(National New Curriculum Standard Volume)
14. Among the following sentences, there are no ill sentences (3 points).
A. The quality of personnel training is an important factor to measure the success of a university, and vigorously improving the level of personnel training is a strategic issue in the reform and development of higher education.
B. In order to better improve the service quality, we must adhere to the people-oriented principle and create a harmonious waiting environment and pleasant humanized service for passengers to the maximum extent.
C This new cold medicine has been tested in more than 400 cases in hospitals in Beijing, Shanghai, Nanjing, Hangzhou and Kaifeng, and 80% of them are really effective.
D. As the celebration is just around the corner, the school requires all teachers and students to pay attention to etiquette and treat guests warmly, so that alumni who come back from all over the country to attend the celebration will feel at home.
A: A.
Analysis: improper collocation of B coordinate words should be "providing happy and humanized services"; C preposition error, "after" changed to "through"; Improper collocation of subject and predicate, add "the patient" after "80%"; D, the structure is chaotic, and it is changed to "Let the alumni from all over the country go back to their alma mater to attend the celebration" or "Let the alumni from all over the country go back to their alma mater to attend the celebration".
(National Outline Volume)
3. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is [Source: Xue&; Departments and networks & ampX & ampX & ampK]
A, different living customs, natural conditions and geographical environment, so that the local folk houses in the plane layout, structure, modeling and other aspects show simple and natural, but also have their own characteristics.
B the sixth national population census, which lasted for three years, was a successful national survey, and its data will provide important reference for the formulation of social and economic development plans and relevant government decisions in China.
C. Insomnia refers to the uncomfortable feeling caused by insufficient sleep time and poor quality. To cope with insomnia, we need to understand the relevant knowledge of sleep hygiene and carry out self-care.
D, the school to carry out classic reading activities is conducive to the construction of teaching style and study style, and primary and secondary schools are an important period for the formation of life character, so such activities should focus on primary and secondary schools and must be grasped.
Answer: b
Analysis: a, the object is incomplete, "simple and natural" plus "characteristics"; C "self-care" and "coping with insomnia" are not properly matched, and "coping with insomnia" is changed to "insomnia"; D, mixed sentences, change "should focus on" to "in", or remove "we must pay close attention to".
(Beijing Volume)
3. Among the following sentences, the one that is well chosen is
A. The main causes of highway traffic accidents are drivers' violation of traffic rules or improper operation. Traffic departments should strengthen safety publicity and improve drivers' safety awareness.
B in the "action to protect the intangible cultural heritage of mankind", China Folk Writers Association decided to rescue folk woodblock New Year pictures as one of the rescue projects of folk cultural heritage.
C. The toad fish in Chong 'an is a rare amphibian endemic to Wuyishan area. It lives in a mountain stream at an altitude of 1000 meters. It was originally named 50 years after its discovery in Chong 'an.
D. vinegar is rich in amino acids, calcium, phosphorus, iron and vitamin B, so it has a cosmetic effect. After skin absorption, it can improve malnutrition and promote skin whitening and delicate.
Reference answer b
Mix the test questions with sentence A, and remove the "cause" or "main reason"; C illogical, add "yes" before "discovery"; D component is incomplete, and "improvement" is missing an object.
Discrimination and revision of ill sentences in college entrance examination sites.
There are two main types of speech disorders: structural speech disorders and semantic speech disorders. This year, the focus is on structural language barriers. For this kind of sentence, candidates should analyze it from the perspective of grammar, compress it first and then look at collocation.
(Tianjin Volume)
4. The following sentence is not ill-chosen, and the sentence with clear meaning is
A. Strong domestic demand is becoming an important market for multinational giants to make huge profits, especially for China's oil, iron ore and basic energy.
B. the passage of time can't make me forget my deep yearning for my hometown. On the contrary, with the growth of my age, my yearning for my hometown is getting stronger and stronger.
C Speaking of jiaozi, everyone in China is familiar with it. jiaozi in China is full of irresistible temptations for foreigners.
D. because of their sense of humor, they are better at communicating with others, and even if they express objections, others will not resent them.
Reference answer d
Analysis of test questions A, improper collocation, change "market" to "factor"; B, semantic repetition, removing "increasingly"; C. The subject and object are reversed, and "for foreigners" is added.
Discrimination and revision of ill sentences in college entrance examination sites.
Error-prone reminder, items A and B are easy to judge, pay attention to word collocation.
Tips for preparing for the exam: read each option carefully and pay attention to analyzing the collocation of coordinate phrases as sentence components and other components. You can take the coordinate phrases apart and match them with other components to verify whether they are correct. For sentences with mixed sentences, we should first judge their disharmony through the sense of language, then make sentences separately, and then put them back in the original text to verify whether they are correct. For sentences with improper word order, we should first detect them through language sense, and then switch the positions of incongruous words or sentences to see if they are smooth and natural. Sentences with multiple negatives or rhetorical questions should be understood with affirmation instead of negation. For inconsistent sentences caused by unclear meaning, try to find out the meaning of this keyword by grouping. The inconsistency of logical concepts can be inferred from facts. Pay attention to the requirements of the stem, whether to choose those with speech disorders or those with aphasia.
(Chongqing Volume)
Intransitive verbs (there are 4 small questions in this big question, with 4 points for each small question, totaling 16 points)
18. Please find out the wrong one of the following three items and correct it.
(l) Phenomena related to the overuse of natural resources, such as global warming, land desertification and the expansion of the ozone hole, have brought serious harm to human survival.
(2) On the castle marked with the word "Arrow Road" in the silk book "Garrison Map" unearthed from the No.3 Han Tomb in Mawangdui, Changsha, Hunan, we can see the winding road.
(3) It is more difficult to accurately remember a long string of numbers in a certain order than to remember words or images with interrelated contents.
Those with speech disorders are: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ (2 points)
Targeted modification: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ (2 points)
Answer: Those with language barriers are: (1)
Targeted modification: delete "and" related "(or delete" causing ")
Analysis: (1) is a mixed sentence pattern, and the two sentence patterns "related to" and "caused by" are mixed, so only one sentence pattern is selected.
(Shandong Volume)
5. Among the following sentences, the right one is
A. The opera Dream of Red Mansions, which was performed in China by North Korean artists, was warmly welcomed and highly praised by the audience in China.
B The Book of History records that the Yi tribe in the East is simple in folk customs and people are willing to give and receive, so this tribe is called "the country of gentlemen".
C. According to the latest data released by Xizang Autonomous Region Statistics Bureau, the Tibetan population accounts for more than 90% of the resident population in the autonomous region, accounting for 27 1.6 million.
D. With the approaching of the Universiade, volunteers are busy all over Shenzhen, welcoming the Universiade to become a broad stage to show the grace of volunteers.
Analysis: the answer is B.A., the subject is a dream of red mansions, and "gei" is taken over, which is obviously inappropriate. C, miscellaneous. According to the mixed display, remove "according to". D, improper collocation, in line with the "become" stage, obvious errors, remove the "conform to".
(Guangdong Volume)
3. In the following sentences, it is well chosen.
A. The "China Grand Canal", which connects the land Silk Road in the north and the Maritime Silk Road in the south, will apply for heritage on 20 14, including the Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal, the Sui-Tang Grand Canal and the East Zhejiang Canal.
B. The most touching thing about Wild Duck is its passion for truth, goodness and beauty. Through the aesthetic experience of the plot, people are convinced of a fact and a truth: there are still many good people in the world, and there are still true feelings in the world.
C. the foundation of success is struggle, and the harvest of struggle is success. Therefore, only those who are not afraid of hard struggle can reach the peak of success.
D. I first came to a hill behind the exhibition hall, and what caught my eye was a huge barrel-shaped cover made of a piece of brown glass, which protected the excavation site of the ancient tomb.
Answer C (A A. "It includes ...". B. "It is convincing through the aesthetic experience of the plot ...", and the composition is incomplete. D "huge" is out of order, and the meaning of many attributives is unclear, so it can be changed to "a huge barrel-shaped top cover made of brown glass" or "a huge barrel-shaped top cover made of purple glass").
(Jiangsu Volume)
2. Among the following sentences, the ones that are not bad are: (3 points) (b)
A. Only by constantly improving and effectively safeguarding people's livelihood can we truly maintain social harmony and stability, further improve people's happiness index and achieve the goal of long-term stability.
Revision: change "improving and effectively safeguarding people's livelihood" to "ensuring and effectively improving people's livelihood", and mention "further improving people's happiness index" before "only truly maintaining social harmony and stability".
B The essence of the so-called "ecological consciousness" certainly includes introspection on ecology, but more importantly, introspection on people's position in the world and the rationality of people's behavior.
C. At present, China is the country with the largest number of items selected for the United Nations Intangible Cultural Heritage List, and this achievement is mainly achieved through the joint efforts of all sectors of society.