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"There is a ground under your feet, a sky above your head, and someone in your eyes" composition guidance

Last year, at a literary forum in Beijing, an accomplished old writer said about his creative experience: "To be a good writer, you must have a place under your feet, a sky above your head and someone in your eyes." Literature lovers here suddenly realized.

Please start from the above materials, choose an angle, draw up a title, choose a style and write an article of not less than 800 words.

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(1) material analysis, the theme of the article has at least two angles, one is the literary creation, and the other is the creator. From the perspective of literary creation: there is land under your feet, drawing on reality and truly reflecting society; There is a sky overhead, which means broad vision, broad mind and noble pursuit; There are always people who think that articles are for people to read and are responsible for readers. From the perspective of being a man: having land under your feet means being based on reality and loving life; Spending a day is to fear nature and protect the ecology; To have someone in your eyes is to treat others sincerely and respect them.

(2) If we say writing, we can criticize the shortcomings of middle school students' compositions: divorced from reality, lacking true feelings, seeking only flowery rhetoric and paying less attention to social responsibility. Over time, this way of thinking will affect the way of life. In the end, it is very likely that the composition will not be written well and life will fail. Finally, it is clearly pointed out that writing should know the world and people.

(3) To be a man, we must first make it clear that people live between heaven and earth, and heaven and earth are the world and society; In the real world, we should not only know the rules and learn the law and discipline, but also be down-to-earth and serve the society, and we should not wander around. If you write a narrative, you can write heroes with lofty ideals, people who love nature and the environment, ordinary people who love life and care about the world at any time, and so on.

If you write an argumentative paper, you can discuss the benefits of "harmony between man and nature", which is not only beneficial to people's happy life, but also to social and natural's harmonious life; On the other hand, if people ignore heaven and earth, do not respect objective laws, and blindly emphasize "conquering nature" and "man can conquer nature", it will not only be detrimental to the unity of heaven and man, but also be punished by nature. Open your mouth wider, start with what you encounter, slowly talk about the relationship between man and heaven, and finally end with hope: be a peaceful and useful person to society; Only in this way can we become a normal and happy person.

Examples of student exercises

Look at the stars in a down-to-earth way

Looking up, the stars shine; Looking down, the foundation is compacted and the road surface is flat. Starlight company, not afraid of distant dreams; With black soil as our neighbor, why are we afraid of Wan Li's journey?

A famous old writer talked about his experience at a symposium and said, "There is a ground under his feet, a sky above his head, and someone in his eyes." He was shocked for a moment. "There is a sky on the top" means looking up at the starry sky, and "there is ground under your feet" means keeping your feet on the ground.

Looking up at the starry sky is to measure the distance between reality and dreams with your eyes and motivate yourself to move forward towards the goal.

The bright moon dancing tonight is still the bright moon of the Qin Dynasty, and the stars shining all over the sky tonight are still the stars of the Han Dynasty. Under their brilliance, Cao Mengde is near Jieshi in the east, singing the lofty aspirations of "Martyrs in their twilight years, March forward bravely"; In their glory, Xian Xinghai used worn-out porcelain to impact the melody of dreams; In their glory, Xu Zhimo lived alone in the Hekang River, pursuing a rainbow-like dream. In their glory, Gorky couldn't bear to go to bed early, catching inspiration and weaving one wonderful masterpiece after another.

Looking for the star that belongs to you, its existence is a kind of comfort, always reminding you that you are a dream catcher and your dream will shine forever.

Down-to-earth, you are feeling the pulse of the earth with your feet, and you are carving reality with diligence.

The silent earth buried too many fathers' tall bodies, recorded too many fathers' brave and powerful footprints, and hid too many ups and downs of expectations. A trickle, down-to-earth, fearless, and finally merged into Wang Yang, becoming a turbulent trend. Da Vinci was down-to-earth, took pains to copy eggs, studied the basic theory of painting and created countless treasures. Lang Lang kept his feet on the ground and practiced the piano for eight hours every day, eventually becoming a generation of famous artists.

Down-to-earth is the most powerful resistance to fate.

Down-to-earth is the strongest sound that people love life.

Down-to-earth is the beginning for people to create a better future.

Looking up at the stars means reaching out to your dreams, and shining dreams guide your struggle.

Down-to-earth means moving towards your dreams, and the simple earth will send you to the ideal place as always.

The branches of Qin sang are low in flowers and green in swallows.