In response to the sunshine sports initiated by the Ministry of Education, our school organized long-distance running activities during the long vacation. However, we students have different views on this.
Many students are in favor of the plan. They think running is a good way to strengthen their physique. In addition, it can help them relax and reduce the pressure of study.
However, other students have different ideas. They claim that they feel very tired after running, so it is difficult for them to concentrate on their studies. What's more, they are sweating like a pig after running, and it is easy to catch a cold.
I think it is beneficial for students to take regular physical exercise because they spend most of their time sitting in the classroom. Long-distance running is an effective way to keep healthy. However, students should also be provided with other forms of exercise.
Yours,
Li Hua
Test analysis: The theme of this writing is that students hold different views on "sunshine sports activities". This kind of article is generally clear in level and consists of four paragraphs: the first paragraph is a general introduction; The second paragraph is a positive view and basis; The third paragraph is the viewpoint and basis of opposition; The fourth paragraph is my own opinion. It should be noted that 1 Try to diversify the language when listing the basis of both sides; 2. We should have correct judgment and dialectical thinking when expressing our own views. An article needs correct sentences to clearly express the author's meaning. Candidates should understand that the written expression of the college entrance examination is neither Chinese-English nor arbitrary composition. What it requires is to sort out the prescribed materials and start thinking, and to examine the ability to express meaning accurately by using the English knowledge learned.
Comments: Candidates should use their most familiar and confident words, phrases and sentence patterns to complete the essay in a certain logical order and meaning level, divide the natural paragraphs of the article, and pay attention to the development and coherence between paragraphs. Try to use sentences with different lengths to diversify sentence patterns. Proper use of conjunctions makes the cohesion between sentences natural and smooth.