2. Since the reform and opening up 20 years ago, people's living standards in China have improved significantly.
No matter how difficult he is, he never flinches.
4. After this lecture, we were greatly inspired.
We middle school students should respond positively to "Start with me and protect the environment".
6. The new leadership of the school has perfected and established a class management system.
Before cleaning the classroom, students should dust off the walls with a duster.
These candidate songs are widely sung by the masses.
9. Whether you can study hard is the key to improving your academic performance.
10, the key for a person to get better or worse is that internal factors play a decisive role.
1 1, congratulations.
12, we don't deny that this poem doesn't reveal hope, but hope is slim.
13, there is no end to development and practice, so ideological emancipation will not be done once and for all. Can we deny that this is not true?
14. As soon as people enter the teaching building, they will see all the pictures and posters about Macao's history hanging on the walls of the corridor.
15, this person doesn't even know the headmaster.
16. In order to prevent this kind of traffic accident from happening again, we have strengthened traffic safety education and management.
17, despite the extremely unfavorable climatic conditions and geographical environment, the climbers still overcame many difficulties and successfully reached the top.
18, there are people in this city who copy fake and shoddy products by any means.
19 As soon as we entered the West Lake Park, we saw colorful flags flying and singing loudly in the park.
It is urgent to educate young people on the socialist concept of honor and disgrace.
2 1 In view of the unhealthy phenomenon existing on the current network, many people have issued civilized networks.
The influence of books on people is subtle. In a word, reading can not only improve yourself, but also increase your knowledge. Generally speaking, reading can improve the quality of the Chinese nation. Let books overflow every corner of society and life and be a happy reader!
As a high-tech product, "Ru Yan" contains no tar, carbon monoxide and other harmful substances. (2) The "smoke" coming out is the aerosol produced by the electronic room, which has pure and rich tobacco fragrance, and the floating aerosol is fog, which is non-toxic and harmless. (3) It can prevent the harm of "second-hand smoke" to people around.
As a new media for people to obtain information and interact, the rapid development of the Internet has met the cultural life level of the broad masses. However, with the rapid development of the Internet, some websites are also harmful to society, such as spreading unhealthy information and providing uncivilized audio services. ③ Creating a healthy and civilized network culture environment and eliminating bad information has become an urgent need for spiritual civilization construction in the new period.
With the completion of the Shanghai-Hangzhou maglev line, the dream of "Shanghai has the West Lake and Hangzhou has the Bund" has come true.
The leaders of several schools discussed how to carry out the education of "eight honors and eight disgraces" socialist concept of honor and disgrace.
First, how to diagnose sick sentences
Look at the part of speech, distinguish the meaning, and check whether the words are appropriate.
Find the trunk, distinguish the branches and leaves, and check whether the collocation is appropriate.
Look at the structure, distinguish the relationship, and check whether the word order is appropriate.
Look at the meaning of the sentence, distinguish the logic and check whether the expression is appropriate.
Look after, find an object, and check whether the ingredients are incomplete.
Second, the types of sick sentences
(1) Bad choice of words? (2) Improper word order? ((3) Improper collocation? (4) Incomplete or redundant components
(5) the structure is chaotic? (6) unclear? (7) illogical
Third, the method of correcting mistakes in sick sentences
Principle: Keep the original intention.
Methods: 1, adding: adding incomplete components; 2. Delete: delete redundant components;
3. change: put on the right words; 4. Shift: improper word order adjustment;
Fourth, concrete analysis.
1, improper use of words. For example, "the word bionics may be strange to us." "Yes" is the wrong object, so it should be changed to "We are interested in the word bionics ...".
Title:
I saw two movies last night.
The original price of this kind of radio is 60 yuan, but now it is 20 yuan, and the price has been reduced by three times.
(? There were more than 40 books in our library last term.
(4) At present, tourists from all over the world keep coming to China, and the tourism industry is thriving.
2. The word order is incorrect. For example, "learn to study and investigate problems." "Investigating problems" should be put before "researching problems".
(1) Half an hour later, people handed in their papers one after another.
Every ambitious young man hopes to be a person who contributes to the four modernizations in the future.
(3) The Eighth Route Army soldiers are bravely fighting against the enemy at the top of the mountain.
(4) The staff of the whole factory discussed and listened to the director's report on improving management.
3. Improper collocation. There are mainly improper collocation of subject-predicate, verb-object, attribute and head, adverbial and head. For example, "the quantity and quality of this company's products have been greatly improved." "Quality" and "Improvement" match correctly, but "Quantity" and "Improvement" cannot match. It should be changed to "quantity" and "increase".
Title:
(1) His amiable voice, smiling face and persuasive instruction reappeared in front of me.
(2) Summer in Tianshan Mountain is simply a beautiful big garden.
(3) The reason why these flowers grow so well is the result of careful management by flower farmers.
(4) The foundation of our class is a better class in the whole grade.
4. Incomplete or redundant components
For example, the composition is incomplete Mainly the lack of subject or predicate or object. For example, "He came running with a ball in his hand." If the subject is missing, the words "in" and "when" should be deleted.
For example, repetition is very cumbersome. "There has been an unprecedented upsurge in tree planting in schools." This kind of speech disorder is caused by semantic repetition, so a synonym is deleted when modifying it.
subject
(1) As long as you are diligent and willing to endure hardships, nothing will be difficult for you.
Through this study, I have improved my understanding of the importance of environmental protection.
(3) Zhang Haidi's report made us deeply moved and received a profound education.
Although he encountered many setbacks in the past few years, he was not discouraged at all.
(5) Celebrate International Labor Day.
(6) During the festival, department stores are crowded with people, and they are so crowded that they push each other.
5. Structural confusion: Different sentence patterns are mixed. Etiology: The mixture of two sentence patterns leads to structural confusion.
Title:
(1) We must change the Pearl River.
(2) I once had the wrong idea about job-hopping.
(3) The key for a person to get better or worse is that internal factors play a decisive role.
Structural confusion: two sentences are nested. Cause: Putting two sentences with unfixed format that should be said separately together leads to structural confusion.
Title:
(1) I once gave him my opinion on this problem that needs to be studied.
(2) I grew up near the Pearl River, which is a rich land.
Structural confusion: active and passive mixing. Etiology: the mix of active and passive sentences leads to structural confusion.
subject
(1) Abuse of dialects should be criticized.
They took us home and were warmly treated.
Structural confusion: unclear structure
subject
(1) Our school is one of the foreign language training schools established across provinces with a donation of one million dollars from XXX.
6. Fuzziness (ambiguity)
subject
(1) No.1 Middle School and No.2 Middle School finally beat them at the last moment of a basketball game.
(2) Xiao Wang and Xiao Li were walking on the road, and Xiaoding quickly approached him to ask questions.
(3) Some teachers and students go by bus.
(1) is inconsistent. For example, "having good psychological quality is one of the conditions for us to get good grades in the senior high school entrance examination." Positive premises lead to uncertain conclusions. The word "no" should be deleted.
(2) Negative misuse. For example, "isn't it our responsibility to cultivate high-quality talents?" The negative rhetorical question means yes, and the word "no" should be deleted.
(3) Unreasonable. That is, things or phenomena that do not exist in real life. For example, "the dark blue night sky is full of bright moons and stars." When the moon is high, it is impossible to have a "starry sky", but it should be "bright stars".
subject
(1) You are not allowed to bring anything into the examination room, only pens, pencils, rulers and compasses.
(2) The Chinese review materials compiled by our school are already in printing.
(3) The night is silent, only the sound of raindrops ticking.
With the development of science today, no one will deny that the earth does not revolve around the sun.
Those lovely children in the mountains have been waiting for me. I must go back as soon as possible.
(6) Whether we can cultivate new people with "four haves" is a major event related to the future of our party and country, and it is also the fundamental task of the education front.
(7) Academic achievement is not innate, but the result of hard work.
Fifth, show your talents:
1. There are five language errors in this article. Please choose three of them to correct.
A few years ago, (1) in the case of serious sales in the color TV market, (2) Changhong Electric Appliance Factory took the lead in drastically reducing sales. Although the loss, but the production and marketing double harvest, (3) economic benefits quickly jumped to the first place in the same industry in China. (4) Through the management concept of Changhong Electric Appliance Factory, we have learned a truth: (5) If an enterprise is good at using the strategy of "losing money to earn money", it can make great achievements and add icing on the cake; (6) On the other hand, stick to the frame of "only earning but not losing" and refuse to sacrifice the petty profits in front of you, otherwise you will even lose your blood in the end.
There are problems in the following paragraphs, please correct them in the original text.
The "Together" program broadcast by the travel channel on May 4th was protested by many animal protectors. In this program, (1) dropped a cat from the fourth floor as an experiment to confirm whether the cat is still safe after falling from a height. According to relevant data, (2) even if the cat can quickly adjust its posture and land on all fours during the fall, it can only play a certain buffering role, and (3) it can't completely avoid fractures and internal organs rupture. Animal protectors expressed their anger at the cruelty to animals program. Today, the person in charge of the program center of the travel channel said (4) there will be no live animal experiments in the future, and he apologized to the audience.
Read the following article carefully, find out the mistakes and correct them.
Everyone has his own dreams when he is young, and he is eager for success. Success needs accumulation, which is the most primitive and simple truth. If we can't only see the brilliance of successful people when they become famous, but ignore their hard and determined efforts before that.
The following is the first paragraph of a student's exercise "The Most Beautiful Hand". These four sentences are all wrong. Please correct it and write it on the horizontal line below.
That night, (1) I lay under the covers and watched the model contest on TV with relish. (2) In the awarding session of the contest, the "Beautiful Hand Award" was awarded. (3) Looking at the delicate hands magnified on the screen, I can't help thinking, if only I had hands as beautiful as those on the screen! However, growing up in the countryside, (4) even if I am at school now, I don't have to do much farm work, but I will grind these hands into rough "rural hands" one day. Suddenly I thought of my mother's rough black hands, especially in winter, and the frozen blood cut was terrible.
5. In the following paragraph, there are four mistakes in * * *. Please point out the serial numbers of the mistakes and correct them.
(1) In order to create a humanistic atmosphere in the school, (2) elite schools decided to collect the characteristics, school philosophy and school motto suitable for students, (3) teachers and students of the whole school were expected to contribute actively. (4) After the notice was issued, teachers and students from many schools took an active part in this activity. (5) Students in Grade 7 1 Class carefully prepare, and (6) Hold a class meeting with the theme of "School Motto in My Heart". (7) After this activity, students enhanced their sense of ownership and exercised their creativity.
6. There are three sentences in the following paragraph, each of which has language defects. Please correct it.
(1) Recently, at the 2005 Flower Show held in Hong Kong, the "Liuhe Bell" made by Qianjiang Management Office in Hangzhou won the "Design Award for Large Garden Attractions". "Liuhe Bell", as an entry in Hangzhou, embodies the producer's hard work for more than half a month. The judges believe that Liuhe Zhong won the prize because of its exquisite conception, full image and the most Jiangnan characteristics. (Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province)
Recently, two banners on the streets of our city are particularly eye-catching. One is: warmly congratulate a local restaurant for winning the title of "China Famous Hunan Cuisine Store" in succession; Second, resolutely prevent the resurgence of gambling activities after the "summer offensive". Both banners have language defects, please modify them and write them down below. (Changde City)
8. Modify the underlined sentences in the following paragraphs to make them semantically coherent and free from language errors.
Time is a magical and ruthless meat cleaver, creating a miracle between heaven and earth. It can melt hard ice into spring water and support seedlings into big trees. Of course, you can also turn the garden into a desert, and A can turn the ruins into cities. If you cherish it, it will grow shade around you and bear heavy fruit; You ignore it, it becomes light smoke, and B disappears. (Henan Province)
9. Use symbols to modify the following sick sentences, and change only one place in each sentence. (Huangshi City, Hubei Province)
(1) In summer, Xiandao Lake is a good opportunity for people to enjoy the summer and study.
(2) In order to avoid the outbreak of infectious diseases after the tsunami, countries all over the world and local governments in the affected areas of the Indian Ocean have made great efforts.
10, the following sentences are all wrong, please correct them in the original sentence.
(1) The reduction or exemption of agricultural taxes by local governments is one of the reasons why farmers' income has increased year by year.
⑵ It is our strategic decision to actively participate in the cooperation and exchange activities in the Yangtze River Delta region and actively dock with Shanghai.
(Jiaxing City)
1 1. Read the following article carefully, find out the mistakes and correct them.
Everyone has his own dreams when he is young, and he is eager for success. Success needs accumulation, which is the most primitive and simple truth. If we can't only see the brilliance of successful people when they become famous, but ignore their hard and determined efforts before that. (Experimental Zone of Basic Education Curriculum Reform in Shaanxi Province)
12. Find two mistakes in the language expression of the following words and correct them.
At the Spring Festival Gala in 2005, led by Tai Lihua, 2 1 A thousand-handed Guanyin performed by the deaf amazed the audience. Under the exquisite stage lighting and background music, the actors gave a vivid performance, which attracted thousands of audiences. These deaf-mute people not only shocked people with their graceful dancing, but also with their tenacious perseverance and persistent pursuit of life.
14. Modify the following paragraphs as necessary.
People all know that chickens, cats, dogs and other animals and people are steaming, but snakes are cold. (2) The former is called "warm-blooded animal" and the latter is called "warm-blooded animal". (3) The body of a warm-blooded animal is like a constant temperature furnace. In order to keep the body temperature constant, it needs to consume energy substances in the body to maintain it. ④ Compared with boa constrictors, pigs only need 150 parts of energy, while snakes only need one part. ⑤ The consumption of hibernating snakes is very small, and the consumption of hibernating snakes for five months is only reduced by about 2%.
(1) sentence _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
(4) It is necessary to add the phrase "snakes of temperature-changing animals will save this part of energy expenditure" in the essay, and the appropriate place to add it is _ _.
15, paragraph modification The following is a paragraph in a broadcast draft with several language defects. Please modify it as necessary.
There are less than half a year before the graduation exam, and I gradually feel that time is not enough. I just want to read more books. Only by studying hard can you get good grades. My first thought is that my Chinese level is too low and there are not many words in my stomach, so I try to read novels and essays. However, I just read a book from my interest, reading all the lines, only reading the main idea of the story, and didn't pay attention to improving my analytical ability and accumulating vocabulary. Therefore, I find this practice is not a problem.
(l) There is repetition in the article, and the word "_" should be deleted.
(2) There is a sentence that is out of the center and should be deleted. This sentence is _ _.
(3) There is a word in the text that does not meet the oral expression requirements of the broadcast draft, so "_ _" should be changed to "_ _" (4) There is a wrong sentence in the text, and this sentence should be changed to _.
16. The following passage is taken from a middle school student's exercise, and some sentences are wrong. Please feel free to suggest changes.
In study and life, people will inevitably encounter all kinds of setbacks. Of course, frustration will bring people different results, because people have different attitudes towards it. Some people will arouse strong fighting spirit because of setbacks, and finally achieve an ideal; Some people will be discouraged by a setback and never recover. They will become a mediocre person. Brave people can often face setbacks directly and regard setbacks as stepping stones to progress; Those who develop a cowardly character through a long and comfortable life are always afraid of setbacks, unable to bear any setbacks, and regard setbacks as terrible traps. However, as long as they learn to draw strength and courage from setbacks and temper their perseverance, they will certainly be able to overcome setbacks and create a better life. (Zhaoqing Volume, Guangdong, 2004)
17. There are four grammatical errors in the following paragraph. Please select two of them to correct.
Einstein was an outstanding scientist in the 20th century. He was born in Germany and later moved to America. As a master of science comparable to Newton, he has made great contributions in many fields of physics, the most important of which is the discovery of relativity. Thomson, a great British physicist, declared excitedly: ⑤ Einstein is "one of the greatest achievements in the history of human thought". 192 1 year, Einstein won the nobel prize in physics.
18. There are three mistakes in the sentence in the following paragraph. Please find out and correct it.
At present, it will take a long time to develop an effective vaccine to inhibit coronavirus. In the absence of specific drugs, we are required to carry forward the long-standing traditional virtues of the Chinese nation and stimulate the enthusiasm of biological and medical researchers. Qi Xin will work together to develop convenient detection methods and a complete set of detection systems as soon as possible to curb the spread of SARS.
There are three sentences in the following paragraph, and each sentence has language defects. Please correct it in the original text.
The organizing committee of Beijing Olympic Games held a press conference a few days ago, announcing that the first collection of Olympic songs will be launched on April 15 this year. ② The solicitation will be held for five consecutive sessions, and each session will select 10 songs as the candidate songs for the Beijing Olympic Games. These candidate songs have been widely sung by all walks of life, and finally a song that fully embodies China's cultural characteristics and Olympic spirit is determined as the theme song of the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.
2 1. There are three inappropriate expressions in the sentence of the following article. Please find and correct them.
According to the report of relevant departments, about 36 billion tons of domestic and industrial sewage is discharged into rivers every year in China, and nearly one third of the urban population has no safe and hygienic drinking water. In this way, Pure Water Company (2) developed rapidly. However, after monitoring by the health department, pure water is not pure. Therefore, the municipal government requires the leaders of several purified water companies to pay close attention to rectification in the near future to improve the overall quality of purified water products.
There are three improper expressions in the four sentences in the following paragraph, please find out and correct them.
At the beginning of the theme class meeting, Lin Fei was the first to speak on stage. He said, "(b) My poor Chinese is the result of not reading extracurricular books in my spare time. I am determined to learn from Zhang Hong. (c) I read at least 2,000 words after class every day, and strive to write my reading experience every day ... "Lin Fei's speech won warm applause from the students.
There are three mistakes in the following paragraph, please correct them.
On the May 4th Youth Day, our class held a keynote speech entitled "Long live youth", and the headmaster also participated. ○ 1 At the meeting, students and many * * * members scrambled to speak on the stage. The lecture climaxed and the applause thundered. ○2 The atmosphere is very warm. In particular, the wonderful speeches of the cultural and recreational Committee members won applause from the audience. Through this activity, students' oral expression ability has been cultivated.