met? It can be said that he has built a life-and-death entrepreneurial team with his meticulous care: customer first, embracing change, sharing and never giving up. On the road of his management, he focused on himself, step by step, took every solid step, and finally moved towards a broad. Moreover, he used his legendary myth to promote the prosperity of our society.
Lao Wang is engaged in welding work and looks a bit humble; But he also pays attention to self-improvement and eventually becomes an international big-name craftsman, which is equally admirable! I want to say that as long as the mind does not decline, the solution is always more difficult than it is. As long as we overcome cowardice and laziness, take responsibility and advance along the goal of success, it is the right choice in life. Fate is half in the hands of God and the other half in your own hands. Success is to win the other half in God's hands with half in your own hands.
What is concentration? It is the pursuit of perfection, and this nature is unique, and no one can imitate it. The key point is to make up your mind to create a great cause. Concentration is not only the key to success, but also the characteristic of a healthy mind. Concentration means focusing on something, integrating with what you care about, not being attracted by other foreign things, not wandering in anxiety, worry and confusion.
Only by focusing on one thing can a person bring fun. For a thing, no matter what prejudice you have in the past and how boring it is, once you concentrate on it, it will immediately become alive! And the most beautiful state of a person is to enter that state of being alive. Just like a photographer, he must focus on the improvement of his own photography skills and often ponder how to take beautiful photos or thought-provoking and valuable photos. He enjoys the process of thinking, observing, pursuing and shooting, and seeks the harmony of light and shadow. He is engaged in a beautiful career and shows the most beautiful state. Only in this way can a group of photos taken by myself be widely praised after being sent to Weibo, so that everyone can share beautiful and valuable clips with him.
What do you do now? Do you think this is a noble cause? More importantly, are you also paying attention to yourself and trying to raise yourself to a higher level? If not, it's not too late. One day, you will be the next Lao Li, the next Lao Wang, or the next photographer, or the next one. Under the impetus of each next one, our society has moved towards prosperity and higher civilization.
Article 2: Selected compositions of full marks in college entrance examinations over the years: Who has the most elegant manners, the most ordinary skills and the most wonderful life?
A drop of water can reflect a colorful world; An ordinary technology can perform a wonderful life.
No prominent family background, no special heroic feats, no highly educated Lao Wang, just a most ordinary person. Like most of us, walking in the street is easy to be overwhelmed by crowds and traffic. However, it is such an ordinary old man who, with his enthusiasm, hard-working hands and wise exploration, stuck to his ordinary post for decades, turned ordinary technology into perfect art, and finally achieved him? Great country craftsman? Wonderful life.
People asked Lao Wang why he received such praise and how he felt about it. Lao Wang always lights a cigarette in a leisurely place first, takes a few sips with ease and enjoyment, and says with a faint smile, it's not flattery, just doing one thing and loving one thing. As long as there is love, you will use your heart; As long as you do it with your heart, you will do it well. The more exquisite, the more beautiful you will find. What is this beauty called? Art? When Lao Wang said. Art? When he said this word, the smoke of cigarettes happened to be artistically wrapped around his fingertips.
Yes, there are no tricks and no shortcuts. Lao Wang has no higher education and has been engaged in welding since he graduated from higher vocational education. As we know, welding is a hard and tiring job, and many young people will complain when they first come into contact, give up halfway and switch to other jobs. Some people even turn over and over again, pick and choose, and finally achieve nothing, and finally empty-handed.
As the saying goes:? Every snake bites? There has never been an easy job in the world, and every job has certain difficulty; There is no particularly great job, and every job is ordinary and ordinary. Do a good job in ordinary work with certain difficulties. First of all, we should love our work, settle down, work hard and enjoy it. Every year CCTV will select it? Touched China? Among the top ten figures, there are scientists who run at the forefront of science and technology, brave soldiers, and ordinary people who stick to ordinary posts. The key and basic point for these ordinary people to embark on this extraordinary road is to love their careers.
When we love our work and stick to it for a long time, we will find beauty in the little things every day. And this wonderful discovery requires us to have a pair of eyes to appreciate, and to upgrade ordinary technology into a brand-new and perfect art in ordinary work. It is said that practice makes perfect. We are familiar with the story of the oil seller thousands of years ago. Today, around us, Lao Wang has performed a wonderful life from ordinary skills.
Article 3: Selected compositions of full marks in college entrance examinations over the years: Who is the most elegant, the more ordinary and the more elegant.
The selection of contemporary figures produced the last three candidates. Xiao Li, who is keen on learning and thinking, is determined to innovate, making great contributions to solving the mystery of life science and leading the team to become the international academic frontier. Lao Wang, who loves his job and is dedicated, has practiced his unique skills, turned ordinary technology into perfect art, and embarked on a journey from a vocational high school student to a welding master? Great country craftsman? Lu Xiaoliu loves photography and captures the beauty of time through mountains and rivers. His blog has won the admiration of netizens. You showed us the taste of the world, and you helped us keep our beautiful homesickness? .
Of these three people, who do you think is more elegant? When this question is put before us, I believe many people will hesitate. Three people have their own styles, and actually represent three completely different life choices and attitudes, and of course they have made different achievements and gains. Xiao Li represents high-level scientific talents who are determined to innovate; Lao Wang, who has done extraordinary things in his ordinary post, represents a down-to-earth and refined skilled worker; And Xiao Liu should undoubtedly be classified as a young man who loves life and has a cheerful personality? Player? . But he is not only satisfied with his trip, but? Having fun alone is not as good as having fun with others? I recorded what I saw and heard with the lens and shared it with thousands of people in Qian Qian, which brought happiness and emotion to others. He went through hardships and took photos, which to a certain extent has gone beyond the scope of personal hobbies and become a cultural phenomenon with audience appreciation and interaction.
Of these three people, who do you think is more elegant? Although it was difficult to choose, I soon came up with my own answer. Xiao Li has made great contributions to solving the mystery of life science, and his contribution is undoubtedly the greatest. However, such contributions and achievements are not easy for everyone. They need not only diligence and hard work, but also other conditions such as talent and sometimes even a little luck. ? The forefront of international academic circles? A handful of elites who have always belonged to the top of the pyramid are worthy of admiration and reverence, but they are a little far from the lives of ordinary people. You have to look up to see it? . However, Xiao Liu's tourism and photography skills are not high, and it is difficult to bring any practical results. Perhaps it can attract the attention of many fans for a while, and it may cause aesthetic fatigue over time.
You must have guessed my choice: I will vote for Lao Wang, an ordinary welder, ordinary but not simple? Great country craftsman? . There are actually many around us? Lao Wang? Type of people, they may live in different environments and engage in different industries, but they never complain about their low starting point and never give up their efforts because their work is unremarkable. They sweat in obscurity, they do their work in obscurity, give full play to their potential, and turn what outsiders think is boring into an art that surprises everyone. What is more admirable than such efforts and resilience? What can be more real and resonate with people than this kind of life? The more common, the more exciting; The more common the more elegant!
Maybe, now? Why not use an office as a mechanic? Our prejudice still exists among some people. In fact, the two are just different in division of labor, and there is no distinction between high and low. Gu Zeng, an academician of China Academy of Sciences and former president of Tsinghua University, said, for example, the predecessor of California Institute of Technology was Tupu Institute of Technology; Massachusetts Institute of Technology was founded for the industrialization of the United States, and its motto is mind and hands (both theory and practice). Two top universities in the world have designated mascots as? Beaver? Pay tribute to the master dam builder in nature. Many world-renowned universities are educated in applied technology? Start a business? , closely follow the national socio-economic strategic transformation, closely link with practice, and participate in the most cutting-edge projects and related research.
At present, China has entered a critical period of industrial transformation, and the demand for professional and technical personnel is very strong. What if old Wang Can is elected? Contemporary style figures? , will undoubtedly play a very good social orientation and leading role. Therefore, not only will I vote for Lao Wang, but I believe many friends will do the same. What did you say?/Sorry?