The composition topic of the first monthly exam is a semi-proposition, and the topic is "Experience XX". The first thought that flashed through my mind was to write about my best friend who went to Shanghai. No one left such a deep impression on me before him. He left Guilin before the end of summer, so my topic is simply "Experience the Summer of Death". It is not difficult to write a composition about something that is deeply touched. I am full of hope that my composition score will be higher.
Ah! As soon as the composition was handed out, I was kept in the dark. I only got 40 points and only gave 24 points. What's the score?
Looking carefully, the composition teacher gave me a big question mark. Is he (she) illiterate? Still don't understand at all? Isn't your favorite composition the kind that can catch your eye, creative and original? Isn't that necessary?
In the article, I used some code names instead of my friends' names. Why is there a question mark? Didn't you always ask the examination room composition not to use your real name?
Teacher, don't you often teach us how to write more? Use the second person to say "you" to express feelings. Why draw several horizontal lines? Didn't the second person say that lyricism is more conducive to the expression of emotions and more attractive to readers?
Teacher, isn't the composition requirement to reveal and write the truth? "Dead summer" can mean that summer has passed, and it can also mean disappointment and disappointment after parting from good friends. I don't believe it. You have a heart of stone.
Maybe I'm too strict with the marking teacher. Don't think that I haven't carefully studied several 38-point compositions chosen by our teacher. At least in my opinion, it should be the level of primary school students or junior high school students, or a tofu account.
The Chinese teacher comforted us that there was an experiment in which the same article was corrected by the same person at different times of the day, and the scores were very different. I hope the marking teacher gave me a "beautiful mistake" at the wrong time. But after all, I'm not the woman Zheng Chouyu wrote who waited a long time to return to her family and was getting old and faded.
In the past, the mode of full score composition or high score composition was the so-called creative thinking topic+inscription+prose narrative+short poems at the end. Now, this model is not applicable. Should we go back to basics and write a tofu account?
I don't agree with the evaluation criteria and final scores in the examination room composition. As long as it meets the requirements, you can also add a little personal preference of the reviewer, which is also a good article. My article is not a good article, just because my article can't meet the reviewers' hobbies at some time.
From then on, I will not respectfully dedicate my thoughts to the examiner and wait for his ruling, but write my soul in my cyberspace. What many reviewers can't understand, the tranquility of the network will always let me find someone who understands the true meaning of my composition.