Theme sublimation refers to the means and process of expanding the meaning of the events described in the works, perfecting the theme content, and making the intention of the article enter a broader and higher realm.
Many ancient writers discussed the significance of theme sublimation with incisive opinions. Gui Youguang, a scholar of the Ming Dynasty, said: "The meaning of the title is very common, but if you play word games in the mud, it will be tasteless." He also pointed out that "it is necessary to go further, such as painting and calligraphy. The weirder the better. " In other words, a good article should not be practical, but should open up a new realm on the basis of narrative description, sublimate the theme and raise the ideological realm of the whole article to a new height. It's like Liu E's "Travel Notes of Lao Can" in the story of the white cow. "The higher you sing, the higher you suddenly pull out a top and throw it into the sky like a tightrope." Such an article will definitely make readers "secretly wow" and amaze.
The sublimation of prose theme is mainly reflected in the end of the article. Although there are not many words, they have vital power, which is thought-provoking and enlightening. The famous essayist Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey" is the masterpiece of this kind of works. Described litchi forest, tasted litchi honey, and interviewed beekeepers. At the end of the article, strange peaks appeared one after another, and the pen changed, from praising bees to deeply praising hardworking, simple and silent farmers. Finally, with the words "I had a strange dream, I became a little bee", the article was completely refreshed and the theme was completely sublimated.
There are many ways to sublimate the theme of prose. This paper only talks about two most commonly used and effective methods.
One is called association expansion, which points out the theme.
In prose creation, there are a large number of famous articles that use symbolic meaning. Like Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey", this kind of works all use the method of association expansion to point out the theme at the end of the text and sublimate the theme to a brand-new realm. For example, in Jia Pingwa's "Chou Shi", the author first wrote about Chou Shi's ugliness, and then wrote that this piece of Chou Shi was a falling rock and had an extraordinary experience. It once "filled the sky, overheated and flashed in the sky", and people "looked up to it, which gave people light, yearning and longing". At the end of the article, Qiu's association was extended to the society, and he strongly praised "the greatness of surviving without giving in to misunderstanding and loneliness", which made the theme of his works completely sublimated.
The methods of association are: similar association, such as Mao Dun's praise of poplar, from the simplicity and tenacity of poplar to the farmers in the north, and then to the simple, tenacious and enterprising spirit that is indispensable for our Chinese nation in the liberation struggle; Close to association, such as Yuan Ying's "Jinggang Cuizhu" is a person who associates Jinggangshan with bamboo in Jinggangshan; Causal association, such as Peng Jingfeng's "Pear Blossoms on the Postal Road", is associated with people from all fronts in the country learning from Lei Feng to serve the people.
Typical reading examples: Style of Pine Tree by Mao Dun, Praise of Poplar by Mao Dun, Litchi Honey by Yang Shuo, Ugly Times by Camellia Fu and Jia Pingwa.
Examples of writing training: lock, grass, stone ode, virtue of candle, praise of chalk, etc.
One is called "turning around" and "peer-to-peer development".
The Story of Yueyang Tower written by Fan Zhongyan, a politician and writer in the Northern Song Dynasty, is a well-known and beautiful article, which describes the scenery of Dongting Lake and people's different feelings of seeing things in large sections. And look at things and thoughts with an almost ordinary eye, which almost brings readers into a foggy situation. Until the end of the article, the author reversed his previous emotions and wrote impassioned words of "don't be happy with things, don't be sad for yourself" and "worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later", which can be described as clearing the fog for readers, shocking the world and opening up a new realm. In this way, the author thinks that the theme of the work is hidden at the top of the mountain and needs us to get it through twists and turns.
Of course, the sublimation of the theme first benefits from the sublimation of the author's thoughts. Without the author's noble ideological realm, there can be no sublimation theme. Only by standing high, seeing far, and overcoming all kinds of confused concepts or secular intolerance can we write excellent works that let readers enjoy the magnificent scenery.
Typical reading examples: The Story of Yueyang Tower by Fan Zhongyan, Firelight by Korolenko and Wisteria Waterfall by Zong Pu.
Examples of writing training: mountain climbing, night travel and perception of ….
To sublimate the theme of the work, we must also pay attention to: first, write with intention first. When you conceive prose, you should have the overall situation in mind. No matter how you describe an event or scenery, you must keep it in mind. Without careful consideration in advance, it is impossible to temper a shocking and thought-provoking theme. The second is to pay attention to bedding. Sublimation theme is by no means passive water and rootless wood. Studying these ancient and modern model essays carefully, we can easily find that the finishing touch at the end of the article lies in the fact that the whole article is drawing a dragon. With the finishing touch at the end of the article, the whole dragon can take off, but in fact all previous efforts are for the finishing touch at the end of the article. It seems that Zhong Kui painted by Wu Daozi, a famous painter in the Tang Dynasty, is all about the little finger, and all his strength, posture and eyes are focused on this little finger.
How to sublimate the theme at the end of the composition Skills of sublimating the theme at the end of the composition: The ancients often used the "leopard tail" as the standard when talking about the ending, meaning that the brushwork at the end should be concise, bright and clean, just like the leopard tail sweeping, loud and powerful, giving readers room to chew and remember.
Please look at the full-text ending skills of the recent senior high school entrance examination.
Tip 1: echo from beginning to end, highlighting the main idea (1) It is said that the ship of life can not be separated from the ideal sail, and that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the dream flower season.
At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail.
The ideal of life is for the ideal life.
(Selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Huzhou and Jingzhou) Tips: Echo from beginning to end is one of the most practical methods in the examination room composition. Generally, the author puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning, so as to make the center of the article stand out clearly.
You see, in the above example, the little author used the way of echoing from beginning to end, and highlighted the theme of the article with beautiful poetic language-the happiest time in an ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
First, there is a kind of glory that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation: there is a kind of flame dancing on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul: there is a kind of flame that warms the distant civilization, and that is friendship! (End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! (Selected from the full text of "The Fire of the Guardian Spirit" in Henan senior high school entrance examination) Tips: This is the beginning and end of an argumentative paper in the examination room. Compared with the above example, this example is concise and lively. The argument is put forward at the beginning, the question enters quickly, and it is repeated at the end, which echoes the beginning and strengthens the strength of the argument.
Secret 2: Speak from the heart, call for action, bring love to others, to children who are out of school, to lonely old people … to everyone around you.
When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness.
I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world.
2 1 century, we are the spring of the motherland, we are not parents, enthusiasm is our character. We don't need to abide by those rules and regulations, break the old rules and regulations, let the passion in our hearts burn more fiercely, string our laughter and love together, and let the whole world be shrouded in love.
Laugh as much as you want, cry hysterically if you want, don't suppress yourself, don't let old ideas bind you, don't change yourself casually, please remember my famous saying: "I am me, give me a little sunshine, and it will be so brilliant."
"(selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Fujian Province," Give a little sunshine so brilliant ") The composition in the examination room pays attention to the true feelings, writes its own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lashes out at the false, evil and ugly.
This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but also can be a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together and lash out at the false, evil and ugly together.
The above little author sincerely calls, and every word is heartfelt, which shows his yearning for a better future.
In the second paragraph, the little author spoke enthusiastically, with full personality and undisguised expression. He issued a sincere call to all his peers, effectively highlighting the theme and giving readers a strong spiritual shock.
Tip 3: Ask clever questions and introduce natural colors, natural smells, natural tastes and natural beauty, all of which come from nature.
Nature is great.
It's amazing.
It is so close to life, so tight.
Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life. Tips: A good article, carefully chosen, has endless implications, should be philosophical and enlightening.
Just like enjoying a beautiful piece of music, although the music is over, the lingering sound leaves endless charm.
You see, in the above paragraph, the author skillfully asks questions at the end, which makes readers think and deepens the meaning of the article.
It embodies the profundity and uniqueness of the author's thinking.
Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates.
Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? (Selected from the full text of "Me in the Haha Mirror" in the senior high school entrance examination in Hubei Province) Tips: At the end of this paragraph, I expressed my views on the teacher's comments. First of all, I explained in the form of parallelism that every student has his own personality, and the teacher doesn't have to erase the students' personality. Finally, it ends with a question, which inspires people's thinking and deepens the connotation of the article.
Tip 4: quote a beautiful sentence, colorful "wild fragrance is rich, beautiful wood is beautiful, wind and frost are noble and pure, and the truth comes out." In the past 15 years, life taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up! Thinking of this, I remembered a famous saying: "There are many books around me. As long as I find them, I will definitely learn a lot ..." (selected from the full text of Shaanxi senior high school entrance examination "Reading People Around Me") Tomorrow Song said: "Tomorrow is tomorrow, and there will be so many tomorrows. I waited for tomorrow, and everything was in vain.
Zola said: "Life is only two and a half minutes, one minute is a smile, one minute is a sigh, and one minute is love ..." In my opinion, when I was intoxicated with admiring my mother's grooming, that minute of smile was not forced. After that minute of sigh, it is no longer a sigh, but a transfer of love. My mother conveyed her love for life. I'm so forgetful ... (selected from the full text of "Intoxication" in the senior high school entrance examination in Jilin Province) There are many famous sayings at home and abroad. At the end of the composition, if you can quote skillfully, it will definitely add a lot of color to the article.
Here are a few examples, quoting poems and famous sayings respectively, which not only increases literary talent, but also deepens the artistic conception of the article.
The effect is very good, and students should learn from it. In addition, the scope of reference can be larger, for example, ...
How does the composition sublimate the theme? Theme sublimation refers to the means and process of expanding the meaning of the events described in the works, perfecting the theme content, and making the intention of the article enter a broader and higher realm.
At the end of the article, the small-scale things written in front are promoted to a larger scope, thus sublimating the theme of the article.
The first part of the article describes and depicts something from two aspects: form and spirit. At last, the praise of this kind of thing is transferred to the praise of people with similar personalities, thus sublimating the theme of the article.
How to sublimate the theme of the last paragraph of the composition 1, reading can make a person get spiritual enrichment and pleasure, and pursue it tirelessly.
It is reading that helps you plant the seeds of success; It is reading that helps you conceive the fruits of success.
2, reading, is to let us increase the amount of knowledge, is to let us learn what we can't learn outside the textbook, expand our supplement to other knowledge, and reading, is also skilled, in the current bookstore, dazzling, let you see dazzling.
Reading is not only the source of creative wisdom, but also the desire for spiritual enjoyment.
Although Chiolsf is deaf, he has made great achievements in the theoretical research of interstellar travel through conscious study and happy reading. He was honored as "the father of the universe" and told us: "Books are my teachers.
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The composition at the beginning can sublimate the end of the theme. If someone asks me, "What is the initial heart? Can I eat? " I will definitely tell you: "No, but it can be used as food for knowledge.
"In the crowded streets, street performers, melodious piano sound, lingering sound.
The sound of the piano is as full of joy as flowing water, and people come and go to form a wall of people, and they have invested money in succession, some with large denominations.
But there is no smile on his face.
Do not forget your initiative mind, whenever you are tired.
Do not forget your initiative mind, take you to fly.
In the middle of the night, I suddenly heard a small voice and became a lawyer serving the people.
I can't do it. I am so excited. A tear came out of my eye. Tears fall on the quilt and faint a little in the most beautiful posture, just like a drop of red ink falling into the water.
Yes, it's just the initial intention I've been chasing.
The initial heart has a different position in everyone's heart, but the importance of the initial heart is beyond doubt.
Don't forget that your innovative spirit is the only way to succeed.
The next day: Wu Limin Do not forget your initiative mind, lost.
People won't doubt whether there is too little money, at this time.
The voice came to an abrupt end and a child applauded him loudly.
Street performers' faces are full of vicissitudes, and flowers are blooming.
He hasn't forgotten his original intention. Money is important, but what he expects most from the bottom of his heart is that people can indulge in his music, forget fatigue, forget troubles and forget everything.
The dark sky hung low, followed by bright stars.
The night dyed the sky red with ink.
I'm sitting in my study, tired of this battle, and I want to give up.
But I didn't. I didn't have Do not forget your initiative mind. I died with him.
Either he dies or I die tonight, so I decided to kill him.
I have been scarred, but I have not forgotten my original heart.
I repeatedly tortured my heart, what is the initial heart of learning.
The initial intention of my study is to go to court for the disadvantaged groups, play the banner of justice and speak the voice of justice.
If you want to become a lawyer, you must first recite all kinds of laws and regulations and pass the judicial examination, with a passing rate of only 2%.
Although the road ahead is full of thorns, I must pave the road with flowers before I can move forward bravely.
Friends, listen to your inner voice.
The growth of composition with the theme of discovery, understanding, tempering and sublimation is an important stage for everyone to experience and temper their will, and it is also an important stage for us to combine learning with games.
Growth, like a fruit tree growing green leaves and flowers, is about to bear fruit.
In this short and important course, we need many excellent qualities to grow healthily, and most of these qualities are learned from some classic works.
Growth must be one of the trilogy of quality: stretching childlike innocence and promoting nature.
What is the most important thing for a child-naughty boy Ma Xiaotiao series? It's not learning, it's not competition, it's just a carefree life and a healthy and happy childhood.
According to experts' investigation and statistics, children's favorite intellectual games are a very good exercise opportunity, which can develop their potential and play a great role in their future growth.
Nowadays, children begin to study hard very early and compete in their studies. After all, the child is still young. Does he have such a strong ability to resist pressure inside? Now, this is an opportunity for children to enjoy their childhood, develop their intelligence and cultivate their rich imagination.
Didn't all scientific inventions in history rely on rich imagination? The second trilogy of growing up must have quality: be kind to others and treat others sincerely.
Counting the origin of names-the education of love.
In daily life, a person's communicative ability, that is, interpersonal relationship, has the most important influence on him, so how should we treat people around us? We should associate with others with kindness and honesty.
We should thank our parents, teachers and classmates.
"People can't stand without faith", this sentence points out the importance of honesty.
If we don't keep our promises, we will be hated by the world and spurned by our friends.
On the one hand, we should treat others with kindness and sincerity, which is the fundamental principle of a person's foothold in society.
Growth must have the qualities of trilogy: optimism, firmness and unyielding.
Count the origins of names-childhood.
What kind of attitude should a person take towards upward? This is a far-reaching topic.
In life, it is inevitable to encounter stumbling blocks. We should face life optimistically and see the bright side of things. Isn't this an upward sign? Furthermore, when encountering bumps, we should be strong and unyielding, not bow to difficulties, and challenge it again and again.
In the composition with the theme of "ideal sublimates in summary", the happiest moment is the moment when my mother drives our brother to school, because we can listen to music and have air conditioning, and really enjoy it! But ... something happened yesterday that made me nervous.
Yesterday at school, as usual, I was stuck in a traffic jam in an alley and suddenly "hit!" With a loud cry, our car was hit by someone behind us. Such a sudden move startled everyone. Fortunately, no one was hurt. What a great misfortune! Because it was on the way to school, my mother was afraid that we would be late for class, and no one was injured, so she didn't call the police.
The other party also sincerely promised to be responsible for repairing our car, and the two sides reached a settlement.
Mom is wearing "bang! Hey! " Our hearts sent us to school safely.
The road is like a tiger's mouth Both pedestrians and drivers should obey the traffic rules, so that everyone can go out happily and go home safely.
Sentence 1. Pain in the past is happiness. The pain of the past is happiness.
No matter how hard it is, you should bite your teeth and rush over. It will be sweet to remember in the future.
As long as there is life, there is hope. Where there is life, there is hope/where there is green hill, there is no fear of firewood.
Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.
A firm belief instilled in children from an early age.
Storms make trees take deeper roots. The storm deeply rooted the trees.
) [grateful to the enemy, grateful to setbacks! Nothing is impossible to a willing mind. Where there is a will, there is a way.
Stick to a simple belief and you will succeed.
The shortest answer is doing. The simplest answer is to do it.
Do you want to speak fluent English? Then say it now! My heart is pounding.
] 7. Everything is difficult at the beginning. Everything is difficult at the beginning.
Give up the illusion of opportunism.
Great hopes make great people. Great ideals make great people.
God helps those who help themselves.
) 10. Four short words sum up why successful people stand out: a little more. (Just four words sum up the secret of success: a little more! ) [More efforts, more self-discipline, more determination, more introspection, more study, more practice, more craziness than others, more can create miracles! ] 1 1. We learn by doing.
) 12. East or west, home is the best. East and west are good, but home is the best.
) 13. Three heads are better than one. Three heads are better than one Zhuge Liang.
) 14. It is a shortcut to have a good partner on the road.
) 15. Dripping water wears away the stone.
) Unfortunate people are never alone.
) 17. misfortune tells us what luck is. You never know happiness without disaster.
) 18. It's never too late. Better late than never; It's never too late.
) 19. It's never too late to mend. (It's no big deal to change it after it's over; It is never too late to mend.
If a thing is worth doing, it is worth doing well.
) 2 1. Without enthusiasm, there is no great achievement. Nothing great can be achieved without enthusiasm.
Actions speak louder than words. Actions speak louder than words.
Only the dead can't make mistakes.
) 24. Start with all the great things. ) greatness begins with smallness.
One today is worth tomorrow. One today is worth two tomorrows.
Truth is not afraid of investigation. Truth never fears investigation.
) 27. The tongue has no bones but can break bones.
A bold attempt is half the battle. A bold attempt is half success.
) 29. Know everything, know everything.
Good advice is priceless. Advice is priceless.
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Autumn is crisp, the sky is like spotless glass, and soft clouds are as white as cotton candy, which brings people a sweet and good mood.
In autumn, I go to the botanical garden to look for the leaves of nature.
Walking into the botanical garden, many leaves are covered with golden coats, shining with golden luster.
The most beautiful is Ginkgo Garden, which looks like a golden ocean from a distance. Up close, it looks like a small butterfly.
A gust of autumn wind blew, and these butterflies flew away from the treetops, waltzing in the air, sometimes rotating, sometimes swinging from side to side ... I couldn't help but revel in this beautiful artistic conception.
After walking for a while, I felt a little tired, so I found a piece of grass to lie down, looked up at the tall trees, smelled the fragrance of grass, and fell asleep unconsciously.
"Bang", huh? What fell on my face? I opened it. Oh, that's a plane leaf.
I picked up the leaf and studied it carefully: it was brown, and the wrinkled face had been weathered by the years.
Probably because the tree was too lonely, my brothers and I fell down together.
By my side, some naughty leaves escaped from the mother tree's arms and floated down.
There are red maple leaves, green magnolia leaves and golden poplar leaves ... these leaves fly away from the treetops and fly to the earth.
Although they are free, they still cling to the mother tree's feet and refuse to leave for a long time ... why is nature beautiful? There are four seasons, so there is autumn.
Why is autumn beautiful? Because of the leaves.
I love autumn, I like to decorate leaves, autumn spirits.
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