1. Center: If there are any digressions, please write according to the requirements of the topic.
2. Material selection: ① Whether it is around the center. (2) Whether it is true and in line with the reality of life. 3 whether it is fresh and interesting.
3. Structure: ① Whether the hierarchical paragraphs are clear. ② Whether the transition is natural. ③ Whether the beginning and the end are coordinated.
4. Expression: ① Does the narrative make things clear and complete? Whether the order of visits is clearly written in landscape writing. (2) The details are appropriate, the important people and things are written in detail, and the unimportant places are simply written.
5. Language: ① Whether the sentences are fluent and accurate, and there are few sick sentences. ② Whether metaphor, parallelism, personification and exaggeration are used. ③ Whether to use beautiful words such as idioms, proverbs, aphorisms, famous sayings and poems; ④ Whether punctuation marks are used properly.
6. Writing: ① Whether the font is neat and there are few typos. (2) Whether the roll surface is neat and clean, and whether there is a small amount of smearing.
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Articles include works of various styles, such as poems, plays, novels, scientific papers, narratives, argumentative papers, expository articles, practical articles and so on. The article now means "an unfinished work through the ages", "poets should beware of prosperity", "I want to sit on the bench for ten years and don't want to write a word empty", "I want to accumulate sentences into chapters" and "I want to make statements and write chapters". Broader articles also contain the meanings of "learning" and "mystery", such as "understanding the world is learning, and practicing human feelings is an article"
The word "Zhang" in "pian" is a knowing word, and the tone is from ten. In ancient times, when playing music, you can only end with ten consecutive paragraphs (ten is the end of a number), and these ten paragraphs are one chapter. So there are paragraphs in the article. Articles should be expressed in words and understood from "music". Only when the words are read as beautifully as music and passed down can they be worthy of the true meaning of the word "article".
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"Wen" means "Wen" and "Wen" "Zhang" originally refers to "shielding" and turns to "appearance". The original meaning of "article" refers to "patterned surface", such as dragon and phoenix patterns embroidered on clothes, flower patterns embroidered on skin and so on. That is, its original meaning refers to the pattern that directly constitutes the visual image. The latter refers to the indirect image of things that need to be "decoded" by the brain to be fully presented.
The basic elements of the article-theme, material, structure and language-are the main research objects of article study. In the past, all kinds of writing works were discussed in detail, but the revelation of their conceptual connotation seemed to be thoughtless and the definition was not rigorous. The newly published works either follow the old theory or remain controversial despite some changes. Based on the strict definition requirements and related knowledge, this paper attempts to question and question the various definitions of these four elements, and tries to put forward its own suggestions for revision in order to teach colleagues in the writing field.
How to comment on the article? Generally speaking, the writing method of article criticism should make a pertinent evaluation from the aspects of article center, material selection, structure, expression, language and writing style.
1. Center: If there are any digressions, please write according to the requirements of the topic.
2. Material selection: ① Whether it is around the center.
(2) Whether it is true and in line with the reality of life.
3 whether it is fresh and interesting.
3. Structure: ① Whether the hierarchical paragraphs are clear.
② Whether the transition is natural.
③ Whether the beginning and the end are coordinated.
4. Expression: ① Does the narrative make things clear and complete?
Whether the order of visits is clearly written in landscape writing.
(2) The details are appropriate, the important people and things are written in detail, and the unimportant places are simply written.
5. Language: ① Whether the sentences are fluent and accurate, and there are few sick sentences.
② Whether metaphor, parallelism, personification and exaggeration are used.
③ Whether to use beautiful words such as idioms, proverbs, aphorisms, famous sayings and poems; ④ Whether punctuation marks are used properly.
6. Writing: ① Whether the font is neat and there are few typos.
(2) Whether the roll surface is neat and clean, and whether there is a small amount of smearing.
Articles include works of various styles, such as poems, plays, novels, scientific papers, narratives, argumentative papers, expository papers and practical papers.
The article now means "an unfinished work through the ages", "poets should beware of prosperity", "I want to sit on the bench for ten years and don't want to write a word empty", "I want to accumulate sentences into chapters" and "I want to make statements and write chapters".
Broader articles also contain the meanings of "learning" and "mystery", such as "understanding the world is learning, and practicing human feelings is an article"
The word "Zhang" in "pian" is a knowing word, and the tone is from ten.
In ancient times, when playing music, you can only end with ten consecutive paragraphs (ten is the end of a number), and these ten paragraphs are one chapter.
So there are paragraphs in the article.
Articles should be expressed in words and understood from "music". Only when the words are read as beautifully as music and passed down can they be worthy of the true meaning of the word "article".
The definition of "Wen" refers to "grain" and "pattern".
"Zhang" originally refers to "shielding" and turns to "appearance".
The original meaning of "article" refers to "patterned surface", such as dragon and phoenix patterns embroidered on clothes, flower patterns embroidered on skin and so on.
That is, its original meaning refers to the pattern that directly constitutes the visual image.
The latter refers to the indirect image of things that need to be "decoded" by the brain to be fully presented.
The basic elements of the article-theme, material, structure and language-are the main research objects of article study. In the past, all kinds of writing works were discussed in detail, but the revelation of their conceptual connotation seemed to be thoughtless and the definition was not rigorous.
The newly published works either follow the old theory or remain controversial despite some changes.
Based on the strict definition requirements and related knowledge, this paper attempts to question and question the various definitions of these four elements, and tries to put forward its own suggestions for revision in order to teach colleagues in the writing field.
How to evaluate a composition can be evaluated from the aspects of title, central theme, argument, diction, paragraph transition, paragraph echo and so on.
1. Comment on the angle of composition 1) In general, when reading an essay, the first thing to look at is whether the topic is attractive, or even whether the content of the article is off topic.
2) Then read carefully to see whether the sentences in the article are fluent and whether there are typos or punctuation marks.
3) See if the sentences in the article are beautiful and how to express them.
4) Finally, read the paragraph echo of the article or other methods.
2. Generally speaking, we can start from the following aspects: 1) Whether the topic is attractive: poetic, philosophical, vivid and novel.
2) Good words and sentences: concise and vivid; The sentences are fluent, the language is beautiful and poetic.
3) The theme is the center or argument: the theme is profound, deep, the center is prominent, the argument is clear, and the argument is clear.
4) The paragraphs are closely connected, with natural transition and clear organization.
5) Paragraph echo: The paragraphs echo from beginning to end, and the structure is rigorous and complete.
How to comment on the article? Generally speaking, the writing methods of all article reviews should make a pertinent evaluation from the aspects of article center, material selection, structure, expression, language and writing style.
1. Center: If there are any digressions, please write according to the requirements of the topic.
2. Material selection: ① Whether it is around the center.
(2) Whether it is true and in line with the reality of life.
3 whether it is fresh and interesting.
3. Structure: ① Whether the hierarchical paragraphs are clear.
② Whether the transition is natural.
③ Whether the beginning and the end are coordinated.
4. Expression: ① Does the narrative make things clear and complete?
Whether the order of visits is clearly written in landscape writing.
(2) The details are appropriate, the important people and things are written in detail, and the unimportant places are simply written.
5. Language: ① Whether the sentences are fluent and accurate, and there are few sick sentences.
② Whether metaphor, parallelism, personification and exaggeration are used.
③ Whether to use beautiful words such as idioms, proverbs, aphorisms, famous sayings and poems; ④ Whether punctuation marks are used properly.
6. Writing: ① Whether the font is neat and there are few typos.
(2) Whether the roll surface is neat and clean, and whether there is a small amount of smearing.
Articles include works of various styles, such as poems, plays, novels, scientific papers, narratives, argumentative papers, expository papers and practical papers.
The article now means "an unfinished work through the ages", "poets should beware of prosperity", "I want to sit on the bench for ten years and don't want to write a word empty", "I want to accumulate sentences into chapters" and "I want to make statements and write chapters".
Broader articles also contain the meanings of "learning" and "mystery", such as "understanding the world is learning, and practicing human feelings is an article"
The word "Zhang" in "pian" is a knowing word, and the tone is from ten.
In ancient times, when playing music, you can only end with ten consecutive paragraphs (ten is the end of a number), and these ten paragraphs are one chapter.
So there are paragraphs in the article.
Articles should be expressed in words and understood from "music". Only when the words are read as beautifully as music and passed down can they be worthy of the true meaning of the word "article".
The definition of "Wen" refers to "grain" and "pattern".
"Zhang" originally refers to "shielding" and turns to "appearance".
The original meaning of "article" refers to "patterned surface", such as dragon and phoenix patterns embroidered on clothes, flower patterns embroidered on skin and so on.
That is, its original meaning refers to the pattern that directly constitutes the visual image.
The latter refers to the indirect image of things that need to be "decoded" by the brain to be fully presented.
The basic elements of the article-theme, material, structure and language-are the main research objects of article study. In the past, all kinds of writing works were discussed in detail, but the revelation of their conceptual connotation seemed to be thoughtless and the definition was not rigorous.
The newly published works either follow the old theory or remain controversial despite some changes.
Based on the strict definition requirements and related knowledge, this paper attempts to question and question the various definitions of these four elements, and tries to put forward its own suggestions for revision in order to teach colleagues in the writing field.
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How to evaluate a composition first analyzes the structure of the article, such as total score, total score; Analyze narrative forms, such as flashback and interpolation.
Analyze the language of the article, such as peace or floweriness.
Analyze each paragraph, what is written, which sentence is particularly good, point it out, and write its rhetoric, expression and function to the main idea.
What are the highlights at the beginning and end of the article?
The enlightenment to you can be both in writing skills and in spirit.
How to comment on the composition? First look at the beginning and end of the article, which is subjective feeling.
Then, see if the first paragraph (about 50 words) has written or hinted at the theme.
Look at each paragraph again to see if there are any points, because the article must closely buckle the theme and check whether it is off topic.
First, let's see if the writing style is simple, because teachers who are too gorgeous now generally don't like it unless the writing style is really powerful and experienced.
It is important to see if there are any clues in an article to connect the articles together, so that they will not look so scattered.
The last paragraph must be punctuated. Of course, the first paragraph and the penultimate paragraph can also be punctuated.
It's usually like this. Actually, it depends on one's subjectivity. Generally speaking, when you write a narrative about feelings or friendship with strangers, you will get high marks.
Everyone's standards are different.
Think of it as,
There should be many topics about how to evaluate a composition on the Internet. Here are some points I will find for you: How to evaluate the quality of a composition? 1, ① chronological articles must have a theme, a positive and healthy theme, and try to reflect the reality.
(2) Narration must serve the theme and be fluent.
③ If multiple events can be narrated side by side to serve a certain theme, then the events should be narrated in a certain order.
-the basic standard of a good note composition.
2. A successful work must have a proper theme, and the created characters should be representative and skillfully use various methods to depict characters.
3. A successful landscape composition should be deeply immersed in the reader's reading; The article should show the picture described in many aspects, combine dynamic and static, and give people beautiful enjoyment.
4, excellent writing situational composition, always have a little face, point and face combination, highlight the key points, write the atmosphere; Hierarchical and orderly.
5, ① To evaluate an essay, we must first understand the characteristics of prose, that is, "the form is scattered but the spirit is not scattered", that is to say, the freedom of form is unrestricted, but the center of the article is clear.
② Prose can be divided into narrative prose and lyric prose.
A, if you encounter a narrative, it depends on whether it reflects the real social life or expresses the author's sense of shame.
B, if you encounter lyricism, it depends on whether it expresses the author's feelings and wishes about real life and whether it can impress the readers.
③ Pay attention to the expression of prose. A successful essay should be able to express emotion by taking advantage of the scenery, raising things to express emotion or expressing one's mind directly.
The language must be concise, concise and vivid, with short sentences as the mainstay, instead of long sentences, and more metaphors, antithesis and contrast.
6.① A good expository article can make readers deeply understand all aspects of the explained things after reading it.
② Explanatory methods should be used more in explanatory texts.
③ The language of expository writing must be accurate, concise, popular and vivid.
7. Argumentative writing is an article that focuses on discussion and reasoning.
The article should reflect the author's propaganda views, criticize or refute some words and deeds, explain the truth, and achieve the purpose of persuading others.
If readers still have questions and are still dissatisfied with the author's point of view after reading it, then this article is not successful enough.
(2) Argument writing should have arguments, arguments and arguments.
First, the arguments should be clear and practical.
B, the argument should be realistic and can serve the argument.
C, demonstration methods should be multi-purpose, in order to achieve the role of serving the demonstration.
8.① A novel should have a complete story.
Environmental description shapes typical characters, and images reflect social life.
Novels should be as concise as possible.
It is necessary to express the theme around a central idea, what to praise, what to praise, what to oppose and what to criticize, with a clear-cut stand and unambiguous right and wrong.
9. The language of successful poems is concise, beautiful and vivid. Besides rhyming, readers should have room for imagination, and poetry should also have strong lyricism.
How to comment on the composition 1, the beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the environmental description sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic.
2. The beginning is brief and to the point. 3. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning.
Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers.
The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
5. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
6, the beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers. 7. The beginning touches people's hearts and has true feelings.
8. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
9. The material of this article is novel, which arouses readers' desire to continue reading. Synthesis process: 1, full of * *, description ... 2. Highlights, appropriate details and specific contents.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.
5 ... tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, coherent connection with nature and prominent center.
7. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene is naturally integrated.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
9. This article is lyrical in narration.
10, full use of dynamic and static writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques 1 1, the author's careful observation, orderly narration 12, and the use of some subtle words have invisibly added a lot of interest to the article.
13, the article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous. 14, the article is reasonable. 15, through vivid language description, let readers feel like they are in a dream.
16, the article has clear clues and prominent themes, closely surrounding …
17, the details are quite clever.
Extremely rich in skills.
18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, demeanor and movements in detail.
19, delicate description, strong life breath, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
20. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific. 2 1, the case is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics.
22. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and reasonable. 23. The article will be written in detail. 24. The language is lively and interesting.
25. A lot of spoken English in life makes the article more natural and friendly.
End of composition: 1. The ending is just right and the center is clear. The language is simple and profound and thought-provoking.
2, use the feeling switch, ending with feeling.
In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
4. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
5. Focus on the end to express emotions, give consideration to the beginning, and summarize the full text.
Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
6. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.
7. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
8. At the end of the article, the central sentence is really clear, and the conclusion is short and powerful.
9. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. Words are done, meaning is still unfinished.
10, the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read, and can't bear to let go.
1 1. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.
12. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
13, the end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
14, ending in …, clear and meaningful.
General comment: 1, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but can be detailed and focused.
This article fully and appropriately exaggerates the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
3, ... practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, exciting and emotional to read.
This article is full of * * *, between the lines, you can feel the little author's love for ….
The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
5. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor.
Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.
6. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
9. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
10, the close-up is unique and interesting.
The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
1 1. This article can be described in fresh and interesting language …
Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.
12, appropriate details, and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article ... the content is richer and more vivid.
13, the full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, and it is worth learning.
14, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
15, the full text is easy to understand and interesting.
16, the full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.
17, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper.
18, the article melts into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing emotion, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete. 19, the article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent, coherent and natural.
20. This article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, novel ideas, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
2 1, with fluent language and free and easy writing, is a relatively successful work.
22. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions and interesting reading.
23. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough.
The full-text language is forceful and hit the floor, which makes people excited and excited.
24. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language.
There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
25. The articles are arranged in the order of things. ...
There is no uniform standard for how to write a critical composition. Usually based on what you read.
Here I talk about my comment method.
First of all, it depends on whether the intention of the composition is correct, whether the center is prominent, and whether the meaning of the composition is achieved.
In this process, comments should be used as some sentences in the text to illustrate how the author discusses his own ideas.
For example, write "father".
What sentences are used in the composition to show that father is hard or great? These sentences highlight the father's difficult or great theme.
Then comment on the characteristics of the composition.
Some compositions are rich in words, some touching, and some nuanced.
You can comment on it as a feature of the article.
Of course, the premise is that you should discover the characteristics of this composition yourself.
You can also comment on the writing methods and skills of the composition, which is a unique writing method of this composition.
Finally, talk about my own views on the insufficient parts of this composition, such as: make a comment on language, length, vividness and details, and don't cover everything.
Just say one key point.
Of course, you can also say something encouraging.
In short, you should make the author of this composition feel happy and inspired after reading your comments.
That's all. I don't know if you are satisfied.
Haha, let's communicate and learn from each other!
How to evaluate the composition? Specifically, first of all, we should evaluate whether the beginning and end of the article echo from a distance and are consistent with the composition topic, and then read the beginning of the article carefully to see whether the beginning is attractive, whether the reader can be led to the next paragraph with interest, whether the words and sentences are appropriate, whether the language is appropriate and beautiful, and whether it is pleasing to the eye. In a word, a good beginning can make readers deeply interested in reading this article.
Secondly, look at the last paragraph, whether the point of view is clear and whether the point of view at the beginning is consistent with the theme. Moreover, we should start with the deep meaning of the last paragraph, whether there is any potential meaning to be tapped, and carefully read its linguistic meaning and rhetorical devices from the author's point of view.
Finally, after evaluating the key points, we should look at the general structure of the article, because a good article has a good beginning and a finishing touch, but if the middle paragraph is composed of scattered words, the logic of the article will be lost. Even if the beginning and the end are beautiful, it will not be a good article without a good framework. Therefore, after examining the beginning and the end, it is necessary to see whether the remaining paragraphs of the article are also around this theme. If not, it is beside the point and unconvincing. Some articles, such as argumentative essays, attach great importance to the presentation of arguments. Even if there is a good argument, it will not be established as a correct proposition if it is not correctly demonstrated. So I think the evaluation article can start from these aspects.
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1, see the title.
The title of the article is more important than the content to some extent.
2. Look at the beginning and the end.
This article is very important.
3. Look at the content. You don't need any gorgeous language. Simplicity is the most important thing.
Of course, there must be true feelings.
4, the overall audit, font, some details of language skills, whether the use of rhetoric is clever, etc.
Ok, please adopt it.
These are all from my Chinese teacher.
Hehe, (* _ *)
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